The Challenge Club

[CrimsonMaiden]

I missed the deadline on my own challenge, lol. Oh well, it couldn't be helped. Realtor called yesterday saying someone wanted to see the house this morning, so I was house cleaning all day yesterday. I haven't read y'alls stories yet, but I will after I get mine finished.

BT, I did see enough in scrolling down to see that elements of our stories are similiar.

 

[Black Tulip]

Dingus,

Thank you for the encouragement.
I read your story and I liked the idea, but I think you should do something about the tension. In my opinion (for what it's worth LOL) the sex was too soon, not enough build up.
But, of course I want to know if they end up in a big pile.

Isn't that Crim a bitch? Banning group sex!


Crim,

No sweat.

As for the similarities, wouldn't be the first time, would it?

 

[CrimsonMaiden]

Isn't that Crim a bitch? Banning group sex!


Crim,

No sweat.

As for the similarities, wouldn't be the first time, would it?

Nope, wouldn't be the first time, lol.

 

[Dingus Guy]

Dingus,

Thank you for the encouragement.
I read your story and I liked the idea, but I think you should do something about the tension. In my opinion (for what it's worth LOL) the sex was too soon, not enough build up.
But, of course I want to know if they end up in a big pile.

Isn't that Crim a bitch? Banning group sex!


Crim,

No sweat.

As for the similarities, wouldn't be the first time, would it?

I actually was just trying to write and fulfill the challenge and slightly entertain at the same time. I do not expect to do anything with this mini tale. I know it had many flaws, but I have had so much trouble with writing anything it was an achievement to just get it done. I appreciate the comments though. As for CM, I am sure we can think of some just punishment for that butt she keeps showing us.

 

[CrimsonMaiden]

As for CM, I am sure we can think of some just punishment for that butt she keeps showing us.

Well, I had a different picture up for awhile, but I had a request to put this one back up. It seems to be the favorite of mine for a lot of people.

 

[Dingus Guy]

Hey BT

I feel like the kid who goes out for the long pass and the other kids laugh as the Quarterback holds onto the ball. What about you? Perhaps you feel like you were the taste tester for the Queen who wasn't hungry enough to eat anyway.

 

[CrimsonMaiden]

I feel like the kid who goes out for the long pass and the other kids laugh as the Quarterback holds onto the ball. What about you? Perhaps you feel like you were the taste tester for the Queen who wasn't hungry enough to eat anyway.

Hey, give me a break. My realtor's calling every other day with people who want to come look at the house (we've had a sudden surge of lookers). I've barely had time to breathe, much less write. I've got it started, I've just got to get time to finish it. (won't be tomorrow though... got someone else coming to look at the house)

 

[Dingus Guy]

Hey, give me a break. My realtor's calling every other day with people who want to come look at the house (we've had a sudden surge of lookers). I've barely had time to breathe, much less write. I've got it started, I've just got to get time to finish it. (won't be tomorrow though... got someone else coming to look at the house)

looks around innocently whatever got your juicy buns in an uproar? Go sell your precious land and forget about us little people/challengeslaves. We will be fine. I will just have to pick up all the pieces of my shattered life after i let my kidney fail and my dog starve just to finish some lil ol' challenge the other day. Its all good because I didn't have time to pay my electric bill so the 90 degree weather has made me drop some weight that wasn't lost to the kidney failure. Good luck in selling your castle.

 

[Black Tulip]

Hey, give me a break. My realtor's calling every other day with people who want to come look at the house (we've had a sudden surge of lookers). I've barely had time to breathe, much less write. I've got it started, I've just got to get time to finish it. (won't be tomorrow though... got someone else coming to look at the house)

Just sell the damn place, so you can come back and play with us.

 

[CrimsonMaiden]

Just sell the damn place, so you can come back and play with us.

I wish we could. I am so tired of showing after showing and not having one damned looker want to come back for a second viewing (or even make an offer). Grrrr...

If I don't fall out from exhaustion, I'm going to work on my story later tonight.

 

[Black Tulip]

Use the same trick I did, sold my house in the blink of an eye.

Apple juice with a dash of cinnamon, on the back burner of the stove ...

fills the house with a real homely smell.

Or you could bake an apple pie, but that's a lot more work. LOL

Good luck.

 

[CrimsonMaiden]

Use the same trick I did, sold my house in the blink of an eye.

Apple juice with a dash of cinnamon, on the back burner of the stove ...

fills the house with a real homely smell.

Or you could bake an apple pie, but that's a lot more work. LOL

Good luck.

We have apple cinnamon plug ins (fragrance things that plug into wall and the heat makes the smell float throughout the area). Not helping so far, lol.

 

[Dingus Guy]

looks around and taps fingers on desk

Shouldn't the ebay auction be closed by now?

 

[CrimsonMaiden]

Okay, so it's not totally finished (no second sex scene), so it's not technically fulfilled ALL the parts of the challenge, but I figured I'd better go ahead and post what I've got before DG has a conniption fit.

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A Day at the Zoo

Heather stood beside the fence and stared at the lumbering hippopotamus. She thought it funny how a stuffed one could be so adorable but the real thing was an ugly gray blob. Okay, so she had to admit the little ones were kind of cute.

She shook her head as a slim blonde with a cell phone glued to her ear walked past her. “You want to put that where?” screeched the woman as she sauntered by.

Heather could only imagine what the woman meant, though her mind immediately went straight to the gutter, and she brought her hand up to stifle the giggle that burst from her mouth. The laughter only got louder as she realized she was there for the exact reason that floated through her head when she heard the phrase uttered by the blonde.

“What’s so funny?” whispered a deep voice in her ear.

“It’s one of those ‘you had to be there’ kind of things,” she said as she turned to face the handsome man all decked out in khaki. She made a purring noise and reached out to softly stroke his tanned face. “Seeing you in that uniform never fails to turn me on.”

“Everything turns you on,” he joked.

“True… especially a lurid rendezvous with my boyfriend.”

“Just pray we don’t get caught. I really love this job.”

“Don’t worry, Drake. We picked the off season and the slowest day and time of the week for a reason.”

“Yeah, but we’ve got to be quiet.”

“No one will be able to hear us over the animals.”

The couple moved off the path, and Heather stepped sideways to get around a bush whose leaves were turning amber in the fall weather. The trees and plants in the small picnic area made a perfect blind spot, and she pushed Drake against the rough bark of an old oak tree.

“I have been thinking about this moment all day,” she said as she dropped to her knees in front of him and unfastened his khaki pants. His cock lay semi-hard in her hand as she freed it from the confines of his black briefs.

Licking her lips, she bent forward and ran her tongue over the soft skin. Drake’s fingers sunk into her thick, strawberry blonde locks as she playfully flicked her tongue over the knobby head of his cock. He relaxed against the tree while the playfulness of Heather’s tongue evolved into a passionate fever.

She felt the skin tighten beneath her touch as his cock responded to her ministrations. Grazing her lips up the shaft, she opened them and took him inside her, eliciting a lust filled moan from Drake. Her head bobbed as she slid up and down his cock, her tongue swiping over the sensitive crown as she moved.

Drake’s hips flexed in tandem with her sucking, tilting forward as she slid onto him and pulling back as she did. Her arms wrapped around his hips, and her hands grasped his ass, using it as leverage to pull him further into her. With practice, she had learned to relax her throat to permit full penetration, and she did so now, allowing his cock to thrust past the humid warmth of mouth and pass into the tighter passage of her throat.

A low, hungry growl issued from his throat as her lips brushed against the base of his cock, and the snugness of her throat closed around the head. Reaching between his legs, she cupped his balls in one hand and gently rubbed them as she repeatedly took him all the way into her.

A crackling squawk sounded “Drake?”, and Heather groaned in frustration as she pulled her mouth off his cock, which glistened wetly in the sunlight.

Drake pulled the walkie-talkie from his belt and responded. “Yeah?”

“We’ve got an emergency situation in the elephant pen. You need to get over here.”

“Roger.”

He shoved the walkie-talkie back into its holder and sighed. “I gotta go, babe.”

“Well you can’t go in that condition,” Heather exclaimed, pointing to his still rigid cock.

“Shit.”

Without saying another word, Heather slid one finger into her mouth, coating it with saliva before withdrawing it and bending down to once again take Drake between her lips. She knew one sure fire way to make him blow his load. Reaching between his legs, she slid the saliva slickened finger between his cheeks and pressed it against his asshole.

While taking him all the way into her mouth and letting the tightness of her throat work on the sensitive head of his cock, she gently pushed her finger inside him and sought out the pronounced bump of his prostate. She knew she found it when Drake moaned and his cock jerked inside her mouth. With renewed vigor, she bobbed up and down on his cock, always bottoming out and taking him into her throat on the down-stroke while her finger worked its magic on his prostate. Within a couple of minutes, Heather felt his cock stiffen in her mouth as his fingers gripped her hair.

“Oh fuck,” he groaned as he thrust into her mouth and held her still as come pumped from the tip of his cock.

As his orgasm erupted, Heather sucked eagerly, swallowing the milky fluid he shot down her throat. Careful not to make his release last too long, she removed her finger from his ass as he climaxed. She smiled up at him once he’d released his hold on her head.

“All better?” she quipped.

“God I love it when you do that.” He tucked himself back into his pants and fastened them up. “I’m sorry about not being able to do what we’d planned, but I’ve got to get going.”

“Don’t worry, I’ll just come back tomorrow,” she said, and she winked at him as she sauntered away.


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I'll get y'alls stories read ASAP and post comments on them.

 

[Dingus Guy]

Okay, so it's not totally finished (no second sex scene), so it's not technically fulfilled ALL the parts of the challenge, but I figured I'd better go ahead and post what I've got before DG has a conniption fit.

Too late, but the blood stopped dripping from my nasal passages. Nice tale, although when one makes a challenge (clears throat), you would expect it to be done within said person's perimeters. 1 sex scene? I am sure your muse will punish you for this in the near future.

BTW...how is that termite-ridden house sale coming along?

 

[CrimsonMaiden]

BT, I really enjoyed your story, and it doesn't have as much in common with mine as I thought at first glance. The only issue I had with it is that the beginning part (where they are loading the Jeeps) seems a bit balky. The flow is impeded. And, the sudden jump at the beginning where the co-worker asks her about National Geographic and then she's in line at the airport was jarring as well. Otherwise, it was interesting and makes me wonder what else is going to happen on the safari.

 

[CrimsonMaiden]

Too late, but the blood stopped dripping from my nasal passages. Nice tale, although when one makes a challenge (clears throat), you would expect it to be done within said person's perimeters. 1 sex scene? I am sure your muse will punish you for this in the near future.

BTW...how is that termite-ridden house sale coming along?

Yeah well, blame it on the pounding headache. I got to the end of the scene and thought "to hell with it." The second part will get written. Just not until the headache goes away.

Oh and the house sale is going nowhere at the moment.

 

[CrimsonMaiden]

LOL, it was DG's story that ended up being similar to mine. I swear I didn't read yours until just now. We even used the same name!!

Very good story, Dg. Nice details. You should definitely think about submitting that one if you haven't already.

 

[Black Tulip]

Hi Crim,

Thanks for the comments. I'll get to work on the story and see what else I can come up with. LOL

Yours was nice, but to me it was a bit rushed.
And of course, you need to finish it.
Just wondering, what if he couldn't get off because of the disruption?

 

[CrimsonMaiden]

Hi Crim,

Thanks for the comments. I'll get to work on the story and see what else I can come up with. LOL

Yours was nice, but to me it was a bit rushed.
And of course, you need to finish it.
Just wondering, what if he couldn't get off because of the disruption?

Have no clue since the interruption was the catalyst to bring in the finger, LOL.

Okay, are one of you going to issue a new challenge? I promise I'll do better, lol.

 

[Dingus Guy]

Have no clue since the interruption was the catalyst to bring in the finger, LOL.

Okay, are one of you going to issue a new challenge? I promise I'll do better, lol.

Thanks for your kind words about my story, it is quite similar to my story, so you will be hearing from my lawyers. Hey I am jewish, we are born to sue. As for the challenge, let us delve into my Halloween challenge for Oct 1, and then we can go back to this afterwards. I am having a tough time coming up with a working concept for the "Trick or Tryst" story. It is all I can handle for the moment. Hurt my back today, not sure what is wrong, but I am thinking it might be kidney stones, since I had it once before. Gulp, tough times are ahead for this weekend.

 

[Black Tulip]

I sure hope, you just strained a muscle, Dingus.



As for a challenge, I will think on it.
Right now I have to pound out a chapter for the new chain from Red.
Check it out, it's great.

Laresa's World.