Worst LOVING WIVES comments

[Emilymcplugger]

Love this anger and the mis-spelling.

“Asshole meets a cuck and whore at singer's meeting. He's happy.”

 

[MillieDynamite]

Love this anger and the mis-spelling.

“Asshole meets a cuck and whore at singer's meeting. He's happy.”

OH, I love it!

 

[RetroFan]

Shows what I know then.

However …upon looking further just found this on the fifth part of a story.

“This story died four chapters ago, but like a decaying zombie it keeps coming back.”

Thinking back about the Group Sex category, I thought maybe the readers there like nice stories with nice characters while my story 'Grumpy Humphrey's Easy Wife' was extremely mean-spirited and the characters not nice people at all. However it seems Group Sex along with Exhibitionist and Voyeur are categories where it is hard to get a good score but where you also receive very little feedback, good, bad or indifferent. It's really not worth the effort, sort of like Erotic Horror where writers publish imaginative pieces to few views, votes and close to no feedback.

I'd rather post in Loving Wives and get angry and abusive comments, at least I know my story had some impact even if they claim to hate it and me for having the audacity to write and publish it.

 

[Lifestyle66]

Thinking back about the Group Sex category, I thought maybe the readers there like nice stories with nice characters while my story 'Grumpy Humphrey's Easy Wife' was extremely mean-spirited and the characters not nice people at all. However it seems Group Sex along with Exhibitionist and Voyeur are categories where it is hard to get a good score but where you also receive very little feedback, good, bad or indifferent. It's really not worth the effort, sort of like Erotic Horror where writers publish imaginative pieces to few views, votes and close to no feedback.

I'd rather post in Loving Wives and get angry and abusive comments, at least I know my story had some impact even if they claim to hate it and me for having the audacity to write and publish it.

Exactly!

At least hate is an emotional response more thrilling than "I'm too numb to even click a star after reading this!" It's like writing a horror story, where the reader wants to vomit after reading a scene!

 

[other2other1]

Having only been writing for just over a year, the catalogue of insults thrown at me is still growing.

Last week I did get a private email from my latest story "The Nuclear Family" that I should "Fuck Off and End My Life with the rope of my own story" I thought that was creative as I don't recall having a rope in the tale. Then again, they may have been referring to the fact that I like to write a long tale.

Most of the time I shrug and understand there must be a lot of pain in their real lives to lash out like that. Does it hurt, sure. Will it stop me writing, nah.

 

[sirhugs]

Having only been writing for just over a year, the catalogue of insults thrown at me is still growing.

Last week I did get a private email from my latest story "The Nuclear Family" that I should "Fuck Off and End My Life with the rope of my own story" I thought that was creative as I don't recall having a rope in the tale. Then again, they may have been referring to the fact that I like to write a long tale.

Most of the time I shrug and understand there must be a lot of pain in their real lives to lash out like that. Does it hurt, sure. Will it stop me writing, nah.

they migt have meant the thread running through it?

 

[RetroFan]

Having only been writing for just over a year, the catalogue of insults thrown at me is still growing.

Last week I did get a private email from my latest story "The Nuclear Family" that I should "Fuck Off and End My Life with the rope of my own story" I thought that was creative as I don't recall having a rope in the tale. Then again, they may have been referring to the fact that I like to write a long tale.

Most of the time I shrug and understand there must be a lot of pain in their real lives to lash out like that. Does it hurt, sure. Will it stop me writing, nah.

The only 'go and commit suicide' comment I've ever had strangely enough was not in Loving Wives, but Incest/Taboo, against a story written to make people laugh. I guess they simply didn't find it funny, although telling me to kill myself (the suggested method shooting myself in the head) seems a little bit of an over-reaction. The site moderators removed the comment from the story.

 

[EarlyMorningLight]

The only 'go and commit suicide' comment I've ever had strangely enough was not in Loving Wives, but Incest/Taboo, against a story written to make people laugh. I guess they simply didn't find it funny, although telling me to kill myself (the suggested method shooting myself in the head) seems a little bit of an over-reaction. The site moderators removed the comment from the story.

I don’t write I/T, but from what I’ve seen, the readers there can be vociferously hostile towards stories that color outside of their very narrow incest fantasy lines.

 

[RetroFan]

I don’t write I/T, but from what I’ve seen, the readers there can be vociferously hostile towards stories that color outside of their very narrow incest fantasy lines.

Yes, the IT crowd can be very hard to please. I've tried new ideas over there that you don't see very often such as one story involving foster siblings and lesbian sex involving stepsisters, but they weren't very impressed. Even one I wrote this year for Geek Pride, which involved a set of girl triplets consisting of identical twins and a fraternal sister having an orgy with their older brother and two cousins one male and female drew negative response, one reader saying that they didn't want to read about lesbian activity between sisters and that including the cousins ruined it. It's not just me, I read another story once where a father has a foot fetish that the wife/mother won't indulge, so he and their 18-year-old daughter do it instead. There was a comment from somebody who hated foot fetish stories, even though the title and description clearly indicated that it was a foot fetish story.

My Summer Loving contest story this year which went up yesterday is copping it at the moment. It has mother and daughter action as part of an orgy with the twin stepsons/stepbrothers, which you rarely see in IT stories, but while quite a few readers put it on a reading list it has a very low score. Interestingly one comment was from an angry reader was very similar to those you see on LW, saying that I should have put a content warning that the story involves cheating.

 

[other2other1]

The only 'go and commit suicide' comment I've ever had strangely enough was not in Loving Wives, but Incest/Taboo, against a story written to make people laugh. I guess they simply didn't find it funny, although telling me to kill myself (the suggested method shooting myself in the head) seems a little bit of an over-reaction. The site moderators removed the comment from the story.

You write some great stories Retro, keep up the great work

 

[RetroFan]

You write some great stories Retro, keep up the great work

Thanks for your kind comment, I'm really glad you like my stories.

 

[amenarimix]

Comment: The dude with the tiny dick isn't the offensive part. The idea that you actually continue to propagate racism, urban legend and provably false mythology about nonexistent BBC to justify being a sick fuck with a gutter slut and cum dumpster for a wife is the offensive part.

And here is the part where I mentioned a big cock, which was black:

We were caught off guard by the beauty of our resort as soon as we arrived. The moment we entered our room, we jumped on the perfect bed to ruin it perfectly. I'm quick in bed, but this time I broke my record.

"Honey, I have a surprise for you," Luna grinned.

"What are you waiting for?" Then Luna took her phone and texted someone. And right after that text, someone entered our room and closed the door. It was a guy, a naked guy.

"You always wanted to see your wife crushed under a muscular man. Okay, now it's your lucky day," she winked.

A hot black naked man brought us drinks. I wasn't sure where to look, drinks, cock, eyes, abs, or shoulder. As he walked toward us, I couldn't help but notice the enormous black cock that swung between his legs. It went halfway down his thigh and was as thick as my wrist. He then stood on the right side of me and I was at eye level with his big black cock. It was truly enormous. I kept wanting to look but did my best to stay focused.

He held the drink right beside his big, black cock and gave us the option of which flavor we should take first. His big black cock was only inches away from me. My hand accidentally grazed his big black cock while I took the drinks from his hand. Then I handed it over to my wife and went for the second one, and this time I was careful. His body was so warm and his big black cock was legitimately hot. I could feel the warmth on my face.

"So, you want to see that cock deep inside me, babe?" Luna smiled.

"It's so big and thick. Are you sure you can take it?"

"If you help me, I'm sure I can take it," she moaned at the end of the sentence. "And I'm not going to make you a cucky. We're having a threesome."

He leaned in close, and the smell of his balls kept dominating my mind. I inhaled it more unconsciously. It was very musky and heavy. My penis was literally throbbing under the sheets and dripping precum. I was nearly frail at the time; not in awful form or poor health, but petite in stature. I suppose I weighed around 140 pounds and was 5'6" tall, which made me slender and feminine. The man standing next to me was big and wide, over 6'2" tall with strong muscles. He was a man's man and a former college athlete. The smell of his masculinity makes me more feminine.


*Now how exactly do I propagate racism? I just described a macular black man who has a big thick cock.*

 

[Lifestyle66]

Comment: The dude with the tiny dick isn't the offensive part. The idea that you actually continue to propagate racism, urban legend and provably false mythology about nonexistent BBC to justify being a sick fuck with a gutter slut and cum dumpster for a wife is the offensive part.

And here is the part where I mentioned a big cock, which was black:

We were caught off guard by the beauty of our resort as soon as we arrived. The moment we entered our room, we jumped on the perfect bed to ruin it perfectly. I'm quick in bed, but this time I broke my record.

"Honey, I have a surprise for you," Luna grinned.

"What are you waiting for?" Then Luna took her phone and texted someone. And right after that text, someone entered our room and closed the door. It was a guy, a naked guy.

"You always wanted to see your wife crushed under a muscular man. Okay, now it's your lucky day," she winked.

A hot black naked man brought us drinks. I wasn't sure where to look, drinks, cock, eyes, abs, or shoulder. As he walked toward us, I couldn't help but notice the enormous black cock that swung between his legs. It went halfway down his thigh and was as thick as my wrist. He then stood on the right side of me and I was at eye level with his big black cock. It was truly enormous. I kept wanting to look but did my best to stay focused.

He held the drink right beside his big, black cock and gave us the option of which flavor we should take first. His big black cock was only inches away from me. My hand accidentally grazed his big black cock while I took the drinks from his hand. Then I handed it over to my wife and went for the second one, and this time I was careful. His body was so warm and his big black cock was legitimately hot. I could feel the warmth on my face.

"So, you want to see that cock deep inside me, babe?" Luna smiled.

"It's so big and thick. Are you sure you can take it?"

"If you help me, I'm sure I can take it," she moaned at the end of the sentence. "And I'm not going to make you a cucky. We're having a threesome."

He leaned in close, and the smell of his balls kept dominating my mind. I inhaled it more unconsciously. It was very musky and heavy. My penis was literally throbbing under the sheets and dripping precum. I was nearly frail at the time; not in awful form or poor health, but petite in stature. I suppose I weighed around 140 pounds and was 5'6" tall, which made me slender and feminine. The man standing next to me was big and wide, over 6'2" tall with strong muscles. He was a man's man and a former college athlete. The smell of his masculinity makes me more feminine.


*Now how exactly do I propagate racism? I just described a macular black man who has a big thick cock.*

First, when posting to Loving Wives, expect the worst in their comments and ratings. That's what this thread is about.

Second, In my opinion of your writing from this excerpt, you might benefit with input from editors or beta-readers. You seem to over-use "big black cock" too many times. Once you've described something, by repeating it several more times, you are slapping the reader with it. Yes, the guy at the door was black, and yes, the husband noticed and described his cock hanging down almost to his knees. Now the rest is just sex, unless you repeatedly say it again, and again (seven times in this excerpt).

 

[amenarimix]

First, when posting to Loving Wives, expect the worst in their comments and ratings. That's what this thread is about.

Second, In my opinion of your writing from this excerpt, you might benefit with input from editors or beta-readers. You seem to over-use "big black cock" too many times. Once you've described something, by repeating it several more times, you are slapping the reader with it. Yes, the guy at the door was black, and yes, the husband noticed and described his cock hanging down almost to his knees. Now the rest is just sex, unless you repeatedly say it again, and again (seven times in this excerpt).

Thank you for your reply. I know I have issues with writing. But was it referring to racism or propagating black cock?

 

[Bubo_bubo]

Thank you for your reply. I know I have issues with writing. But was it referring to racism or propagating black cock?

I think what Lifestyle68 is getting at (though he may correct me if I'm wrong) is that if you mention the fact that the cock is big and black a lot (like four times in one paragraph), then people might legitimately think you're playing into the racist trope of the BBC, even if that was not your intention.

 

[amenarimix]

I think what Lifestyle68 is getting at (though he may correct me if I'm wrong) is that if you mention the fact that the cock is big and black a lot (like four times in one paragraph), then people might legitimately think you're playing into the racist trope of the BBC, even if that was not your intention.

Now I got it.

 

[Emilymcplugger]

Now I got it.

When I was writing my story I went through the last part in one sitting to vary genital description and avoid repitition.

Worked for me as the pen is mightier than the sword, dagger, rapier, weapon…

 

[amenarimix]

When I was writing my story I went through the last part in one sitting to vary genital description and avoid repitition.

Worked for me as the pen is mightier than the sword, dagger, rapier, weapon…

Actually, I love repeating big thick, big fat cock, big black cock, etc. Because that is the main plot of my stories. Straight to sissy. Is it wrong to have your own style? It's not like I'm repeating the same name over and over instead of pronouns.

 

[Bubo_bubo]

Actually, I love repeating big thick, big fat cock, big black cock, etc. Because that is the main plot of my stories. Straight to sissy. Is it wrong to have your own style? It's not like I'm repeating the same name over and over instead of pronouns.

If your point is stressing how big it is (in contrast with the husband's more modest size for instance), OK. But if at each time you also stress the cock is black, or its owner is black, then don't be surprised you get the kind of reactions you mentioned in your OP.
And it's not just that you stress the fact the cock is big, but that you use the exact phrase big black cock at each opportunity, with no variation in the description.

 

[Valendon]

I posted ONE story in LW: Wife has lesbian affair, fesses up to husband, all ends well. It Immediately drew these gems, but over the next few years garnered and equal number of very nice comments. Makes me wonder if there isn't some fundamentalist cabal monitoring LW and making it their mission to post "the truth" as they see it.

"fag cuck shit."

"She is a cheating slut and he thinks only with his cock!!! Two beautifull individuals and dont forget well educated people!!! Your fantasy is only for perverts chased by her lechery!!!

"If this had all taken place after talking to her husband and finding out if he was okay with it. As it stands, she's just another cheating slut. Not interested."

" a lot of mediocre suck and fuck. Regardless of whether she's cheating with a man or a woman, it's still cheating. Especially when she announces she's bi-sexual."

And one that was reasonably literate: "Sooner or later he will figure out that he's married to a stupid slut, and she will figure out that she's married to a willing cuckold. It might even be fun, until this new level of excitement due to external stimuli becomes the norm, and then becomes boring. Like drugs and food, you eventually need more and better to achieve the same level of satisfaction. Pretty soon she'll want to fuck other men, and he will want to eat those other men's cum out of her pussy. Then the disaffection, the cheating, and one day they will wake up and realize they have used each other for so long and so thoughtlessly that they have used each other up; time for fresh meat. Chuck another Open Marriage into the dumpster of fools and regrets."

 

[MillieDynamite]

And one that was reasonably literate: "Sooner or later he will figure out that he's married to a stupid slut, and she will figure out that she's married to a willing cuckold. It might even be fun, until this new level of excitement due to external stimuli becomes the norm, and then becomes boring. Like drugs and food, you eventually need more and better to achieve the same level of satisfaction. Pretty soon she'll want to fuck other men, and he will want to eat those other men's cum out of her pussy. Then the disaffection, the cheating, and one day they will wake up and realize they have used each other for so long and so thoughtlessly that they have used each other up; time for fresh meat. Chuck another Open Marriage into the dumpster of fools and regrets."

A well-thought-out response to a fictional tale, elevating it from fiction to non-fiction (at least in the responder's mind). A min-story of a doomed relationship complete with epic Classic Greek Tragedy overtures or Shakespearean proportions. Me thinks he has had an open relationship and cleaned the well fucked pussy once too often. Having extracted the dagger, painfully but swiftly, from his breast where she plunged it into his quivering heart.

 

[Valendon]

A well-thought-out response to a fictional tale, elevating it from fiction to non-fiction (at least in the responder's mind). A min-story of a doomed relationship complete with epic Classic Greek Tragedy overtures or Shakespearean proportions. Me thinks he has had an open relationship and cleaned the well fucked pussy once too often. Having extracted the dagger, painfully but swiftly, from his breast where she plunged it into his quivering heart.

He does seem to have deep insight,LOL!

 

[Emilymcplugger]

This was featured on an IT story but had to post it here…

“Fucking cuck trash garbage being inserted into an incest theme, but at the end, it's still a cuck garbage. Stay in LW with this kind of crap, or better, migrate to Fetish entirely, where they enjoy it.”