We Were So Close

[Henchman999]

Do you feel it?

Do you sense the overarching need, the spiritual craving,
the pregnant sensation that something's gotta give and
it's going to be gorgeous and unexpected and something
so profound that it causes everyone on the planet to sud-
denly stop in the middle of the street at the same moment
and take a deep breath and go,

"Oh yeah, let's chat."

Or will we go back to the caves, bleeding and broken and
yanking each other around by the hair and saying "No, no--
we were so close to the excitement of talking with a stranger.

How did we fuck it up?"
**

 

[UselessDesires]

Do you feel it?

Do you sense the overarching need, the spiritual craving,
the pregnant sensation that something's gotta give and
it's going to be gorgeous and unexpected and something
so profound that it causes everyone on the planet to sud-
denly stop in the middle of the street at the same moment
and take a deep breath and go,

"Oh yeah, let's chat."

Or will we go back to the caves, bleeding and broken and
yanking each other around by the hair and saying "No, no--
we were so close to the excitement of talking with a stranger.

How did we fuck it up?"
**

I'm thinking that if this is aimed at a specific person, and not just a general idea, it would benefit you to be overt, at least in private. But then, if she can't read something like this and know it's about her, maybe she's not who you're looking for.

Oh, and yep, delicious, but unless I'm a poor judge (which I sometimes can be), not as advertised. *doing the happy dance*

 

[Jen2013]

Don't delete this one!
You write beautifully