The Challenge Club

[Dingus Guy]

Re: Re: Reo's story

I made the challenge then? What do I get, any chocolate? *giggle

You win another challenge tomorrow by me.
You also get to post the next challenge after that one is over.

 

[Wills]

“You see, that’s the trouble, everyone thinks that the good they do through life some how is set off against the bad. In a crude way I suppose there is some kind of balancing, but you would have had to have been astonishingly good to overcome your problems.”

“Where am I?”

“Don’t you know? I suppose you would call it a waiting room.”

“Where are you? I can’t see you.”

“I’m inside your head. I don’t exist, except in your thoughts, but I do control everything. Think of me as spirit.”

“What do you do? Where am I?”

“I control everything, for example, I can bring you happiness and joy, would you like that?”

“Yes, of course. But where am I?”

“There is time enough for that. Do you remember this?”

“Yes, that is me and my girlfriend at University. Melinda, yes that was her name, pretty girl. I wonder what happened to her, that must be nearly forty years ago.”

“Watch, and I’ll show you.”






“No… Don’t do that, that’s disgusting. No… Nooooooooo… Stop it, stop it, don’t let it… Oh my God. Melinda...”






“What was… that thing?”

“That is your nemesis. You did that to her. It was too big for her, she split.”

“That didn’t happen, I mean it’s not real, it’s just you driving my thoughts.”

“If you want to believe that. Look behind you, what is left of her is there. She’s still warm, touch her.”

“What?”

“Turn around, quickly now before it’s too late, she wants to see you for a last time.”

“Jesus. What have you done. What have done to her?”

“Me? Nothing, you did that. You and your nemesis. Take her hand, she’s reaching for you.”








“Bet you never thought you would do that, touch a real human heart. Did you feel its pulse, pity, wasted really, pumping into thin air.”








“Stop crying. She’s gone. Don’t know how she could have looked at you so forgivingly after what you did to her.”

“I didn’t do that. I couldn’t. You did it. This isn’t real. It’s just a dream.”

“You want to dream? I can bring you lots more dreams. Let’s see, who have we got tucked away in here. Remember him?”

“What are you going to do?”

I’m going to do nothing, you will be doing this,





and this…





and this.”





“Now that is stupid, being sick in here. It was only a carrot stick. No one gets sick on carrots. Well, maybe poking it into his eye wasn’t the best thing to do, but you never did like your boss, many is the time you wanted him punished. Now you have acted out your revenge.”

“I didn’t. You made me! Who are you? Why are you doing this to me.”

I’m doing nothing. This is all your own work. Though I must say I didn’t expect you to eat his eyes, that’s probably what made you sick. So that is two, how many more do you suppose? I can see thousands of people that you have despised, hated, wished dead. Let us hope you will have a long time before he comes for you. So many to dispose of.”

“I didn’t mean to eat his eyes, it just happened, I didn’t want to do it.”

“No? How many times did you say ‘Damn his eyes’ every time he criticised your work? I think you did quite well. Don’t worry. You will soon warm to the task, after all you have nothing else to do.

“Where am I? Tell me. Am I dead?”

“No, not yet. You know that old story about your life flashing through your mind; that is where you are. You will be dead soon enough, he will come for you.”

“What happened?”

“You will remember it all later, first lets deal with some more of your thoughts, we have loads to get through.”





“Your getting quite good at this, some of your torturing is first class, though a little messy. Still, you need to pick up speed if you are to deal with them all before he arrives.”

“What happens if he arrives before I have dealt with everyone?”

“Frankly, you don’t want to know, let’s just say that he will deal with them where they are. Inside you. It’s bad enough when he comes for you, but when he has to clear up your mess first, well, it gets nasty. Some simply burst apart from the shear terror of what he is doing. Of course they are still ‘alive’ can still feel, smell and see how he does his work. It gets pretty unpleasant, the screaming and wailing; the smell of people defecating from fear, I can’t clear the room quickly enough of body parts. If the worst comes to the worst I’ll hoist you up on the ‘d’ rings, at least that way you won’t suffocate or drown in the mess. Now back to work, it’s for the best, in the long run.”







“How far have I got?”

“You’re not even half way, your enjoying it too much. Stop thinking, just deal with them. You don’t have time to make pretty patterns as you cut them or admire the girls, you wished this on them as they turned you down or laughed at your tiny prick, sticking that monstrosity in them now won’t change anything, its too late. Just get on with it. Stop enjoying yourself. It will be the worst for you, take my advice. You can’t imagine how angry he will be if you haven’t finished.”

“Shut up, she deserved it. She told everyone about my small prick, laughed with the others at work, well now she has got something to keep her quiet, try talking with this inside you!”

“You’re making a big mistake. Hush. I can hear him. Quickly, get rid of some more before it’s too late. Oh, I hate this part, when you begin to realise the enormity of your sin and as ever it’s too late to go back, he’s here now, can’t you smell him, smell the pus that exudes from his body from all the evil he consumes. Feel his heat, a sticky sweet putrefaction. It’s too late, he’s here…






“No… Noooooooooooooo...”

© weh 21-01-2004.

Well, here's my attempt. Made my hair stand up when I read it through. Never written horror before!

Will's

 

[reohoko]

very interesting, needs more sex

I think it is scary too, but makes me want to know more, like watching that Alfred Hitchcock movies (is that what they were?), never knowing quite what they mean but fully aware of the many possibities it could entail.

I like it.

 

[reohoko]

Re: Re: Re: Reo's story

You win another challenge tomorrow by me.
You also get to post the next challenge after that one is over.

I am posting a challenge? WOW!!! You trust me with such a big responsibility? I AM SOO HAPPY!!!! *smothers you in hugs (now that is far more scary than any story could be )

hehehehe don't mind me... I can hear my pillow calling my name..... "Reo, come to bed Reo, time to dream of happy wood elves with huge woodies come to let you ride them home."

Night night cuties!!!

 

[Dingus Guy]

Wills

Not creepy enuff for me lol. Hey the Devil made you that story didn't he? Or is it she?
It was nice to see you finish. I only hope you have time for my big challenge starting tomorrow. I need all the writers for this one. Well, just a teaser for what is to come.

Tomorrow 4:00-4:30pm est, be prepared for the ultimate writer's challenge.

 

[Dingus Guy]

Re: Re: Re: Re: Reo's story

I am posting a challenge? WOW!!! You trust me with such a big responsibility? I AM SOO HAPPY!!!! *smothers you in hugs (now that is far more scary than any story could be )

hehehehe don't mind me... I can hear my pillow calling my name..... "Reo, come to bed Reo, time to dream of happy wood elves with huge woodies come to let you ride them home."

Night night cuties!!!

My pleasure Reo, besides we all have posted challenges, so its only right that you post one too. Giving you plenty of time to think about it. Sweet Dreams.

 

[SummerMorning]

Hmm...nope. Just didn't find the time for horror. Alas.

Now let's see your ding Dingus!

 

[Dingus Guy]

I don't whip out my ding for just anybody

Hmm...nope. Just didn't find the time for horror. Alas.

Now let's see your ding Dingus!

2 Hours to new challenge

 

[reohoko]

*pout, I will probably be gone in about an hour until late this evening, I will see it later or in the morning!!! Hope you are all having a wonderful day!!!

 

[Guest]

Re: I don't whip out my ding for just anybody

2 Hours to new challenge

You like to tease, don't you?

CM

 

[Dingus Guy]

Re: Re: I don't whip out my ding for just anybody

You like to tease, don't you?

CM

...and you are curious aren't you?

 

[Dingus Guy]

New Challenge

Ok Folks, here it is:

Challenge:

The story must be called: “Day 30 of the Purple Ass Rash”
Must contain 2,000 words or more
MUST be submitted on Sunday February 1st, not before or after
Must be submitted in the Non-human category and have only one human in the story
Must be erotic
Must contain the words:
1- Hairless
2- Hairy
3- Toothless
4- Teeth
5- Create a new word never used before with the letters Q, J, and X (word must be repeated at least 5 times throughout the story)

Now as you can see by this challenge, the more people submitting their story on the same day, with the same Category, and the same title should make for a good laugh. Laurel might think us weird, but that is the fun of it so I hope anyone reading this challenge will join us. Please do not submit the story here, only with Literotica. On Feb 1st Reohoko will announce the next challenge and we just sit back and wait for the stories to be posted. Good Luck!

 

[Black Tulip]

Jeez Dingus,

Giving in to your subversive streak?

Can't say I have immediate inspiration, but we'll see.

Good luck to all.

 

[Guest]

Can't say I have immediate inspiration, but we'll see.

I have an idea, now I just have to find the time to write it while trying to finish these other 3 stories and edit my NaNo novel, lol.


CM

 

[Dingus Guy]

BT BT BT

Jeez Dingus,

Giving in to your subversive streak?

Can't say I have immediate inspiration, but we'll see.

Good luck to all.

If it was easy then it wouldn't be a challenge, would it?
Besides I have not thought one bit on what to write since I came up with the idea. I didn't want to have an advantage, so I just didn't think about it.

 

[reohoko]

Re: New Challenge

Ok Folks, here it is:

Challenge:

The story must be called: “Day 30 of the Purple Ass Rash”
Must contain 2,000 words or more
MUST be submitted on Sunday February 1st, not before or after
Must be submitted in the Non-human category and have only one human in the story
Must be erotic
Must contain the words:
1- Hairless
2- Hairy
3- Toothless
4- Teeth
5- Create a new word never used before with the letters Q, J, and X (word must be repeated at least 5 times throughout the story)

Now as you can see by this challenge, the more people submitting their story on the same day, with the same Category, and the same title should make for a good laugh. Laurel might think us weird, but that is the fun of it so I hope anyone reading this challenge will join us. Please do not submit the story here, only with Literotica. On Feb 1st Reohoko will announce the next challenge and we just sit back and wait for the stories to be posted. Good Luck!

Ok, *salutes* I understand our mission sir.

I think

Will do it, not sure I understand even a third of it, but hehe I shall do my bestest!

 

[SummerMorning]

Der ding is going to eat your joxuiqks!

 

[Dingus Guy]

Any Questions?

If there is something you don't understand, please ask. Sometimes I come up with something from the USA perspective and do not realize it is not understood elsewhere. Please forgive me if this is the case. Don't hesitate to ask.

 

[reohoko]

No, questions... well one, completly unrelated... so I will skip it.

Fair warning, I am in a "brat" mood lately... my husband calls that the mood I get in when I have a habit of saying silly/stupid things that ring of a hard combination of humor and sarcasm. No one usually appreciates this mood much .

Where is the chocolate hiding?

 

[Dingus Guy]

Tosses a Hershey Kiss...

No you have me curious. What was the question that wasn't related?

 

[reohoko]

Re: Tosses a Hershey Kiss...

No you have me curious. What was the question that wasn't related?

But it wasn't related... I was just going to ask something odd

ok, what the heck.....

Which do you think would be worse...

Carrying around the proverbial (yeah I can't spell hehehe) Scarlet Letter

or

Fitting nice and snuggly into the roll of Ceasar (as stated in Brutus's speech in Shakespeare - the good is oft interred with their bones)
?

And I ask this because earlier I was doing some research and determined that sex is like those things, especially written, but everyone does it. I would pick to wear the Scarlet Letter. Was just wondering if anyone else felt that way.

See, completely unrelated. (actually, it also came to mind because I was trying to determine what would cause a purple ass rash, and if it could be a scarlet letter... but see admitting to those thought patterns canNOT be wise. LOL)

 

[Dingus Guy]

Ummmmm....

No clue. I always hated world history in school. I think I will pass.

 

[reohoko]

LOL see now that is why I said completely unrelated and I should skip it. *sigh

here is one I bet you know the answer to.....

Stolen directly from another thread:

If quizzes are quizzical then what are tests?

 

[Dingus Guy]

LOL see now that is why I said completely unrelated and I should skip it. *sigh

here is one I bet you know the answer to.....

Stolen directly from another thread:

If quizzes are quizzical then what are tests?

Groan.

 

[reohoko]

Groan.

LOL I give up, I am going to go play EQ and annoy everyone there, they at least pretend to laugh at me!!!

LOL see you all tomorrow.