Sci-Fi/Fantasy Chain Story Idea

This is a different type of story so ideas are going to come and go. :) Here's a new schedule.


**** please note the added red line to this bunch of stuff - - I'll add key facts from author writer's work to this as the story goes. . .like a cheat sheet. ****


NEW SCHEDULE

Laresa's World Ch. 04: Famke - Black Tulip - approved on September 18th
Ch. 05 - Darknacid - submitted on September 15th
Ch. 06 - deathlynx - submit by September 19th
Ch. 07 - SEVERUSMAX - submit by September 26th
Ch. 08 - RedHairedandFriendly - submit by October 10th
***Ch. 09 - DanielleKitten - submit by October 17th*** (possible date changes)
***Ch. 10 - Darknacid - submit by October 24th
*** Ch. 11 - Black Tulip - submit by October 31*** (a maybe on a second chapter for her... ;) )
***Ch. 12 - deathlynx - submit by November 7***


Once you post you are willing to do a 2nd Chapter I'll add you to this list. :)

If you DO NOT want to write a second chapter in the story or it doesn't go into the higher chapters then please understand the chapters may not happen. Thanks

The title: Laresa's World Ch. 01: XXXXXX (Your title choice)

If you wish to submit early let me know and I can change the schedule to reflect that. With the stories jumping back and forth through time, if you submit early isn't a big issue, just please let me know if you do, or if you can't reach the schedule date.

She's pretty much a slave with powers of a Genie and once the person loses the ring, they lose her.

We'll travel through time and space.

Her Limits and some things she can do:

CAN'T alter major historical events.

She can't make anyone fall in love.

Can't bring back the dead, but if there is one breath left in the body, she can heal them.

deathlynx said:
For mine (the one you're mentioning I'd assume) reading other people is mostly about sensing overly strong desires coming from them...Simmilar to how she's dealt with some of the wishes (sensing an unspoken wish)...If it's not her master it has to be a pretty strong desire (telempathic projecting) and she doesn't have to respond to it at all...

Then again I was figuring she technically wouldn't have to respond to her Master's desire if not verbalized if she didn't want to...sort of a treat for those she likes ;)


How does one lose her: Lose the ring, have it stolen, and lie to her. I like the idea of lieing to her. Like I said you don't have to lie to her, she's going to willingly do as you ask anyway, whether she likes it or not. So lieing to her means the ring disappears, where it goes in time or space is up to you the writer. Rules can not be revealed unless the Master/Mistress asks about them.

Summening her: Twisting the ring counter-clockwise by accident, and twisting it while whispering her name on purpose.

Laresa must recouperate inside the ring sometimes, when she becomes exhausted.

She is invisible to all, unless her Master/Mistress deems her visible. So far this has been implied in some stories.

Anything else we can think of we can post here and I'll add.
 
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That's nice! Coming home from my first day at the new job to find my story is up.

:nana:

Thanks for the comments, guys/dolls. LOL

As for the horny hats ( :D ), those are historically false.

:cool:
 
Black Tulip said:
That's nice! Coming home from my first day at the new job to find my story is up.

:nana:

Thanks for the comments, guys/dolls. LOL

As for the horny hats ( :D ), those are historically false.

:cool:


WONDERFUL!!!!!! :nana: :nana: :nana: :nana:
 
RedHairedandFriendly said:
Once you post you are willing to do a 2nd Chapter I'll add you to this list. :)
Sure...Add me in for a second chapter :D

After getting a few sneak peeks of chapters. . .I am adding a few things here that will be part of Laresa's bio. . .she can develope "links" with her master/mistress, mental ones as well as slipping into them in a way that she can see and feel what they are and what someone close to her and her master/mistress are thinking and feeling.
For mine (the one you're mentioning I'd assume) reading other people is mostly about sensing overly strong desires coming from them...Simmilar to how she's dealt with some of the wishes (sensing an unspoken wish)...If it's not her master it has to be a pretty strong desire (telempathic projecting) and she doesn't have to respond to it at all...

Then again I was figuring she technically wouldn't have to respond to her Master's desire if not verbalized if she didn't want to...sort of a treat for those she likes ;)
 
deathlynx said:
Sure...Add me in for a second chapter :D


For mine (the one you're mentioning I'd assume) reading other people is mostly about sensing overly strong desires coming from them...Simmilar to how she's dealt with some of the wishes (sensing an unspoken wish)...If it's not her master it has to be a pretty strong desire (telempathic projecting) and she doesn't have to respond to it at all...

Then again I was figuring she technically wouldn't have to respond to her Master's desire if not verbalized if she didn't want to...sort of a treat for those she likes ;)


You explaination explains it better than mine. :) . . . sneaking a quote into the post. ;) :kiss:
 
Black Tulip said:
That's nice! Coming home from my first day at the new job to find my story is up.

:nana:

Thanks for the comments, guys/dolls. LOL

As for the horny hats ( :D ), those are historically false.

:cool:
Man...now I'm bummed, I had some really good fantasies whipping up about them horny hats... Couldn't you have just one little viking in a horny hat???please??? :D
 
Daniellekitten said:
Man...now I'm bummed, I had some really good fantasies whipping up about them horny hats... Couldn't you have just one little viking in a horny hat???please??? :D

Aren't you scheduled for a second chapter?
Wish all you like.

:p ;) :D
 
well, I submitted mine bright and early this morning...Who's next for me to send it off to?
 
RedHairedandFriendly said:
SEVERUSMAX is next after you. :D
Yuppers...I've sent it off to Sev...Sorry about the wrong tag style but there's so much italics int he story (telepathy, UG!) I was too lazy to change all of the "<"s to "["s ;)
 
deathlynx said:
Yuppers...I've sent it off to Sev...Sorry about the wrong tag style but there's so much italics int he story (telepathy, UG!) I was too lazy to change all of the "<"s to "["s ;)


For lit's submissions they are supposed to be < not [ only on the boards do they use [ (odd huh???) I learned that after I submitted one with [ and not < :D
 
Black Tulip said:
Aren't you scheduled for a second chapter?
Wish all you like.

:p ;) :D
My muse has gone on an extended vacation. I finished an 80,000 word novel, writing not reading, today and I can't come up with a new start to something to save my life. I'm about to climb the walls. I'm a weird type person and only happy if I'm up to my eyebrows in plotline and character development. So if anyone sees a muse with dark shadows under her eyes, could you bitch slap her and send her back??? Please???
 
Daniellekitten said:
My muse has gone on an extended vacation. I finished an 80,000 word novel, writing not reading, today and I can't come up with a new start to something to save my life. I'm about to climb the walls. I'm a weird type person and only happy if I'm up to my eyebrows in plotline and character development. So if anyone sees a muse with dark shadows under her eyes, could you bitch slap her and send her back??? Please???


Your chapter is a bit away, so don't worry. :kiss::rose: I can toss ya some ideas if you want. :)
 
RedHairedandFriendly said:
Your chapter is a bit away, so don't worry. :kiss::rose: I can toss ya some ideas if you want. :)
Oh I should be back out of, or into my rut depending upon who you are talking too. I just feel a little at loose ends right now. Writing that chapter will only take a couple of days. Right now I'm just hanging searching out an idea to write my next novel on.

But thanks Red, you're a doll.
 
Daniellekitten said:
Oh I should be back out of, or into my rut depending upon who you are talking too. I just feel a little at loose ends right now. Writing that chapter will only take a couple of days. Right now I'm just hanging searching out an idea to write my next novel on.

But thanks Red, you're a doll.


:rose: Nah, just a redhead. :D Well, you are on the schedule, till I get a definite Take me off. :kiss:
 
Daniellekitten said:
...
I just feel a little at loose ends right now
...

Isn't that a common feeling after finishing a major story?
I know it is for me.

:rose:
 
Black Tulip said:
Isn't that a common feeling after finishing a major story?
I know it is for me.

:rose:
I think us artists are a weird bunch. Oh by the way all, I had an emailed request for more Laresa stories at the other website I post to. If anyone is interested in posting their story there, they are going over really well. Let me know.
 
Just Bringing this to the top. :)

please note any added red line to this bunch of stuff - - I'll add key facts from author writer's work to this as the story goes. . .like a cheat sheet.

SCHEDULE​

Laresa's World Ch. 04: Famke - Black Tulip - approved on September 18th
Ch. 05 - Darknacid - submitted on September 15th
Ch. 06 - deathlynx - submitted on September 19th
Ch. 07 - SEVERUSMAX - submit by September 26th
Ch. 08 - RedHairedandFriendly - submit by October 10th
Ch. 09 - DanielleKitten - submit by October 17th (possible date changes)
Ch. 10 - Darknacid - submit by October 24th
Ch. 11 - Black Tulip - submit by October 31 (a maybe on a second chapter for her... ;) )
Ch. 12 - deathlynx - submit by November 7

Once you post you are willing to do a 2nd Chapter I'll add you to this list. :)

If you DO NOT want to write a second chapter in the story or it doesn't go into the higher chapters then please understand the chapters may not happen. Thanks

The title: Laresa's World Ch. 01: XXXXXX (Your title choice)
If you wish to submit early let me know and I can change the schedule to reflect that. With the stories jumping back and forth through time, if you submit early isn't a big issue, just please let me know if you do, or if you can't reach the schedule date.

Her Limits and some things she can do:

  • She's pretty much a slave with powers of a Genie and once the person loses the ring, they lose her.
  • We'll travel through time and space.
  • CAN'T alter major historical events.
  • She can't make anyone fall in love.
  • Can't bring back the dead, but if there is one breath left in the body, she can heal them.

How does one lose her:

  • Lose the ring, have it stolen, and lie to her.
  • Lieing to her makes the ring disappear, into time or across space, up to the writer.
  • So lieing to her means the ring disappears, where it goes in time or space is up to you the writer.
  • Rules can not be revealed unless the Master/Mistress asks about them.

Summening her:

  • Twisting the ring counter-clockwise by accident, and twisting it while whispering her name on purpose.
  • Laresa must recouperate inside the ring sometimes, when she becomes exhausted.
  • She is invisible to all, unless her Master/Mistress deems her visible. So far this has been implied in some stories.
  • deathlynx said:
    reading other people is mostly about sensing overly strong desires coming from them...Simmilar to how she's dealt with some of the wishes (sensing an unspoken wish)...If it's not her master it has to be a pretty strong desire (telempathic projecting) and she doesn't have to respond to it at all... Then again I was figuring she technically wouldn't have to respond to her Master's desire if not verbalized if she didn't want to...sort of a treat for those she likes

Anything else we can think of we can post here and I'll add.
 
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Black Tulip said:
Isn't that a common feeling after finishing a major story?
I know it is for me.
Personally I feelt excited and relieved...Then again I've only ever finished one major (more than 10K words or so) story :eek:

Daniellekitten said:
So if anyone sees a muse with dark shadows under her eyes, could you bitch slap her and send her back??? Please???
I tried, sorry! She beat me up, left me lying in a puddle on the side of the road, and then went after my muse...I'm not sure she'll ever be the same ;)

Daniellekitten said:
I think us artists are a weird bunch. Oh by the way all, I had an emailed request for more Laresa stories at the other website I post to. If anyone is interested in posting their story there, they are going over really well. Let me know.
Feel free to post mine when it's up! I'm always open to people reading my stuff...

Oh, and a rather battered muse has decided to take out her agression by forcing me to start writing my next chapter already... lol
 
Daniellekitten said:
I think us artists are a weird bunch. Oh by the way all, I had an emailed request for more Laresa stories at the other website I post to. If anyone is interested in posting their story there, they are going over really well. Let me know.

I got a couple of requests through my blog before mine even posted, and a couple more since as well. I've been linking them back to the chapters posted here. When I get my website updated, all the chapters on Lit will be linked from my website copies too.

I'm stuck on an emergency back-up 'net connection here, so I gotta bugger off. Long distance charges *cursing*
 
deathlynx said:
Personally I feelt excited and relieved...Then again I've only ever finished one major (more than 10K words or so) story :eek:


I tried, sorry! She beat me up, left me lying in a puddle on the side of the road, and then went after my muse...I'm not sure she'll ever be the same ;)


Feel free to post mine when it's up! I'm always open to people reading my stuff...

Oh, and a rather battered muse has decided to take out her agression by forcing me to start writing my next chapter already... lol

I'm so sorry, I swear that girl has no class. And I've tried to teach her some manners. She's supposed to ask before she does any grabassing... sigh.

I've delved deep into the depths of my computer and found an old story of mine that stalled at around 11000 words. It's now up to 21000 words and I've turned it into chapters. Another serial killerology book. I just love to delve into the mind of mad men, which could be why I married my husband?

So I'm happy again and my muse is back where she belongs, chained to my side. Thank you kindly.
 
No body tells me it is out . . . grrr wet noodle lashes!!!!!!!

please note any added red line to this bunch of stuff - - I'll add key facts from author writer's work to this as the story goes. . .like a cheat sheet.

SCHEDULE​


Laresa's World Ch. 05: Clint - Darknacid - approved on Sept. 21
Ch. 06 - deathlynx - submitted on September 19th
Ch. 07 - SEVERUSMAX - submitted on September 22nd
Ch. 08 - RedHairedandFriendly - submit by October 10th
Ch. 09 - DanielleKitten - submit by October 17th (possible date changes)
Ch. 10 - Darknacid - submit by October 24th
Ch. 11 - Black Tulip - submit by October 31 (a maybe on a second chapter for her... ;) )
Ch. 12 - deathlynx - submit by November 7

Once you post you are willing to do a 2nd Chapter I'll add you to this list. :)

If you DO NOT want to write a second chapter in the story or it doesn't go into the higher chapters then please understand the chapters may not happen. Thanks

The title: Laresa's World Ch. 01: XXXXXX (Your title choice)
If you wish to submit early let me know and I can change the schedule to reflect that. With the stories jumping back and forth through time, if you submit early isn't a big issue, just please let me know if you do, or if you can't reach the schedule date.

Her Limits and some things she can do:

  • She's pretty much a slave with powers of a Genie and once the person loses the ring, they lose her.
  • We'll travel through time and space.
  • CAN'T alter major historical events.
  • She can't make anyone fall in love.
  • Can't bring back the dead, but if there is one breath left in the body, she can heal them.

How does one lose her:

  • Lose the ring, have it stolen, and lie to her.
  • Lieing to her makes the ring disappear, into time or across space, up to the writer.
  • So lieing to her means the ring disappears, where it goes in time or space is up to you the writer.
  • Rules can not be revealed unless the Master/Mistress asks about them.

Summening her:

  • Twisting the ring counter-clockwise by accident, and twisting it while whispering her name on purpose.
  • Laresa must recouperate inside the ring sometimes, when she becomes exhausted.
  • She is invisible to all, unless her Master/Mistress deems her visible. So far this has been implied in some stories.


Anything else we can think of we can post here and I'll add.
 
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Daniellekitten said:
I think us artists are a weird bunch. Oh by the way all, I had an emailed request for more Laresa stories at the other website I post to. If anyone is interested in posting their story there, they are going over really well. Let me know.

Feel free to add my part.
It's nosediving over here, but who cares.

:D
 
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