The Challenge Club

[Black Tulip]

I second that. Please join: the more the merrier.

 

[neonlyte]

BT
It seems cruel to criticise what is a nicely told sex story, well structured, rounded and concluded. But you know what I'm going to say.
'...your my brother' '...so, your my sister' are really the only incest context in the story, otherwise it was the Bubbles and Jake show.

This is a personal viewpoint, I'm certain if you posted your story on Lit. it would receive a good to excellent response because it is well written. I honestly thought Dad was going to be the 'lucky boy' reading the first part, so you have an avenue for a follow up.

Thanks for the read.
NL

 

[Black Tulip]

Neonlyte,

Nah, don't be sorry. Your honesty is appreciated. I kind of like that: the Jake and Bubbles show.

Just shows you that incest is not my first category of choice. LOL
I had intended Dad to be the lucky guy, but I could not get my keyboard to do that.

 

[mismused]

mismused
Please say you will join the next challenge, probably starting next week. Just pop back and check for the theme, more writers needed.

NL [/B]

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Thanks for the invite.

I've never written anything this way, and am not sure I can. It's always just there, and I write it, more or less. I will keep looking for whatever the new parameters are, and if something comes to me, I'll try it.

Do new parameters get set each time, like length (which I've never worried about before, or tried)?

In any case, I'd love to see your story when you do submit it. It has a nice tone.

m

 

[Guest]

Mismused,

We generally start a new challenge once every two weeks or so. It's not set in stone.

Each challenge has its own set parameters. You might be told to write within a certain category, or to include certain words, and make it a certain length. I think all of us that particpate have found that this little club has helped us to grow as writers.

 

[mismused]

Mismused,

We generally start a new challenge once every two weeks or so. It's not set in stone.

Each challenge has its own set parameters. You might be told to write within a certain category, or to include certain words, and make it a certain length. I think all of us that particpate have found that this little club has helped us to grow as writers.

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CM,

The problem with neophytes is that they're so new at everything. I'll watch, and maybe try, but since I'd be so new at it, I'll probably fall on my face, and not know how to get up (LOL).

Thanks,
m

 

[neonlyte]

mismused
Don't worry about tripping, plenty here to catch you.

The idea is to build your confidence by taking up the challenge, remember, we were all new in the not too distant past.

You can always send something to one of us first, we can look it over for you.

NL

 

[mismused]

mismused
Don't worry about tripping, plenty here to catch you.

The idea is to build your confidence by taking up the challenge, remember, we were all new in the not too distant past.

You can always send something to one of us first, we can look it over for you.

NL

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Thank you,

That's very kind of you. It's more the wondering if I can do something that is more or less on the spur of someone else's moment. It's kind of like writing about something specific, yet extemporaneously. Never tried that before.

However, since I'm not too fearful of falling and forgetting how to get up, all I can say is that I'll look, and if something comes to me, great. If not, I send in a blank (like my mind *grins*).

m

 

[neonlyte]

mismused

Wow, hadn't realised you were such a prolific writer, I have never seen so many 'H's beside stories.

I will read, and enjoy, I'm sure.

NL

 

[mismused]

mismused

Wow, hadn't realised you were such a prolific writer, I have never seen so many 'H's beside stories.

I will read, and enjoy, I'm sure.

NL

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Thank you for considering reading them. I"m not really a prolific writer, just broke the one up into chapters for easier reading, and yes, easier submitting. YST was my first ever foray into having a story posted. If you like mostly hetero novels/novellas with a mixture of some of the other too, hope you like it. It is quite long, I guess, but not so much as others.

Vignette is shorter, and the other 3 parts have already been submitted, and I'll also submit the poem in it tomorrow (it apprears in part 5 that I submitted this morning).

Anyway, not all stories are for everyone, but I hope one or both do it for you. If so, please enjoy, and thanks again.

m

edited to change to: mostly hetero...with a mixture of some of the other too,...

 

[minsue]

Mismused,

We generally start a new challenge once every two weeks or so. It's not set in stone.

Each challenge has its own set parameters. You might be told to write within a certain category, or to include certain words, and make it a certain length. I think all of us that particpate have found that this little club has helped us to grow as writers.

Brief threadjack to say I LOVE your new AV, Crim!

- Mindy, still lurking on the Challenge thread

 

[Guest]

Brief threadjack to say I LOVE your new AV, Crim!

- Mindy, still lurking on the Challenge thread

Thanks Mindy!

 

[Dingus Guy]

Story

Please forgive me for not reading your stories. I am having a tough time reading anything right now, but I would like to in the near future. This is my first story in like a month plus. I realized that writing something I really didn't want to write was good medicine for me. This was very difficult for me to write about as I am sure your stories were to you as well. I won't bother telling you the category, because it is plain as you read it where it belongs. Besides the trash bin that is. Anyway here it is...

Pledge of Allegiance

Sam awoke a little nauseous and dizzy. He was a little confused as his eyes tried to adjust to the dark room. He was in an odd position and seemed to be restrained. He felt naked, but was a little too numb to tell for sure. The cobwebs in his head still were making things foggy at the moment. His bare chest was securely pressed against a soft cushion by a belt around his mid-section. The wrists, stretching them, pulled his arms apart and back far apart. This caused him to be bent slightly forward against the padded instrument. There was no give and he found he could not lean back any more than he all ready was. His calves were strapped to similarly cushioned surface and his legs were spread apart from his lower torso. His arms pulled him up and because of the chest and calve restraints he was left dangling at the waist. This left his ass just hanging in the breeze.

As his mind cleared, Sam tried to recall the last thing that he could remember. He was pledging at his fraternity, and he was cleaning the house with the other pledges. Using a toothbrush as part of the detail, he was assigned the bathroom. They were all in dresses, wigs and had makeup on. He looked ridiculous, but it was part of the hazing they had to go through in order to become part of the brotherhood of Gamma Alpha Gamma. He remembers being called by Brother Harris, and joined him in the kitchen with Brothers Darryl and Vic. They were telling him how the weekend was going to be a challenge and if he would be able to get through it.




“Do you think you have what it takes to be a Gamma brother?” Brother Harris asked.

“As you know,” Vic added, “we told you we would give you a chance to back out with no hard feelings if you wanted to stop the pledging.”

“Yes Brother Harris, yes Brother Vic,” Sam replied earnestly. He wanted to be part of the fraternity life in the worst way. The parties, the sorority sisters, the total fun atmosphere were all he desired when he came to campus. It was this aspect of the college life that he wished to s himself in. The Gammas were an athletic fraternity. Meaning that you had to be a member of the athletic program in some way. Sam had a football scholarship and was the team’s newest wide receiver. He was in great physical shape and was sought after by the Gammas and it was an honor to be asked.

“Have you cleared your calendar for the next 2 days and nights?” Brother Harris inquired.

“Yes Brother Harris,” Sam answered. The pledges were told that their final trial would be this weekend, and that would be followed by the Brother Ritual, which was when the pledges became fraternity members of Gamma Alpha Gamma. He was expecting the unexpected.

“Good, now drink with us and accept your final trial,” Brother Vic said and made a gesture towards Darryl. Brother Darryl produced 4 goblets of what appeared to be wine. He passed them out and they toasted to their bonding this weekend. Sam went back to the bathroom and the toothbrush, but he doesn’t remember anything past that.






Thoughts of being drugged had entered Sam’s head. Did the Brothers do this as part of the pledging? There was no sign of them. Not that he could see very well in the dark. He couldn’t say that waking up naked was his cup of tea. Especially, with the knowledge that some guys stripped him bare and set him in this contraption. That wasn’t too cool Sam thought, but if it accompanied some hot girls, then it was all good. Despite the fact he was in this weird position naked, he felt comfortable. He still felt tired, so he closed his eyes and fell back asleep.

A blindfold was placed across his eyes, and this reawakened Sam. He heard shushing in his ear so he didn’t respond. It was a guy’s voice, so he knew the hazing was on. The blindfold was cloth, probably silk by the feel of it and it did not feel abrasive across his face.

“Sam open your mouth,” A male voice ordered. Sam recognized it as Brother Juice. Juice’s real name was Jules, but he preferred Juice. Sam complied and opened his mouth. He felt something stuff his mouth with a round rubber object like a ball. It was attached to something that encircled his lips and made it all the way around his head where it was attached. Sam thought it had the feel of rubber or elastic. He started to breath through his nose and found that it was bit uncomfortable getting used to.

Suddenly, he felt hands rest on his posterior, and Sam flinched at the touch. He didn’t like guys touching his naked body, especially his ass. The hands withdrew, and he felt hands on his right calf. They were making sure he was secure. The hands did the same for the left calf. They tugged on his taut arm restraints and hands lightly caressed his hands each time. It was very unnerving to Sam.

“He does seem secure,” Brother Juice exclaimed.

“Very good,” Another male voice responded. Sam surmised it was Brother Vic. Then he heard Brother Otto speak. Brother Otto was the President of the Fraternity and Sam had expected to see him at the closing ceremonies. Maybe with the blindfold that would be true. Otto had a very deep voice, which seemed to be in place with his huge frame. He was a Linebacker for the Bluefish, and the captain and star of the team. Otto was looking to the pros at the end of his junior year. He had decided that he was money in the hand, why risk another year. His physique was one to behold and the coaches marveled at his training and stamina in the gym.

“Let us proceed,” Brother Otto began, as Sam hung quietly from his binds. “Brothers take your positions. Sam listened very carefully. You do not want to remain tense for the next hour. I want you to relax or what we will do to you, will be painful. Grunt your approval for me.”

Sam grunted, but wasn’t sure he meant it.

“Good,” Brother Otto approved. “You will find that our initiations are unique to say the least. In the end, and I mean the end, you will find that you have had an awakening of sorts. Eventually everyone enjoys this facet of our pledging. I again remind you to stay relaxed or you will not enjoy it so much. Brother Harris give Sam his lesson.”

“Thank you Brother Otto,” Brother Harris acknowledged. “Sam let me explain a little about the male anatomy. Some of which I am sure you all ready know, but we will go over the facts anyway. The man’s sperm is produced in the testicle sac. From the testicles it moves up the epididymis, where it matures and then into the two small, muscular tubes called the vas deferens, which coil up and around the bladder, to the seminal vesicles. Finally, the sperm through the prostate, it’s last stop before being shot out of the penis because of muscle contractions within the path I have so far described. One of the prostate’s main duties is to create the seminal fluid that mixes with and carries the sperm out of the penis upon ejaculation. The prostate also helps to pump the semen and sperm with sufficient power out of a man’s body on its way to fertilizing a woman’s egg. That means that the prostate functions as both a gland and as a muscle. The prostate is also the nerve and emotional center of a man’s sex life and sexuality. It’s all a bit scientific, but now comes the interesting and fun part. Grunt if you have heard of the male g-spot?”

Not sure where this whole lecture was headed, Sam was still following Brother Harris’ words. He never heard of a male g-spot though, so he shook his head side to side. He had surely heard of the female g-spot and had found it on occasion. It was the prime area of intense pleasure for the woman. If there was a male version, it must be in the penis somewhere, Sam guessed. It did intrigue Sam and he hung on Brother Harris’ next words.

“Well,” Brother Harris continued, “the male g-spot resides in the prostate, hidden behind the perineum, the area on the base of the penis and the nearby testicles and the anus. It is a gland shaped a lot like a sphere that lives within the pelvic muscles beneath the bladder. The prostate gland as I alluded to before, plays a part in pumping out ejaculate when a man gets excited and has an orgasm. Not just being a muscle and a gland, but it’s central to a man’s pleasure. Call it his pleasure dome, if you will. Now our dear pledgee, where is it?”

The question seemed rhetorical, so Sam didn’t answer, but silence ensued. Suddenly, there were footsteps to his left, footsteps to his right. Then he heard Brother Juice whisper in his right ear.

“Let me show you,” Brother Juice muttered softly to Sam. “You see you can actually stimulate the male g-spot two ways. Externally, there is a spot called the perineum. Ever hear of it?”

Sam had no clue so he just shook his head again negatively. Not one part of him wanted to know. He didn’t feel too comfortable with all this male g-spot talk. Thoughts of them sticking a dildo up his ass were starting to make Sam very nervous. He was hoping they were just trying to scare him with the stripping and all the penis references. Yet, despite that rational explanation, Brother Juice’s voice was warm against his ear and that made him uneasy.

“I figured you didn’t,” Brother Juice continued, a little more vocal as had moved around to his left ear. Then he whispered softly again, “Most guys don’t know it, so don’t feel bad. I am sure the education, will not be forgotten, and the next time someone wants to know, you can tell them, just as I am telling you now. The perineum is the hairless area between the testicles and the anus. Right here.”

Suddenly, Sam felt fingers lift his testicles and tap him gently in the newly named area of his anatomy. The only area he could move, his hips and ass, drew back quickly at the unwelcome molestation of his groin area. The hands followed him and remained in firm contact with his body. Sam was grunting his disapproval, but the muffled voice was ignored and the fingers kept tapping his perineum.

“You see,” Brother Harris spoke up behind him, “this isn’t always the best way to stimulate the g-spot, because it is indirect. Yet tapping the area instead of caressing it is the best way for the man to feel the g-spot’s pleasure. Just like a woman though, the man must be aroused first to feel the g-spot’s potential.”

Sam gasped as he felt another hand grab at his limp penis, all the while the tapping continued. He felt nauseous at the violation, and groaned loudly behind the gag. He couldn’t believe these assholes were doing this to him. He wanted more than anything to wake up from a dream, but the reality came crashing down on him as a mouth engulfed the tip of his cock. His body flayed around helplessly against the bonds that held him mostly in place.

“We told you to relax,” Brother Harris whispered very close to his ear. Harris’ warm breath against Sam’s ear added to the nausea that Sam felt erupting inside of him. “You might want to relax now and enjoy it.”

A wet, greased finger slipped slowly into Sam’s ass crack. Sam clenched, trying to keep the finger from slipping in, but the position he was in and the mouth on his penis had his ass vulnerable for penetration. The slippery finger just teased his opening, circling around as if greasing him up. Despite him, Sam felt the mouth and tongue of his assailant stir his penis by stimulating the tip. It was a nightmare for him and now he was a showing sign that he was enjoying it. It was the last thing he wanted to happen. It seemed there was definitely more than one guy doing this to him, so they were all in it together. How could they all be gay, he thought. He was grunting wildly, trying to get them to stop, but his words were muffled and his pleas ignored.

The finger under his balls had never stopped tapping, and Sam started to feel something from it. Maybe it was the finger in his ass, or the mouth on his cock, but whatever it was his penis was starting to grow. As it did, a hand wrapped itself around the shaft and the mouth slid further down. Teeth scrapped his cock lightly, sending unwanted chills through his body. The finger in his butt kept greasing his anal opening, and the feelings were uncomfortable, but pleasant in a weird way. He had never had any ass play before by any of his girlfriends and he had been glad they didn’t. He thought it was gay for a guy to do that stuff. Now some gay dudes were doing it against his will.

“Pledge Sam,” Brother Vic beckoned from the right side of him, “Brother Juice alerted you that you can stimulate the g-spot in two different ways. By now you actually are starting to feel a little of the external tapping we explained to you. The second way is internally. By snaking a finger inside your ass about three inches in, you will feel a lot more of the g-spot pleasure we told you about. Like this. Now remember do not clench.”

The greased finger slowly inserted itself gently into his ass. He did clench, but he really couldn’t keep it that way because the mouth on his cock was taking some of his attention away from the finger. A tongue licked along his shaft, and he grew even bigger and harder. He didn’t want to show any gay tendency, but with his eyes blindfolded he felt his mind was playing tricks on his body. He knew he wasn’t gay, and despite the knowledge of a bunch of guys doing this to him, he was reacting differently than he wanted to. He tried to think that a guy was doing it, so he wouldn’t be aroused, but his penis couldn’t resist the pleasure that was rising in him. He was on the verge of tears, but he wouldn’t let these guys see that. He tried his best to think of other things. He thought about hideous things. Things that made him withdraw from the scene.

Noticing a change in Sam’s hardness, the mouth suddenly became a little more aggressive in the sucking of his penis. Sam felt the hand and mouth work harder to arouse him. Just as he was starting to soften, he grew hard again. One of the girl’s he had gone out with did this thing with her tongue that sent shivers down his spine. Now this guy was doing the same thing to him, and he was reacting the same way. The finger in his asshole was deeper now and it was somehow adding to the pleasure of the moment. Sam wondered if it was truly his g-spot as his cock became fully erect. The new stimulation and aggressive blowjob had Sam sweating and he started to slacken his tension in his muscles. His resistance weakened with his arousal. The pleasure mounted and as the finger started to move in and out of his greased ass, he found he was missing the feeling there.

“By now,” Brother Otto exclaimed from behind him now, “you are starting to find the new pleasure is quite irresistible. Now, you don’t have to be gay to enjoy this as you are finding out. If you are having trouble with this aspect just think of some hot girl playing with you. Thinking about a hot girl sucking your cock feverishly. Thinking of a hot girl moving a finger in and out of your butt. Thinking of a hot girl pleasuring you in such wicked ways. Thinking of a hot girl with a strap-on getting ready to fuck you with a greasy cock.” Brother Otto giggled evilly as the finger suddenly withdrew from Sam’s ass.

Hands gripped his sides and Sam panicked anew. He tried to move away, but this just drove his cock into the mouth of his cocksucker. He wasn’t in a position to struggle, and the hands were stilling him on his hips. As if he knew what was going to happen he tried not to clench or he would be ripped apart inside. His cock was so hard from the mouth attack that he felt close to cumming, but he felt his balls tugged which sedated his oncoming orgasm. One of his girlfriends used to do that, so he wouldn’t cum too early. He did as Brother Otto had told him to do. He kept thinking that it was a girl doing these things to him, and he thought about that ex-girlfriend. But as he felt his anal cavity being violated, he wanted to crawl in a hole. Yet something deep within him wanted the invasion. He was missing the finger and how good it had felt moving inside him. He never felt such pleasure before. Certainly pleasure such as that wasn’t gay he reasoned to himself.

Sam was invaded then, as the tip of a cock- real he wasn’t totally sure- entered his ass. Methodically, it filled him tightly as the slippery cock moved into him. He felt so full inside as it kept sliding deeper. He gasped behind the gag, and sweat glistened the taut muscles throughout his body. His own cock felt harder than it had even been before. The expert tongue and mouth highlighted the pleasure as he felt intense thrills arise again within him. His ass was stuffed and now the greased pole started to pull out. Sam couldn’t believe what he was experiencing. It was actually really good, and he knew he wanted to cum soon. The cock started to push back and forth in him, never really completely filling him to the brim, but stuffing him deeply still. The mouth suddenly concentrated on sucking on Sam’s cock tip and chills engulfed him. He was so close to cumming, and the movements in him were pushing something he had not felt before. The g-spot was surely for real it felt incredible. The fucking of his ass moved faster and he started to moan with each thrust. He completely forgot his present captivity, and totally enjoyed himself. The mouth left him, and his mind switched to the ass assault. It was all he knew, and he remained hard throughout the fucking and the orgasm still rose. Closer and closer with each fuck thrust. He was ready to explode and with no assistance to his cock, he came hard as the fucking drove deep pleasure all over his body. He came and came, fluid flying from his 7 inch cock as waves of wonderful, intense feelings overwhelmed him. He had never in his young life felt such pleasure from sex.

The cock withdrew from him and the room grew quiet. Sam felt remorse and guilt, but his ass felt the memories of deep pleasure. He fell asleep and awoke dressed and fully garbed in Gamma Alpha Gamma fraternity apparel, which consisted of a long blue cloak with hood. The Greek letters scrawled on the front pocket and displayed largely on the back. He sat on a high-backed chair in the fraternity conference room. He was a bit dazed and confused until the Brothers welcomed him to the fraternity. He didn’t know what to think or what to say, so just smiled. They drank and ate heartily and the feeling in Sam’s ass reminded him that it was all too surreal. He tried to lock eyes with the other new pledges, but they were downcast. It was obvious that Sam was not the only one who felt weird.

Nothing would ever be said of this again until the following pledge year…

 

[neonlyte]

DG
Can't tell you how pleased I am to see you writing again.

I have taken one read, will read again later and send you some comments.

Take care.

NL

 

[Black Tulip]

Dingus,

I'll read it later on. This is just to you.

Welcome back sweetie.



I love your AV, by the way.

 

[Black Tulip]

Dingus,

I read your story and needed some time after that to gather my thoughts. That should tell you, you did something very well indeed.

I think I should start with saying that I absolutely hate violence of any kind. If there's a film on with two or three guys ganging up on the one I usually stop looking because it makes me so fucking mad, even though I know it's "only a film".
Something like that happened while reading your story. If it hadn't been yours I would not have finished it. Having read it all the way it left me very angry and unhappy. It is defenitely not a Lit story in my opinion, but you conveyed the feelings of helplessness and confusion very well.

Writing this down the next day I still get a knot in my stomach while thinking: "stupid assholes".

 

[Guest]

Nice to see you DG, fantastic to see you writing!

Ok, here is my take on the story. I don't particularly agree with BT, but that's okay. We all have our own view on things. I think it would be fine to post to Lit, once it's been edited. My main problem with the story is the beginning. It's a little jumpy and doesn't flow very well. It has some repititions too (ie: little used in the first three sentences.) Sentence seven doesn't make sense (at least to me). In the second paragraph, you have a tense problem (one sentence uses present).

However, once you got past the first couple of paragraphs, the story evened out and flowed much better. The ending was a little short in my opinion. We didn't really get alot about the affect this had on Sam.

I think if the first couple of paragraphs were shaped up a bit and the ending had more details about the affect on Sam this story would be a very good one.

Of course, someone else might not agree with what I said about the beginning and ending. It's just my opinion.

I'm just really glad that you were able to sit down and write. I know that you have been struggling with it lately.

 

[Black Tulip]

Maybe I should add that you apparently pushed my buttons in a very convincing way.

Um, that's meant as a compliment.
It also means I cannot react in an objective way. Sorry.

 

[mismused]

Re: Story

Please forgive me for not reading your stories. I am having a tough time reading anything right now, but I would like to in the near future. This is my first story in like a month plus. I realized that writing something I really didn't want to write was good medicine for me. This was very difficult for me to write about as I am sure your stories were to you as well. I won't bother telling you the category, because it is plain as you read it where it belongs. Besides the trash bin that is. Anyway here it is...

Pledge of Allegiance

Sam awoke a little nauseous and dizzy. He was a little confused as his eyes tried to adjust to the dark room. He was in an odd position and seemed to be restrained. He felt naked, but was a little too numb to tell for sure. The cobwebs in his head still were making things foggy at the moment. His bare chest was securely pressed against a soft cushion by a belt around his mid-section. The wrists, stretching them, pulled his arms apart and back far apart. This caused him to be bent slightly forward against the padded instrument. There was no give and he found he could not lean back any more than he all ready was. His calves were strapped to similarly cushioned surface and his legs were spread apart from his lower torso. His arms pulled him up and because of the chest and calve restraints he was left dangling at the waist. This left his ass just hanging in the breeze.

As his mind cleared, Sam tried to recall the last thing that he could remember. He was pledging at his fraternity, and he was cleaning the house with the other pledges. Using a toothbrush as part of the detail, he was assigned the bathroom. They were all in dresses, wigs and had makeup on. He looked ridiculous, but it was part of the hazing they had to go through in order to become part of the brotherhood of Gamma Alpha Gamma. He remembers being called by Brother Harris, and joined him in the kitchen with Brothers Darryl and Vic. They were telling him how the weekend was going to be a challenge and if he would be able to get through it.




?Do you think you have what it takes to be a Gamma brother?? Brother Harris asked.

?As you know,? Vic added, ?we told you we would give you a chance to back out with no hard feelings if you wanted to stop the pledging.?

?Yes Brother Harris, yes Brother Vic,? Sam replied earnestly. He wanted to be part of the fraternity life in the worst way. The parties, the sorority sisters, the total fun atmosphere were all he desired when he came to campus. It was this aspect of the college life that he wished to s himself in. The Gammas were an athletic fraternity. Meaning that you had to be a member of the athletic program in some way. Sam had a football scholarship and was the team?s newest wide receiver. He was in great physical shape and was sought after by the Gammas and it was an honor to be asked.

?Have you cleared your calendar for the next 2 days and nights?? Brother Harris inquired.

?Yes Brother Harris,? Sam answered. The pledges were told that their final trial would be this weekend, and that would be followed by the Brother Ritual, which was when the pledges became fraternity members of Gamma Alpha Gamma. He was expecting the unexpected.

?Good, now drink with us and accept your final trial,? Brother Vic said and made a gesture towards Darryl. Brother Darryl produced 4 goblets of what appeared to be wine. He passed them out and they toasted to their bonding this weekend. Sam went back to the bathroom and the toothbrush, but he doesn?t remember anything past that.






Thoughts of being drugged had entered Sam?s head. Did the Brothers do this as part of the pledging? There was no sign of them. Not that he could see very well in the dark. He couldn?t say that waking up naked was his cup of tea. Especially, with the knowledge that some guys stripped him bare and set him in this contraption. That wasn?t too cool Sam thought, but if it accompanied some hot girls, then it was all good. Despite the fact he was in this weird position naked, he felt comfortable. He still felt tired, so he closed his eyes and fell back asleep.

A blindfold was placed across his eyes, and this reawakened Sam. He heard shushing in his ear so he didn?t respond. It was a guy?s voice, so he knew the hazing was on. The blindfold was cloth, probably silk by the feel of it and it did not feel abrasive across his face.

?Sam open your mouth,? A male voice ordered. Sam recognized it as Brother Juice. Juice?s real name was Jules, but he preferred Juice. Sam complied and opened his mouth. He felt something stuff his mouth with a round rubber object like a ball. It was attached to something that encircled his lips and made it all the way around his head where it was attached. Sam thought it had the feel of rubber or elastic. He started to breath through his nose and found that it was bit uncomfortable getting used to.

Suddenly, he felt hands rest on his posterior, and Sam flinched at the touch. He didn?t like guys touching his naked body, especially his ass. The hands withdrew, and he felt hands on his right calf. They were making sure he was secure. The hands did the same for the left calf. They tugged on his taut arm restraints and hands lightly caressed his hands each time. It was very unnerving to Sam.

?He does seem secure,? Brother Juice exclaimed.

?Very good,? Another male voice responded. Sam surmised it was Brother Vic. Then he heard Brother Otto speak. Brother Otto was the President of the Fraternity and Sam had expected to see him at the closing ceremonies. Maybe with the blindfold that would be true. Otto had a very deep voice, which seemed to be in place with his huge frame. He was a Linebacker for the Bluefish, and the captain and star of the team. Otto was looking to the pros at the end of his junior year. He had decided that he was money in the hand, why risk another year. His physique was one to behold and the coaches marveled at his training and stamina in the gym.

?Let us proceed,? Brother Otto began, as Sam hung quietly from his binds. ?Brothers take your positions. Sam listened very carefully. You do not want to remain tense for the next hour. I want you to relax or what we will do to you, will be painful. Grunt your approval for me.?

Sam grunted, but wasn?t sure he meant it.

?Good,? Brother Otto approved. ?You will find that our initiations are unique to say the least. In the end, and I mean the end, you will find that you have had an awakening of sorts. Eventually everyone enjoys this facet of our pledging. I again remind you to stay relaxed or you will not enjoy it so much. Brother Harris give Sam his lesson.?

?Thank you Brother Otto,? Brother Harris acknowledged. ?Sam let me explain a little about the male anatomy. Some of which I am sure you all ready know, but we will go over the facts anyway. The man?s sperm is produced in the testicle sac. From the testicles it moves up the epididymis, where it matures and then into the two small, muscular tubes called the vas deferens, which coil up and around the bladder, to the seminal vesicles. Finally, the sperm through the prostate, it?s last stop before being shot out of the penis because of muscle contractions within the path I have so far described. One of the prostate?s main duties is to create the seminal fluid that mixes with and carries the sperm out of the penis upon ejaculation. The prostate also helps to pump the semen and sperm with sufficient power out of a man?s body on its way to fertilizing a woman?s egg. That means that the prostate functions as both a gland and as a muscle. The prostate is also the nerve and emotional center of a man?s sex life and sexuality. It?s all a bit scientific, but now comes the interesting and fun part. Grunt if you have heard of the male g-spot??

Not sure where this whole lecture was headed, Sam was still following Brother Harris? words. He never heard of a male g-spot though, so he shook his head side to side. He had surely heard of the female g-spot and had found it on occasion. It was the prime area of intense pleasure for the woman. If there was a male version, it must be in the penis somewhere, Sam guessed. It did intrigue Sam and he hung on Brother Harris? next words.

?Well,? Brother Harris continued, ?the male g-spot resides in the prostate, hidden behind the perineum, the area on the base of the penis and the nearby testicles and the anus. It is a gland shaped a lot like a sphere that lives within the pelvic muscles beneath the bladder. The prostate gland as I alluded to before, plays a part in pumping out ejaculate when a man gets excited and has an orgasm. Not just being a muscle and a gland, but it?s central to a man?s pleasure. Call it his pleasure dome, if you will. Now our dear pledgee, where is it??

The question seemed rhetorical, so Sam didn?t answer, but silence ensued. Suddenly, there were footsteps to his left, footsteps to his right. Then he heard Brother Juice whisper in his right ear.

?Let me show you,? Brother Juice muttered softly to Sam. ?You see you can actually stimulate the male g-spot two ways. Externally, there is a spot called the perineum. Ever hear of it??

Sam had no clue so he just shook his head again negatively. Not one part of him wanted to know. He didn?t feel too comfortable with all this male g-spot talk. Thoughts of them sticking a dildo up his ass were starting to make Sam very nervous. He was hoping they were just trying to scare him with the stripping and all the penis references. Yet, despite that rational explanation, Brother Juice?s voice was warm against his ear and that made him uneasy.

?I figured you didn?t,? Brother Juice continued, a little more vocal as had moved around to his left ear. Then he whispered softly again, ?Most guys don?t know it, so don?t feel bad. I am sure the education, will not be forgotten, and the next time someone wants to know, you can tell them, just as I am telling you now. The perineum is the hairless area between the testicles and the anus. Right here.?

Suddenly, Sam felt fingers lift his testicles and tap him gently in the newly named area of his anatomy. The only area he could move, his hips and ass, drew back quickly at the unwelcome molestation of his groin area. The hands followed him and remained in firm contact with his body. Sam was grunting his disapproval, but the muffled voice was ignored and the fingers kept tapping his perineum.

?You see,? Brother Harris spoke up behind him, ?this isn?t always the best way to stimulate the g-spot, because it is indirect. Yet tapping the area instead of caressing it is the best way for the man to feel the g-spot?s pleasure. Just like a woman though, the man must be aroused first to feel the g-spot?s potential.?

Sam gasped as he felt another hand grab at his limp penis, all the while the tapping continued. He felt nauseous at the violation, and groaned loudly behind the gag. He couldn?t believe these assholes were doing this to him. He wanted more than anything to wake up from a dream, but the reality came crashing down on him as a mouth engulfed the tip of his cock. His body flayed around helplessly against the bonds that held him mostly in place.

?We told you to relax,? Brother Harris whispered very close to his ear. Harris? warm breath against Sam?s ear added to the nausea that Sam felt erupting inside of him. ?You might want to relax now and enjoy it.?

A wet, greased finger slipped slowly into Sam?s ass crack. Sam clenched, trying to keep the finger from slipping in, but the position he was in and the mouth on his penis had his ass vulnerable for penetration. The slippery finger just teased his opening, circling around as if greasing him up. Despite him, Sam felt the mouth and tongue of his assailant stir his penis by stimulating the tip. It was a nightmare for him and now he was a showing sign that he was enjoying it. It was the last thing he wanted to happen. It seemed there was definitely more than one guy doing this to him, so they were all in it together. How could they all be gay, he thought. He was grunting wildly, trying to get them to stop, but his words were muffled and his pleas ignored.

The finger under his balls had never stopped tapping, and Sam started to feel something from it. Maybe it was the finger in his ass, or the mouth on his cock, but whatever it was his penis was starting to grow. As it did, a hand wrapped itself around the shaft and the mouth slid further down. Teeth scrapped his cock lightly, sending unwanted chills through his body. The finger in his butt kept greasing his anal opening, and the feelings were uncomfortable, but pleasant in a weird way. He had never had any ass play before by any of his girlfriends and he had been glad they didn?t. He thought it was gay for a guy to do that stuff. Now some gay dudes were doing it against his will.

?Pledge Sam,? Brother Vic beckoned from the right side of him, ?Brother Juice alerted you that you can stimulate the g-spot in two different ways. By now you actually are starting to feel a little of the external tapping we explained to you. The second way is internally. By snaking a finger inside your ass about three inches in, you will feel a lot more of the g-spot pleasure we told you about. Like this. Now remember do not clench.?

The greased finger slowly inserted itself gently into his ass. He did clench, but he really couldn?t keep it that way because the mouth on his cock was taking some of his attention away from the finger. A tongue licked along his shaft, and he grew even bigger and harder. He didn?t want to show any gay tendency, but with his eyes blindfolded he felt his mind was playing tricks on his body. He knew he wasn?t gay, and despite the knowledge of a bunch of guys doing this to him, he was reacting differently than he wanted to. He tried to think that a guy was doing it, so he wouldn?t be aroused, but his penis couldn?t resist the pleasure that was rising in him. He was on the verge of tears, but he wouldn?t let these guys see that. He tried his best to think of other things. He thought about hideous things. Things that made him withdraw from the scene.

Noticing a change in Sam?s hardness, the mouth suddenly became a little more aggressive in the sucking of his penis. Sam felt the hand and mouth work harder to arouse him. Just as he was starting to soften, he grew hard again. One of the girl?s he had gone out with did this thing with her tongue that sent shivers down his spine. Now this guy was doing the same thing to him, and he was reacting the same way. The finger in his asshole was deeper now and it was somehow adding to the pleasure of the moment. Sam wondered if it was truly his g-spot as his cock became fully erect. The new stimulation and aggressive blowjob had Sam sweating and he started to slacken his tension in his muscles. His resistance weakened with his arousal. The pleasure mounted and as the finger started to move in and out of his greased ass, he found he was missing the feeling there.

?By now,? Brother Otto exclaimed from behind him now, ?you are starting to find the new pleasure is quite irresistible. Now, you don?t have to be gay to enjoy this as you are finding out. If you are having trouble with this aspect just think of some hot girl playing with you. Thinking about a hot girl sucking your cock feverishly. Thinking of a hot girl moving a finger in and out of your butt. Thinking of a hot girl pleasuring you in such wicked ways. Thinking of a hot girl with a strap-on getting ready to fuck you with a greasy cock.? Brother Otto giggled evilly as the finger suddenly withdrew from Sam?s ass.

Hands gripped his sides and Sam panicked anew. He tried to move away, but this just drove his cock into the mouth of his cocksucker. He wasn?t in a position to struggle, and the hands were stilling him on his hips. As if he knew what was going to happen he tried not to clench or he would be ripped apart inside. His cock was so hard from the mouth attack that he felt close to cumming, but he felt his balls tugged which sedated his oncoming orgasm. One of his girlfriends used to do that, so he wouldn?t cum too early. He did as Brother Otto had told him to do. He kept thinking that it was a girl doing these things to him, and he thought about that ex-girlfriend. But as he felt his anal cavity being violated, he wanted to crawl in a hole. Yet something deep within him wanted the invasion. He was missing the finger and how good it had felt moving inside him. He never felt such pleasure before. Certainly pleasure such as that wasn?t gay he reasoned to himself.

Sam was invaded then, as the tip of a cock- real he wasn?t totally sure- entered his ass. Methodically, it filled him tightly as the slippery cock moved into him. He felt so full inside as it kept sliding deeper. He gasped behind the gag, and sweat glistened the taut muscles throughout his body. His own cock felt harder than it had even been before. The expert tongue and mouth highlighted the pleasure as he felt intense thrills arise again within him. His ass was stuffed and now the greased pole started to pull out. Sam couldn?t believe what he was experiencing. It was actually really good, and he knew he wanted to cum soon. The cock started to push back and forth in him, never really completely filling him to the brim, but stuffing him deeply still. The mouth suddenly concentrated on sucking on Sam?s cock tip and chills engulfed him. He was so close to cumming, and the movements in him were pushing something he had not felt before. The g-spot was surely for real it felt incredible. The fucking of his ass moved faster and he started to moan with each thrust. He completely forgot his present captivity, and totally enjoyed himself. The mouth left him, and his mind switched to the ass assault. It was all he knew, and he remained hard throughout the fucking and the orgasm still rose. Closer and closer with each fuck thrust. He was ready to explode and with no assistance to his cock, he came hard as the fucking drove deep pleasure all over his body. He came and came, fluid flying from his 7 inch cock as waves of wonderful, intense feelings overwhelmed him. He had never in his young life felt such pleasure from sex.

The cock withdrew from him and the room grew quiet. Sam felt remorse and guilt, but his ass felt the memories of deep pleasure. He fell asleep and awoke dressed and fully garbed in Gamma Alpha Gamma fraternity apparel, which consisted of a long blue cloak with hood. The Greek letters scrawled on the front pocket and displayed largely on the back. He sat on a high-backed chair in the fraternity conference room. He was a bit dazed and confused until the Brothers welcomed him to the fraternity. He didn?t know what to think or what to say, so just smiled. They drank and ate heartily and the feeling in Sam?s ass reminded him that it was all too surreal. He tried to lock eyes with the other new pledges, but they were downcast. It was obvious that Sam was not the only one who felt weird.

Nothing would ever be said of this again until the following pledge year?

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D G,

Read the story. It's not my thing at all, but the writing is very, very good. What all it lacked, if anything, I'll let others say, as well as for any other errors that all stories have.

Congratulations on your excellent writing. Very complete, it seems, for such a short story.

m

 

[Guest]

Ok, it's about time for a new challenge.

Summer, are you going to get one posted for the "difficult category" challenge?

Who's going to give the next challenge?

 

[Black Tulip]

I think Summer was next, unless we have some new member who wants to give out a challenge?

 

[neonlyte]

Hey, I'd love to. Up to my neck in work at the moment, though you wouldn't believe it from the amount of posting. Finishing a web site, Lit. gives me time to re-focus.

Let me get back later today, after some thought.
NL

 

[Dingus Guy]

And what nice buttons you have BT

Maybe I should add that you apparently pushed my buttons in a very convincing way.

Um, that's meant as a compliment.
It also means I cannot react in an objective way. Sorry.

CM, it wasn't edited and after a week of hedging over writing it, I pushed it out and finished it without any editing. If I even gave it the ol' once over I think I might not have posted it. In any event I know most of my stories need fixing, so I won't disagree with you. I see that I used 'little' a little too much

BT, I didn't feel comfortable writing about the male end of it at all. I don't know what you know about Fraternity pledging. You might know a lot or very little. Blindfolding and tricking the pledge to believing one thing when they are actually doing another. Making think they are reaching into a toliet and eating shit, when they are actually taking a chocolate baby ruth bar out of a pale of water placed near a toliet. Pasta substituted for worms, etc, etc. It is the initiation to become a member of the college fraternity. Stupid but a tradition on the fateful they call Hell Day. Now here is something I never revealed for I thought it would leave the 'Gay Male" category I was shooting for. What if the guys made Sam believe it was them when actually a girl was doing these things to him. Yes, it would still be rape and be against his will, but I am sure from the guy's perspective more tolerable coming form a beautiful woman. I just didn't place that at the end of the story, I wanted the reader to come to their own conclusions.

The challenge was to write a story in a category you would never want to write in and I did, although I would have changed the ending.
Thanks for the reviews!

By the Way CM, love the new AV.

 

[cloudy]

I'm really sorry, folks! I had a story just about finished for the last challenge, and then my computer caught a very nasty virus and has spent the last 5 or 6 days either incapacitated or in the shop - just got it back today (yahoo!)

Will join in the next one, providing nothing else attacks......

 

[Guest]

I'm really sorry, folks! I had a story just about finished for the last challenge, and then my computer caught a very nasty virus and has spent the last 5 or 6 days either incapacitated or in the shop - just got it back today (yahoo!)

Will join in the next one, providing nothing else attacks......

Sorry your computer got attacked Cloudy. There are alot of computers that have gotten hit recently.