Now isn't that special ...

[Isabella Thorne]

Well ... i guess it was bound to happen ... my first negative feedback ...

i'd like to share with you an anonymous feedback email i just received ... the creep, of course. did not have the guts to leave a return address ...

WTF IS YOUR PROBLEM. THAT COME TOGETHER SHIT. THE BEATLES RULE AND THEY DIDN'T KNOCK UP SOME DUMBASS SLUT LIKE YOU (NOT THAT YOKO IS BETTER).

that story was a true personal fantasy i've mine ... last time i looked fantasies were just that ... fantasies ... of course the Beatles never knocked me up ...

jezus fucking christ ... what is your problem you asshole??? ... it's called a fantasy ...

and i am a huge Beatles fan ...
________________________
Come together right now over me.
~The Beatles~

 

[KillerMuffin]

You aren't alone, Izz my darling. There is fraternization available...

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=25276

Smooches.

Woah, are those your nipples or are you just happy to see me?

 

[Isabella Thorne]

hee hee Muffy ... i am always glad to see you ... you know that, darling ...

thank you ...

 

[KillerMuffin]

Chanmanehyo darlin. And don't listen to that twit. Obviously she's incredibly jealous otherwise she wouldn't have felt the need to personally attack you. Perhaps her fantasy life isn't as rich and fulfilling as vicariously living yours?

 

[Isabella Thorne]

that's funny you assumed it was a female ...

i thought it was a male ... ????

ahhhhh the sweet mystery of anonymity ... not ...

 

[Gilly Bean]

That sucks! I have gotten bad votes (lots of 1's) but all the feedback I have ever gotten is good feed back.

I really don't think I like the anonymous feedback feature, anymore then I like it that people hide behind Unregistered.

 

[KillerMuffin]

What man would get offended by the Beatles "knocking up some dumbass slut?" Men would be more offended by the Beatles fucking than by the pregnancy thing, I would think.

 

[Shy Tall Guy]

That sucks! I have gotten bad votes (lots of 1's) but all the feedback I have ever gotten is good feed back.

I really don't think I like the anonymous feedback feature, anymore then I like it that people hide behind Unregistered.

Gilly - they are just jealous of your obviously superior writing ability. Like I said, it is very good, almost professional level writing and story telling, and take that from someone who has read a lot and made his living at writing.

 

[Isabella Thorne]

What man would get offended by the Beatles "knocking up some dumbass slut?" Men would be more offended by the Beatles fucking than by the pregnancy thing, I would think.

ohhh yea but when i read their "knocking up some dumbass slut" comment, Muffy ... i did not think they were referring to getting me pregnant ... cause well ... that didn't happen in my story ... in fact that wouldn't happen in any fantasy of mine ... lol ...

i think this sorry excuse for a male / female was referring to the Beatles fucking moi ...

 

[Gilly Bean]

Gilly - they are just jealous of your obviously superior writing ability. Like I said, it is very good, almost professional level writing and story telling, and take that from someone who has read a lot and made his living at writing.

Thank you very much. I appreciate hearing feedback like that.

I now need to get off my duff and finish writing that story.

 

[Bob Peale]

Now you've really lost your virginity

So far, my favorire Anonymous feedback was froma guy who, as he read each chapter of League Night sent me a note telling me how much he hoped the woman's husband caught her and beat everybody's ass, then got mad when the "slut got away with it".

Baking powder? Exsqueeze me?

 

[Debbie]

I know we can turn off the feedback if we want to but I like getting feedback as long as it does not contain nasty, bad words.

I have had ones like 'you stupid fucking bitch I don't spend hours downloading a story to find that you haven't even fucking finished it'
'Scuse me? I don't have any unfinished stories at Lit. I do have a Christmas poem that states it is yet to be completed! It says right at the bottom to be completed (with Christmas coming up soon would be a good time to get back to it ! )

The ones I truly hate are ones like these,' Hey you fucking bitch your writing is fucking trash.'

Or like Isabella Thorne said, 'WTF' I mean come on! Is this sort of talk necessary?
So, you don't like a story that you read for FREE and you want your money's worth?

Thanks for the link to your negative feedback commentary killermuffin, I really enjoyed that you shared you too have felt Mr. Suck's wrath and email poison. It can feel like a very personal attack.
I wish I could say WTF , laugh and get on with it. I am getting better though.

 

[juicylips]

Now you've really lost your virginity

My god, Bob,....would you PLEASE get rid of that av!!!

I keep having automatic reactions, like my legs opening and mouth drooling, and lips smacking...lots of shivering also...

So, please, for my healths' sake...

Cassidy

 

[Isabella Thorne]

ahhhh misery loves company ...

thank you so much ... all of ya ... for your support ...

i love what you said, Bobby ... that now i've really lost my virginity ... makes me feel like one of the gang now ... lol ... and makes me feel not so bad now ...

and yea that was pretty rude, eh Debbie? that person called me a dumbass slut ... i mean WTF? ...

i'll admit i am somewhat of a slut ... lol ... but a dumbass? never ...

 

[ReallyOldLady]

they were referring to getting me pregnant ... cause well ... in fact that wouldn't happen in any fantasy of mine ... lol ...

This deserves to be repeated. And it probably can be repeated by most of the women (and men!) who enjoy this site.

Even though there are websites about orgasm during labor, I (personally) just don't buy it.

http://unassistedchildbirth.com/erotica.htm