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[geronimo_appleby]

Ooo what did you think ?

do you want a critque on technical elements, or is it just my general opinion you're after?

 

[Camos1000]

do you want a critque on technical elements, or is it just my general opinion you're after?

A general opinion please

 

[geronimo_appleby]

A general opinion please

good fun for real-life experiences.

 

[geronimo_appleby]

morning, uk!

 

[Camos1000]

good fun for real-life experiences.

Some is real life some fantasy . Glad you like it though

 

[geronimo_appleby]

Some is real life some fantasy . Glad you like it though

i suppose writing it is fun for you. there's tweaks you could make in the writing - like quotation marls as one reader suggested and you followed up on. but if you're not massively bothered by technical aspects, it doesn't matter. i'm not saying i'm awesome as a writer. i just learned some shit over the years.

i'd say keep on putting scenes out there. people enjoy 'em.

 

[lingus60]

Nice and dry here now at last….North Yorkshire

 

[Camos1000]

i suppose writing it is fun for you. there's tweaks you could make in the writing - like quotation marls as one reader suggested and you followed up on. but if you're not massively bothered by technical aspects, it doesn't matter. i'm not saying i'm awesome as a writer. i just learned some shit over the years.

i'd say keep on putting scenes out there. people enjoy 'em.

Thank you. Yes we are learning more about what is important and trying to keep that in mind

So do you think we could write a porn script ?

 

[geronimo_appleby]

Thank you. Yes we are learning more about what is important and trying to keep that in mind

So do you think we could write a porn script ?

that's a whole different, uh, discipline. not too much dialogue becasue the 'talent' can't remember their lines. scripts are mainly about a framework of shots mixed with dialogue to create tension. there's also usually a niche involved. it can be creampies or breeding, so you have to cater for that particular psychology - whatever the niche. there's a theme at the moment where we're trying to make it believable - suspension of disbelief, i suppose. it can be an effort to get the scene moving at the right pace, going from normal to where the motivation kicks in for people tp do stuff that doesn't hasppen in reality.

sorry to make it sound so dry [no pun]. but that's how it is. i could send you an example script and then send a premise for you to, uh, flesh out [again, no pun ].

 

[geronimo_appleby]

Nice and dry here now at last….North Yorkshire

you anywhere near thirsk?

 

[geronimo_appleby]

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Umbrellas out in the UK today

not going out. i've done what i needed to do. wales v barbarians this afternoon.

 

[Camos1000]

that's a whole different, uh, discipline. not too much dialogue becasue the 'talent' can't remember their lines. scripts are mainly about a framework of shots mixed with dialogue to create tension. there's also usually a niche involved. it can be creampies or breeding, so you have to cater for that particular psychology - whatever the niche. there's a theme at the moment where we're trying to make it believable - suspension of disbelief, i suppose. it can be an effort to get the scene moving at the right pace, going from normal to where the motivation kicks in for people tp do stuff that doesn't hasppen in reality.

sorry to make it sound so dry [no pun]. but that's how it is. i could send you an example script and then send a premise for you to, uh, flesh out [again, no pun ].

Ooo yes that would be great thank you. Can you make the subject not too controversial though please

 

[geronimo_appleby]

Ooo yes that would be great thank you. Can you make the subject not too controversial though please

what does that mean?

 

[Camos1000]

Something that isn’t too difficult for us to imaging writing about

 

[geronimo_appleby]

Something that isn’t too difficult for us to imaging writing about

Something that isn’t too difficult for us to imaging writing about

sent you a script. the date format is american, as in the 'language.'

if you want to write one up, i'll send the premise. oh, POV means Point of view. That's where the shot from the character's perspective.

 

[geronimo_appleby]

...and, good morning, uk.

 

[barefootgirl69]

...and, good morning, uk.

Good morning, GA! (It's after midnight here!) Party animal!!!

 

[geronimo_appleby]

Good morning, GA! (It's after midnight here!) Party animal!!!

howza, chica?

good weather for frogs here. i just don't have a pool this time.

 

[barefootgirl69]

howza, chica?

good weather for frogs here. i just don't have a pool this time.

Kamikaze Frogs
Good band name.

Are you staying warm and dry?

 

[geronimo_appleby]

Kamikaze Frogs
Good band name.

Are you staying warm and dry?

of course.

warm enough for you out there?

 

[barefootgirl69]

of course.

warm enough for you out there?

Not at all. It had the nerve to have overnight lows in the high 30s this week. I want perfect 75-85 daytime temps and 45 overnight.

 

[geronimo_appleby]

Not at all. It had the nerve to have overnight lows in the high 30s this week. I want perfect 75-85 daytime temps and 45 overnight.

sounds like a plan! are you up high there?

 

[barefootgirl69]

sounds like a plan! are you up high there?

For the moment, but it's not going to last to the weekend.

 

[geronimo_appleby]

For the moment, but it's not going to last to the weekend.

any plans for today?

 

[LucyCanyon]

Morning all, absentee irregular visitor that I am. Hope the dampness is finally relenting for you all x