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Would that be a "dobre dan"?

That is about the only thing I remember from holidays long past.
:D

Serbo-Croatian?
 
You're Dutch right? I had a friend from the north of Holland over once and that was the way he always pronounced it. Actually it's Slovene. Serb or Croatian (Ever since the last war both are dead-set against anything like Serbo-croat ever existing) would be more like "dobar dan". It means good day ;) .

BTW - the spelling is "dober dan", the "e" prounced like "i" in sir (english), essentially an "uh" sound. The "r" is rolled and pronounced.

Where did you go on holidays? Maybe I've been there :cool: .
 
Doublepost Tombstone

Here lies Doublepost,
A sober drunk if ever there was one.
 
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Sorry, phonetic spelling. :D

Been to Istria, Porec and Pula. And another year I visited Dubrovnik and Mostar.

If I close my eyes and think of radjnici .... (Or is that phonetic as well?) and slivovic. :heart:

Oh dear, that is all more than 25 years ago. Other topic please!

:eek:
 
Most of it is still there - just Pula now usually has commercial techno/house music - which isn't really to my liking...most of my colleagues and I are more into reconstructing the sixties and seventies :D

Free :heart:
 
Revenge

Bump

My horror story is finished. All it needs is a finishing touch in the morning.

:p
 
Re: Revenge

Black Tulip said:
Bump

My horror story is finished. All it needs is a finishing touch in the morning.

:p

I am sitting pretty at 1400 + words and still no sex scene yet. :eek:
 
Pirate Jokes

How much did the pirate pay for his peg leg and hook?
An arm and a leg!

What’s a pirate always looking for, even though it’s right behind him?
His booty!

A pirate walks into a bar with this enormous steering wheel stuck down his pants. The bartender can’t help but ask, “What’s with the steering wheel?” “ARRRRGGH,” the pirate answers, “it’s drivin’ me nuts.”
 
I had gargoyles running around my brain for ages, so I finally decided to let one of them out.

1367 words, enjoy.

Bride of stone

Iantha tossed from side to side. Again she was dreaming, and again it was not very soothing. Actually it was getting more and more frightening. With a start she sat bolt upright, her heart racing in her throat, her back cold with sweat. Before anything else she switched on the little light on the bedside table, and then she drew up her knees and hugged them tight, wishing she was still a child that could be comforted by a teddy bear.

Her long auburn hair clung to her face in sweaty tendrils and her blue-grey eyes looked around her bedroom, trying to penetrate the shadows in the corners. It was silly of course, she knew that. But her dream had been so vivid that she had trouble coming back to reality. With a sigh she swung back the duvet and padded to the kitchen. A glass of water would help to settle her nerves and after that a visit to the bathroom.

Stepping into the bathroom she glanced into the full-length mirror and noticed the red marks on her sides. Iantha frowned and traced the marks with her fingers. They looked like the scratches from a cat, a very big cat. Almost afraid to look she inspected the rest of her body. Now that she paid attention she actually felt a lot of scratches, and sore spots too. On her back and the inside of her thighs there were more marks, and her pussy felt sore too.

Iantha saw her image in the mirror, pale and wide-eyed with apprehension, her luscious body marked as if she had been out on a date with a, yes, with what? She shivered as she tried to recall details of the dream, apart from the feeling of dread it had left.

She had been walking along Cemetery Road at dusk. The sky had been blood red from the dying sun and the sailing clouds had had streaks of orange on their bellies. In real life she always stopped to look at the gargoyles that guarded the derelict tomb in the corner near the road. And in her dream she had done the same, admiring the strong clean lines of the stone monsters, especially the big one of the lion man.

Only, in her dreams of the past week she had been speaking to the stone guardians. Every night she had been dreaming, the gargoyles had seemed to get more lifelike qualities. Tonight was the seventh in a row, and.... , and .... Iantha shuddered as more details surfaced.

The lion man had been speaking to her in the dreams that went before. He had told her he wanted her, told her she had been his before. That it was the reason why she was drawn to him in the first place. Every night he had been more flesh and blood till tonight, when he was fully alive. He had been waiting for her under the old trees in the bend of the road where she could see the empty space on the tomb that was his perch.

"Iantha, at last." His voice had been the sound of rocks rolling along the mountainside.

He had actually smiled at her as he had held out his hand, or more a claw with the long sharp nails. At first Iantha had been frozen with shock, letting him take her hand and drawing her into the shadows. But when he had wrapped his bulging arms around her and crushed her to his chest she had started struggling. Ok, granted she had admired his statue for forever, but that didn't mean she wanted to..., to....

Christ, she couldn't even think it in her own house. Well, not after tonight's dream. Iantha grabbed a bottle of wine and took that with her, back to the bedroom. She left the light on as she climbed back into bed and tucked the duvet around her cold, painful body. At least she would have the comfort of alcohol warming her while she was recalling the dream. And she knew she had to do that, otherwise she would start dreaming again as soon as she closed her eyes.

Struggling, yes she had started struggling to get out of his embrace. The power she had felt in the heavily muscled arms had frightened her as much as her own response to his nearness. His face was more or less human and his upper body too, but his arms and legs were more like those of a lion. Cougar, he had said his name was. Yes, he was Cougar all right. Now that he was real his skin had been bronzed, his hair the color of sand and his eyes a deep blue.

Iantha drank straight from the bottle, taking a few gulps and wiping the back of her hand across her mouth. She never noticed anything in the room itself; they were focussed on the inside, on the screen of her memory.

Her eyes had lingered on his chest, covered with soft sand colored fur and on his claws, ripping off her clothes. She had stopped struggling then as if she was mesmerized by his strength and his savage desire.
Iantha felt the blood rush to her face as she remembered how she had offered him her breasts. Cougar had growled deep in his throat as he had gripped both of them in his claws, leaving that scratch marks on her sides. He had licked and sucked them till she had been begging him to take her.

She got up again and wandered back to the kitchen. Anything to drag her back to reality. Unfortunately the refrigerator held nothing besides a bag of carrot sticks. Munching one she walked into the living room, stepped into the hall and checked the locks on the door. After the first few dreams she had an extra chain installed, held by sturdy D-rings. But somehow the whole contraption did nothing to make her feel secure.

She hurried back to the safety of the bedroom. Another swig of wine did not really cool her down however, and she felt the wetness between her legs start anew. God, what was happening to her? Iantha clenched her thighs and tried to will the arousal away. It was no use though, because the memories of the dream made her hot as hell.

Cougar had put her on her back, spread her legs and licked her with a big rasping tongue till she had been sobbing and begging. His cock had been enormous, so big it had hurt at first. But, and maybe that was more frightening than anything else, she had wanted him to enter her. Wanted him badly even though it had hurt.

The bottle of wine lay empty on the floor next to the bed but Iantha didn't care. She had tried to relieve the tension herself but it was no use. All she could think about was the phallus that had really been hard as stone and her whole body ached for the touch of those claws, marking her again.

It was a matter of minutes to get dressed, unbolt the chains and leave the house. The huge shadow waiting for her under the ancient trees did not really surprise her and she smiled in anticipation. She didn't mind his brutal use of her body; in fact she encouraged him and screamed her release more than once. When Cougar finally climaxed she felt as if molten lava poured down inside her.

Raina had read the story on the front page with interest. She loved tales of the unexpected. The police had found the body of a young woman near the cemetery. The body had been heavily marked with wounds like claw tracks and the weirdest thing, she had been filled with a stone phallus. They said she had died of heart failure due to extreme stress. Looking at the gargoyle in the shape of a cougar, perching atop a derelict tomb she smiled. She loved coming here and the stone lion man looked almost alive. Sometimes she even dreamed of him. Suddenly blushing she hastened home, never seeing the sneer on the face of the gargoyle.


I found out real bloody stories is not my thing. Is this horror enough?

:confused:
 
BT as always

You rise to the occasion.
Fine job, but...
Unfortunately the refrigerator held nothing besides a bag of carrot sticks.
was supposed to be carrot stick not sticks. How could you blow this challenge? Better start all over again. :p
 
I liked it BT!!!! Completely cool.

Did I miss the challenge? or is this the end of this one? I am so confused. I am trying to follow :).
 
Reo, its due Thursday

It was posted right after your last post.

The challenge:

Ok, your wish is my command
the challenge is now at hand
for a certain category you must write
now please, don't run in fright
it's time to scare the readers galore
with unearthly beasts, blood, and gore
erotic horror, yep, that's the game
be sure to choose a frightening name
your story must include these things
a teddy bear, a carrot stick, a D-ring
and a nasty creature, but don't forget
one thousand words you must beget
or it will not meet the challenge part
and now it's time, you may start.
 
Here is my evil tale:

THE ITH


[COLOR=orange-red]By Dingus Guy

The thick, iron-link chain slinked along the filthy basement floor grinding itself against the d-ring on the northern brick wall. One could tell by the scratches along the chain’s end and the d-ring itself, that more than one attempt was made to break the connection. The Ith tried, but not until today did it break free. It had curled a talon from its big toe up and under the collar some odd days back. Using the fine sharpness of this lengthy protrusion it filed down the leather neck strap until either the nail gave way or the vile creature cramped from its position. With its four muscled arms secured with manacles to the floor, only the legs were free to move about. The Ith never gave up, and when the nail re-grew or the cramps subsided, the Ith returned to its labor.

Upon the creature’s capture, the priests swore to feed it and to nurture it, even against the evil for which the Ith was trained. They swore to God to pray for its well-being. At first the priests tried to train the beast. This was met with resistance in the way of blasphemy at each attempt. Throwing things at its captives. The priests tried reason and the Ith spat a green oily substance at them. They fed it food, and it ate only the meats of the animals. Tossing the bones at them or nearest to the stairwell leading away from the basement. The Ith knew no manners, nor friendliness. After many years, the priests merely fed it and now and then asked if it wanted anything. This usually received the same response, middle toe extended.

The demoness, Asaria trained the Ith to corrupt the innocence of women with sexual depravity. The male Ith were once known for the pheromones it left behind in its secretions. The scent acted similar to an aphrodisiac and was harvested by tribal shaman. They in turn used it to bring together men with their chosen. The Ith was similar to a man, except for its multiple appendages. It ran on its hands and feet, but could stand erect and reach up high if needed. It was naturally muscled, and strong, but never attacked unless threatened or in the need of food. Asaria found in the Ith a pet. She taught it to communicate, but mostly follow orders. Soon, under her tutelage, the Ith became an Izzaputi, a minion of Hell to serve in the mortal realm.

The Ith roamed the mortal world serving Asaria, who served Lilith, who served Satan. Asaria used her minions to create disorder and panic amongst the living and tempt them to live a life free of religious doctrine. The Ith was molded to serve such a purpose, and it served it well. When Asaria released the Ith upon the world again, she released an evil vision of Hell. It raped women, it killed men, and tore apart homes in its wake. Asaria was pleased with her work. In time, Asaria like most of her creations, forget about the Ith. As an Izzaputi it had protection from Hell, but Hell didn’t care, and the Ith was left unprotected. In time, the Ith was hunted and killed. Now only a few Ith remained.

When the talon shredded the leather, the collar fell and the chain clunked to the floor with it. With new freedom, the Ith tore at the arm restraints with its teeth and soon was completely free from its long bondage. Without hesitation it bounded the stairs and the wooden door exploded as the beast drove its body into it. Splinters stuck to its reptilian skin, but the Ith didn’t even notice. Upon reaching the new room the Ith expected to kill, but no one was there. It immediately ran through the building looking for a way out.

Passing several Christian religious symbols on the walls and on counters, the Ith knocked them about in disgust. He found a long arched hallway leading to a similarly shaped large wooden door at the far end. The door had a small stain-glassed window of Christ on the cross. There was a beam of sunlight coming from the clouds above shining on Jesus. The Ith spat on the window and opened the door prepared for any challenge. It raced in and their were dozen upon dozens of wooden benches splitting the church in half with an altar of Jesus at the center of the far wall behind the altar. In front of the altar, kneeling down to light a candle was a 5-year-old girl. The Ith charged and as the girl turned to see the hideous pale green monster, she fainted in fear before she could even utter a word.

When the Ith came upon the fallen tot, it hesitated. The Ith smelt the girl. She smelled of lilacs, a pleasing scent to the Ith. It poked at her face with a toe and a small bloody jagged line opened up from the slightest touch of the creature’s talon. When she didn’t move, it picked her up effortlessly with one of its arms. A small teddy bear clung to the little child’s hand in a bit of a death grip despite her unconscious state. A priest came out then from a side door. The Ith recognized the priest at once and held the girl out to him to make a statement as to who was in charge.

“Please,” the priest began, gulping between words, “leave the child and go. She is of no use to you. Harmless and innocent.”

The Ith shook the girl in the air with its one hand and pointed at himself with the other three. It was trying to say the girl was useful after all. The priest knew enough than to reason with demon spawn, but he had little choice or his daughter would end up dead. A teddy bear clunked to the floor suddenly, startling the Ith, and he tore it apart instantly. It ran then, bolting to the opposite end of the pews and found a door and broke free.

“Wait,” the priest yelled in vain chasing after his daughter, “please leave her! Please! Mia!”

Once outside, the Ith ran for the nearby woods and disappeared within the green and brown fortress. The Ith nearly forgot about the bundle hanging from its grip until she awoke and screamed and nearly passed out again. The creature held her up to its ugly face, and she grew quiet. She closed her eyes in fear of the worst nightmare she ever knew. The Ith’s instinct was to tear apart the child, but he merely sniffed her lilac fragrance, put her down and left. Mia opened her eyes and watched the monster fade away into the trees and shrubbery. She just waited silently until her father came and scooped her up.

The creature plowed its way through the dense woodsy area. Traveling miles upon miles, in search of a resting place. Time had gotten away, but the Ith still had purpose. The scent from the human child had slowed the creature somehow, but now it was regaining its bearings. A new scent was in the air, a smell the Ith knew way to well. It came to a clearing and there in front of the demon minion were two humans cuddling with each other on a blanket. There was a car nearby them. The man was kissing the woman and was lying at her side almost on top of her. They were oblivious to the Ith’s presence, and the creature took advantage of this and darted towards them.

The Ith ripped the man off the woman and held him up in the air and shredded his clothes then skin in a flash of an eye. All the arms were flashing from one body part to another. The time the woman started screaming in terror the man was dead. Realizing she would be next, she got up off the blanket and ran for the car. The Ith threw the carcass of the man to the ground and pulled the woman back and twirled her in front of the dirty beast. The Ith withdrew its tongue, which was long, thin and had a yellowish-orange color. It looked like a cross between a carrot stick and measuring tape. The appendage licked the brunette’s face like a lapdog. She tried to close her mouth, but she was screaming and crying helplessly and couldn’t help it. The tongue slathered her face and darted into her mouth practically choking her. She used her fists to pound on the creature, but the Ith hardly noticed it against his thick skin.

The lovely red and white patterned dress was ripped from her body without a scratch of her skin. Her complete fear left her at the creature’s mercy. The thing was too strong for her and the four arms held her at bay. Her bra and panties were ripped and thrown to the grass. She was left naked to the whole world to see, except no one was here in this secluded area, except for this hideous animal. At 5’ 3” tall and 111 pounds, she had a very skinny frame along with 36-c breasts that did not seem to sag one bit. Her legs were sleek and smooth and at the moment being pulled apart by the lower arms.

While the tongue played with her mouth the Ith’s lower body was preparing for sex with the human female. The Ith had two phalluses for sex. Because the Ith female form had two holes for intercourse, the Ith male would make love with both of its cocks. When Demoness Asaria trained the Ith for human intercourse, two different holes were utilized. The Ith would spray the female form with its pheromonal fluids and the female would in heat soon after. No female could resist, even a struggling human.

Janet’s screams were muffled with the tongue and her body was lifted up off the ground and gently laid onto the blanket. Gently maybe the wrong word, it was more hoisted and spread. The creature had pulled her legs apart with the two lower arms and the other two arms pinned her arms and shoulders down. She tried to resist the onslaught the best she could, but she lost the power struggle. She knew what the animal was trying to do, but she was helpless from being raped. Suddenly, she felt a spray of fluids on her most private of areas. It was disgustingly oily and it covered her pussy completely. This seemed like good news to Janet, because if the beast had ejaculated then there was a good chance it would just leave. This was furthest from the truth, because she felt the creature lean into her and felt a protrusion at her pussy and then another one at her anal cavity.

Using the fluids from its cock, the Ith slid along each hole of the human female form and coated itself. Before it entered, the cock would be fully glazed with its own juices, so the sex would be less restricted and enjoyable for the Ith. The demon minion moved back and forth rubbing its cocks against the woman. Helpless to stop it, the Ith’s movements stirred her clitoris and it slowly sprang to life. The fluids were starting to have an impact all ready.

She was unable to stop her desires from the manifesting themselves. Despite herself she felt an arousal deep within and it was a growing warmth that spread through her whole body. Her own juices mingled with the beast’s and she went from struggling and screaming to a passive state of understanding. She needed to know why her body was feeling this way with such a hideous and vile creature. Her pussy tingled, her clit throbbed, and even her nipples became erect from her unwanted desire. Janet cried at her body’s betrayal as the thing thrust itself inside her holes at the same time. There was no friction or pain because of the oily secretion, and the creature’s cocks slid in easily. Never before had she been anally penetrated, and the sensations were similar to having to go to the bathroom. She felt like pushing it out, but the cock in her pussy felt so good. The front of the upper penis had some kind of small branch that made contact with her clit. She resisted the pleasure contact, but she couldn’t hold out long. She figured to just lay still and have the animal be done with her.

The Ith enjoyed the first contact with the woman. She lay dormant under the Ith, but the minion knew it wouldn’t be long before her body would thrash around in pleasure. They all did sooner or later. It had been such a long time since the Ith had taken a woman. This one had been particularly pleasing to the Ith. Her body was very alluring and it aroused the Ith quite a bit. The double cocks filled her holes completely and he started to fuck her body with hammering intensity. The Ith was holding her down with its four arms, but as soon as the Ith felt her succumb he released her and played with the nipples with its tongue and fingers. He mauled her body with those four strong taloned hands. They were everywhere and scratching her body sometimes, but not drawing blood.

A moan escaped Janet’s mouth, and her body despite herself was starting to turn against her wishes. She didn’t want to give in to her desire, but she was losing the battle. Her will was breaking. Janet was starting to move her hips to the fucking. She was meeting his thrusts, and she felt like a whore unable to control her lust. The full sensation of her asshole was beginning to add to the pleasure from the beasts pussy assault. The creature’s hands released her and she knew she couldn’t fight it. As the pleasure rose, she succumbed more. Janet never had felt any sexual urges as the ones filling her now. The strength of her cravings was unquenchable. With each fuck, the beast was making her more willing, more hungry, and she powerless to stop.

Without warning the Ith put its arms under her and lifted her off the ground and into the air. Two hands held her at her hips, another one on her back and the third played with her breasts. Fucking her whilst she bounced on the Ith’s cocks was very pleasurable for both of them. Using her hips the Ith pulled her up and down on his large warm staves. The woman moaned in pleasure of her vulnerable state. The Ith’s movements began to increase in speed and the power of each thrust pushed her to orgasm.

Never before in Janet’s life had she ever felt such wanton desire. When the beast picked her up, the orgasm, which was near, came crashing down and her screams of passion filled the serene woodsy setting. She couldn’t control herself and even as the thing picked up its speed she held on to its head for support and the mouth of the animal ravaged her own. Its tongue once again mingled with her tongue and this time she responded unknowingly as she came harder than she ever came before. Yet, her desire never lessened. The fucking only brought her close to another orgasm only seconds after the first one melted away. Her mind was lost in the pleasure and didn’t know anything else. The two cocks slid in and out of her pussy and ass with blistering speed and she wanted it. She needed it. She craved it. Nothing else mattered. Then the second climax took her to new heights.

The Ith fucked the woman to eight orgasms, which were released repeatedly before it unleashed its own fluids. She passed out before she felt the Ith cum. When the Ith came, both cocks filled her holes and overflowed them. This dislodged his members and the semen splattered across her body with greenish-white coloration. The thing just kept secreting and the woman’s body looked like a shiny oily canvas. When the Ith was finished it spat in the face of the human and left.

Prologue:

The Ith survived through the years, until some 15 years later met its fate with an arrow through the beasts mid section. It didn’t die and escaped back into the camouflage of the forest. The demon minion crawled into a nearby cave and was soon followed by a hooded hunter. The Ith was too weakened to defend itself so it just waited to be slain. A familiar scent of lilacs filled the creature’s nostrils and looked up into a young woman’s face. There was a small jagged scar on the lady’s face and as if reminding herself she touched it with the back of her hand. The Ith knew and it somehow pleased the beast. As if by instinct and by no means to save itself, the creature shot its fluid from the double cocks at the woman’s face. She wiped herself with her cloak without hesitation, not wanting any poison to enter her mouth. She drew back her bow and was going to kill the creature with the arrow, but she suddenly felt a tingly sensation in her pussy. It was distracting so she raised the bow to aim again, but her legs felt weakened and unsteady. She saw the creature’s double cocks become erect and she shook her head to refocus, but she was getting strangely aroused and the bow fell to her side.[/COLOR]
 
Way to go Dingus. Very yucky creature you dreamed up. I liked the name. The Ith? :D

I noticed you did not kill your monster either. I wonder what that says about us. :eek:
 
Thanks BT

Black Tulip said:
Way to go Dingus. Very yucky creature you dreamed up. I liked the name. The Ith? :D

I noticed you did not kill your monster either. I wonder what that says about us. :eek:

Sherlock never killed his nemesis Professor Moriarty did he?
Killing off the monster/villian only ends the tale. A story should never end the tale, only the chapter.
 
Re: Reo, its due Thursday

Dingus Guy said:
It was posted right after your last post.

The challenge:

Ok, your wish is my command
the challenge is now at hand
for a certain category you must write
now please, don't run in fright
it's time to scare the readers galore
with unearthly beasts, blood, and gore
erotic horror, yep, that's the game
be sure to choose a frightening name
your story must include these things
a teddy bear, a carrot stick, a D-ring
and a nasty creature, but don't forget
one thousand words you must beget
or it will not meet the challenge part
and now it's time, you may start.

Thursday? I better get in gear :).

HUGS HUGS HUGS Thank you
 
Reo

You need to find the post where the d-ring explanation is. Has a link with a pic in it.
 
Found it... thank you... I am really trying to pay attention... usually I just end up trying everyone's patience though.


HUGS HUGS HUGS
 
With that skirt

I always look forward to reading your posts.
Easily distracted I is.
 
Soon My Sweet


Mindy meandered around the toy store, looking for just the right present for her niece. Stopping at the display of stuffed animals, Mindy picked up a bunny rabbit and examined it.

‘Since when did they start having bunny rabbits eat a carrot stick instead of a whole carrot?’ she thought.

Even though the bunny was cute, the carrot stick was just too weird looking, so Mindy ended up buying an adorable teddy bear that was really soft and fluffy.

She was driving up to see her new niece and wanted to have a present to give her. The baby was a newborn and wouldn’t have a clue whether her aunt brought her something or not, but she couldn’t just show up without a gift.

Mindy checked her watch and realized that she was getting a later start than intended. She had a long drive ahead of her and it was already fast approaching nine pm. At this rate, it would be 2am before she arrived in her sister’s town. She’d have to find a hotel to crash in until it was a more civilized hour to go visiting.

*****

After driving for three hours, Mindy began to have problems staying awake and decided to pull over for the night and finish the trip in the morning. She saw a billboard advertising a motel several miles off from the next exit and she headed in that direction.

“Damnit!” Mindy cursed as her car sputtered and died on the wooded road leading to the motel. Tried as she might, the car would not start; turning the key only resulted in a grinding noise from deep within the motor.

She reached into her purse for her cell phone and was dismayed to see that it didn’t have a signal. Realizing that her only two choices were to wait in the car and hope for rescue or to get out and try to walk to the motel for help, Mindy decided to get out and walk. There was no way that she was going to stay alone in the car on this creepy road.

Walking quickly and purposefully down the road, Mindy figured that it would only take her about half an hour to walk the remaining miles to the motel. She was in good shape and worked out regularly, so this short trek was like a walk in the park. Well, like a walk in a very dark and foreboding park.

As Mindy walked, she began to feel like she was being watched, like there was a presence in the woods with her. Her steps quickened, increasing her speed to a jog. The further she went, the more scared she became, her heart thudding in her chest.

‘Get a grip,’ she thought. ‘The darkness and the fact that you are alone and surrounded by woods are getting to you. There’s nothing out there, except for maybe some animals. You’ll be at the motel in no time and then everything will be okay.”

Despite the reassurances to herself, Mindy continued to increase her speed until she was running swiftly along the road. Suddenly, the feeling of a presence was so strong that it enveloped her, weighing her down and slowing her steps until she was barely even moving. Body trembling, she struggled to breathe as a dark heaviness settled upon her, squeezing her body like a vise.

‘Panic attack,’ she thought as the blackness settled over her vision and she slumped to the ground in a heap.

Mindy awoke a short time later with the feeling that something was very wrong. She was no longer lying in the middle of the road but standing upright. Shivering in the cool night air, she realized that her clothes were gone. Roughness bit into the back of her body, telling her that she was against a tree. Her wrists were restrained by leather cuffs that were joined together by a d-ring, which in turn was hung on a spike driven into the tree.

‘Oh my god, I’m in deep shit,” Mindy thought as she looked wildly about. “Help! Someone help me!” she screamed, praying that she was close enough to the motel for someone to hear her.

The heavy feeling returned, weighing upon Mindy’s body like a stone as a deep menacing voice spoke, “No one will hear you my sweet.”

Mindy frantically strained to see into the darkness, looking for the origin of the voice, but she saw nothing.

“I’m sorry our initial meeting had to be done this way, but I knew you would not willingly come to me. I have been watching you, waiting for the moment when I could make you mine,” said the deep voice.

Chills raced down Mindy’s spine as she heard the words that were spoken. She did not want to think about what those words might mean. Rustling leaves caught her attention and she looked towards the sound, wondering if her tormentor was approaching.

“My dear sweet Mindy, so beautiful, so alluring, so sexy, you’ve always been mine, you know. For lifetimes now, I’ve reclaimed you, but have never been able to make you fully mine. I’ve either caught you too late or during the wrong cycle of your life but not this time. I have been very careful in choosing when to claim you during this life. This will be it, I’m sure. The reclamation that will make you mine forever.”

Mindy watched in horror as a dark figure appeared out of the trees in front of her. Man-like, the creature would have passed for human at a distance. Up-close, there was no mistaking that the creature was not. Black scales covered his sinewy arms and legs and his ears pointed towards the top of his bald, scaly head. His full, blood-red lips curved into a devious smile as he approached her, pointy teeth revealed behind them as his smile grew wider.

“Do not be afraid, sweet Mindy. I am not going to hurt you. I am only going to claim what is mine.”

Quaking with horror, Mindy looked at the creature, his ice-blue eyes standing out starkly from the rest of his ebony scaled body. She bowed her head, her terror strengthening as she saw the enormous erection sprouting from the creature’s abdomen.

She flinched away trying to draw back into herself when she felt his cold hand trace a line down her side. He moved closer and fear engulfed her as his hot breath warmed her neck. A sharp pain bit into her as he gently nipped her neck before sliding his forked tongue up her jaw and onto her face.

Tremors racked her body as his mouth closed over hers, pressing her head forcefully against the tree. His cold hands caressed her breasts and then pinched her nipples, sending involuntary sparks of hot pleasure through her. His forked tongue slithered down her body, first wrapping around one nipple and then the other before continuing down her belly until the creature was kneeling between her legs.

“Oh,” she gasped as she felt the rough tongue lashing at her clit. Even though her mind was terror-stricken, her body was responding to what the creature was doing. Pleasure rushed through her as his tongue expertly teased her clit from its hood, arousal engorging it and swelling her labia.

Mindy’s head thrashed about as the heat of her arousal spread through her body while her mind was screaming, “No!No!No!”

Having aroused Mindy sufficiently for her to receive him without it hurting her, the creature rose from its knelt position. Mindy moved her head from side to side, trying to escape him as he covered her mouth once again, his tongue sliding inside to caress hers.

His cold hands clenched her thighs and pulled her legs off the ground as his enormous cock rubbed against the entrance to her throbbing pussy.

“No, please, don’t!” Mindy begged as the creature’s cock pushed forward, seeking entrance into the soft, enveloping walls of her pussy.

“Always a protest before your body takes control and you begin to moan with pleasure. Always the same,” the creature whispered in her ear, his hot breath sending shivers down her spine.

Mindy’s mind did indeed give over control to her body as his massive cock thrust forcefully inside her. His forked tongue flicked her nipples, causing her back to arch, as her body sought more of the pleasure that his tongue wrought.

As his enormous cock stretched her tight pussy wide around its girth, Mindy’s legs wrapped around his waist and pulled him closer to her, driving his cock deeper into her hot depths. Her mind was filled with nothing but need as the creature fucked her against the tree, her skin rubbing against the rough bark as he thrust vigorously into her.

A cold hand reached between their bodies and stroked her inflamed clit, sending shockwaves of pleasure through Mindy, her cries echoing through the trees.

“Yes, my sweet, cum for me,” crooned the creature as Mindy’s moans grew louder.

Another flick of his tongue on her nipple sent Mindy crashing over the edge and her body shook from the force of her orgasm.

The creature let out a snarl and slammed his huge cock deep into her, spurting his hot unearthly cum deep into Mindy’s womb. After the eruption of his seed ceased, the creature quickly released Mindy from the tree and laid her down upon a bed of leaves.

“Soon, my sweet,” he whispered as he crept back into the woods. “I will return for you.”

********

Mindy shot upright and frantically looked around, the vestiges of a nightmare crashing about in her head.

“It’s okay, dear. You’re in a room in my motel. The mister found ya out in the middle of the road a couple of miles away from your stalled car. Seems ya tripped over a root and banged your head pretty hard on the ground. He brought ya back here, and we got ya in bed. The doctor came out and looked ya over and said that ya’d be fine come morning.”

Mindy saw the old woman sitting in a chair in the corner of the small, dingy room. The last thing she remembered was her car sputtering to a stop on the lonely road.

“What’s your name, dear?” inquired the old woman.

“Mindy. Where’s my car?”

“The mister got it fired up and brought it up here, so it’s sitting out there in the parking lot. Not sure what was wrong with it when it died on ya, but it’s running fine now.”

“Thank you. I appreciate all of your help, but I really need to get going. I am on my way to see my sister and her new baby.”

“You’re welcome dear. Ya can come out whenever you’re ready. The mister has your keys at the front desk. Don’t worry about the room. After your rough night, it’s on the house.”

Goosebumps sprouted on Mindy’s skin as the old lady mentioned a rough night. Mindy wasn’t sure what was going on, but a sudden spurt of fear had run through her body at the sound of those words. She jumped out of bed, eager to get as far away from this forlorn place as possible.

Soon, she was on the road, a couple of hours away from seeing her new niece. By the time she arrived, the strange foreboding feeling that she had felt in the dingy room had disappeared and she blamed it on the knock she had taken to the head.

*******

Nine months later, Mindy lay in a hospital bed, waiting for the nurses to bring her new son and put him in her arms. She had not gotten to see him after he was born, he had struggled a little to breathe and so they had taken him to the NICU to check him out. Having pinked up fully after receiving a little oxygen and since all of his tests had come out fine; they were releasing him from the NICU and were bringing him to meet his mommy any minute.

Mindy still marveled at the fact that she had gotten pregnant the last night that she had slept with her now ex-boyfriend. They had used protection, but the condom must have failed because he was the only man that she had been intimate with for a time of several months.

“Here we are,” chirped a nurse as she walked into the room, pushing the isolate. She picked up the bundled infant and carried him over to the waiting arms of his mommy.

Mindy joyfully opened her arms, eager to meet the little guy that had bounced around in her tummy for the past nine months. Her wide smile suddenly vanished when the baby opened his eyes.

Ice-blue eyes stared back at her and Mindy screamed, the words “Soon my sweet. I will return for you,” echoing in her head.
 
Creepy

It reminded me of a horror movie I saw when I was a kid, where some creature raped some women and you know the rest. Don't want to give the story away for those reading the post before the story. Anyway I think it was called the 'Progeny' or something like that.
 
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