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WyldBreeze said:
The First Night
by
WyldBreeze


Your body covers mine,
Intoxicating heat,
I tremble with desire,
Shiver with the promise of your touch.

Strong hands gently caress my shoulders,
Passionate lips follow,
Warm breath slides across my ear,
Are you sure?

Heart stops,
Only to resume its fluttering dance,
Questions answered,
With the pressing of my hips against you.

Bodies intertwined,
Fingers dig into sheets,
Moans, gasps, sweat,
No words spoken, yet everything is said.

Surrendering together, your body covers mine,
Exhausted bliss,
Gentle kisses, catching breath, soft caresses,
Bodies separated, yet we are one.​


WOWZA WOMAN! This is a very erotic piece! You've captured the essence of that first night... in words I'm certain we've all felt at one time or another. When emotions and sensations rock us to our cores... and feelings overwhelm and threaten to drown us because we feel so much all at once.

Lovely.... absolutely LOVELY!! :rose:
 
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WyldBreeze said:
You
by
WyldBreeze


You build me up even when I'm on shaky ground.
You are that non-moving foundation on which I've begun to grow roots.

You see in me what others can't.
You taught me to see what I really am, what I can be.

You have the ability to calm my storms,
You have the power to churn them inside me.

You make me a better person,
You allow me to be myself.

You are patient, kind, understanding,
You are sexy, pasionate, and gentle.

You are all these things to me,
You are, by grace, mine.​

Very very nice Wyld ...keep it up there lady ,but me think you have a inspiration there. :rose:
 
WyldBreeze said:
The First Night
by
WyldBreeze


Your body covers mine,
Intoxicating heat,
I tremble with desire,
Shiver with the promise of your touch.

Strong hands gently caress my shoulders,
Passionate lips follow,
Warm breath slides across my ear,
Are you sure?

Heart stops,
Only to resume its fluttering dance,
Questions answered,
With the pressing of my hips against you.

Bodies intertwined,
Fingers dig into sheets,
Moans, gasps, sweat,
No words spoken, yet everything is said.

Surrendering together, your body covers mine,
Exhausted bliss,
Gentle kisses, catching breath, soft caresses,
Bodies separated, yet we are one.​

Hot oh so hot...me thinks you and your love have something very special..Oh yes...Keep it love. :rose:
 
Good Morning everyone..Ladies .. :kiss: :rose: and ^5 Gents ..Welcome to the Corner..come in settle back enjoy a some of the great reads here and if you a writer come join us, but by all means this is a place to have fun, chat and gain new ideas..the coffee is fresh and so are the donuts....if you want me I'll be in the recliner..pad and pencil in hand.
 
Victoria_2001_02769 said:
For You... and what you once meant. Now... you mean nothing.



Untitled II




It's almost a year now
Since that call
Saying, "I'd like to
Come out to visit this fall."

We talked and we laughed
In our usual way
Both stepping on sentences
With so much to say.

You had once said,
"I miss what we had"
Now I ask of you...
Where did it go bad?

I miss the friend
You were at the start
The one who knew
My mind by heart.

You were there with me
For that span of no sleep
Finally telling me that
A watch o'er you'd keep.

I miss my friend
The one of old
Not the one you've become
Who's callous and cold.


Very nice Victoria... :rose: letting go is never easy...forgiveness maybe even harder...beautiful poem!!!!!!
 
What do you See...


Gaze into my eyes
Feel what they have to say
With a soft whisper a tender touch
Eternal moments of ecstasy

Gaze into my eyes
Hear my heart beating for you
The beat of a song of passion a sensual desire
A never-ending ache of wanting always needing you
A continual rhythm of all that my heart will ever need

Gaze into my eyes
Feel my touch of desire for you
How it trembles with the anticipation of you
A uncontrollable urge to hold you to have you
To spiral into a never ending bliss in each others arms of want

Gaze into my eyes
Listen to my mind saying a never ending come here to me
One continual syllable of love
Weather you are near or far
Oh! How you nourish that thought
To bring my mind to a tranquility I did not think possible

Gaze into my eyes
Feel my soul surround you with a soothing caress
A pillow of love for you to rest
Best friend and lover your soul mate to the end
Not a worry not a fear when you are with me

Gaze into my eyes
See the reflection of yourself in my sight
Our lips melting together in a perfect harmony
Just gaze into my eyes and you will see
All that you will ever want ever need to see


MFM
:kiss: :heart: :kiss:
 
WyldBreeze said:
The First Night
by
WyldBreeze


Your body covers mine,
Intoxicating heat,
I tremble with desire,
Shiver with the promise of your touch.

Strong hands gently caress my shoulders,
Passionate lips follow,
Warm breath slides across my ear,
Are you sure?

Heart stops,
Only to resume its fluttering dance,
Questions answered,
With the pressing of my hips against you.

Bodies intertwined,
Fingers dig into sheets,
Moans, gasps, sweat,
No words spoken, yet everything is said.

Surrendering together, your body covers mine,
Exhausted bliss,
Gentle kisses, catching breath, soft caresses,
Bodies separated, yet we are one.​


Wyld...this poem, together with the first, is so deep, rich and soulful...I do believe you have reached that inner place where emotions and feelings become one...and you express them so beautifully... :kiss: :rose:
 
{{{Victoria, MFM, Bear}}}....you all write so beautifully and yet have such kind things to say for those of us that try to keep up. Thank you for the kind words and wonderful works of art that you create.
:rose: :rose: :rose:
 
MrFantasyMan said:
What do you See...


Gaze into my eyes
Feel what they have to say
With a soft whisper a tender touch
Eternal moments of ecstasy

Gaze into my eyes
Hear my heart beating for you
The beat of a song of passion a sensual desire
A never-ending ache of wanting always needing you
A continual rhythm of all that my heart will ever need

Gaze into my eyes
Feel my touch of desire for you
How it trembles with the anticipation of you
A uncontrollable urge to hold you to have you
To spiral into a never ending bliss in each others arms of want

Gaze into my eyes
Listen to my mind saying a never ending come here to me
One continual syllable of love
Weather you are near or far
Oh! How you nourish that thought
To bring my mind to a tranquility I did not think possible

Gaze into my eyes
Feel my soul surround you with a soothing caress
A pillow of love for you to rest
Best friend and lover your soul mate to the end
Not a worry not a fear when you are with me

Gaze into my eyes
See the reflection of yourself in my sight
Our lips melting together in a perfect harmony
Just gaze into my eyes and you will see
All that you will ever want ever need to see


MFM
:kiss: :heart: :kiss:

Very nice MFM and very romantic..keep it up guy..you only get better with each verse, but I don't know how much better you can get..your writing is awesome.. :rose:
 
MrFantasyMan said:
Very nice Victoria... :rose: letting go is never easy... forgiveness maybe even harder...beautiful poem!!!!!!


Thank you, MFM.
There still is no closure,
There may never be...
This is a hurt that
Will forever haunt me.​

Thank you for your kind words my dear, dear friend. They touch me in a way only you would know. *kotc*
:kiss:
 
WyldBreeze said:
{{{Victoria, MFM, Bear}}}....you all write so beautifully and yet have such kind things to say for those of us that try to keep up. Thank you for the kind words and wonderful works of art that you create.
:rose: :rose: :rose:


You're so welcome, WB. Your last two works are/were breathtaking... and the kind words were truly meant! And to try to keep up? My dear... please don't sell yourself, your feelings, or your works, so short! (Not that you are.) They are hardly of the keep up calibre! Not by any stretch of the imagination, or by any means.

Your works are exquisite! Each emotion unveiled, more powerful than the one before... each nerve jangled by your lovers touch, more raw and more full of want as the preceding one.

Please.... don't stop now dear. You've only JUST hit your stride! I'm expecting more works like these from you, whenever the urge strikes.... or for whatever reason.
:rose: :rose:
 
I wish I could gaze into your eyes every day.....

:kiss: :heart: :kiss:
MrFantasyMan said:
What do you See...


Gaze into my eyes
Feel what they have to say
With a soft whisper a tender touch
Eternal moments of ecstasy

Gaze into my eyes
Hear my heart beating for you
The beat of a song of passion a sensual desire
A never-ending ache of wanting always needing you
A continual rhythm of all that my heart will ever need

Gaze into my eyes
Feel my touch of desire for you
How it trembles with the anticipation of you
A uncontrollable urge to hold you to have you
To spiral into a never ending bliss in each others arms of want

Gaze into my eyes
Listen to my mind saying a never ending come here to me
One continual syllable of love
Weather you are near or far
Oh! How you nourish that thought
To bring my mind to a tranquility I did not think possible

Gaze into my eyes
Feel my soul surround you with a soothing caress
A pillow of love for you to rest
Best friend and lover your soul mate to the end
Not a worry not a fear when you are with me

Gaze into my eyes
See the reflection of yourself in my sight
Our lips melting together in a perfect harmony
Just gaze into my eyes and you will see
All that you will ever want ever need to see


MFM
:kiss: :heart: :kiss:
 
Victoria_2001_02769 said:
Thank you, MFM.
There still is no closure,
There may never be...
This is a hurt that
Will forever haunt me.​

Thank you for your kind words my dear, dear friend. They touch me in a way only you would know. *kotc*
:kiss:


:rose: ...time has a way of doing wonderful things... :)

and thank you for the :kiss: ... :D
 
WyldBreeze said:
{{{Victoria, MFM, Bear}}}....you all write so beautifully and yet have such kind things to say for those of us that try to keep up. Thank you for the kind words and wonderful works of art that you create.
:rose: :rose: :rose:

Victoria said it best!...I agree 100%...you aren't just keeping up...far from it... :kiss: :rose:
 
MrFantasyMan said:
What do you See...


Gaze into my eyes
Feel what they have to say
With a soft whisper a tender touch
Eternal moments of ecstasy

Gaze into my eyes
Hear my heart beating for you
The beat of a song of passion a sensual desire
A never-ending ache of wanting always needing you
A continual rhythm of all that my heart will ever need

Gaze into my eyes
Feel my touch of desire for you
How it trembles with the anticipation of you
A uncontrollable urge to hold you to have you
To spiral into a never ending bliss in each others arms of want

Gaze into my eyes
Listen to my mind saying a never ending come here to me
One continual syllable of love
Weather you are near or far
Oh! How you nourish that thought
To bring my mind to a tranquility I did not think possible

Gaze into my eyes
Feel my soul surround you with a soothing caress
A pillow of love for you to rest
Best friend and lover your soul mate to the end
Not a worry not a fear when you are with me

Gaze into my eyes
See the reflection of yourself in my sight
Our lips melting together in a perfect harmony
Just gaze into my eyes and you will see
All that you will ever want ever need to see


MFM
:kiss: :heart: :kiss:

VERY GOOD POEM MFM NICE READ handshakes ^5
 
WyldBreeze said:
{{{Victoria, MFM, Bear}}}....you all write so beautifully and yet have such kind things to say for those of us that try to keep up. Thank you for the kind words and wonderful works of art that you create.
:rose: :rose: :rose:


thank you Wyldbreeze and keep up the wonderful writing and beautiful poems
hugs kisses
{{{{{{{{{{{{{{{{{WYLDBREEZE }}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}} :kiss: :rose:
 
Victoria_2001_02769 said:
For You... and what you once meant. Now... you mean nothing.



Untitled II




It's almost a year now
Since that call
Saying, "I'd like to
Come out to visit this fall."

We talked and we laughed
In our usual way
Both stepping on sentences
With so much to say.

You had once said,
"I miss what we had"
Now I ask of you...
Where did it go bad?

I miss the friend
You were at the start
The one who knew
My mind by heart.

You were there with me
For that span of no sleep
Finally telling me that
A watch o'er you'd keep.

I miss my friend
The one of old
Not the one you've become
Who's callous and cold.

Nice poem Victoria..it's the type poem you write when you knows its time to let go and go on...very nice
 
Just a bit of background behind the poem:

LustfulOne50 said:
Nice poem Victoria..it's the type of poem you write when you know its time to let go and go on...very nice


Thank you Lusty... and your words are true enough. Only the tables were the other way around... I didn't be the one lettin' go. I don't know why he felt it necessary to lie and mislead about some things he'd been sayin'.
 
Victoria_2001_02769 said:
Thank you Lusty... and your words are true enough. Only the tables were the other way around... I didn't be the one lettin' go. I don't know why he felt it necessary to lie and mislead about some things he'd been sayin'.


some do that man and women alike ...but its just the breaks sometimes you run into in life...now new doors can open ...as I once told a close friend..***** it like a rose and yes it may have horns, it still just that beautiful rose and you have to hang on to it...I had a very loving friend once who gave me a rose..with her hair tied in a long bow around it..and she had removed all its horn..it was a gift to me for the 1st time I met her she was crying over a lost love who hurt her badly..and I spoke to her of the rose and what it meant..as I was leaving Korea she had the rose in a box delivered to me...I shall never forget her...she taught me what love was and what it meant to be in real love...she will always be part of me ..and everytime I go to the ocean she will alawys be there to walk hand in hand with even as I walk alone there. For I placed the rose she gave me in the ocean with love and care...so all lovers who walk the beach hand in hand may feel what we felt..oh so many years ago.
 
LustfulOne50 said:
some do that man and women alike ...but its just the breaks sometimes you run into in life...now new doors can open ...as I once told a close friend..***** it like a rose and yes it may have thorns, it's still just that beautiful rose and you have to hang on to it...I had a very loving friend once who gave me a rose..with her hair tied in a long bow around it..and she had removed all its horn..it was a gift to me for the 1st time I met her she was crying over a lost love who hurt her badly..and I spoke to her of the rose and what it meant..as I was leaving Korea she had the rose in a box delivered to me...I shall never forget her...she taught me what love was and what it meant to be in real love...she will always be part of me ..and everytime I go to the ocean she will alawys be there to walk hand in hand with even as I walk alone there. For I placed the rose she gave me in the ocean with love and care...so all lovers who walk the beach hand in hand may feel what we felt..oh so many years ago.


At least it's something you'll always remember as being special... even when you walk alone. :kiss:
 
Victoria_2001_02769 said:
You're so welcome, WB. Your last two works are/were breathtaking... and the kind words were truly meant! And to try to keep up? My dear... please don't sell yourself, your feelings, or your works, so short! (Not that you are.) They are hardly of the keep up calibre! Not by any stretch of the imagination, or by any means.

Your works are exquisite! Each emotion unveiled, more powerful than the one before... each nerve jangled by your lovers touch, more raw and more full of want as the preceding one.

Please.... don't stop now dear. You've only JUST hit your stride! I'm expecting more works like these from you, whenever the urge strikes.... or for whatever reason.
:rose: :rose:
Thank you from the bottom of my heart. I've written things for years....poetry, short stories, working on a couple novels....I've journaled all my life. I've just never been confident enough to share it with others. However, with the encouragement of everyone here....and one deliciously wonderful man....I'm doing a little better with opening up. So...I guess I'm still a work in progress. But again, thank you for the kind words and encouragement. :rose:
 
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