My newest story-enjoy it, please!

[Missouribiguy]

Hey folks,

I wrote and rewritten this story about a bisexual twist. Hopefully, my grammar or spelling isn't too bad on this thing. So, read up and tell me what you guys and gals think, ok?

Here's the link on the main site:
Jake's Erotic Night

 

[spittincobra96]

Good story. I liked it. Wish I could have a similiar experience someday.

 

[PredatorSmile]

Sounds like fun, guy. Good luck.

 

[Missouribiguy]

bump

Sorry, I have to BOAST about this.

 

[PredatorSmile]

Sorry, I have to BOAST about this.

You have every right to boast, dude. Your stuff is great.

 

[Missouribiguy]

You have every right to boast, dude. Your stuff is great.

Now, now, don't give me too much credit.

 

[Missouribiguy]

I think I am going to let it be remove for the time being. I don't think it's all that great myself and it needs improvements.

Once I get it edited and rewritten a bit, then I will re-submit it, ok?