My first story....

[fsmepls]

here is the first story I've ever written for lit....http://english.literotica.com:81/stories/showstory.php?id=208822

let me know what you think please

fs

 

[kerker_miester]

here is the first story I've ever written for lit....http://english.literotica.com:81/stories/showstory.php?id=208822

let me know what you think please

fs

As a male Dom I can say I would not like being in your place, but I did enjoy your story. Your Mistress knows how to treat a sub right.

 

[fsmepls]

lol thank you

 

[cnba]

story feedback

liked it a lot, please continue to write.

I too am doing my bit to add to the currently sparse face sitting collection in Literotica -
http://english.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=553699&page=submissions

If you see more stories in this area, please do let me know...

Cnba

 

[fsmepls]

liked it a lot, please continue to write.

I too am doing my bit to add to the currently sparse face sitting collection in Literotica -
http://english.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=553699&page=submissions

If you see more stories in this area, please do let me know...

Cnba

Just read the first chapter. Thats some pretty good stuff so far (I'm hard as a rock lol) Got to go for now......can't wait to read the rest. Thanks for the compliment on my first story. I have alot of improving to do but I will write more.

 

[marieR19]

Wow!!! That's amazing for your first lit story! God that got me soooo wet... I love it!!


Heather

 

[tealsphynx]

The writing is good, but I'm sorry I don't have much to say other than Congrats on posting your first story.

 

[Vixandra]

An interesting story of a Domme and you.

Congrats on your first story post.

 

[Leolover711]

As a Dom, I enjoyed how well you served your Mistress. If you please her in RL as well as you wrote, then youi both must be a satisfied couple.

 

[fsmepls]

As a Dom, I enjoyed how well you served your Mistress. If you please her in RL as well as you wrote, then youi both must be a satisfied couple.

Thanks!