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Sorry but this thread is not a story idea. It belongs in some other place such as the nauseating AH or suchlike.
 
Sorry but this thread is not a story idea. It belongs in some other place such as the nauseating AH or suchlike.
You must be tongue-in-cheek, because redoing existing movies has been a staple of Story Ideas for a long time. Well, Moby Dick was both a novel and a movie.
 
Truckers instead of those guys with the axes in the witch’s castle? It is beginning to look a bit epic Especially when you add TARDIS.
Yellowbirdy, you are starting to lose your focus here! I've got to put some more thought into this Wizard of Oz thing. So, The Sound of Music. We are going for some subtlety here, not wall to wall porn.

To start with: "How do you solve a problem like Maria?" So what's wrong with her? The nuns already have the answer. "She's a girl!" The real Maria von Trapp did enter a convent to study at age 19. (In 1923! The movie's timeline is very condensed.)

So, for the sake of argument, let's say she's about 18 and has been there for a while. (I forgot how old Julie Andrews really was.) So in our version, she's been in there a bit too long and she's getting boy-crazy - horny, in other words. So the nuns kick her out because she can't keep her hands out of her own pants, especially at night. They try to put her to bed with mittens tied to her hands, but she just pulls them off with her teeth.

I mean, this girl is so frustrated that she's climbing trees, as mentioned in the song. So we're got some potentially good scenes to start off our movie.
 
You must be tongue-in-cheek, because redoing existing movies has been a staple of Story Ideas for a long time. Well, Moby Dick was both a novel and a movie.

Go back to the Original Posting and quote to me from it the actual idea proposed for a story. There isn't one. The OP's thought is much better raised in AH.
 
I had to look this up. You mean that song from "Wicked?" The only title I can find is, "Defying Gravity." Is that it?
Yes! I thought about adding “Rise up!” from Hamilton but the whole assignment was already too big to fit, a whale of a story! (Okay, bad. I know.)
 
Go back to the Original Posting and quote to me from it the actual idea proposed for a story. There isn't one. The OP's thought is much better raised in AH.
Why are you suddenly coming into this thread and busting my chops? Yellowbirdy was the OP, and he was looking for story ideas. Then the next too posters bring up Moby Dick and the Muppets, existing materials. Then Yellowbirdy himself proposes The Wizard of Oz, in some detail.

I think he made a good choice in using Story Ideas rather than AH. His type of request has been brought up on Story Ideas innumerable times. I don't see any problem with it.
 
Sorry but this thread is not a story idea. It belongs in some other place such as the nauseating AH or suchlike.
Oopsie. Sorry. I looked and the only thing i can find that you might mean by AH is Authors Hangout and I am not an author—at least not yet. So. Um.
 
Why are you suddenly coming into this thread and busting my chops? Yellowbirdy was the OP, and he was looking for story ideas. Then the next too posters bring up Moby Dick and the Muppets, existing materials. Then Yellowbirdy himself proposes The Wizard of Oz, in some detail.

I think he made a good choice in using Story Ideas rather than AH. His type of request has been brought up on Story Ideas innumerable times. I don't see any problem with it.
(Quietly). I’m a she.
 
Yellowbirdy, you are starting to lose your focus here! I've got to put some more thought into this Wizard of Oz thing. So, The Sound of Music. We are going for some subtlety here, not wall to wall porn.

To start with: "How do you solve a problem like Maria?" So what's wrong with her? The nuns already have the answer. "She's a girl!" The real Maria von Trapp did enter a convent to study at age 19. (In 1923! The movie's timeline is very condensed.)

So, for the sake of argument, let's say she's about 18 and has been there for a while. (I forgot how old Julie Andrews really was.) So in our version, she's been in there a bit too long and she's getting boy-crazy - horny, in other words. So the nuns kick her out because she can't keep her hands out of her own pants, especially at night. They try to put her to bed with mittens tied to her hands, but she just pulls them off with her teeth.

I mean, this girl is so frustrated that she's climbing trees, as mentioned in the song. So we're got some potentially good scenes to start off our movie.
That sounds fun. And focused. Much as i would love to try the Wizard Moby Muppet who lived in St. Louis once during the Revolutionary War, I think maybe it would be a pretty big challenge for one such as me to get all that in line. I mean, I ain’t Tolkien here!
 
Why are you suddenly coming into this thread and busting my chops? Yellowbirdy was the OP, and he was looking for story ideas. Then the next too posters bring up Moby Dick and the Muppets, existing materials. Then Yellowbirdy himself proposes The Wizard of Oz, in some detail.

I think he made a good choice in using Story Ideas rather than AH. His type of request has been brought up on Story Ideas innumerable times. I don't see any problem with it.
I'm not 'busting chops', whatever that means. Allow me to point out the error of your ways.

Ahem... ready for this? Ok, here it comes (drum roll) : 'Have an idea for a story you'd like to see? Post it here!'

Translation for the 'hard of understanding': this board is NOT for asking for story ideas; it's for suggesting/proposing them (clash of cymbals).

I repeat: the OP belongs elsewhere.
 
What Esther Smith really did with that guy (John Truett) in Meet Me in St. Louis. Especially, that scene where she wants him to come upstairs to to turn off the gas lights, and he turns her down. I know it's 1903, so they probably wouldn't have had full vaginal intercourse, but there is a ton of other naughty things they could gotten away with. And the wonderful underwear that women wore back then. Dude, what's wrong with you - that girl was ready to go!

"When he smiled I could feel the car shake." Honey, it wasn't the car that was shaking - it was you.
Please write this!
I will beg for this one!
 
Oopsie. Sorry. I looked and the only thing i can find that you might mean by AH is Authors Hangout and I am not an author—at least not yet. So. Um.
No 'um' required. A cursory look will show you that by no means all of the posters on AH are 'authors'... even if you judge that what most of the stuff which people post as 'stories' on Literotica does indeed confer 'author' status, which itself is a highly dubious stretching of la vérité.
 
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How do you mean? I've made lots of comments on SI and started quite a few threads (with genuine proposed ideas, if not always brilliant!). I call myself a writer rather than the pretentious-sounding 'author' and write for my own interest and fun. I don't post any of my stuff on this site. Not all writers posting on these boards do.
 
Please write this!
I will beg for this one!
Thank you, but I've got at least two other things to do first, maybe three! And it takes a while to write a story. If I do finish it something, I promise to let you know. Meanwhile, you can check out my Sound of Music speculations on the other thread.
 
Thank you, but I've got at least two other things to do first, maybe three! And it takes a while to write a story. If I do finish it something, I promise to let you know. Meanwhile, you can check out my Sound of Music speculations on the other thread.
I know.
I know it takes time to finish a story.
I did appreciate the thoughts you had, though... And I can't get the song outta my head.
🌷
 
Thank you, but I've got at least two other things to do first, maybe three! And it takes a while to write a story. If I do finish it something, I promise to let you know. Meanwhile, you can check out my Sound of Music speculations on the other thread.
No, it's on this thread, one post already here! #30, I fact. For a moment I thought I had forgotten to post it and I had lost it.
 
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