Sci-Fi/Fantasy Chain Story Idea

[Darkniciad]

Thanks for the comments, everyone. I'm still on the lame long distance connection, so I thought I'd drop something here until I can respond to each comment.

Gotta love idiots that don't watch where they dig and destroy fiber optic cables.

 

[RedHairedandFriendly]

Thanks for the comments, everyone. I'm still on the lame long distance connection, so I thought I'd drop something here until I can respond to each comment.

Gotta love idiots that don't watch where they dig and destroy fiber optic cables.

I love idiots. . . when they work at the bank in MY favor. . .(wonders if any are working this morning) You're welcome and looking forward to more.

 

[SEVERUSMAX]

Laresa's World: Chapter 7 has been submitted.

 

[RedHairedandFriendly]

Laresa's World: Chapter 7 has been submitted.

Yippppppppeeeee!! You're early - but I knew that was coming. No worries. I may submit mine early too, since I will be busy near my submission date. Right now though the schedule stays if anyone wants to bump me back because they want to do another, feel free, just let me know.

 

[deathlynx]

Well, I just finished writing a chapter last night, so long as I can get someone to edit it'd be ready to go pretty much any time...

And I'll warn, my muse was apparently in a foul mood over being beaten up

 

[RedHairedandFriendly]

Well, I just finished writing a chapter last night, so long as I can get someone to edit it'd be ready to go pretty much any time...

And I'll warn, my muse was apparently in a foul mood over being beaten up

Fill free to send it to me if you like. Foul moods are okay. lol.

 

[Darkniciad]

I'd better get my butt in gear and get the next chapter rolling. The sled dogs are starting to howl at the delay in my head anyhow

Just wrapping up Danica now... nervous as blazes. The fanbase is pretty outspoken, and if I don't end it just right, they're going to let me know *laugh*

I've got to leave just enough dangling threads to lead into Book II, without having them breathing down my neck in the meantime too.

The things I get myself into...

A little progress, they're at least testing the bleedin' lines now, so maybe I'll have real internet before the night is over.

 

[RedHairedandFriendly]

Chapter Changes !!!!!

please note any added red line to this bunch of stuff - - I'll add key facts from author writer's work to this as the story goes. . .like a cheat sheet.

SCHEDULE​

Laresa's World Ch. 05: Clint - Darknacid - approved on Sept. 21
Ch. 06 - deathlynx - submitted on September 19th
Ch. 07 - SEVERUSMAX - submitted on September 22nd
Ch. 08 - deathlynx - submit by October 10th
Ch. 09 - RedHairedandFriendly submit by Oct. 13th
Ch. 10 - DanielleKitten - submit by October 17th (possible date changes)
Ch. 11 - Darknacid - submit by October 24th
Ch. 12 - Black Tulip - submit by October 31 (a maybe on a second chapter for her... )
Ch. 13 - deathlynx - submit by November 7

Once you post you are willing to do a 2nd Chapter I'll add you to this list.

If you DO NOT want to write a second chapter in the story or it doesn't go into the higher chapters then please understand the chapters may not happen. Thanks

The title: Laresa's World Ch. 01: XXXXXX (Your title choice)
If you wish to submit early let me know and I can change the schedule to reflect that. With the stories jumping back and forth through time, if you submit early isn't a big issue, just please let me know if you do, or if you can't reach the schedule date.

Her Limits and some things she can do:

• She's pretty much a slave with powers of a Genie and once the person loses the ring, they lose her.

• We'll travel through time and space.

• CAN'T alter major historical events.

• She can't make anyone fall in love.

• Can't bring back the dead, but if there is one breath left in the body, she can heal them.

How does one lose her:

• Lose the ring, have it stolen, and lie to her.

• Lieing to her makes the ring disappear, into time or across space, up to the writer.

• So lieing to her means the ring disappears, where it goes in time or space is up to you the writer.

• Rules can not be revealed unless the Master/Mistress asks about them.

Summening her:

• Twisting the ring counter-clockwise by accident, and twisting it while whispering her name on purpose.

• Laresa must recouperate inside the ring sometimes, when she becomes exhausted.

• She is invisible to all, unless her Master/Mistress deems her visible. So far this has been implied in some stories.

Anything else we can think of we can post here and I'll add.

 

[cocoprincess]

Hello there...

Hi everyone, I just wanted to say I've been following both this discussion as well as the chapters as they've been posted, and IMHO everyone is doing a really awesome job.

I was actually really tempted to join in, but as I'm a noob who hasn't submitted anything as yet (with a full time commitment to university) I chickened out in the end. It is a really awesome story and I wanted to thank y'all for your art pieces.

 

[RedHairedandFriendly]

Hi everyone, I just wanted to say I've been following both this discussion as well as the chapters as they've been posted, and IMHO everyone is doing a really awesome job.

I was actually really tempted to join in, but as I'm a noob who hasn't submitted anything as yet (with a full time commitment to university) I chickened out in the end. It is a really awesome story and I wanted to thank y'all for your art pieces.

Thanks for the compliments cocoprincess and if you do decide you'd like to join in and submit a story, perhaps writing it as time allows, let me know I'm sure we can work you in, especially since you've followed, both the stories and the thread, you'd already be up to date with everything. Tseranc was a noob submitter too, and I think he did an awesome job. So, if you do think you want to try it, write something out and send it to me. We can go on from there. Either way, I'm glad to know you are enjoying the series. ~ Red.

 

[deathlynx]

Well, I'd submitted a number of stories in general but I'm still very much a noob myself...Not to mention this is my first chain story...but the nice thing about it is that it can be disconnected stories...much easier to write a story that can be slipped in (mmmmmmm, I like the sound of that ) anywhere along the line...

Feel free to join...If you're nervouse simply send it off to someone you trust to edit for you...I certainly did, both chapters so far, and don't regret it in the slightest...

Thanks Red

 

[RedHairedandFriendly]

Well, I'd submitted a number of stories in general but I'm still very much a noob myself...Not to mention this is my first chain story...but the nice thing about it is that it can be disconnected stories...much easier to write a story that can be slipped in (mmmmmmm, I like the sound of that ) anywhere along the line...

Feel free to join...If you're nervouse simply send it off to someone you trust to edit for you...I certainly did, both chapters so far, and don't regret it in the slightest...

Thanks Red

You're welcome and I second everything you said. . . This story is fun and I'm not quite ready to see it face a conclusion. . .in time perhaps we'll steer it toward her freedom or something more permanent, but I don't feel it is time for that yet.

 

[Darkniciad]

Downloaded the free 30 day trial of People PC so I could get back online without dialing long distance. Quite frankly, it does not impress me. Feels like an only slightly less bloated AOL - Icky. Here's to hoping the numbskulls get that fiber optic cable fixed soon so I can get back on my regular connection.

It at least let me do my research for my next chapter. I needed some good names and a bit of background information. I've got it underway now at last.

I was goofing around ( in addition to the nearly 200k completion of Danica. Book I is finally DONE! ) while I had no net to work with. I'm no elite image editor, and neither girl matches right, but it gave me something to pass the time anyhow.

Title of second chapter subject to change

Warning: Nekkidness Not safe for work, children, or clergy.

 

[RedHairedandFriendly]

Check Your Chapters Before Submitting. . .

please note any added red line to this bunch of stuff - - I'll add key facts from author writer's work to this as the story goes. . .like a cheat sheet.

Please double check your chapter numbers when submitting your story. Thanks - Red.

SCHEDULE​

Laresa's World Ch. 06: Christine - deathlynx - approved on September 26th
Ch. 07 - SEVERUSMAX - submitted on September 22nd
Ch. 08 - deathlynx - submit by October 10th
Ch. 09 - RedHairedandFriendly submit by Oct. 13th
Ch. 10 - DanielleKitten - submit by October 17th (possible date changes)
Ch. 11 - Darknacid - submit by October 24th
Ch. 12 - Black Tulip - submit by October 31
Ch. 13 - deathlynx - submit by November 7

Once you post you are willing to do a 2nd Chapter I'll add you to this list.

If you DO NOT want to write a second chapter in the story or it doesn't go into the higher chapters then please understand the chapters may not happen. Thanks

The title: Laresa's World Ch. 01: XXXXXX (Your title choice)
If you wish to submit early let me know and I can change the schedule to reflect that. With the stories jumping back and forth through time, if you submit early isn't a big issue, just please let me know if you do, or if you can't reach the schedule date.

Her Limits and some things she can do:

• She's pretty much a slave with powers of a Genie and once the person loses the ring, they lose her.

• We'll travel through time and space.

• CAN'T alter major historical events.

• She can't make anyone fall in love.

• Can't bring back the dead, but if there is one breath left in the body, she can heal them.

How does one lose her:

• Lose the ring, have it stolen, and lie to her.

• Lieing to her makes the ring disappear, into time or across space, up to the writer.

• So lieing to her means the ring disappears, where it goes in time or space is up to you the writer.

• Rules can not be revealed unless the Master/Mistress asks about them.

Summening her:

• Twisting the ring counter-clockwise by accident, and twisting it while whispering her name on purpose.

• Laresa must recouperate inside the ring sometimes, when she becomes exhausted.

• She is invisible to all, unless her Master/Mistress deems her visible. So far this has been implied in some stories.

Anything else we can think of we can post here and I'll add.[/QUOTE]

 

[deathlynx]

Woohoo! Funny thing is I find out it's approved here

I'm thinking of submitting when Sev's gets approved...Or should I hold out longer? What do people think?

 

[RedHairedandFriendly]

Woohoo! Funny thing is I find out it's approved here

I'm thinking of submitting when Sev's gets approved...Or should I hold out longer? What do people think?

Hey deathlynx.... You should have looked at the schedule before you posted. . .I had you inserted after SEVERUSMAX after you confessed to me of having another ready to go.

 

[Darkniciad]

I'm still waiting for someone to broach the subject of how Laresa will react if she has a Mistress who is attracted to her *laugh*

That potential is present in any of my possible third chapter storylines, as they all involve Mistresses as opposed to Masters.

I'm personally getting a deep sense of reluctance, dancing on the line with squeamishness whenever I ask the Laresa living in my head about it. Not really critical, as I still need to finish my second anyhow, but what say the Laresas in everyone else's minds? Or has anyone broached the subject already in as-yet-unreleased chapters?

 

[RedHairedandFriendly]

I'm still waiting for someone to broach the subject of how Laresa will react if she has a Mistress who is attracted to her *laugh*

That potential is present in any of my possible third chapter storylines, as they all involve Mistresses as opposed to Masters.

I'm personally getting a deep sense of reluctance, dancing on the line with squeamishness whenever I ask the Laresa living in my head about it. Not really critical, as I still need to finish my second anyhow, but what say the Laresas in everyone else's minds? Or has anyone broached the subject already in as-yet-unreleased chapters?

I must have missed the "laugh" post? ? ? Ohhhh wait you mean... you are laughing right... duh I am lost. . .

I personally don't think Laresa would have a problem with males or females. She's there to please and it is in her nature to do that.

 

[Darkniciad]

I must have missed the "laugh" post? ? ? Ohhhh wait you mean... you are laughing right... duh I am lost. . .

I personally don't think Laresa would have a problem with males or females. She's there to please and it is in her nature to do that.

The part of her that's a genie, yes, but she's a woman too. She doesn't have to necessarily like anything she does, regardless of whether she's compelled to do it by her enslavement.

Centuries of servitude have probably dulled her inhibitions quite a bit - but I just get a sense of reluctance from her in taking that step. May be something she will get past once she's in the situation, but I just feel the hesitation when she is first confronted with it.

 

[RedHairedandFriendly]

The part of her that's a genie, yes, but she's a woman too. She doesn't have to necessarily like anything she does, regardless of whether she's compelled to do it by her enslavement.

Centuries of servitude have probably dulled her inhibitions quite a bit - but I just get a sense of reluctance from her in taking that step. May be something she will get past once she's in the situation, but I just feel the hesitation when she is first confronted with it.

Any woman would. . .so if you are feeling the reluctance than you are probably writing her first experience with a woman. . .I don't believe that she'd have it in any of the stories that have been written, because she's been doing this for a long time.

 

[Tseranc]

personally, the laresa i think i know (as much as a guy could hope to know a woman, real or not). i think would be at least accepting of the idea and situation. We've seen that she does get some pleasure and satisfaction from pleasing her master, at least if they have decent intentions toward her as well. So i see no reason why she would feel the same professionial joy in pleasing a woman. Maybe that could grow into something more personal and profound, and maybe not, but the original satisfaction of a "job well done" i think woudl be somewhat universal to her.

 

[Darkniciad]

Very good points, both of you. I just want to make sure that my Laresa meshes up as well as possible with everyone else's when I'm writing a new chapter. Little points like this can have threads that run through the whole makeup of her personality. I'm just using these Qs and musings as a means to examine those threads, in addition to the ones revealed in the completed chapters.

Everyone else feel free to chime in

 

[Guest]

Deathlynx..I read your story and loved it but didn't get a chance to comment. My mom got rushed in for emergency surgery this morning and I've been all over hell and back today. Just wanted to let you know that it was fantastic.

 

[RedHairedandFriendly]

Deathlynx..I read your story and loved it but didn't get a chance to comment. My mom got rushed in for emergency surgery this morning and I've been all over hell and back today. Just wanted to let you know that it was fantastic.

I hope she is okay.

 

[SEVERUSMAX]

I hope she is okay.

I second that. Hugs for Dani. Sorry to hear.