It's Up! My Latest Story!

[SSobotkaJr]

It's finally here! After waiting for the mods to approve it, my latest story is now up for reading:

https://literotica.com/s/my-sister-dee-pt-02 -- My Sister Dee, Pt. 2.

I hope everyone enjoys it, as well as I hope you guys go back to read the first part (to better understand how we go to where we are now!). Please do take the time to vote and leave comments. I find it helps with the motivation to write more if I get any kind of feedback!

Thanks in advance!

 

[SSobotkaJr]

The current vote is up to 4.63, and so far a bunch of folks have added the chapter to their reading lists. Also got two comments that were most welcome to get!

Appreciate all who read and comment and vote! Looking forwards to hearing more from the Lit-Community!

 

[8letters]

I don't think it's an appealing story. I didn't read the first chapter. Maybe if I had, I'd find the story more interesting. The writing is fine, but, to me, sequels rarely work, and this one doesn't for me. It's very implausible and doesn't have a conflict. Dee leaves out evidence that she had sex in plain sight for her mom to see? She doesn't tell her mom that she had sex with some guy from the party but instead spills her guts that she fucked her brother? And it turns out that the mom spent a summer fucking her brother? That'd be like someone being struck by lightning was the child of someone struck by lightning. And the mom doesn't allow Dee to have sex with a boyfriend in the house, but does let her have sex with her brother? Like I said, it didn't work for me.

 

[SSobotkaJr]

I don't think it's an appealing story. I didn't read the first chapter. Maybe if I had, I'd find the story more interesting. The writing is fine, but, to me, sequels rarely work, and this one doesn't for me. It's very implausible and doesn't have a conflict. Dee leaves out evidence that she had sex in plain sight for her mom to see? She doesn't tell her mom that she had sex with some guy from the party but instead spills her guts that she fucked her brother? And it turns out that the mom spent a summer fucking her brother? That'd be like someone being struck by lightning was the child of someone struck by lightning. And the mom doesn't allow Dee to have sex with a boyfriend in the house, but does let her have sex with her brother? Like I said, it didn't work for me.

Fair enough. It didn't work for you. Not every story is going to appeal or "work" for everyone that reads it.

I'll do my best to do better on my next story.


-- Stephen