Songs We Want To Write Stories About

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There was a chain story series a while back, based around the song "El Paso," that received a lot of participation. That and other things got me thinking, and it still does, concerning songs from which the basic storyline could be adapted into a full-blown tale.

Songs are great for inspiration. The prose must be tight and able to evoke something from the listener, and the accompanying music needs to grab you and match the cadence of the lyrics. But sometimes, there are songs that beg to be developed further. Listening to them, you can't help but feel that there is much more behind the prose and music. If only someone would expound upon the basic ideas presented.

We can be those someones.

Personally, I have always wanted to turn Sting's "Love Is Stronger Than Justice (The Munificent Seven)" into a full-fledged story. Sting has always been a consummate storyteller, giving us a teasing taste of much richer fare through his prose. In this particular song, he tells the tale of seven brothers who travel as wandering gunfighters in an Old West setting. Venturing into Mexico, they learn of a small town which has been ravaged by local bandits. The mayor of the town begs the seven brothers to deal with the bandits, promising a bride for each of them as reward.

Unfortunately, once the bandits are dealt with and the seven brothers return, the mayor informs the men that there is only one eligible woman for marriage. "There weren't seven brides for seven brothers. I knew I had to get rid of the others," the song goes, speaking from the point of view of Sting, who takes the part of the youngest of the seven.

In the end, Sting's character triumphs; all six of the others are dead, and the narrator settles down with his new Mexican bride while the other six brothers "are singing in Heaven."

The song resonates with me. It is a terrific tale of brotherly love and understanding, while at the same time a dissertation on the impact a single woman can have upon men. I see a scenario in which the seven brothers agree that they all want the "prize," but also understand that only one of them will get it, at the cost of the other seven. Something about that is very Greek Tragedy to me.

Anyway, while I may or may not write the above tale, the idea has me wondering what other songs other people might think simply beg for a literary rendering. What songs would you turn into a story?
 
I haven't turned any songs into novel-length stories, but I've done the following:

"Silver, Blue & Gold" -- inspired by the song of the same name by Bad Company.
"Facing the Past" == inspired by "Love Me, Somebody" by Bad Co.
"Who Cares What I Wear?" -- inspired by "New Year's Eve" by Nina Gordon
"Horses in the City" -- inspired by the song by Nina Gordon
"King's Bay" -- inspired in part by "Cannibal Surf Babe" by Marillion
"Morning Sun" -- inspired by the song by Bad Co.

I have ideas for a few more on songs by other groups, just haven't had time to write them down.

ETA: Sorry, I didn't exactly answer the question, did I? I find that lots of songs by different artists would make good stories, at least to me. I have ideas for "Kathleen" by Josh Ritter, "Words" and "Brick by Brick" by Train, and a few others. Probably plenty more out there, but there's only so much time to listen. :)
 
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Broken and Love her are two very depressing and powerful "ballads" from Seether.

A lot of the "feel" of my SWB series came from them. The 2 characters were totally broken by life and only okay when they were together.

And the sister was hooked on coke and heroin and hooking so right along the lines of "Love her"

In fact the name of the published for sale series is "Broken"

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hPC2Fp7IT7o

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=V_bnaXRRfzU
 
I love using lyrics as inspiration. 'El Paso' was the first of many stories I wrote as part of the Jake Rivers group. Others include:

Maggie May
I Love You Because
That's All That Matters
The Farmer's Daughter

Sometimes I use the entire song, others I take a line and develop the story around that. I also used a blues song by Keb' Mo' called 'Eileen' that's posted here on Lit.

I turned the song 'Always on My Mind' by Willie Nelson into a story that's available on Smashwords and Amazon.

And I'm in the middle of 'Class of '57' by the Statler Brothers that's set in 1972. My version isn't quite as clean as the original.

I have a binder with lyrics I think will make good stories someday. They range from oldies to rock to country to blues to inspirational. Metallica, Bob Seger, the Mamas and the Papas, Peter Cetera, or Eric Clapton . . . their words inspire me.
 
Already wrote two versions of "Home by the Sea" as Les and Dark. The song always spoke to me as a horror/comeuppance story waiting to be told, so I told it :p
 
I've written both short stories and poems inspired by "Ode to Billy Joe" (the Tallahatchie Bridge song).
 
Mama Told Me Not to Come ~ Three Dog Night

Want some whiskey in your water?
Sugar in your tea?
What's all these crazy questions they're askin' me?
This is the craziest party that could ever be
Don't turn on the lights 'cause I don't wanna see

Mama told me not to come
Mama told me not to come
"That ain't the way to have fun, no"

Open up the window, let some air into this room
I think I'm almost chokin' from the smell of stale perfume
And that cigarette you're smokin' 'bout scare me half to death
Open up the window, sucker, let me catch my breath

Mama told me not to come
Mama told me not to come
"That ain't the way to have fun, son"
"That ain't the way to have fun, son"

The radio is blastin', someone's knockin' at the door
I'm lookin' at my girlfriend - she's passed out on the floor
I seen so many things I ain't never seen before
Don't know what it is - I don't wanna see no more
 
Sting and The Police have many songs that have strong narrative voices. The Police songs that I've always wanted to write stories about are
• Synchronicity II,
• Wrapped Around Your Finger,
• Driven to Tears,
• Don't Stand So Close to Me,
• Bring on the Night.

One of my favorite Eagles’ songs is "You Never Cry like a Lover Should." Every time I hear it, I think that it would make a terrific story.
A few others that I have used for inspiration are Nine Inch Nails, The Clash, The Pretenders, Sheryl Crowe, Joni Mitchell, Death Cab for Cuties, Bruce Springsteen, Lyle Lovett, David Bowie, Bob Dylan, Chris Isaak, Damien Rice, David Gray, Eric Clapton, Jack Johnson, Jimmy Cliff, Dire Straits, and U2. Two other songs that might inspire intriguing stories are U2’s "Acrobat" and Depeche Mode's "The Love Thieves."
I love Mistress Lynn's idea of keeping a binder of song lyrics. I'll have to start doing that. Thanks for starting this thread. I hope more people will list songs for inspiration.
 
"Too Drunk to Fuck" by the Dead Kennedys would be my choice (and might be a good fit.)

The lyrics even TALK about "stories"...

I like your stories
I love your gun
Shooting out truck tires
Sounds like loads and loads of fun

But in my room
Wish you were dead
You ball like the baby
In Eraserhead

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=l7TWLxCIgwE
 
I wrote a mainstream short story that got published to an impromptu song Art Gunfunkel composed on the spot in a live concert to a poem, "Bridge of Sighs," that appeared in book of poetry he wrote (Still Waters, I think). Someone in the audience called out a request that he sign their copy of that, and he sang to the lyrics of a poem in the book on the spot. I went home and made a story out of it and sent it off to a literary journal the next day.
 
All some really good ideas. Obviously, I'm not the only one who's been inspired by a song to write a story about it.

Already wrote two versions of "Home by the Sea" as Les and Dark. The song always spoke to me as a horror/comeuppance story waiting to be told, so I told it :p

Genesis' songs, I think, lend themselves particularly well to this sort of thing. "In The Air Tonight" would be another good one to turn into a story. Maybe not an erotic story, but hey, we can put a sexy spin on anything, right?

Hello again, Dark. ;)
 
All some really good ideas. Obviously, I'm not the only one who's been inspired by a song to write a story about it.



Genesis' songs, I think, lend themselves particularly well to this sort of thing. "In The Air Tonight" would be another good one to turn into a story. Maybe not an erotic story, but hey, we can put a sexy spin on anything, right?

Hello again, Dark. ;)

Mood is an important part of deciding which song I use. That's why I have a variety of music in the binder. If I'm having a bad day, I'm going to choose lyrics that touch me on an emotional level instead of something fast and upbeat.
 
Mood is an important part of deciding which song I use. That's why I have a variety of music in the binder. If I'm having a bad day, I'm going to choose lyrics that touch me on an emotional level instead of something fast and upbeat.

Oh, definitely. Dependent on mood, I'll tune Sirius into either the 80s station, Hair Nation, Jazz or New Country. But If I'm writing something with any kind of violence in it, I switch over o Ozzy's Boneyard. :p
 
I can't write to anything with lyrics. Too distracting.

I've had that happen at times, but I'm usually able to focus past the lyrics. Usually. I do like instrumentals for inspiration sometime. When writing battle scenes for various fantasy stories, I like playing the soundtrack from the original Conan movie. I love Basil Poledouris.
 
I can't write to anything with lyrics. Too distracting.

Yeah, I'm finding that. I used to have a tape player with a "karaoke" mode that would filter out a lot of the vocal track; I wish I had the same functionality today, instead of having to put together an instrumental mix.
 
Yeah, I'm finding that. I used to have a tape player with a "karaoke" mode that would filter out a lot of the vocal track; I wish I had the same functionality today, instead of having to put together an instrumental mix.

Elevator music for me. Lots of Don Gibson's "Solitudes" CDs. But even with those, when I'm writing and put music on, it's finished and I don't notice it has until hours later. I get absorbed in the writing.
 
Hi,

This is such a great idea its already been suggested and turned into a chain story thread... Its an old thread but its still active for anyone wanting to do this.

http://forum.literotica.com/showthread.php?t=639991

I added a David Knoffler song to it recently but there are some good ones there...

Haha, I posted on that thread originally, with the same idea as I mentioned above. I didn't realize I've had this idea rolling around in my skull for over three years now.
 
I've had that happen at times, but I'm usually able to focus past the lyrics. Usually. I do like instrumentals for inspiration sometime. When writing battle scenes for various fantasy stories, I like playing the soundtrack from the original Conan movie. I love Basil Poledouris.

I have to have words and it has to be heavy as hell, I have Marilyn Manson and Metallica stations.

But if I'm writing something dark I have a playlist on my ipod that features the seether songs and bummer songs like Springsteen's The River.
 
I have to have words and it has to be heavy as hell, I have Marilyn Manson and Metallica stations.

But if I'm writing something dark I have a playlist on my ipod that features the seether songs and bummer songs like Springsteen's The River.

What, no Oingo Boingo? :p

I hear ya, though. The music has to more or less match the mood of the story. I can't write something dark and depressing if there's Neil Sedaka playing . . . .
 
Video game soundtracks for me. I find Chrono Trigger, Chrono Cross, Final Fantasy VI, Dragon Quest IV, and Dragon Quest VIII to be the most productive when I'm writing.
 
What, no Oingo Boingo? :p

I hear ya, though. The music has to more or less match the mood of the story. I can't write something dark and depressing if there's Neil Sedaka playing . . . .

When I got my tattoo the girl asked what station I wanted to listen to.

I looked a her and told her Disco and she was like..."Oh, ummm, okay...."

I went as far as letting her put it on and listening to two songs before I said "Yeah, just kidding, where's the slayer?

I swear I could feel her sigh of relief on my back.
 
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