Winter Holiday Support Thread

I've finished the first day, or about a third, of the rewrite of my contest group grope. The tally for the first 3000 words was: four one-on-one M/F fucks, three blowjobs, and two detailed fucks, one being with a mega-cock. There's also a striptease in front of friends followed by the stripper taking on three guys at the same time.

While she's busy, her husband and the guy's wives are fooling around. In this 3000 word stretch, things tend to come (so to speak) in threes. There are three rounds or cunilingus and anal sex, a three girl blow-job, plus M/F sex in three different positions.

The final 1000 words involves a fairly detailed M/F semi-exhibitionist fuck in front of friends that ends with all of them also screwing.

Anyone willing to check over any of this purple passion, can take on any of the sections, or if you're into heavy pain, all of the poor pitiful things.

My main concern is continuity (is the time-line at least sort of logical), repeated words, and just like in RL, tedious sex. There's no rush or, for that matter, any real need. I've got a lot left ot rewrite. Please don't volunteer unless you're bored outta your gourd.

Rembmer, this is just a fun, low-brow stroke story with no redeeming social value (if you notice any, let me know). Consider yourself warned.

Rumple Foreskin :cool:
 
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Rumple Foreskin said:
I've finished the first day, or about a third, of the rewrite of my contest group grope. The tally for the first 3000 words was: four one-on-one M/F fucks, three blowjobs, and two detailed fucks, one being with a mega-cock. There's also a striptease in front of friends followed by the stripper taking on three guys at the same time.

While she's busy, her husband and the guy's wives are fooling around. In this 3000 word stretch, things tend to come (so to speak) in threes. There are three rounds or cunilingus and anal sex, a three girl blow-job, plus M/F sex in three different positions.

The final 1000 words involves a fairly detailed M/F semi-exhibitionist fuck in front of friends that ends with all of them also screwing.

Anyone willing to check over any of this purple passion, can take on any of the sections, or if you're into heavy pain, all if the poor pitiful things.

My main concern is continuity (is the time-line at least sort of logical), repeated words, and just like in RL, tedious sex. There's no rush or, for that matter, any real need. I've got a lot left ot rewrite. Please don't volunteer unless you're bored outta your gourd.

Rembmer, this is just a fun, low-brow stroke story with no redeeming social value (if you notice any, let me know). Consider yourself warned.

Rumple Foreskin :cool:


im not bored.
but id love to give 'er a looksee.
send it on?
 
Rumple Foreskin said:
I've finished the first day, or about a third, of the rewrite of my contest group grope. The tally for the first 3000 words was: four one-on-one M/F fucks, three blowjobs, and two detailed fucks, one being with a mega-cock. There's also a striptease in front of friends followed by the stripper taking on three guys at the same time.

While she's busy, her husband and the guy's wives are fooling around. In this 3000 word stretch, things tend to come (so to speak) in threes. There are three rounds or cunilingus and anal sex, a three girl blow-job, plus M/F sex in three different positions.

The final 1000 words involves a fairly detailed M/F semi-exhibitionist fuck in front of friends that ends with all of them also screwing.

Anyone willing to check over any of this purple passion, can take on any of the sections, or if you're into heavy pain, all of the poor pitiful things.

My main concern is continuity (is the time-line at least sort of logical), repeated words, and just like in RL, tedious sex. There's no rush or, for that matter, any real need. I've got a lot left ot rewrite. Please don't volunteer unless you're bored outta your gourd.

Rembmer, this is just a fun, low-brow stroke story with no redeeming social value (if you notice any, let me know). Consider yourself warned.

Rumple Foreskin :cool:

I'm impressed Rumple. I managed 5 word pages and I'm happy. No way could I get that much out right now.
Oh, and- are we supposed to have redeeming social value???? ;)
 
vella_ms said:
im not bored.
but id love to give 'er a looksee.
send it on?
You, lady, are a glutton for punishment. So tell me, how do you want it, PM or e-mail?

Rumple Foreskin :cool:
 
Rumple Foreskin said:
I've finished the first day, or about a third, of the rewrite of my contest group grope. The tally for the first 3000 words was: four one-on-one M/F fucks, three blowjobs, and two detailed fucks, one being with a mega-cock. There's also a striptease in front of friends followed by the stripper taking on three guys at the same time.

While she's busy, her husband and the guy's wives are fooling around. In this 3000 word stretch, things tend to come (so to speak) in threes. There are three rounds or cunilingus and anal sex, a three girl blow-job, plus M/F sex in three different positions.

The final 1000 words involves a fairly detailed M/F semi-exhibitionist fuck in front of friends that ends with all of them also screwing.

Anyone willing to check over any of this purple passion, can take on any of the sections, or if you're into heavy pain, all of the poor pitiful things.

My main concern is continuity (is the time-line at least sort of logical), repeated words, and just like in RL, tedious sex. There's no rush or, for that matter, any real need. I've got a lot left ot rewrite. Please don't volunteer unless you're bored outta your gourd.

Rembmer, this is just a fun, low-brow stroke story with no redeeming social value (if you notice any, let me know). Consider yourself warned.

Rumple Foreskin :cool:


Rumpley... might I seek revenge?
 
sophia jane said:
I'm impressed Rumple. I managed 5 word pages and I'm happy. No way could I get that much out right now.
Oh, and- are we supposed to have redeeming social value???? ;)

Danged, if I know. I've always looked upon RSV's as a blight upon the Lit landscape.

Rumple Foreskin :cool:
 
Rumple Foreskin said:
You, lady, are a glutton for punishment. So tell me, how do you want it, PM or e-mail?

Rumple Foreskin :cool:
email is easier to read, IMO
vella_ms@yahoo.com
glutton yes, for punishment, possibly but i seriously doubt that comes in the form of your story.
 
ABSTRUSE said:
Is this an illustrated story? Vella needs pictures.
scary how well you know me, skank.
you know i can't read when you have the brain.
 
Wow!!!!! nearly a full day of bein posted.. and not a single death threat!!! I'm gonna have to work harder to piss people off!!!
 
Rumple Foreskin said:
You, lady, are a glutton for punishment. So tell me, how do you want it, PM or e-mail?

Rumple Foreskin :cool:
Any way you can dish... uh...

That wasn't directed at me.
Nevermind.
 
dreampilot79 said:
Wow!!!!! nearly a full day of bein posted.. and not a single death threat!!! I'm gonna have to work harder to piss people off!!!
i believe that would go under 'Fetish'
but don't quote me on that.
 
Rumple Foreskin said:
I've finished the first day, or about a third, of the rewrite of my contest group grope. The tally for the first 3000 words was: four one-on-one M/F fucks, three blowjobs, and two detailed fucks, one being with a mega-cock. There's also a striptease in front of friends followed by the stripper taking on three guys at the same time.

While she's busy, her husband and the guy's wives are fooling around. In this 3000 word stretch, things tend to come (so to speak) in threes. There are three rounds or cunilingus and anal sex, a three girl blow-job, plus M/F sex in three different positions.

The final 1000 words involves a fairly detailed M/F semi-exhibitionist fuck in front of friends that ends with all of them also screwing.

Anyone willing to check over any of this purple passion, can take on any of the sections, or if you're into heavy pain, all of the poor pitiful things.

My main concern is continuity (is the time-line at least sort of logical), repeated words, and just like in RL, tedious sex. There's no rush or, for that matter, any real need. I've got a lot left ot rewrite. Please don't volunteer unless you're bored outta your gourd.

Rembmer, this is just a fun, low-brow stroke story with no redeeming social value (if you notice any, let me know). Consider yourself warned.

Rumple Foreskin :cool:

Send it on Rump.
I can't seem to get my head wraped around the other holidays right now or the other three either.
And you know I am a glutton for punishment, I'm ex-Army.
Email if you please, it's easier. I think you have but wth
hugosam76@gmail.com

looking forward. Always like reading what real writers write.
 
Alright...
I am 99% sure that I read, voted, PCed the 12 up today....
I have made my list and I am checking it twice.... and I can be a jolly fat man if I want to

NaNoing has stopped and been replaced by the holiday stories

f**king bitchy muses
 
Wow.. I read all 12 from today... and had a first read of rf's masterpiece... busy day... as my story slowly sinks like a leaky boat!
 
Anyone around to do some editting for me please....
non-erotic 3138 on the word count
true story
not happy

thanks in advance.


I don't know if it goes here or not.... but this is what came to me when I was thinking of holiday stories....
sighs*
 
Rumple Foreskin said:
What the hey? The plane going down in flames symbolizes your entry.

A slowly sinking ship represents my future fortune. Back off, boogaloo.



Rumple Foreskin :cool:

Sorry to tell ya this m'friend.. but I've read your entry... I owe ya comments.. but try as I might.. there was little I could shred... I'm afraid your story will fly with the eagles.. while mine deflates and sinks more like yer leaky boat...

While mine might have resembled a plane crash when first I saw it.. it jumped to the upper reaches.. and now is slowly sinking... more fitting to the sinking ship!
 
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