Tanka Poem

[WCSGarland]

recycling another haiku as tanka...

With each lick, I take,
Possession with each lick,
I licked it, it's mine.
Possession is nine tenths
Of law, each lick is now law.

 

[WCSGarland]

recycling another haiku as tanka...

our undulating,
needful loins, lusting enjoined,
precipice goes by,
greedily you dive over,
I take your hand and follow.

 

[Jocelyn_Nicole_Sawyer]

my feet are dirty
result of wearing sandals
now get on your knees
because I did that for us
you need to worship, I'll bask

 

[AlinaX]

hear, fellow poets
I've coined a new archetype
one you'll recognise
the Tanka Maid wields a whip
to punish all miscounters

 

[Jocelyn_Nicole_Sawyer]

That's right, listen up!
I'm def house of Slytherin
and Breaker of Chains
Enuf with shenanigans
Transgress and you'll taste my wrath!

 

[WCSGarland]

my feet are dirty
result of wearing sandals
now get on your knees
because I did that for us
you need to worship, I'll bask

The few times I sucked on my wife's toes, they were clean after a shower. If I worship anybody's dirty feet, it will be with a bucket of soapy water and a scrub brush.

 

[Jocelyn_Nicole_Sawyer]

@AlinaX like this garland dude chuckled ....can we have that? he wants off with like a mild whipping... but maybe we should give him a pegging! do you know anything about that... as my general in charge of my armed forces... like bring him to heel already!

 

[Jocelyn_Nicole_Sawyer]

he has talent but also like this snark ... which I can't tolerate...

 

[AlinaX]

alien dildo
in bright lurid silicone
thick and super long
looks magnificent within
a penetrated sphincter

 

[AlinaX]

a man’s quiet gasp
at being stretched sublimely
is music indeed
set it to a beat and play
to an epic crescendo

 

[AlinaX]

careful at home, kids
must never put a square peg
in such a round hole
and remember to plug it
and dress it with polished beads

 

[Jocelyn_Nicole_Sawyer]

alien dildo
in bright lurid silicone
thick and super long
looks magnificent within
a penetrated sphincter

That's my Supreme Military Commander! @WCSGarland remain PROSTRATE!

 

[WCSGarland]

A prostate exam,
by alien tentacle,
doth bring me to shame,
such foul treatment being wrought,
against the wrong orifice.

 

[WCSGarland]

Stoically born,
The harsh Tanka Maid's harsh sentence,
Does not break my will,
Recalcitrant in my mind,
Snark will ride my dying breath.

 

[Jocelyn_Nicole_Sawyer]

Mistakes were made... just a test... @WCSGarland will be promoted!

 

[Jocelyn_Nicole_Sawyer]

stoically born... recalcitrant... love it!

 

[Jocelyn_Nicole_Sawyer]

but umm... can we not call me harsh?

 

[Jocelyn_Nicole_Sawyer]

I distinctively remember handing out cake not too long ago.

 

[WCSGarland]

but umm... can we not call me harsh?

Stoically born,
The harsh Tanka Maid's harsh sentence,
Does not break my will,
Recalcitrant in my mind,
Snark will ride my dying breath.

Is that better?

 

[WCSGarland]

both edited - the sentence is now harsh instead of The Tanka Maid being harsh.

 

[Candy_Kane54]

I came here to see
What all the fuss was about
Writing a Tanka
And found that it was a way
To write a longer Haiku.

 

[Jocelyn_Nicole_Sawyer]

Stoically born,
The harsh Tanka Maid's harsh sentence,
Does not break my will,
Recalcitrant in my mind,
Snark will ride my dying breath.

Is that better?

yeah, cuz the adjective was shifted to what she was doing and not like an indictment about her...

 

[Jocelyn_Nicole_Sawyer]

yeppers, we are good now! let us go forth and Tannnnkkkkaaaaa!!!!!

 

[Jocelyn_Nicole_Sawyer]

also

WCSGarland is 7 syllables... so pretty much a Tanka verse

right that like initial W is 3 syllables?

 

[Jocelyn_Nicole_Sawyer]

I came here to see
What all the fuss was about
Writing a Tanka
And found that it was a way
To write a longer Haiku.

Welcome Aboard! I promise it's not always this crazy...