Writing Excercise **Illustrated**

[Just-Legal]

((And no-one take the piss out of the photo please... MathGirl!! I don't mean that literally!!))

Okay. Describe the following picture without using the words: Fat; Ample; Curveaceous
Or giving bust size.

Begin!

 

[MathGirl]

Describe DIS!

A surfeit of piercings and upholstery.
MG
Pupillary dilitation, too, but who cares?

 

[Just-Legal]

That's because I'd been drinking when I took the photo...

Wait a sec..

Upholstery?!

 

[Guest]

She looks just legal, but I would believe she's twenty-something if she claimed it, for there is nothing of the vacuity or randomness of early youth in her determined and intelligent expression. I would hope she is legal for her grayish eyes are intensely lush in their focus; they seem to be speaking at once of warning and need. Her prodigal breasts are as inviting as sunshine, warmly alive and nearly fulsome in their exposure. I imagine them exquisitely undulating as she walks, moving like small tides of gentle waves beneath the firmament of her youthfully enchanting face. Her mouth is naturally roseate, pierced for pleasure I presume, and set determinedly for possibilities--of youthful and carnal delights, perhaps the treasure of a deep intimacy. Her dark auburn hair is straight and plain but long enough to offer the promise of scenes of flair and frenzy to frame or highlight their head in motion. Her nose fits well the center of this young burning star's geometry. She is a maiden fair of substance and exquisite guarantee.
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Aside: hard to tell the real eye and hair color.

regards, bellissima JL - Perdita

 

[Just-Legal]

Wow

Just

Wow.

Perdita, I stand (sit) in awe of your linguistic talents...

*smile*

My hair is dyed black, but in severe need of re-dying, so mid auburn is about right. And my eyes are funky... they start grey and move to green with amber rings around the centre.

*smile*



Oh, and as for the peircing... Pleasure yes. I kinda enjoy the breif pain of the needle... weird aint I?

 

[Guest]

I kinda enjoy the breif pain of the needle... weird aint I?

Not so weird that I would have used the word in my piece. Hope your lovers can see you as I did.

Perdita

p.s. you need to get a photo that shows the eyes you describe, sound truly lovely.

 

[MathGirl]

Her prodigal breasts

Dear Pertida,
"Prodigal breasts"? My, my.
MG

 

[Guest]

Dear Pertida, "Prodigal breasts"? My, my. MG

Dear MG,
I love prodigality in any form or shape.
Perdita (the prodigal gal)

p.s. one could say your AV has a prodigal butt.

 

[Rumple Foreskin]

What the hey! And to think I was going to say, voluptuous. After Perd's descriptive blitzkrieg, I think I'll just fold my tent and slip away into the desert night like the Arab of old.

Rumple Foreskin

 

[Just-Legal]

For Perdita

((it won't let me show them any larger))

 

[Guest]

For Perdita
((it won't let me show them any larger))

Oh la la! Beautiful, babe. You should use them as an AV. P.

Rumple: c'mon, give it a go. JL deserves the best, and wisest.

 

[Just-Legal]

*blushing smile*

I'm thinking of making a new signature image... ((yes, another one))...

Hmm... new AV

Hell, maybe both...

 

[Guest]

I played with the balance a bit. Perdita

 

[Rumple Foreskin]

Rumple: c'mon, give it a go. JL deserves the best, and wisest.

No way child. I'm man enough to admit when I've been whupped. Of course, I'll whine and pout about it, but that's another story.

Rumple Foreskin

 

[Guest]

No way child. I'm man enough to admit when I've been whupped. Of course, I'll whine and pout about it, but that's another story.

Child? I'm older than you (b. 1946). So I guess that means you have a right to whine and pout. Promise me you'll do it in the nude, eh?

Blessings, old man. Perdita

 

[Just-Legal]

Ooo!

Now... if that was about... 400x100... it would be perfect for a new sig...

And Rumple!! I welcome any and all attempts at my excercise!

(I'm going to do one later, but it won't be of me *giggle*)

 

[Guest]

How about this? I think you cropped yours too much. No need to have a square.

 

[Just-Legal]

D'riel Emerald!

Ack, wait, no, wrong board...

Its lovely, but its lost the amber... *sigh*

I'm a god damned perfectionist aren't I?

 

[Guest]

OK, last try. The amber's there. P.

 

[Just-Legal]

Yay! Perfect! Thank you!

*bounces*

Actually, bouncing in this top is *not* a good idea...

 

[Rumple Foreskin]

You folks are strange--I like that.

Perdita, I left a note on the SDC thanking you, Jfinn, and Madame Mange for the help.

Just-legal, I'd love to lend a hand, but as I said about twenty minutes ago in that note, it's late here in Big D and I've got to take the number one wife unit to the airport in the morning. Besides, I'm leaving you in good hands.

Rumple Foreskin

 

[Just-Legal]

*smile*

In that case, take care Rumple...

...this will still be here on the morrow...

 

[Chicklet]

((And no-one take the piss out of the photo please... MathGirl!! I don't mean that literally!!))

Okay. Describe the following picture without using the words: Fat; Ample; Curveaceous
Or giving bust size.

Begin!

Wouldn't be able to do it without breathing life into the photo...

Her peircing eyes bored into mine, her lips set steadily as her bosom heaved. Stubborn, but playful, she tilted her head, the expression challenging me. I could tell she was excited by what I had proposed, but reluctant to accept. Perhaps it was up to me to make the first move, so I did, moving in close to her and tasting those lips myself.

Startled, she moved back, finally giving up her cool facade. I smiled wickedly and followed, taking her dark hair in my hands and holding her face close to mine. My tongue played with the cool metal in her lip, sucking it into my mouth as I took her kiss. Her ripe body melted against me and I pulled her closer, my hands moving from behind her head down her back, holding her close to me as my tongue prodded those lips. Her dark eyes shut and she submitted, totally.

Sorry, everything I write turns into erotica.

-Chicklet

 

[gauchecritic]

It's yours. Everything you see, you can have. But take a care. Can you pay that price? Can you see the tears caressing the shadow 'twixt my nose and cheek? Do you hear the mocking laughter waiting silently, metal-locked, behind this Lisa smile?

Wait, be patient, I will show you everything you could dream: Sweat soaked hair lashing your eyes. Closed lids to burst your passion on revelation, gravity drawing you down. Abysmal.

Are you strong enough to taste and play the full depth of curves like these, knowing that is all you may have until I tell you so? If you slip, you drown. Can you balance so furiously?

Gauche

P.S I stole the furious balancing from R.E.M

P.P.S "Day Sleeper" As I recall it, seems to soundtrack the pic. in my mind anyway.

 

[Guest]

Bravo! Gauche

Fine second-person use. Purr