Sci-Fi/Fantasy Chain Story Idea

[RedHairedandFriendly]

Danger, Danger, Wil Robinson! *laugh*

If it doesn't lend itself to sex, then that's the way it is. My Christmas story turned out the same way, and it's suffering for it despite the disclaimer to that fact right from the get-go, but that was the story I was telling, and I told it, dagnabbit!

Yep, and that is the way this is flowing right now. lol. . .Oh well, as long as I get across what I want that is all that matters. lol

 

[deathlynx]

Well, I hope whoever's after you (Tseranc?) has some in it 'cause Laresa's gonna be a honry little hunny

 

[RedHairedandFriendly]

Well, I hope whoever's after you (Tseranc?) has some in it 'cause Laresa's gonna be a honry little hunny

LOL. . .You know I just can't see sex in this chapter. I'll live if it doesn't earn an H. So far Tseranc is following me, he's still playing Pirate somewhere in Texas right now, but last he said he thought the 21st would work for him.

 

[deathlynx]

Sex isn't nescessary for every story...And I certainly can't wait to check it out!

 

[RedHairedandFriendly]

Thanks.

 

[Darkniciad]

I finally got my ducks in a row and got launched into my next chapter, so I'll probably be getting ahold of Deathlynx soon for some watcher conversations, and Red because of something else I'm planning to do in this chapter. Once I actually get the first few words of something down, it moves fairly quickly, and my editor keeps asking when it's coming too *laugh*

 

[deathlynx]

I finally got my ducks in a row and got launched into my next chapter, so I'll probably be getting ahold of Deathlynx soon for some watcher conversations, and Red because of something else I'm planning to do in this chapter. Once I actually get the first few words of something down, it moves fairly quickly, and my editor keeps asking when it's coming too *laugh*

Sounds good...You can IM, Email or PM me as you see fit

 

[RedHairedandFriendly]

I finally got my ducks in a row and got launched into my next chapter, so I'll probably be getting ahold of Deathlynx soon for some watcher conversations, and Red because of something else I'm planning to do in this chapter. Once I actually get the first few words of something down, it moves fairly quickly, and my editor keeps asking when it's coming too *laugh*

No worries. . . I'm 95% agreeable to just about anything when it comes to the Laresa ideas.

 

[RedHairedandFriendly]

Schedule Changes and Chapter Changes!!!!

please note any added red line to this bunch of stuff - - I'll add key facts from author writer's work to this as the story goes. . .like a cheat sheet.

Please double check your chapter numbers when submitting your story. Thanks - Red.

SCHEDULE​

Laresa's World Ch. 14: Alexis/Clay - RedHairedandFriendly - approved Nov. 18th
Ch. 15 - Darkinciad - submit by November 28 (Dark Master) - confirmed
Ch. 16 - SEVERUSMAX - submit by December 6 - confirmed
Ch. 17 - RedHairedandFriendly - submit by December 13th
Ch. 18 - Black Tulip - submit by December 20 - confirmed
Ch. 19 - deathlynx - submit by December 27
Ch. 20 - Tseranc - submit by January 3rd

If you DO NOT want to write more chapters in the story let me know or if it doesn't go into the higher chapters then please understand the chapters may not happen. Thanks

The title: Laresa's World Ch. 01: XXXXXX (Your title choice)
If you wish to submit early let me know and I can change the schedule to reflect that. With the stories jumping back and forth through time, if you submit early isn't a big issue, just please let me know if you do, or if you can't reach the schedule date.

Laresa's Description

Time Travel Dates​

Her Limits and some things she can do:

• She's pretty much a slave with powers of a Genie and once the person loses the ring, they lose her.

• We'll travel through time and space.

• CAN'T alter major historical events.

• She can't make anyone fall in love.

• Can't bring back the dead, but if there is one breath left in the body, she can heal them.

• A Genie only knows as much as they have seen, been taught, or are allowed through the powers of the rules/laws written long ago.

How does one lose her:

• Lose the ring, have it stolen, and lie to her, ask for a wish she can't do. (the ones where she'd break the rules)

• Lieing to her makes the ring disappear, into time or across space, up to the writer.

• So lieing to her means the ring disappears, where it goes in time or space is up to you the writer.

• Rules can not be revealed unless the Master/Mistress asks about them, or if the Genie likes a Master/Mistress, they can reveal them

Summening her:

• Twisting the ring counter-clockwise by accident, and twisting it while whispering her name on purpose.

• Laresa must recouperate inside the ring sometimes, when she becomes exhausted.

• She is invisible to all, unless her Master/Mistress deems her visible. So far this has been implied in some stories.

Death/Freedom of a Genie & other oddities:

(this is a new category - - so it is open to discussion.)

• A Genie doesn't know how they are ultimately set free.

• A Master/Mistress can not "wish" their genie free.

• Death of a genie - the destruction of the home (ring, bottle, medallion, bracelet. . .whatever they live in)

• No more than two genies per Master/Mistress

• Wishes that involve the actual desire of a Genie transcend from Master/Mistress throughout the genie's life.

• Wishes made by Masters/Mistresses transcend through time also. (Ones that effect the Master/Mistress directly as well as the world itself.

• Characters in the stories can not wish yourself to be a Genie - So there are no new Genies at this time.

• The Genies all came from Laresa's People and were created by Shaman's (obviously the most skilled of the people) - Through sacrifices that were outlined in Tseranc's chapter 3.

Anything else we can think of we can post here and I'll add.

 

[deathlynx]

So either I've found myself a Troll or poor Laresa has...LoL...
And to think, If I hadn't made the comment at the beginning thewy probably wouldn't have thought to complain about the Dialect... (Been deleted but it said "A Dark Ages story needs Dialect!" and 1 bombed it)...

 

[Black Tulip]

LOL. . .You know I just can't see sex in this chapter. I'll live if it doesn't earn an H. ..

Readers could surprise you. LOL
My second Laresa chapter is not exactly hot either, but it's doing a lot better than the first.

And I love your chapter.

 

[RedHairedandFriendly]

So either I've found myself a Troll or poor Laresa has...LoL...
And to think, If I hadn't made the comment at the beginning thewy probably wouldn't have thought to complain about the Dialect... (Been deleted but it said "A Dark Ages story needs Dialect!" and 1 bombed it)...

I think folks are just 1 bomb happy. I got one fresh out of the gate on my Ch. 5 for my senator series. . .no comment though. *sigh*

 

[RedHairedandFriendly]

Readers could surprise you. LOL
My second Laresa chapter is not exactly hot either, but it's doing a lot better than the first.

And I love your chapter.

Thanks. I appreciate you taking a look at it.

 

[Darkniciad]

13 is RVCd, and all links updated

 

[Tseranc]

ok folks, i just got done with a week of pure hell, and i'm trying to force my muse to return to work now...but I just don't know that i can make the deadline. if there are more people waiting and would like to go ahead of me, please, by all means do. I'll just write that the thing when i can write it well.

Sorry again for flaking out

8^(

 

[RedHairedandFriendly]

ok folks, i just got done with a week of pure hell, and i'm trying to force my muse to return to work now...but I just don't know that i can make the deadline. if there are more people waiting and would like to go ahead of me, please, by all means do. I'll just write that the thing when i can write it well.

Sorry again for flaking out

8^(

Hugs to you. . .the story is always here waiting for you. . .I'll slide you to the bottom and put you there.

Schedule:

https://forum.literotica.com/showpost.php?p=20048129&postcount=459

 

[Darkniciad]

My story is fully formed in my head, and I can't get my CHILD to cooperate with me to let me write. Little pain has went and messed up his sleeping schedule, and so I've had about 3 hours of sleep a night all week.

I've worked on it a bit, but my brain is just too addled and the dialogue isn't coming out natural. The characters are all sleepwalking in my head on me.

I'll get it together in time, though, if I have to duct tape this child to the bed for a night or two. I've got the weekend to work with, so I can crash out whenever he takes a nap to get some real sleep. All week I've been busy slinging boxes of Gatorade at work while the little terror naps away, ready to keep me up to the gawdawful hours in zombie mode.

 

[RedHairedandFriendly]

My story is fully formed in my head, and I can't get my CHILD to cooperate with me to let me write. Little pain has went and messed up his sleeping schedule, and so I've had about 3 hours of sleep a night all week.

I've worked on it a bit, but my brain is just too addled and the dialogue isn't coming out natural. The characters are all sleepwalking in my head on me.

I'll get it together in time, though, if I have to duct tape this child to the bed for a night or two. I've got the weekend to work with, so I can crash out whenever he takes a nap to get some real sleep. All week I've been busy slinging boxes of Gatorade at work while the little terror naps away, ready to keep me up to the gawdawful hours in zombie mode.

I didn't change the dates, just the chapter numbers, so if you can't submit yours before the 28th then you don't have to either. Tseranc's date was the 21st and if you can meet it great, if not that is okay too. Just have fun and enjoy yourself. . . once you get the kiddo to sleep.

 

[deathlynx]

Hey Dark, if it would help, feel free to bounce ideas and whatnot off me...I know you mentioned it might contain more of the Society of Djiin...

 

[RedHairedandFriendly]

Dark if you're going to follow me, I can send you my chapter, or you can wait till it comes out. According to my "view submissions page" it has been approved on the 18th of November, so it'll be out on Saturday.

 

[Darkniciad]

Since it'll be out on Saturday, I'll just catch it then, Red. With a little luck, I'll have picked up some sleep by then.

I'll certainly be bouncing once I finish the scene I'm struggling through right now, and the one that follows. They're deeply tied to the Society.

 

[RedHairedandFriendly]

Since it'll be out on Saturday, I'll just catch it then, Red. With a little luck, I'll have picked up some sleep by then.

I'll certainly be bouncing once I finish the scene I'm struggling through right now, and the one that follows. They're deeply tied to the Society.

Cool. . .I had a reader email me and say we need to consider doing more blending with the stories like we have in a few of them. I didn't in mine, but I think I may consider doing that a bit more in the future.

 

[Darkniciad]

We've all sort of been getting that theme running anyhow. A lot of the stories now are mentioning past events, even from outside their stories. We've got other genies starting to pop in, hints at the Society, you're building toward her reasons for wanting to be free...

Mine is going to move all of that forward just a bit more than we have in previous chapters. I'm trying to get all those threads to cross, shine a light on them, and then let them unravel just a tiny bit. If we keep drawing all those threads together with greater frequency, we'll keep the proper cadence to build it up in the last couple of chapters before the conclusion.

We don't want to fight too hard to have everyone keep every thread of the greater plot going, because that will stifle some of the creativity and variety that is making this story so popular. We just need to keep the mentions up, and every so often really highlight them, until we decide we're ready to move toward the finale. The cadence we're setting is very similar to how I wrote Danica, with the greater plot just leaping out there late and showing giving everyone that "ohh..." feeling when they remembered the subtle hints early on.

Anyhow, going to take a nap now that the boy is on the bus, and then try to get some sleep this weekend so I can get Deified down on paper and ready for "bouncing" *laugh*

 

[Guest]

Hey Red, I hate to have to pull out after saying I'd do another chapter...but I just can't right now. I have way too many things to get done on other fronts and a big date in January to get ready for. I'm sorry. Hope you understand.

 

[RedHairedandFriendly]

Hey Red, I hate to have to pull out after saying I'd do another chapter...but I just can't right now. I have way too many things to get done on other fronts and a big date in January to get ready for. I'm sorry. Hope you understand.

But of course. No need to apologize. Just know you are more than welcome to come back anytime.