BDSM song

[MagicFlute]

I'm sure some of you out there know the song "you don't own me" originally sung by Lesley Gore.

Well I changed the lyrics to have a more BDSM bent. Would appreciate your thoughts!

An if there are any talented Submissives out there who could sing it, I'd love to actually HEAR it
YOU NOW OWN ME
Now that you own me
I am just one of your many toys
Now that you own me
I wear your collar with pride and joy.

So please tell me what to do
And please me what to say
And I love, when I go out with you
Cause you put me on display 'cause

You fully own me
So please use me in any way
You fully own me
Please tie me down 'cause it makes my day

I love everything you say
I love everything you do
You just let me be myself
Allow me to worship you

You're strong and I love that you're strong
I kneel when you tell me to kneel
I live my life the way you want
To say and do whatever you please

And don't forget to spank my arse
When Idon't do what you say
And please, will you punish me
When I purposely disobey

I don't get to have a say
And I don't mind what you do
You just let me be myself
And allow me to worship you

I'm owned and I love to be owned
I'm yours and I love I'm yours