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Some is real life some fantasy 😊. Glad you like it though 😊😊
i suppose writing it is fun for you. there's tweaks you could make in the writing - like quotation marls as one reader suggested and you followed up on. but if you're not massively bothered by technical aspects, it doesn't matter. i'm not saying i'm awesome as a writer. i just learned some shit over the years.

i'd say keep on putting scenes out there. people enjoy 'em. :D
 
i suppose writing it is fun for you. there's tweaks you could make in the writing - like quotation marls as one reader suggested and you followed up on. but if you're not massively bothered by technical aspects, it doesn't matter. i'm not saying i'm awesome as a writer. i just learned some shit over the years.

i'd say keep on putting scenes out there. people enjoy 'em. :D
Thank you. Yes we are learning more about what is important and trying to keep that in mind 😊

So do you think we could write a porn script ? 😇
 
Thank you. Yes we are learning more about what is important and trying to keep that in mind 😊

So do you think we could write a porn script ? 😇
that's a whole different, uh, discipline. not too much dialogue becasue the 'talent' can't remember their lines. scripts are mainly about a framework of shots mixed with dialogue to create tension. there's also usually a niche involved. it can be creampies or breeding, so you have to cater for that particular psychology - whatever the niche. there's a theme at the moment where we're trying to make it believable - suspension of disbelief, i suppose. it can be an effort to get the scene moving at the right pace, going from normal to where the motivation kicks in for people tp do stuff that doesn't hasppen in reality.

sorry to make it sound so dry [no pun]. but that's how it is. i could send you an example script and then send a premise for you to, uh, flesh out [again, no pun :D].
 
that's a whole different, uh, discipline. not too much dialogue becasue the 'talent' can't remember their lines. scripts are mainly about a framework of shots mixed with dialogue to create tension. there's also usually a niche involved. it can be creampies or breeding, so you have to cater for that particular psychology - whatever the niche. there's a theme at the moment where we're trying to make it believable - suspension of disbelief, i suppose. it can be an effort to get the scene moving at the right pace, going from normal to where the motivation kicks in for people tp do stuff that doesn't hasppen in reality.

sorry to make it sound so dry [no pun]. but that's how it is. i could send you an example script and then send a premise for you to, uh, flesh out [again, no pun :D].
Ooo yes that would be great thank you. Can you make the subject not too controversial though please 😊😊
 
Something that isn’t too difficult for us to imaging writing about 😊

Something that isn’t too difficult for us to imaging writing about 😊
sent you a script. the date format is american, as in the 'language.'

if you want to write one up, i'll send the premise. oh, POV means Point of view. That's where the shot from the character's perspective.
 
Morning all, absentee irregular visitor that I am. Hope the dampness is finally relenting for you all x
 
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