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[lingus60]

Morning all, absentee irregular visitor that I am. Hope the dampness is finally relenting for you all x

Morning! Pretty nice here now at last!

 

[geronimo_appleby]

Morning all, absentee irregular visitor that I am. Hope the dampness is finally relenting for you all x

we're good.

 

[LucyCanyon]

Puddles abating

 

[geronimo_appleby]

Morning all, absentee irregular visitor that I am. Hope the dampness is finally relenting for you all x

Morning! Pretty nice here now at last!

i think youz are from the same part of the world. like god's own county.

 

[geronimo_appleby]

Puddles abating

the ducks are pleased.

 

[Camos1000]

sent you a script. the date format is american, as in the 'language.'

if you want to write one up, i'll send the premise. oh, POV means Point of view. That's where the shot from the character's perspective.

Thank you. Will take a look shortly

What is the premise ? I don’t understand all the technical terms

 

[geronimo_appleby]

Thank you. Will take a look shortly

What is the premise ? I don’t understand all the technical terms

the outline of the scene.

 

[geronimo_appleby]

morning, uk!

 

[Camos1000]

morning, uk!

Good morning

 

[lingus60]

i think youz are from the same part of the world. like god's own county.

Indeed I am! Morning to you!

 

[geronimo_appleby]

MOT done.

 

[lingus60]

MOT done.

Your body or your car?

 

[geronimo_appleby]

Your body or your car?

car.

you don't want to know about the other.

 

[geronimo_appleby]

mornings... again!

 

[deft]

Mornin’! Had to catch an ark to work today.

 

[lingus60]

Mornin’! Had to catch an ark to work today.

Hope you’re not on it for forty days and nights!

 

[lingus60]

I hesitate to attempt to make a joke about going in two by two….

 

[geronimo_appleby]

Mornin’! Had to catch an ark to work today.

i'm hearing strains of the theme to Hawaii Five-0... thanks for the earworm!

 

[geronimo_appleby]

okay, so, i started a scene with the intention of submitting it to the Anal category here on Lit. thing is, as it goes with discovery writing, the ship has blown off course.

basic oitline is: younger bloke [no firm detail on age, but probably early 20s] has had an argument with his now former fiancee during a holiday [no setting in mind, just somewhere warm, possibly Spain, whatever]. He's by the pool and sees a mature lady [close to 50 y/o] with a very aesthetically pleasing figure go by in a skimpy two-piece. he sees her three days on the bounce [no pun] ]. on the third day, she berates him for being a perv, etc. That same evening, the chap is in the hotel bar - perhaps as a precursor to hitting the tourist strip - when the lady walks in, alone. She sees our boy and walks up to him. conversation ensues where the chap tells about his fiancee buggering off [again, no pun because it was meant to be an anal scene] and where the lady flirts but reveals she's married to a much older man.

now, this is where it veers from the intended course. the lady says she was stupid and greedy becaus she married for money, etc. but it turns out the husband isn't as wealthy as she thought. the young man suggests divorce. the lady says she has nowhere to go, no money, no skills, etc. it's a bit woe-is-me but the chap is one of the nice ones, the lady is pleasing on the eye, and he wants to help out. even if it's just listening.

so, it gets to where the lady says she wants to maintain a shred of repsectability by keeping to her marriage vows. she made her bed, now she has to lie on it. she tells the young man she gets excitement by showing off and then masturbating to wild scenarios in a fantasy reel featuring someone she saw on that particular day.

it jumps to a scene where the lady and young man are in his hotel room. they're bith naked. she's on the bed and he's in the chair. her rationale is: okay, it's wrong but she can reconcile it with her moral code because while they masturbate in front of one another, she doesn't count it as cheating if they don't touch [that's her reasoning, not mine, necessarily].

my question now is... what happens next?

 

[geronimo_appleby]

mornings!

get to it, slackers.

 

[barefootgirl69]

mornings!

get to it, slackers.

Ummm...almost morning!

 

[barefootgirl69]

my question now is... what happens next?

Hubby catches her and wants to watch both of them. Not necessarily my scene, but...

 

[zach20092]

Morning all!! What do you think.. back to rains after a couple of good days? At least in SW London

 

[zach20092]

okay, so, i started a scene with the intention of submitting it to the Anal category here on Lit. thing is, as it goes with discovery writing, the ship has blown off course.

basic oitline is: younger bloke [no firm detail on age, but probably early 20s] has had an argument with his now former fiancee during a holiday [no setting in mind, just somewhere warm, possibly Spain, whatever]. He's by the pool and sees a mature lady [close to 50 y/o] with a very aesthetically pleasing figure go by in a skimpy two-piece. he sees her three days on the bounce [no pun] ]. on the third day, she berates him for being a perv, etc. That same evening, the chap is in the hotel bar - perhaps as a precursor to hitting the tourist strip - when the lady walks in, alone. She sees our boy and walks up to him. conversation ensues where the chap tells about his fiancee buggering off [again, no pun because it was meant to be an anal scene] and where the lady flirts but reveals she's married to a much older man.

now, this is where it veers from the intended course. the lady says she was stupid and greedy becaus she married for money, etc. but it turns out the husband isn't as wealthy as she thought. the young man suggests divorce. the lady says she has nowhere to go, no money, no skills, etc. it's a bit woe-is-me but the chap is one of the nice ones, the lady is pleasing on the eye, and he wants to help out. even if it's just listening.

so, it gets to where the lady says she wants to maintain a shred of repsectability by keeping to her marriage vows. she made her bed, now she has to lie on it. she tells the young man she gets excitement by showing off and then masturbating to wild scenarios in a fantasy reel featuring someone she saw on that particular day.

it jumps to a scene where the lady and young man are in his hotel room. they're bith naked. she's on the bed and he's in the chair. her rationale is: okay, it's wrong but she can reconcile it with her moral code because while they masturbate in front of one another, she doesn't count it as cheating if they don't touch [that's her reasoning, not mine, necessarily].

my question now is... what happens next?

Definitely not cheating... and if it's only touching.. no penetration.. some extended touching with the tongue.. again no penetration.. and then just rubbing and teasing the lips... and then.... voila.. it wasn't planned.. just happened.. as long as he pulls out it's ok..

 

[geronimo_appleby]

Ummm...almost morning!

goddam timezones!