What are your thoughts on my story "Kelsi's Adventures Ch 02"

[WW2Mike]

What was the basic plot summary between Jordan and Kelsi in the second chapter of Kelsi's Adventures? I want the whole recap and your thoughts about the entire chapter.

http://literotica.com/s/kelsis-adventures-ch-02

 

[WW2Mike]

The whole point of the second chapter was for Jordan and Kelsi to make it back to their home from the beach, with all sorts of crazy stuff happening along the way.