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[firmbutgentle]

Hi all!
First time writing a short story (about 9k words) in the BDSM category. Explores the relationship between a domme and a sub on their first encounter.

Mistress Beatrix

Would love to hear some feedback - what worked, what didn't etc...
Had a lot of fun writing it! Hope you enjoy it

I really enjoyed it. It was very sexy, but I also liked the realism (“It chafed like a bitch”) and the development of the characters. It’s the same thing I aim for in my writing because it’s much more erotic to know not only what is happening, but why it’s happening and to whom.

I’ll check out your other work too but will we get to read more about Beatrix and Holly?

 

[LIDiver]

I’ll check out yours, tell me if u like mine, please.
https://literotica.com/s/torys-emergence

I realize this post sounds like pandering!
My intention was to send it privately to Jackie. I apologize.

 

[thebobber326]

Story about a former dominatrix getting used by a frat house. It is a side story of my "Grace Breaks Caitlin" series
https://www.literotica.com/s/graces-night-at-omega-nu

 

[RelentlessOnanism]

My latest story has just been published…

https://www.literotica.com/s/incest-hotel-ch-03

It's another chapter in my Incest Hotel series. It's a self-contained story, so you don't need to have read any of the earlier chapters.

It's about a football coach who has an unusual technique for motivating his players…a technique that involves the cheerleading squad.

I hope you enjoy it.

 

[AWhoopsieDaisy]

I wrote a gay slow burn romance.

Home Run

 

[NakedNymph]

I wrote a gay slow burn romance.

Home Run

I'm on the first page. I feel the power of anime coursing through my veins. The aesthetic opening narration about something from everyday life that will tie back into the main theme by the end (I assume). Cutting to an alarm clock and our protagonist reluctantly getting out of bed, getting into uniform, bantering with their wholesome parental figures, heading out the door, and running out Only thing missing is a piece of bread in Jun's mouth and a J-pop OP that starts after he heads out

I also really appreciate how within the first page it takes a generic porn plot, ruthlessly and violently exposes it as unhealthy and horrific outside of its specific horny heteronormative context, subverts it, and uses it as character development.

Which is to say that I don't have time to read it all right now but I will come back later today and finish it, and so should you [anyone reading this].

 

[DuranceVile]

The Goblin's Gorl, Chapter 4

Fezzik and his slave-gorl finally reach his home. And then go shopping.

Rather more sex than in the other chapters, which were originally posted on DeviantArt (and thus had to be more bondage oriented).

 

[Ashlight]

In a fit of delirium while I was procrastinating, I wrote a post-apocalyptic zombie story based on a Japanese webnovel I read long ago. Hit submit without much editing or revision, and then promptly forgot about it for a week. Here it is: https://literotica.com/s/at-worlds-end-pt-01

It actually got more attention than I ever imagined possible for something like this, but now I want to know why. What's the good, what's the bad, and everything in between. I've since wrote a chapter 2, and would be much obliged if anyone was willing to offer feedback. This is my first piece of writing that I've published online in any capacity, and I'm eager to be shredded.

 

[Steele_Pen]

Hey everyone, newly returned to this site and slowly churning out a dark heroine peril story I've been working on for a while. First two chapters are ready and I would appreciate comments/reviews - thanks!
https://literotica.com/s/ch-01-the-golden-child
https://literotica.com/s/ch-02-the-devil-and-miss-jonze

 

[Truncated_elf]

Hey everyone, I'm kinda new to the site and ended up writing a few stories over the past two weeks. They're mostly maternal spankings focused tales and I'm debating if there's anything I can continue on with. Any feedback will be appreciated!

https://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=6557873&page=submissions

 

[ofbuttons]

Hi all - just wanted to advertise my first story on the site, Mistaken by Daddy. It's a forced-gay noncon-y tale about a man whose identity gets confused at a kink club, and is subjected to the whims of a dom he didn't count on getting. You can find the series here: https://www.literotica.com/series/se/481170032

The fourth and likely last part will be up over the next week, publishing turn-over permitting.

 

[JuanSeiszFitzHall]

Posted today in Group Sex is “An Ace Can Be High Or Low.

https://www.literotica.com/s/an-ace-can-be-high-or-low

Dev is a single male American, still young but with enough experience to wonder if he might be asexual. He is approached by two friends who are, like him, unattached. Gail asks Dev to join Norm to give her a three-way, so she can check that off her list before getting serious about the rest of her life. Dev is intrigued enough to say yes, while wondering how intrigued he’ll be when the three bodies converge. This is a stand-alone story, 9400-plus words.

 

[ofbuttons]

First part of my new series is up: https://literotica.com/s/into-the-dog-house-ch-01

Gregory delves into puppyplay to surprise his wife, and is surprised in turn when Rachel decides she would prefer an obedient dog for a husband. A reluctance story.

 

[sonofsolstice]

The first two chapters of my first Literotica story are published. I'm blown away by the initial reaction.

https://www.literotica.com/s/the-tattooed-gentleman-ch-01
https://www.literotica.com/s/the-tattooed-gentleman-ch-02

More to come, but as I get deeper into the plot I'm I'm wishing I'd produced an outline. Now that two chapters are published, if the story takes an unexpected turn I have to make sure nothing I've written in the earlier chapters is incompatible with what I want to write next.

 

[firmbutgentle]

Hello! I am excited that the first full chapter of my series has been published and getting a good response. It’s about the development of the Master/slave relationship between the two characters who feature in most of my stories: Taking Her Breath Away.

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[K.A. Ryde]

Hey dudes, I have a new story called Spanking The Tutor where a housewife spanks her kids' incompetent tutor. I've definitely fallen headfirst into the spanking niche by this point - really need to branch back out again.

https://literotica.com/s/spanking-the-tutor

 

[thebobber326]

https://www.literotica.com/s/i-want-to-get-raped-ch-02/comments

Here's the followup to my story, "I Want to Get Raped".

 

[BobbyandtheCabin]

Hey all! I wrote a story recently, as someone who loves long hair. Also think Ariana Grande is beautiful, though I feel it's written in a way that this story could quite easily be imagined as someone entirely fictitious.
Please have a read and let me know what you think.

https://www.literotica.com/s/ariana-and-the-cabin

 

[Kay_Evans100]

Hello erotica fans. Just published today my latest story https://literotica.com/s/a-night-to-remember-pt-01-4.

This has been published under illustrated category although only includes one picture.

What I wonder is why those stories in Illustrated get worse scores than if published under other categories, for example my other recent story https://literotica.com/s/tales-of-the-unexpected has been much higher rated. I don't think it is down to any difference in style or content in my view.

What do you think?

If including pictures negatively impacts on enjoyment then I will stop putting them in and delete and reclassify.

 

[LIDiver]

I believe people are expecting visual art more so than stories accompanied by photographs. Its a shame the two aren’t separated into two different categories.

At least there isn’t a huge drop off in ratings due to the sad trolls in Loving Wives. I learned that the hard way! (“Tory’s Emergence” if you’re interested.)

https://literotica.com/s/torys-emergence

 

[Phantom300]

It Happened in Vegas went live today in the EC category.

Guy meets up with his high school crush almost 30 years later in Las Vegas. Threw in a couple twists along the way. It is my first foray outside of I/T so I am curious to see how it is received.

https://literotica.com/s/it-happened-in-vegas-2

 

[Kay_Evans100]

I believe people are expecting visual art more so than stories accompanied by photographs. Its a shame the two aren’t separated into two different categories.

At least there isn’t a huge drop off in ratings due to the sad trolls in Loving Wives. I learned that the hard way! (“Tory’s Emergence” if you’re interested.)

https://literotica.com/s/torys-emergence

Thanks, I tend to agree but the site owners seem to have a policy that re-categories things if they have a picture in no matter what category you choose as the author.
Oh right, interesting

 

[Phantom300]

Hi everybody! My second story (first under this account) was published here a little while ago, and I would be so grateful if you'd take a look at it.

It's about two good Friends-With-Benefits meeting for a catch-up in a coffee shop after a while apart. With their obvious affection/lust for each other, things quickly escalate .

Just for information, the female friend Erin loves calling the male Narrator "Daddy", but this is NOT an incest story - it's just her pet name for him. (I thought I'd mention it here, in case that's not your thing)

Here's the link: https://literotica.com/s/double-shot-1

Your feedback is honestly really welcome.
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I like the premise. Very readable, although finding minor grammatical mistakes isnt my strength. Has a fun little conclusion. Maybe a bit short overall, but that's just my preference. The Daddy thing isnt my bag, but I get it and it didnt detract from the entertainment for me

Threw ya a follow and 5 of those star things.

 

[The_Caroline]

Hi everyone,

My second story just went up and wanted to let people know and hopefully get people's thoughts.

It's about my first steps in experiencing exhibitionism and and encounter that leads a polyamorous couple and my first time being photographed nude.

Looking Backward pt.2

 

[Rob_Royale]

A new May/December sexy romance. Hope you like it.
https://literotica.com/s/milf-cruise-upgraded