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[Guest]

After lurking around CHYOO for a while I thought I might join in the fun.

I've had this story sitting in Chyoo for a while now. Since the site hasn't been updated in a while, I'm posting a link to it here.

http://www.chyoo.com:81/index.php/main.story.cover/2420

I know, it's only two threads long. I have several ideas on where to go from there, but I wanted to get some feedback and/or thread submissions first. Both are very welcome ...

In addition, since I'm in dire need of writing practice, point me towards one of your stories and I'll add a thread to it. You're certainly welcome to edit/comment on whatever I submit to your heart's content.

-mirrors

 

[lostandfounder]

Hey mirrors, only two threads long? I checked out the story and you must be using a different number system than I

You've got some got a good start, in my opinion. Some good visuals and an easy to read style. Personally, I like threads that are a little bit longer and flesh out the story some more.

If you want to, you are welcome to add something to either of
my stories .

I'm glad a new name is aboard. I just hope they update within the next decade or so and that some more new stories become offical.

L&F

 

[mirrors2]

Alright, after a few problems getting set up on the BBoards I have a new (but similar) username. I'm still "mirrors" on CHYOO, though.

And I *will* start putting some new threads onto my story!

Lostandfounder:
Thanks for the reply. I agree that my threads could be longer - it's just going to take a bit of practice.

Thank you to those who have checked out my story and voted on what I have so far...!

-mirrors2
(aka mirrors)

 

[mirrors2]

Alright. One more thread added to the "Remember how we talked about roleplaying?" storyline. Getting easier with practice...

 

[jakelyon]

Good Start

I really like this story and I will work up some threads to add. This is one of those stories that could really go anywhere, at least if you are willing to let it develop in ways you don't expect.

 

[mirrors2]

Re: Good Start

I really like this story and I will work up some threads to add. This is one of those stories that could really go anywhere, at least if you are willing to let it develop in ways you don't expect.

Thanks...!

I wrote the mugger storyline first because I wanted to show that I was okay with odd directions. I know I would be hesitant to write a "some guy shows up and fucks your girlfriend" thread in someone else's story, if there wasn't a lead-in already written.

So, let this be my official declaration that unexpected plot twists are acceptable.

 

[mirrors2]

Excellent. My story has been approved. Take a look, everyone...!

(happy, happy, happy)