ABSTRUSE
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I know, I'm fabulous....so are you.sophia jane said:Iyou.

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I know, I'm fabulous....so are you.sophia jane said:Iyou.

ABSTRUSE said:I know, I'm fabulous....so are you.![]()

It's my job to remind you that you are fabulous. Say it over and over now.sophia jane said:Thanks for making me feel better.![]()
Rumple Foreskin said:I've finished the first day, or about a third, of the rewrite of my contest group grope. The tally for the first 3000 words was: four one-on-one M/F fucks, three blowjobs, and two detailed fucks, one being with a mega-cock. There's also a striptease in front of friends followed by the stripper taking on three guys at the same time.
While she's busy, her husband and the guy's wives are fooling around. In this 3000 word stretch, things tend to come (so to speak) in threes. There are three rounds or cunilingus and anal sex, a three girl blow-job, plus M/F sex in three different positions.
The final 1000 words involves a fairly detailed M/F semi-exhibitionist fuck in front of friends that ends with all of them also screwing.
Anyone willing to check over any of this purple passion, can take on any of the sections, or if you're into heavy pain, all if the poor pitiful things.
My main concern is continuity (is the time-line at least sort of logical), repeated words, and just like in RL, tedious sex. There's no rush or, for that matter, any real need. I've got a lot left ot rewrite. Please don't volunteer unless you're bored outta your gourd.
Rembmer, this is just a fun, low-brow stroke story with no redeeming social value (if you notice any, let me know). Consider yourself warned.
Rumple Foreskin![]()
vella_ms said:im not bored.
but id love to give 'er a looksee.
send it on?

Rumple Foreskin said:I've finished the first day, or about a third, of the rewrite of my contest group grope. The tally for the first 3000 words was: four one-on-one M/F fucks, three blowjobs, and two detailed fucks, one being with a mega-cock. There's also a striptease in front of friends followed by the stripper taking on three guys at the same time.
While she's busy, her husband and the guy's wives are fooling around. In this 3000 word stretch, things tend to come (so to speak) in threes. There are three rounds or cunilingus and anal sex, a three girl blow-job, plus M/F sex in three different positions.
The final 1000 words involves a fairly detailed M/F semi-exhibitionist fuck in front of friends that ends with all of them also screwing.
Anyone willing to check over any of this purple passion, can take on any of the sections, or if you're into heavy pain, all of the poor pitiful things.
My main concern is continuity (is the time-line at least sort of logical), repeated words, and just like in RL, tedious sex. There's no rush or, for that matter, any real need. I've got a lot left ot rewrite. Please don't volunteer unless you're bored outta your gourd.
Rembmer, this is just a fun, low-brow stroke story with no redeeming social value (if you notice any, let me know). Consider yourself warned.
Rumple Foreskin![]()
You, lady, are a glutton for punishment. So tell me, how do you want it, PM or e-mail?vella_ms said:im not bored.
but id love to give 'er a looksee.
send it on?
Rumple Foreskin said:I've finished the first day, or about a third, of the rewrite of my contest group grope. The tally for the first 3000 words was: four one-on-one M/F fucks, three blowjobs, and two detailed fucks, one being with a mega-cock. There's also a striptease in front of friends followed by the stripper taking on three guys at the same time.
While she's busy, her husband and the guy's wives are fooling around. In this 3000 word stretch, things tend to come (so to speak) in threes. There are three rounds or cunilingus and anal sex, a three girl blow-job, plus M/F sex in three different positions.
The final 1000 words involves a fairly detailed M/F semi-exhibitionist fuck in front of friends that ends with all of them also screwing.
Anyone willing to check over any of this purple passion, can take on any of the sections, or if you're into heavy pain, all of the poor pitiful things.
My main concern is continuity (is the time-line at least sort of logical), repeated words, and just like in RL, tedious sex. There's no rush or, for that matter, any real need. I've got a lot left ot rewrite. Please don't volunteer unless you're bored outta your gourd.
Rembmer, this is just a fun, low-brow stroke story with no redeeming social value (if you notice any, let me know). Consider yourself warned.
Rumple Foreskin![]()
sophia jane said:I'm impressed Rumple. I managed 5 word pages and I'm happy. No way could I get that much out right now.
Oh, and- are we supposed to have redeeming social value????![]()
No sweat. You should find many prime targets of opportunity.dreampilot79 said:Rumpley... might I seek revenge?
Rumple Foreskin said:No sweat. You should find many prime targets of opportunity.
Rumple Foreskin![]()
email is easier to read, IMORumple Foreskin said:You, lady, are a glutton for punishment. So tell me, how do you want it, PM or e-mail?
Rumple Foreskin![]()
Is this an illustrated story? Vella needs pictures.vella_ms said:email is easier to read, IMO
vella_ms@yahoo.com
glutton yes, for punishment, possibly but i seriously doubt that comes in the form of your story.
scary how well you know me, skank.ABSTRUSE said:Is this an illustrated story? Vella needs pictures.
Any way you can dish... uh...Rumple Foreskin said:You, lady, are a glutton for punishment. So tell me, how do you want it, PM or e-mail?
Rumple Foreskin![]()
I only need it for a few more days.vella_ms said:scary how well you know me, skank.
you know i can't read when you have the brain.
i believe that would go under 'Fetish'dreampilot79 said:Wow!!!!! nearly a full day of bein posted.. and not a single death threat!!! I'm gonna have to work harder to piss people off!!!
Rumple Foreskin said:I've finished the first day, or about a third, of the rewrite of my contest group grope. The tally for the first 3000 words was: four one-on-one M/F fucks, three blowjobs, and two detailed fucks, one being with a mega-cock. There's also a striptease in front of friends followed by the stripper taking on three guys at the same time.
While she's busy, her husband and the guy's wives are fooling around. In this 3000 word stretch, things tend to come (so to speak) in threes. There are three rounds or cunilingus and anal sex, a three girl blow-job, plus M/F sex in three different positions.
The final 1000 words involves a fairly detailed M/F semi-exhibitionist fuck in front of friends that ends with all of them also screwing.
Anyone willing to check over any of this purple passion, can take on any of the sections, or if you're into heavy pain, all of the poor pitiful things.
My main concern is continuity (is the time-line at least sort of logical), repeated words, and just like in RL, tedious sex. There's no rush or, for that matter, any real need. I've got a lot left ot rewrite. Please don't volunteer unless you're bored outta your gourd.
Rembmer, this is just a fun, low-brow stroke story with no redeeming social value (if you notice any, let me know). Consider yourself warned.
Rumple Foreskin![]()
What the hey? The plane going down in flames symbolizes your entry.dreampilot79 said:Wow.. I read all 12 from today... and had a first read of rf's masterpiece... busy day... as my story slowly sinks like a leaky boat!
Rumple Foreskin said:What the hey? The plane going down in flames symbolizes your entry.
A slowly sinking ship represents my future fortune. Back off, boogaloo.
Rumple Foreskin![]()