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Phillychocolatem said:WISH
When I look up at the stars at night
The sky is clear and the moon is bright
I place a wish upon a star
To be wherever it is you are
My wish came true one magical night
To be in your arms in the pale moonlight
I wished for my lover and a friend
someone to stand by me until the end
The star saw fit to grant my wish
And sent me one fine hot little dish
There are things that I feel for you
And so many things that I want to do
You in my arms holding me tight
Chasing away the fears of the night
Taking my heart in your hand
Making me feel like a much better man
Creating passion and Lust from my head to my toes
Doing things to my body that only God knows.
Melting me like chocolate with your smoldering kiss
Guiding my hands to make sure I dont miss
Your luscious curves and and delicate skin
I want to make love over and over again
When I look up to the stars at night
I know that my wish came out just right.
to you Philly work well done.
and ^5 Gents ...I hope all are having a good morning....come on in seat a spell ..the coffee and donuts are fresh made this wonderful Friday morning...The Corner is open to writer and readers alike..its a nice place to relax and chat too.

Phillychocolatem said:WISH
When I look up at the stars at night
The sky is clear and the moon is bright
I place a wish upon a star
To be wherever it is you are
My wish came true one magical night
To be in your arms in the pale moonlight
I wished for my lover and a friend
someone to stand by me until the end
The star saw fit to grant my wish
And sent me one fine hot little dish
There are things that I feel for you
And so many things that I want to do
You in my arms holding me tight
Chasing away the fears of the night
Taking my heart in your hand
Making me feel like a much better man
Creating passion and Lust from my head to my toes
Doing things to my body that only God knows.
Melting me like chocolate with your smoldering kiss
Guiding my hands to make sure I dont miss
Your luscious curves and and delicate skin
I want to make love over and over again
When I look up to the stars at night
I know that my wish came out just right.
and can feel your emotion and your passion...I think I also know your thoughts, your desires and your wishes...for hearts understand more than our minds...keep up the good work!!!MrFantasyMan said:Another sleepless night,
I left my window open tonight
so that I may awake from my dreams
and look out into the rain and see us.
Me holding you in my arms,
pulling you closer as we dance,
hearing our own song in the rain.
Laughing, kissing, compelled to never let go.
Finally the vision vanishes,
we weren’t really there, and never were.
We never held each other,
and we never danced beneath the pale moonlight,
Never felt the rain pour down, and soak us...Together.
Everyday I see you, not where you are,
but where I want you to be.
I reach over and tenderly run my fingertips along the sheets
beside me....where you should be.
I long to feel your face, your chest,
feel your life’s breath move in and out,
As you lie in a gentle sleep.
I move my hand to where I should feel your heart
beating steadily beneath my hand.
I close my eyes and I can almost feel it.
It seems no matter what I do anymore,
I envision you doing it with me.
Its almost like you should be there,
and sometimes I can’t figure out why you aren’t.
I drive through the streets,
and hear one of our favorite songs,
and I almost speak to you.
As if you were in the seat next to me, sharing the music.
I have reached over and placed my hand on the seat,
and it almost feels.......Warm.
As if you had already been there.
I long to take you with me,
to hold your hand at the movie theater,
to hear you laugh at the funny parts,
and cry with you at the sad ones.
Go dancing with you, and sway as one body to the music,
So close that our souls are almost touching, and healing......
I need you so much it seems,
I wonder how I ever made it through a day without knowing you.
All we have are our conversations,
I know your words so well,
I could easily pick you out of thousands,
I know you laugh, and even how your voice sounds when you smile.
I have sometimes heard a tear in your voice,
and all I can think about was reaching over the many miles
that separate me from you, and wiping it away,
taking away your heartache, my heartache.
It is all I can think of,
I carry you with me, You have become a part of me,
a part that I could never want to be without.
So I lie here,
and listen to the rain falling outside my window,
and I look out for a brief moment, I see us there again.
And then my gaze moves up to the ceiling,
searching for your smile.
I close my eyes and listen for your voice,
and then I hear it......”Goodnight my love”.
I open my eyes and look for you,
but surprisingly yet again, I am alone.
And now here I am......
another sleepless night
with out you...
MFM
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not much sleep...and this one wrote itself...![]()
esErotica_Writings said:good morning everyone, love all the great writings![]()

MrFantasyMan said:Another sleepless night,
I left my window open tonight
so that I may awake from my dreams
and look out into the rain and see us.
Me holding you in my arms,
pulling you closer as we dance,
hearing our own song in the rain.
Laughing, kissing, compelled to never let go.
Finally the vision vanishes,
we weren’t really there, and never were.
We never held each other,
and we never danced beneath the pale moonlight,
Never felt the rain pour down, and soak us...Together.
Everyday I see you, not where you are,
but where I want you to be.
I reach over and tenderly run my fingertips along the sheets
beside me....where you should be.
I long to feel your face, your chest,
feel your life’s breath move in and out,
As you lie in a gentle sleep.
I move my hand to where I should feel your heart
beating steadily beneath my hand.
I close my eyes and I can almost feel it.
It seems no matter what I do anymore,
I envision you doing it with me.
Its almost like you should be there,
and sometimes I can’t figure out why you aren’t.
I drive through the streets,
and hear one of our favorite songs,
and I almost speak to you.
As if you were in the seat next to me, sharing the music.
I have reached over and placed my hand on the seat,
and it almost feels.......Warm.
As if you had already been there.
I long to take you with me,
to hold your hand at the movie theater,
to hear you laugh at the funny parts,
and cry with you at the sad ones.
Go dancing with you, and sway as one body to the music,
So close that our souls are almost touching, and healing......
I need you so much it seems,
I wonder how I ever made it through a day without knowing you.
All we have are our conversations,
I know your words so well,
I could easily pick you out of thousands,
I know you laugh, and even how your voice sounds when you smile.
I have sometimes heard a tear in your voice,
and all I can think about was reaching over the many miles
that separate me from you, and wiping it away,
taking away your heartache, my heartache.
It is all I can think of,
I carry you with me, You have become a part of me,
a part that I could never want to be without.
So I lie here,
and listen to the rain falling outside my window,
and I look out for a brief moment, I see us there again.
And then my gaze moves up to the ceiling,
searching for your smile.
I close my eyes and listen for your voice,
and then I hear it......”Goodnight my love”.
I open my eyes and look for you,
but surprisingly yet again, I am alone.
And now here I am......
another sleepless night
with out you...
MFM
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not much sleep...and this one wrote itself...![]()


LustfulOne50 said:Nice one MFM...wondering was it raining again.... you have the gift my friend to say it from the heart and touch the soul of the reader so deeply...es
...and it rains often here... Erotica_Writings said:good morning everyone, love all the great writings![]()
Glad to know you are enjoying the reads, as much as Our writers, including yourself, are enjoying the feedback. 
Victoria_2001_02769 said:Good Morning, Sweeter Sis!Glad to know you are enjoying the reads, as much as Our writers, including yourself, are enjoying the feedback.
It is my firm belief that all writers, including myself, love to get what is called, in the world of management... Positive Strokes/Stroking. This is the ART, and yes, it is that... an ART, of positive reinforcement vs. negative.
If one receives constant negative strokes/stroking... (i.e. "You'll never do well with your writing. Why don't you quit?")... they will eventually begin to think in a negative manner and will, thusly in the end, quit writing because they feel that no one honestly likes their work.
By the same token... if one receives constant positive strokes/stroking... (i.e. "This piece is/was better than your last. I expect to see more like this one.")... they tend to feel more like writing... and will strive to make each piece/work as good, or better, than the one before.
It is this last one that I practice constantly... both on line and off... Each person NEEDS to feel they are of value... in some manner, in some way. This is my legacy... one of the things I wish to be remembered for... one of the things I did right in this life.
*steps down off her soapbox and adds it to the box that sits in the middle of her desk*![]()

Phillychocolatem said:WISH
When I look up at the stars at night
The sky is clear and the moon is bright
I place a wish upon a star
To be wherever it is you are
My wish came true one magical night
To be in your arms in the pale moonlight
I wished for my lover and a friend
someone to stand by me until the end
The star saw fit to grant my wish
And sent me one fine hot little dish
There are things that I feel for you
And so many things that I want to do
You in my arms holding me tight
Chasing away the fears of the night
Taking my heart in your hand
Making me feel like a much better man
Creating passion and Lust from my head to my toes
Doing things to my body that only God knows.
Melting me like chocolate with your smoldering kiss
Guiding my hands to make sure I dont miss
Your luscious curves and and delicate skin
I want to make love over and over again
When I look up to the stars at night
I know that my wish came out just right.
Victoria_2001_02769 said:Good Morning, Sweeter Sis!Glad to know you are enjoying the reads, as much as Our writers, including yourself, are enjoying the feedback.
It is my firm belief that all writers, including myself, love to get what is called, in the world of management... Positive Strokes/Stroking. This is the ART, and yes, it is that... an ART, of positive reinforcement vs. negative.
If one receives constant negative strokes/stroking... (i.e. "You'll never do well with your writing. Why don't you quit?")... they will eventually begin to think in a negative manner and will, thusly in the end, quit writing because they feel that no one honestly likes their work.
By the same token... if one receives constant positive strokes/stroking... (i.e. "This piece is/was better than your last. I expect to see more like this one.")... they tend to feel more like writing... and will strive to make each piece/work as good, or better, than the one before.
It is this last one that I practice constantly... both on line and off... Each person NEEDS to feel they are of value... in some manner, in some way. This is my legacy... one of the things I wish to be remembered for... one of the things I did right in this life.
*steps down off her soapbox and adds it to the box that sits in the middle of her desk*![]()
Erotica_Writings said:bravo sweet sis! Very well spoken!![]()
It is how I am... it is what I practice. You always make me smile Sweeter One. 
Phillychocolatem said:WISH
When I look up at the stars at night
The sky is clear and the moon is bright
I place a wish upon a star
To be wherever it is you are
My wish came true one magical night
To be in your arms in the pale moonlight
I wished for my lover and a friend
someone to stand by me until the end
The star saw fit to grant my wish
And sent me one fine hot little dish
There are things that I feel for you
And so many things that I want to do
You in my arms holding me tight
Chasing away the fears of the night
Taking my heart in your hand
Making me feel like a much better man
Creating passion and Lust from my head to my toes
Doing things to my body that only God knows.
Melting me like chocolate with your smoldering kiss
Guiding my hands to make sure I dont miss
Your luscious curves and and delicate skin
I want to make love over and over again
When I look up to the stars at night
I know that my wish came out just right.
Victoria_2001_02769 said:*Curtsies* Thank you BB.![]()


Victoria_2001_02769 said:Very nicely done, Philly! I'd love to see you put more work(s) up here. Your writing reads very well, when read aloud. It's fluid, and rhythmic. I really like this work. Please... do more? *kotc*
biggbear8 said:you are such a beautiful and graceful lady Victoria, I hope that we can get to know each other better you have a very simple grace about you. and I love your writing
hugs and kisses sweetie![]()
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Victoria_2001_02769 said:Good Morning, Sweeter Sis!Glad to know you are enjoying the reads, as much as Our writers, including yourself, are enjoying the feedback.
It is my firm belief that all writers, including myself, love to get what is called, in the world of management... Positive Strokes/Stroking. This is the ART, and yes, it is that... an ART, of positive reinforcement vs. negative.
If one receives constant negative strokes/stroking... (i.e. "You'll never do well with your writing. Why don't you quit?")... they will eventually begin to think in a negative manner and will, thusly in the end, quit writing because they feel that no one honestly likes their work.
By the same token... if one receives constant positive strokes/stroking... (i.e. "This piece is/was better than your last. I expect to see more like this one.")... they tend to feel more like writing... and will strive to make each piece/work as good, or better, than the one before.
It is this last one that I practice constantly... both on line and off... Each person NEEDS to feel they are of value... in some manner, in some way. This is my legacy... one of the things I wish to be remembered for... one of the things I did right in this life.
*steps down off her soapbox and adds it to the box that sits in the middle of her desk*![]()
es..Victoria