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WISH​

When I look up at the stars at night
The sky is clear and the moon is bright

I place a wish upon a star
To be wherever it is you are

My wish came true one magical night
To be in your arms in the pale moonlight

I wished for my lover and a friend
someone to stand by me until the end

The star saw fit to grant my wish
And sent me one fine hot little dish

There are things that I feel for you
And so many things that I want to do

You in my arms holding me tight
Chasing away the fears of the night

Taking my heart in your hand
Making me feel like a much better man

Creating passion and Lust from my head to my toes
Doing things to my body that only God knows.

Melting me like chocolate with your smoldering kiss
Guiding my hands to make sure I dont miss

Your luscious curves and and delicate skin
I want to make love over and over again

When I look up to the stars at night
I know that my wish came out just right.
 
Phillychocolatem said:
WISH​

When I look up at the stars at night
The sky is clear and the moon is bright

I place a wish upon a star
To be wherever it is you are

My wish came true one magical night
To be in your arms in the pale moonlight

I wished for my lover and a friend
someone to stand by me until the end

The star saw fit to grant my wish
And sent me one fine hot little dish

There are things that I feel for you
And so many things that I want to do

You in my arms holding me tight
Chasing away the fears of the night

Taking my heart in your hand
Making me feel like a much better man

Creating passion and Lust from my head to my toes
Doing things to my body that only God knows.

Melting me like chocolate with your smoldering kiss
Guiding my hands to make sure I dont miss

Your luscious curves and and delicate skin
I want to make love over and over again

When I look up to the stars at night
I know that my wish came out just right.


WOW!! Philly..nice one ..Oh that one would melt any ladie's heart there my friend...whew keep it up.. :rose: to you Philly work well done.
 
Good Morning Everyone...Ladies ... :kiss: :rose: and ^5 Gents ...I hope all are having a good morning....come on in seat a spell ..the coffee and donuts are fresh made this wonderful Friday morning...The Corner is open to writer and readers alike..its a nice place to relax and chat too.
 
Another sleepless night,
I left my window open tonight
so that I may awake from my dreams
and look out into the rain and see us.
Me holding you in my arms,
pulling you closer as we dance,
hearing our own song in the rain.
Laughing, kissing, compelled to never let go.
Finally the vision vanishes,
we weren’t really there, and never were.
We never held each other,
and we never danced beneath the pale moonlight,
Never felt the rain pour down, and soak us...Together.
Everyday I see you, not where you are,
but where I want you to be.
I reach over and tenderly run my fingertips along the sheets
beside me....where you should be.
I long to feel your face, your chest,
feel your life’s breath move in and out,
As you lie in a gentle sleep.
I move my hand to where I should feel your heart
beating steadily beneath my hand.
I close my eyes and I can almost feel it.
It seems no matter what I do anymore,
I envision you doing it with me.
Its almost like you should be there,
and sometimes I can’t figure out why you aren’t.
I drive through the streets,
and hear one of our favorite songs,
and I almost speak to you.
As if you were in the seat next to me, sharing the music.
I have reached over and placed my hand on the seat,
and it almost feels.......Warm.
As if you had already been there.
I long to take you with me,
to hold your hand at the movie theater,
to hear you laugh at the funny parts,
and cry with you at the sad ones.
Go dancing with you, and sway as one body to the music,
So close that our souls are almost touching, and healing......
I need you so much it seems,
I wonder how I ever made it through a day without knowing you.
All we have are our conversations,
I know your words so well,
I could easily pick you out of thousands,
I know you laugh, and even how your voice sounds when you smile.
I have sometimes heard a tear in your voice,
and all I can think about was reaching over the many miles
that separate me from you, and wiping it away,
taking away your heartache, my heartache.
It is all I can think of,
I carry you with me, You have become a part of me,
a part that I could never want to be without.
So I lie here,
and listen to the rain falling outside my window,
and I look out for a brief moment, I see us there again.
And then my gaze moves up to the ceiling,
searching for your smile.
I close my eyes and listen for your voice,
and then I hear it......”Goodnight my love”.
I open my eyes and look for you,
but surprisingly yet again, I am alone.
And now here I am......
another sleepless night
with out you...


MFM
:kiss: :heart: :kiss:

not much sleep...and this one wrote itself... :rose:
 
Phillychocolatem said:
WISH​

When I look up at the stars at night
The sky is clear and the moon is bright

I place a wish upon a star
To be wherever it is you are

My wish came true one magical night
To be in your arms in the pale moonlight

I wished for my lover and a friend
someone to stand by me until the end

The star saw fit to grant my wish
And sent me one fine hot little dish

There are things that I feel for you
And so many things that I want to do

You in my arms holding me tight
Chasing away the fears of the night

Taking my heart in your hand
Making me feel like a much better man

Creating passion and Lust from my head to my toes
Doing things to my body that only God knows.

Melting me like chocolate with your smoldering kiss
Guiding my hands to make sure I dont miss

Your luscious curves and and delicate skin
I want to make love over and over again

When I look up to the stars at night
I know that my wish came out just right.

I love this work Philly... :rose: and can feel your emotion and your passion...I think I also know your thoughts, your desires and your wishes...for hearts understand more than our minds...keep up the good work!!!
 
MrFantasyMan said:
Another sleepless night,
I left my window open tonight
so that I may awake from my dreams
and look out into the rain and see us.
Me holding you in my arms,
pulling you closer as we dance,
hearing our own song in the rain.
Laughing, kissing, compelled to never let go.
Finally the vision vanishes,
we weren’t really there, and never were.
We never held each other,
and we never danced beneath the pale moonlight,
Never felt the rain pour down, and soak us...Together.
Everyday I see you, not where you are,
but where I want you to be.
I reach over and tenderly run my fingertips along the sheets
beside me....where you should be.
I long to feel your face, your chest,
feel your life’s breath move in and out,
As you lie in a gentle sleep.
I move my hand to where I should feel your heart
beating steadily beneath my hand.
I close my eyes and I can almost feel it.
It seems no matter what I do anymore,
I envision you doing it with me.
Its almost like you should be there,
and sometimes I can’t figure out why you aren’t.
I drive through the streets,
and hear one of our favorite songs,
and I almost speak to you.
As if you were in the seat next to me, sharing the music.
I have reached over and placed my hand on the seat,
and it almost feels.......Warm.
As if you had already been there.
I long to take you with me,
to hold your hand at the movie theater,
to hear you laugh at the funny parts,
and cry with you at the sad ones.
Go dancing with you, and sway as one body to the music,
So close that our souls are almost touching, and healing......
I need you so much it seems,
I wonder how I ever made it through a day without knowing you.
All we have are our conversations,
I know your words so well,
I could easily pick you out of thousands,
I know you laugh, and even how your voice sounds when you smile.
I have sometimes heard a tear in your voice,
and all I can think about was reaching over the many miles
that separate me from you, and wiping it away,
taking away your heartache, my heartache.
It is all I can think of,
I carry you with me, You have become a part of me,
a part that I could never want to be without.
So I lie here,
and listen to the rain falling outside my window,
and I look out for a brief moment, I see us there again.
And then my gaze moves up to the ceiling,
searching for your smile.
I close my eyes and listen for your voice,
and then I hear it......”Goodnight my love”.
I open my eyes and look for you,
but surprisingly yet again, I am alone.
And now here I am......
another sleepless night
with out you...


MFM
:kiss: :heart: :kiss:

not much sleep...and this one wrote itself... :rose:


Nice one MFM...wondering was it raining again.... you have the gift my friend to say it from the heart and touch the soul of the reader so deeply... :rose: es
 
MrFantasyMan said:
Another sleepless night,
I left my window open tonight
so that I may awake from my dreams
and look out into the rain and see us.
Me holding you in my arms,
pulling you closer as we dance,
hearing our own song in the rain.
Laughing, kissing, compelled to never let go.
Finally the vision vanishes,
we weren’t really there, and never were.
We never held each other,
and we never danced beneath the pale moonlight,
Never felt the rain pour down, and soak us...Together.
Everyday I see you, not where you are,
but where I want you to be.
I reach over and tenderly run my fingertips along the sheets
beside me....where you should be.
I long to feel your face, your chest,
feel your life’s breath move in and out,
As you lie in a gentle sleep.
I move my hand to where I should feel your heart
beating steadily beneath my hand.
I close my eyes and I can almost feel it.
It seems no matter what I do anymore,
I envision you doing it with me.
Its almost like you should be there,
and sometimes I can’t figure out why you aren’t.
I drive through the streets,
and hear one of our favorite songs,
and I almost speak to you.
As if you were in the seat next to me, sharing the music.
I have reached over and placed my hand on the seat,
and it almost feels.......Warm.
As if you had already been there.
I long to take you with me,
to hold your hand at the movie theater,
to hear you laugh at the funny parts,
and cry with you at the sad ones.
Go dancing with you, and sway as one body to the music,
So close that our souls are almost touching, and healing......
I need you so much it seems,
I wonder how I ever made it through a day without knowing you.
All we have are our conversations,
I know your words so well,
I could easily pick you out of thousands,
I know you laugh, and even how your voice sounds when you smile.
I have sometimes heard a tear in your voice,
and all I can think about was reaching over the many miles
that separate me from you, and wiping it away,
taking away your heartache, my heartache.
It is all I can think of,
I carry you with me, You have become a part of me,
a part that I could never want to be without.
So I lie here,
and listen to the rain falling outside my window,
and I look out for a brief moment, I see us there again.
And then my gaze moves up to the ceiling,
searching for your smile.
I close my eyes and listen for your voice,
and then I hear it......”Goodnight my love”.
I open my eyes and look for you,
but surprisingly yet again, I am alone.
And now here I am......
another sleepless night
with out you...


MFM
:kiss: :heart: :kiss:

not much sleep...and this one wrote itself... :rose:

thoughts and feelings, mirrored so eloquently and completely :rolleyes: :kiss:
 
I'll never forget the look in your eyes,
I'll never forget all the reasons for love you made me realize.
I'll never forget the feeling of your hands,
I'll never forget the smell of you,
Never forgetting the charm that holds us true.
I'll never forget the way you hold me tight,
Wishing I could be with you every night.
I'll never forget the way we kiss,
Caught up in a moment, I wanna repeat this.
I'll never forget the smile on your face,
Or the way your lips taste.
I'll never forget the warm feeling I got inside,
When you decided to walk and stand by my side.
I'll never forget the time I said good-bye,
And when I couldn't help but cry.
I'll never forget about your soft and healing touch,
If you're asking, it's true, I love you this much.
I'll never forget all the love you give,
All the reasons for wanting to live.
I'll never forget about my dream coming true,
The day I set my eyes on you.
I'll never forget your voice and your charm,
Holding me so true to you in your arms.
I'll never forget anything we ever do,
I'll love you forever, yes, that's true.


MFM
:kiss: :heart: :kiss:
 
LustfulOne50 said:
Nice one MFM...wondering was it raining again.... you have the gift my friend to say it from the heart and touch the soul of the reader so deeply... :rose: es


Thank you Lusty... :rose: ...and it rains often here... :rolleyes:
 
Erotica_Writings said:
good morning everyone, love all the great writings :)


Good Morning, Sweeter Sis! :kiss: Glad to know you are enjoying the reads, as much as Our writers, including yourself, are enjoying the feedback.

It is my firm belief that all writers, including myself, love to get what is called, in the world of management... Positive Strokes/Stroking. This is the ART, and yes, it is that... an ART, of positive reinforcement vs. negative.

If one receives constant negative strokes/stroking... (i.e. "You'll never do well with your writing. Why don't you quit?")... they will eventually begin to think in a negative manner and will, thusly in the end, quit writing because they feel that no one honestly likes their work.

By the same token... if one receives constant positive strokes/stroking... (i.e. "This piece is/was better than your last. I expect to see more like this one.")... they tend to feel more like writing... and will strive to make each piece/work as good, or better, than the one before.

It is this last one that I practice constantly... both on line and off... Each person NEEDS to feel they are of value... in some manner, in some way. This is my legacy... one of the things I wish to be remembered for... one of the things I did right in this life.

*steps down off her soapbox and adds it to the box that sits in the middle of her desk*
:kiss:
 
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Victoria_2001_02769 said:
Good Morning, Sweeter Sis! :kiss: Glad to know you are enjoying the reads, as much as Our writers, including yourself, are enjoying the feedback.

It is my firm belief that all writers, including myself, love to get what is called, in the world of management... Positive Strokes/Stroking. This is the ART, and yes, it is that... an ART, of positive reinforcement vs. negative.

If one receives constant negative strokes/stroking... (i.e. "You'll never do well with your writing. Why don't you quit?")... they will eventually begin to think in a negative manner and will, thusly in the end, quit writing because they feel that no one honestly likes their work.

By the same token... if one receives constant positive strokes/stroking... (i.e. "This piece is/was better than your last. I expect to see more like this one.")... they tend to feel more like writing... and will strive to make each piece/work as good, or better, than the one before.

It is this last one that I practice constantly... both on line and off... Each person NEEDS to feel they are of value... in some manner, in some way. This is my legacy... one of the things I wish to be remembered for... one of the things I did right in this life.

*steps down off her soapbox and adds it to the box that sits in the middle of her desk*
:kiss:

bravo sweet sis! Very well spoken! :D
 
Phillychocolatem said:
WISH​

When I look up at the stars at night
The sky is clear and the moon is bright

I place a wish upon a star
To be wherever it is you are

My wish came true one magical night
To be in your arms in the pale moonlight

I wished for my lover and a friend
someone to stand by me until the end

The star saw fit to grant my wish
And sent me one fine hot little dish

There are things that I feel for you
And so many things that I want to do

You in my arms holding me tight
Chasing away the fears of the night

Taking my heart in your hand
Making me feel like a much better man

Creating passion and Lust from my head to my toes
Doing things to my body that only God knows.

Melting me like chocolate with your smoldering kiss
Guiding my hands to make sure I dont miss

Your luscious curves and and delicate skin
I want to make love over and over again

When I look up to the stars at night
I know that my wish came out just right.


Beautiful Poem Philly I love it
 
Victoria_2001_02769 said:
Good Morning, Sweeter Sis! :kiss: Glad to know you are enjoying the reads, as much as Our writers, including yourself, are enjoying the feedback.

It is my firm belief that all writers, including myself, love to get what is called, in the world of management... Positive Strokes/Stroking. This is the ART, and yes, it is that... an ART, of positive reinforcement vs. negative.

If one receives constant negative strokes/stroking... (i.e. "You'll never do well with your writing. Why don't you quit?")... they will eventually begin to think in a negative manner and will, thusly in the end, quit writing because they feel that no one honestly likes their work.

By the same token... if one receives constant positive strokes/stroking... (i.e. "This piece is/was better than your last. I expect to see more like this one.")... they tend to feel more like writing... and will strive to make each piece/work as good, or better, than the one before.

It is this last one that I practice constantly... both on line and off... Each person NEEDS to feel they are of value... in some manner, in some way. This is my legacy... one of the things I wish to be remembered for... one of the things I did right in this life.

*steps down off her soapbox and adds it to the box that sits in the middle of her desk*
:kiss:


very well said Victoria
 
Phillychocolatem said:
WISH​

When I look up at the stars at night
The sky is clear and the moon is bright

I place a wish upon a star
To be wherever it is you are

My wish came true one magical night
To be in your arms in the pale moonlight

I wished for my lover and a friend
someone to stand by me until the end

The star saw fit to grant my wish
And sent me one fine hot little dish

There are things that I feel for you
And so many things that I want to do

You in my arms holding me tight
Chasing away the fears of the night

Taking my heart in your hand
Making me feel like a much better man

Creating passion and Lust from my head to my toes
Doing things to my body that only God knows.

Melting me like chocolate with your smoldering kiss
Guiding my hands to make sure I dont miss

Your luscious curves and and delicate skin
I want to make love over and over again

When I look up to the stars at night
I know that my wish came out just right.


Very nicely done, Philly! I'd love to see you put more work(s) up here. Your writing reads very well, when read aloud. It's fluid, and rhythmic. I really like this work. Please... do more? *kotc*
 
Victoria_2001_02769 said:
*Curtsies* Thank you BB. :)


you are such a beautiful and graeful lady Victoria, I hope that we can get to know each other better you have a very simple grace about you. and I love your writing
hugs and kisses sweetie :kiss: :rose:
 
Good Morning everyone hugs and kisses to the beautiful ladies

Victoria, EW , Philly, Babydoll, WYLD

^5 handshakes

LUST, MFM,

I also want to congratulate everyone on the beautiful poems submitted into the thread words that come from the heart and soul, emotions left open for everyone to see and feel . so I would like to say keep up the great writing whether it be poems or stories

:D :D
 
Loves Sweet Embrace

My Sweet Enchanted Love, please hold me tight
through the darkest night,
Your soft gentle hand lies against my flesh,
Your fingers soothes the uneasiness
that exists deep within my soul.

You sail beyond my breath, fluttering softly in my heart,
Softly whispering to my clandestine spirit.

In the placid streams of my essence
I envision your reflection,
As your softest tears bathe my deepest fears.

With each second I spend with you,
My heart will cherish them for all eternity
My Sweet Enchanted Love
 
Victoria_2001_02769 said:
Very nicely done, Philly! I'd love to see you put more work(s) up here. Your writing reads very well, when read aloud. It's fluid, and rhythmic. I really like this work. Please... do more? *kotc*

Thank you Victoria. Im truely sorry that I dont post or respond more to the works that are placed here. I tend to not post alot as you can see by the number and my join date. I have read every one that is posted and have used the feelings of them all in my own work.
MFM I can feel where your heart is, I think we are in the same place.
EW You write as beautiful as you are sweet soft wonderful
Victoria Your AVs inspire me. They give me a different view of the beauty that I see everyday.
To anyone that I missed, I apologise. Everyone here has shown a special talent to put whats in their minds and hearts down on "paper". I enjoy it all, immensely.

And to my primary source of inspiration, you know who you are, Keep shining because you never know whose path you are lighting up!
 
biggbear8 said:
you are such a beautiful and graceful lady Victoria, I hope that we can get to know each other better you have a very simple grace about you. and I love your writing
hugs and kisses sweetie :kiss: :rose:


I would dearly love to get to know you, and our other writers, better BB. I thank you for the compliments as regards my grace. Mother was born and raised in Virginia, so it was just natural for her to raise her daughters in the manner she was... to a degree, at least.

Thank you so very kindly for the hugs... and the kiss... and the rose. :eek:
 
Victoria_2001_02769 said:
Good Morning, Sweeter Sis! :kiss: Glad to know you are enjoying the reads, as much as Our writers, including yourself, are enjoying the feedback.

It is my firm belief that all writers, including myself, love to get what is called, in the world of management... Positive Strokes/Stroking. This is the ART, and yes, it is that... an ART, of positive reinforcement vs. negative.

If one receives constant negative strokes/stroking... (i.e. "You'll never do well with your writing. Why don't you quit?")... they will eventually begin to think in a negative manner and will, thusly in the end, quit writing because they feel that no one honestly likes their work.

By the same token... if one receives constant positive strokes/stroking... (i.e. "This piece is/was better than your last. I expect to see more like this one.")... they tend to feel more like writing... and will strive to make each piece/work as good, or better, than the one before.

It is this last one that I practice constantly... both on line and off... Each person NEEDS to feel they are of value... in some manner, in some way. This is my legacy... one of the things I wish to be remembered for... one of the things I did right in this life.


*steps down off her soapbox and adds it to the box that sits in the middle of her desk*
:kiss:

Did we not talk about impact last night ..dear...you have made a impact on every writer here as youself too..you make a impact everytime you are here and on ant thread you are on... love..never forget that. :kiss: es..Victoria
 
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