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Yellowbirdy

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What if YOU could write the best, most perfectly exciting story on literotica (remembering the rules), your dream come true. What would it be like? If you are an author, great. If not, also great. Don’t worry about getting it just right. Just tell about it in as much detail as you like. And then what happens? And then what?
 
What Esther Smith really did with that guy (John Truett) in Meet Me in St. Louis. Especially, that scene where she wants him to come upstairs to to turn off the gas lights, and he turns her down. I know it's 1903, so they probably wouldn't have had full vaginal intercourse, but there is a ton of other naughty things they could gotten away with. And the wonderful underwear that women wore back then. Dude, what's wrong with you - that girl was ready to go!

"When he smiled I could feel the car shake." Honey, it wasn't the car that was shaking - it was you.
 
As long as we are into old movies and muppets, maybe a take on the Wizard of Oz with Auntie Em and Uncle Henry. (Sorry, Ahab! Or on the other hand, I am pretty sure a crossover has never been done!)
 
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If you've seen that scene where Esther is on the streetcar and John catches up to it - I don't want to get too crude about it, but if you listen to her singing (including the lyrics) and and note her expressions and body language: that lady's bloomers are getting damp.
 
As long as we are into old movies and muppets, maybe a take on the Wizard of Oz with Auntie Em and Uncle Henry. (Sorry, Ahab! Or on the other hand, I am pretty sure a crossover has never been done!)
I've seen various takes on the Wizard, usually visual rarther than written. Technically, Dorothy was supposed to be about eleven in the book. Garland was abut sixteen when she filmed it, and she looks it. They had to bind her breasts so that they wouldn't be too visible. If you wanted to get around Lit's age limits, you could do it as a complete spoof where she is older. I'm not sure how I would write it, but I'm not anyway.
 
Queequeg and the Wizard or maybe Queequeg as the Wizard. Dorothy and Queequeg as the Wizard? (Sorry again, Ahab. Go get yourself a few tats. Maybe that will help. It is just what to do with Moby!)
 
I've seen various takes on the Wizard, usually visual rarther than written. Technically, Dorothy was supposed to be about eleven in the book. Garland was abut sixteen when she filmed it, and she looks it. They had to bind her breasts so that they wouldn't be too visible. If you wanted to get around Lit's age limits, you could do it as a complete spoof where she is older. I'm not sure how I would write it, but I'm not anyway.
We would need to change that of course To comply with the rules. But, you know: Artistic license. (But Judy could really sing! I just don’t know how we could get that whale to Kansas!)
 
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Queequeg and the Wizard or maybe Queequeg as the Wizard. Dorothy and Queequeg as the Wizard? (Sorry again, Ahab. Go get yourself a few tats. Maybe that will help. It is just what to do with Moby!)
Now you're just getting desperate and you're grasping at straws. I had some ideas about The Sound of Music (lots to work with there) but I need to get some rest and I'll do it tomorrow.
 
Oh my!! That might work. Or we could put him in the tornado like that movie where it rains sharks!

Actually, it was supposed to be a kind of brainstorming question because sometimes it seems like people post on this portion of the bulletin board about what they might like to READ because they are too unsure of their writing to try to write a story, and I thought maybe it could get somebody like that started. Maybe I misjudged. But trying to put all this together might end up being a bit of fun. As Doctor 10 said when he was challenged to state his name, rank, and purpose, “The Doctor, Doctor, fun!”
 
Truckers are fun to tease
You didn't even let me finish the post!

"There ain't nothin' in my mirror
Just a cloud of dust and smoke
What do you expect
When some ole trucker's heart gets broke
Yeah, a trucker's heart gets broke."
 
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