Progress so far...

[paradisetitty]

I've just uploaded my 5th story under the name paradisetitty. I've gotten some OK vote scores so far but I'm looking for that one missing ingredient that might push the rating up just a little bit more!

the latest story is called Two Wrongs Do Make A Right. It was an attempt to put the things I'd learned about erotica together to make something...well erotic and maybe even create worthy wank material.

If anyone would be kind enough to cast an eye over my writings i'd love to know whether I'm missing something.

Thanks

P.T

 

[sr71plt]

If you provide a direct link, you'll get more readers going there from here.

 

[paradisetitty]

http://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=1119425&page=submissions

There you go. Thanks.