Learning the Dance

[klvyoenne]

Recently I started a storyline on which I would like your comments and feedback. Christy, a womanling, begins learning about her sexuality from Gloria, a coworker and friend. It's not intended to be a stroke & cum, but perhaps the start of something more, eposodic? My main goal is believability and realism.

My biggest challenge: I am not now, nor have I ever been in a lesbian relationship. Please, those of you with more experience in this category than I, lend me your wisdom.

http://english.literotica.com:81/stories/memberpage.php?uid=634079&page=submissions

Thank you!

K

 

[TheeGoatPig]

I just know that my lesbian scenes are going to suffer due to the facts that I'm not a lesbian (being a man and all), have never had my pussy eaten (still being a man and all), and never eaten pussy. But I persevere.

Good luck on your research (maybe I'll steal some of it for my own needs ).

 

[klvyoenne]

Never having eaten pussy

Mr. Pig,

May I inquire as to why? Do you prefer sausage to taco?

K

 

[TheeGoatPig]

Mr. Pig,

May I inquire as to why? Do you prefer sausage to taco?

K

Hell no. I love women. But they don't love me I've been with one woman and she wouldn't even let me try going down on her! Very odd indeed.

 

[klvyoenne]

I looked at your photos

I prefer the ones with you with more hair on the top of your head =)

-K

 

[Carnevil9]

I'm pretty sure that Isaac Asimov never went to Trantor, yet he still wrote some excellent fiction. Research and imagination will serve you well.....Carney

 

[SweetErika]

Recently I started a storyline on which I would like your comments and feedback. Christy, a womanling, begins learning about her sexuality from Gloria, a coworker and friend. It's not intended to be a stroke & cum, but perhaps the start of something more, eposodic? My main goal is believability and realism.

My biggest challenge: I am not now, nor have I ever been in a lesbian relationship. Please, those of you with more experience in this category than I, lend me your wisdom.

http://english.literotica.com:81/stories/memberpage.php?uid=634079&page=submissions

Thank you!

K

What would you like to know?

The GLBT forum might be a good resource for you, too. I haven't checked it out, but perhaps the "First Experiences" threads (one's a sticky at the top of the forum) will have some juicy details.

 

[klvyoenne]

What I seek.

It was suggested that I post these questions here.

Recently I started a storyline titled, "Learning the Dance" on which I would like your comments and feedback. http://english.literotica.com:81/st...age=submissions

Christy, a womanling, begins learning about her sexuality from Gloria, a coworker and friend. It's not intended to be a stroke & cum, but perhaps the start of something more, eposodic? My main goal is believability and realism.

My biggest challenge: I am not now, nor have I ever been in a lesbian relationship. Please, those of you with more experience in this category than I, lend me your wisdom.

What I really seek is realism in the story. I want to know if I'm on the right track with my story, Learning the Dance. I ask, are these really things that two women would do? Is the story on the right track as far as an obviously experienced woman who'se seducing a virgin (metaphorically and actually)? Are the expressions believable? Things like that. Also are the converasations realistic?

I guess the biggest question is, when you read the story, are you drawn into it? Do you find yourself skipping over parts, or are you actually interested in the characters and the action? Do you want to read more?

Klvyoenne