Incest Writers: Sister should be virginal?

[Trionyx]

Oh, ye of little faith.

The husband/father, out of his weird religious scruples, insisted that her cherry be kept intact forever, and forbade her from any exams that would pop it. He always insisted that she had to see a doctor that also went to his church and abided by its weird tenets.

The husband/father may have wanted that but she playing around with her fingers for a long time and was very handy with her electric toothbrush (both ends, mind you). That cherry done give up the ghost.

 

[FantasySharer1]

Personally I LOVE the idea of the virginal younger/little sister and the big brother showing her the ropes. Protecting her from any other men who would take advantage of her and only having her pussy exposed to her big brother. The exclusivity of it is kind of a turn on.

I really think it's on the mood of the story. The idea of the innocent sweet sister finding love and protection in her daddy-figure/big brother is really beautiful in its own right.

On the other hand if the highlight is the sexuality of the sister, and the experience and knowledge she brings to the table to initiate the brother - this is also incredibly hot.

A nice mix is a twin set up of bro-sis who have their own varied experiences, and then come back and have realizations that they are really meant for each other. Removing the teacher/taught paradigm and replacing with a finding-soulmate type paradigm.

 

[SimonDoom]

Personally I LOVE the idea of the virginal younger/little sister and the big brother showing her the ropes. Protecting her from any other men who would take advantage of her and only having her pussy exposed to her big brother. The exclusivity of it is kind of a turn on.

I really think it's on the mood of the story. The idea of the innocent sweet sister finding love and protection in her daddy-figure/big brother is really beautiful in its own right.

On the other hand if the highlight is the sexuality of the sister, and the experience and knowledge she brings to the table to initiate the brother - this is also incredibly hot.

A nice mix is a twin set up of bro-sis who have their own varied experiences, and then come back and have realizations that they are really meant for each other. Removing the teacher/taught paradigm and replacing with a finding-soulmate type paradigm.

It's interesting how powerful the virgin/exclusivity themes are in incest stories. Many people seem to be very turned on by these concepts.

 

[BuckyDuckman]

It's interesting how powerful the virgin/exclusivity themes are in incest stories. Many people seem to be very turned on by these concepts.

Since many of my stories include first times, it makes sense to include that concept in an incest story. If nothing else, first times add easy drama. What I don't get is the appeal of exclusivity and the "they happily ever after, together forever" aspect.

I've had a couple of commenters reply to my incest stories that they should forever remain exclusive to each other.

Really?

 

[SimonDoom]

I've had a couple of commenters reply to my incest stories that they should forever remain exclusive to each other.

Really?

It's an unrealistic fantasy, but for whatever reason it's very powerful for some readers.

You see it in Mom-Son incest as well. Some readers love the idea that Mom saves herself just for her son and nobody else.

 

[TadOverdon]

It's an unrealistic fantasy, but for whatever reason it's very powerful for some readers.

You see it in Mom-Son incest as well. Some readers love the idea that Mom saves herself just for her son and nobody else.

When NotWise jokingly brought up "virginal moms" this was the kind of thing I thought of: stories in which the mother is terribly innocent and generally less sexually experienced than, well, anybody but especially her kids. And then, of course, she gets fucked so good that she's head over heels and devoted for life to her son. Often never had an orgasm with anyone before.

That trope clearly turns a lot of folks on.

 

[SimonDoom]

When NotWise brought jokingly brought up "virginal moms" this was the kind of thing I thought of: stories in which the mother is terribly innocent and generally less sexually experienced than, well, anybody but especially her kids. And then, of course, she gets fucked so good that she's head over heels and devoted for life to her son. Often never had an orgasm with anyone before.

That trope clearly turns a lot of folks on.

The all-time great example of this, IMO, is SpacerX's insane epic incest/harem story Six Times A Day, which has what I regard as the nuttiest erotic story premise of all time but is hugely entertaining. Mom is uptight and prudish and I think it takes over 20 chapters before she has sex with the son, who in the meantime has acquired a harem of women who are desperate to please him sexually. It's completely nuts but lots of fun. Some chapters of that story are here at Literotica but I think some got removed because of allegedly "noncompliant" content. The full story can be found elsewhere.

 

[NotWise]

Since many of my stories include first times, it makes sense to include that concept in an incest story. If nothing else, first times add easy drama. What I don't get is the appeal of exclusivity and the "they happily ever after, together forever" aspect.

I've had a couple of commenters reply to my incest stories that they should forever remain exclusive to each other.

Really?

I've seen those comments, too. HEA is appealing to a lot of people, but that's only one possible variant on the pleasant, sentimental ending that seems very popular.

I don't usually write stories for the audience that wants mom and son, daddy and daughter, or brother and sister to live forever in a monogamous relationship. There's something in the idea that squirks me; it's one thing to take a dive into a relationship at a time of need, and something else again to make a life out of it.

As for "virginal sister," I think that's pretty much a way of getting underage content through the rules. "Yeah, she's eighteen." Nod, nod, wink, wink. "So what if she acts fourteen?"

 

[RicoLouis]

For me it depends on the sister. Younger sisters I tend to write as more virginal to closet pervert who can be naughty but inexperienced. Older sisters I tend to write as more experienced sexually but still trying to figure out who they are and may be more open to different experiences.

 

[AngstIgnored]

I suspect that if 100 people read your story, there will never be anywhere near 100 similar opinions on the best way of presenting the characters and their histories. In the end, it's your story, so tell it however you like. Even if you're trying to cater to a specific subset of your potential audience, somebody will wish they were more (or less) experienced when you're done.

 

[jaF0]

Believe me, Goldie is far from Virginal.

 

[ElectricBlue]

I suspect that if 100 people read your story, there will never be anywhere near 100 similar opinions on the best way of presenting the characters and their histories. In the end, it's your story, so tell it however you like. Even if you're trying to cater to a specific subset of your potential audience, somebody will wish they were more (or less) experienced when you're done.

This. I announced my latest instalment of a fetish story as "full on suburban pornotopia" - which suggests to me at least it's gone a bit over the top. Further, the story catch line clearly indicates a new participant, yet I have a comment saying the first part had promise (a little patronising, I thought), but the second instalment was an attempt to go full harem mode.

At least the commenter apologised for losing interest. But even so, I don't recall taking any requests or asking for input. What can you do, other than shrug your shoulders and say, "It's my story, I'll write it how I want to write it"?

 

[jaF0]

^^^ I've had a few of those.

 

[lovecraft68]

This. I announced my latest instalment of a fetish story as "full on suburban pornotopia" - which suggests to me at least it's gone a bit over the top. Further, the story catch line clearly indicates a new participant, yet I have a comment saying the first part had promise (a little patronising, I thought), but the second instalment was an attempt to go full harem mode.

At least the commenter apologised for losing interest. But even so, I don't recall taking any requests or asking for input. What can you do, other than shrug your shoulders and say, "It's my story, I'll write it how I want to write it"?

If you have comments on you're taking requests for input.