LW why?

[lovecraft68]

Yup, Pinocchio. A puppet on a string, just what you've been your entire life.

Pilot doing as he's told as always.

 

[sr71plt]

You didn't read the whole posting I made to Stella on this obviously (or maybe you're just that "stuped"), LC. I said I took folks off ignore--just as she said she did--when it suited me. But I do, in fact, have you on ignore so that I can go get that Coke and popcorn when I'm in the mood to read your inanities.

As for you not being obsessed with me, you certainly are belying that claim right and left.

I think it's great that you have been posting as you have--and winning all these new "friends."

 

[Exquisition]

Clearly I don't give a rats ass how I do on the board.

Image and how your perceived is your thing Mr. Persona.

I don't give a rats ass what people think.

Your the one constantly trying to drop clues as to how amazing you think you are.

Bet you have a "loving wife" can;t imagine how a woman could limit herself to just your intolerably arrogant ass.

Then again, I would hold to the belief your a cuckold anyway.

Oh, and I thought you had me on ignore?

Going to start calling you SR Pinocchio.

Image and how *you're* perceived. Need a little, I say a little, rehab there champ.

For the sake of future pain - it's loose and not lot lose (when you're referring to something ill-fitting).

But, you're the chap with the gazillion stories making gazillions on Amazon, so obviously, take that advice with a pinch of salt...

 

[loquere]

You didn't read the whole posting I made to Stella on this obviously (or maybe you're just that stuped), LC. I said I took folks off ignore--just as she said she did--when it suited me. But I do, in fact, have you on ignore so that I can go get that Coke and popcorn when I'm in the mood to read your inanities.

As for you not being obsessed with me, you certainly are belying that claim right and left.

I think it's great that you have been posting as you have--and winning all these new "friends."

Im his friend, but I consider myself your friend too.

 

[TxRad]

Im his friend, but I consider myself your friend too.

Ya might want to take a couple of steps back. These dick jousting matches can get a little messy.

 

[Euphony]

Ya might want to take a couple of steps back. These dick jousting matches can get a little messy.

Everybody knows "crossing swords" is the kiss of death in LW.

 

[TxRad]

Everybody knows "crossing swords" is the kiss of death in LW.

Well done. Nice twist back to the original topic.

 

[Euphony]

Well done. Nice twist back to the original topic.

Thanks. I thought getting back on track may spur something a little more interesting.

I do believe though a woman being the queen in the center of a MMF would unhinge so many people over there it would be epic.

Yours was fantastic btw. You and Lovecraft set the mobilize the torch and pitchfork crowd bar very very high. But records are made to be broken and little weak minded trolls too.

Sidebar: I know the "she gets away with murder" thing is like a bomb over there. I wonder though if HIM getting convicted of a crime and, um, "girlfriended" in prison wouldnt be nuclear over there.

Oh and of course youd have to slowly have him come to like it or at least be okay with it.

*edit* Have him fall in luuuve with his new man and the new man cheats on him! Awesome!

 

[TxRad]

Thanks. I thought getting back on track may spur something a little more interesting.

I do believe though a woman being the queen in the center of a MMF would unhinge so many people over there it would be epic.

Yours was fantastic btw. You and Lovecraft set the mobilize the torch and pitchfork crowd bar very very high. But records are made to be broken and little weak minded trolls too.

Sidebar: I know the "she gets away with murder" thing is like a bomb over there. I wonder though if HIM getting convicted of a crime and, um, "girlfriended" in prison wouldnt be nuclear over there.

Oh and of course youd have to slowly have him come to like it or at least be okay with it.

Actually the MMF thing would end up in group and other than a few patroling LW trolls, it wouldn't be a problem.

I wrote that story with the confusion factor in mind and I'm glad it worked out so well. There are more well placed landmines in the category and some pretty good stories to boot.

As for the husband in prison and "grirlfriended" that would end up in GM.

The biggest confusion in LW is created when someone actually posts a loving wife story where the couple loves each other and there is no cheating at all.

 

[Euphony]

Actually the MMF thing would end up in group and other than a few patroling LW trolls, it wouldn't be a problem.

I wrote that story with the confusion factor in mind and I'm glad it worked out so well. There are more well placed landmines in the category and some pretty good stories to boot.

As for the husband in prison and "grirlfriended" that would end up in GM.

You think? Theres a lot of cross genre stories on here and it seems often its the "main" kink the story revolves around that gets the nod, save for some exceptions that seem to trump like incest.

And what if all 3 are in there (she cheats, with 2 men, and he goes to prison for lets say some crime he thought shed cover for.

Adultery driven through and through but it would lose out to....?

The biggest confusion in LW is created when someone actually posts a loving wife story where the couple loves each other and there is no cheating at all.

I think we can all agree there is no place for filth like that around here.

 

[sr71plt]

I think I had them confused with one where the husband had a good reason to give his blessing to his wife to fool around. Very few negative comments on that one.

 

[njlauren]

I don't know what the attraction of LW is, a lot of the stories are formulaic and bad, and yes, there are some gems, just read one in the style of a noir story that was pretty good IMO.

What I have come to believe is that the anger you see,and the comments, are based in fear. If you notice, a lot of the stories involve couples that have been together a while (and hear I am talking the cheating stories), and I think what it his upon is the fear men have as they get older and their sex drive doesn't work as well as it did when they were young. Women in many cases peak as men are declining, and it can be scary. You read the stories, and a common theme is the wife finds some stud who can do her 5 times a night (DQS had a story where a 57 year old wife finds a 40 something year old guy who can do it), I think it is the fear that simply they find they are slowing down and are afraid. I will confess some of the stories hit me hard because it made me think, I am in the age group and it is something you tend to think about, especially as kids grow.

The good stories are realistic, the ones with the viciously misogynistic viewpoint aren't that (where women are just cheating sluts, taking what the good husband built for them, and then finding some young stud), I am talking the ones where the couple has grown apart or something just happens. I can admit some of the stories are out there, where for example a wife takes a new job that ends up becoming a porn star, or a slut for a company so her hubby gets promoted, but where there is a push back and the husband gets her back, and I have to be honest I like the reconciliation stories, where a mistake is made, they can be interesting to me as well.

The cuck stories fascinate me, while I can sort of understand the fantasy, but the ones where it is so humiliating don't make any sense to me and they are angering, it is like, who the hell could take fun out of cruelty like that? This is different then threesomes or swinging, those seem to me consensual, but the cuck stories often are just plain cruel. There are some cuck stories that hit me hard, because it was about a fantasy that goes wrong, "Pandora's Box" comes to mind.

Like I said, there are gems there, "Lazy Lemon Sun" and "When we were married" are very well written and aren't the usual, the Damp Gray Gone is interesting as well, as "Dig two graves". I think in part because there is some thought behind them, they are real life situations, a bit over the top, but to me they had real emotions and real story ideas.

I think it is like most stories on lit, you do have to sift through them to find the good ones.

 

[loquere]

I had a idea and created a post for it. I want to see a woman catch her husband and exact masculin violence.

 

[sr71plt]

As you can read from the multiple threads on the LW that fun on this forum, it appears that the attraction in writing and posting to the category for many writers is that they enjoy playing games with the readers, especially since it appears to be one of those categories where the readers don't appear to be all that bright. Maybe it's from the feeling of superiority those writers get? -- that they can feel superior to the subsets of not very bright readers here?

The stories I've written to it were an exploration of what in the heck the category was supposed to mean.

 

[loquere]

As you can read from the multiple threads on the LW that fun on this forum, it appears that the attraction in writing and posting to the category for many writers is that they enjoy playing games with the readers, especially since it appears to be one of those categories where the readers don't appear to be all that bright. Maybe it's from the feeling of superiority those writers get? -- that they can feel superior to the subsets of not very bright readers here?

The stories I've written to it were an exploration of what in the heck the category was supposed to mean.

I'll check out one of your stories in a bit. I'm just finishing off a whole cake, that I was deared to eat.

 

[TxRad]

I'll check out one of your stories in a bit. I'm just finishing off a whole cake, that I was deared to eat.

Rum cake?

 

[loquere]

Rum cake?

Chocolate cheese cake with caramel and brownies.

 

[sr71plt]

Chocolate cheese cake with caramel and brownies.

I'd have to call in next from the hospital after that. But I do think I hear a glass of Yellowtail Shiraz calling me.

 

[TimothyM]

If you really want some fun, read the comments on this one... Until Death Do Us Part The first couple of comments follow the woman hater theme and then someone points out that she didn't cheat. That it was a setup. Then all hell breaks loose.

OK I've read that one now, and being warned beforehand I saw how you managed to keep the wording ambigous enough that readers would fall into the trap.

And I'm assuming that by setup you mean the internal setup in the story, not the fact that you set the readers up for thinking she had cheated. Because they can be excused for that, since 1) you put it in the LW category and 2) it's not that realistic that the wife and the brother-in-law would have sex the morning after if they were not already having an affair.

Anyway, it was really interesting how the whole discussion went back and forth on whether she was guilty or not in relation to both the 'sins' depicted and whether her actions were justified or not. Especially because it wasn't always clear which sin (adultery or killing) they condemned the most !

 

[loquere]

I'd have to call in next from the hospital after that. But I do think I hear a glass of Yellowtail Shiraz calling me.

I desperately want to head back to Australia. Gold coast probably, Ummm, Australia.

 

[TxRad]

OK I've read that one now, and being warned beforehand I saw how you managed to keep the wording ambigous enough that readers would fall into the trap.

And I'm assuming that by setup you mean the internal setup in the story, not the fact that you set the readers up for thinking she had cheated. Because they can be excused for that, since 1) you put it in the LW category and 2) it's not that realistic that the wife and the brother-in-law would have sex the morning after if they were not already having an affair.

Anyway, it was really interesting how the whole discussion went back and forth on whether she was guilty or not in relation to both the 'sins' depicted and whether her actions were justified or not. Especially because it wasn't always clear which sin (adultery or killing) they condemned the most !

It was a setup from the get go as she had placed her husbands used rubber in the trashcan and hung the brothers hat in the bedroom. For the control freak of a husband, that is all it took. Since control freaks seem to be one of the major factions in the LW's category it was aimed at them.

As for your number 2, I don't see it that way at all. That he was her only friend and he was very sympathetic to her, makes it very reasonable that they would have sex the next morning.

LW's has three different factions in it. The control freaks, the give her the gallows for being a woman and daring to do such a thing as cheat, and the I hope and pray she gets pregnant and dies group. Those are the main ones but there are several dozen other smaller groups all fighting over the same stories.

Then there are a few readers laughing their ass off at the rest.

It's a shark pit best avoided by the thin skinned.

 

[mrmoodyguy]

It's a category I don't intend to write for. It's a category I read a little bit in, but once I detect the notes of prejudice, spite, and hate, I'm outta there. I can see the attraction for some guys to read in there. Maybe they can't get it up for their wives. Maybe they can't even get it up for their girlfriends. I'm being generous, though, I think it's their own hand they can't get it up for.

*le sigh*

 

[TimothyM]

Oh I had no problem with her setting the husband up - he deserved it and I was very pleased it worked out and she got away with it.

And I did not consider the shower sex scene unreasonable, just wanted to say that it was more likely to happen if they were already intimate. Actually it was nice for the story to end with some hot, happy sex (as one comment also noted).

I have to admit that LW still confuses me utterly. The things I read here at AH makes me think that LW stories are (or should be) about wives cheating on their husbands - and the main variation is whether they get away with it or not.

But when I look at the Lit category description it says: Married extra-marital fun: swinging, sharing & more. So I guess the cheating part is covered by 'more' ?

Or is it that any story that fit the Lit description is OK, but if the story has the wife cheating then the trolls go to war ?

I hope someone here can explain, because I'm to lazy to read through a lot of LW to find out whether the one story I have that might fit the Lit description should go there or I'm better off in Group sex or even NonCon.

 

[TxRad]

Oh I had no problem with her setting the husband up - he deserved it and I was very pleased it worked out and she got away with it.

And I did not consider the shower sex scene unreasonable, just wanted to say that it was more likely to happen if they were already intimate. Actually it was nice for the story to end with some hot, happy sex (as one comment also noted).

I have to admit that LW still confuses me utterly. The things I read here at AH makes me thing that LW stories are (or should be) about wives cheating on their husbands - and the main variation is whether they get away with it or not.

But when I look at the Lit category description it says: Married extra-marital fun: swinging, sharing & more. So I guess the cheating part is covered by 'more' ?

Or is it that any story that fit the Lit description is OK, but if the story has the wife cheating then the trolls go to war ?

I hope someone here can explain, because I'm to lazy to read through a lot of LW to find out whether the one story I have that might fit the Lit description should go there or I'm better off in Group sex or even NonCon.

Any story that has a wife that even appears to be cheating is fair game for LW's trolls. I've had them hit me in Romance, group, and even BDSM.

The cheating part is what sets the trolls off. Even if it is an agreed on thing between the husband and wife.

Good luck with the story and may it never see a troll.

 

[loquere]

Any story that has a wife that even appears to be cheating is fair game for LW's trolls. I've had them hit me in Romance, group, and even BDSM.

The cheating part is what sets the trolls off. Even if it is an agreed on thing between the husband and wife.

Good luck with the story and may it never see a troll.

Y'all make LW readers seem like something out of Harry Potter. Like followers of the Dark Lord.