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Incest twists?

I liked many of the ideas already posted.

I was working on one story (which i lost) first cousins who fall into a relationship after mutual friends set them up on a blind date not knowing they are related. The carry on a sexual relationship for awhile until it comes out that he was adopted. Then he breaks off the realtionship because it doesn't carry the same thrill for him anymore.
 
Try this case....

How about a brother/sister who were separated from mother's custody at their birth, and adopted by different families. The siblings never knew they had a brother/sister. Years later, the two met in college and dated, fell in love, have sex as college students do, and married after graduating. One of them begins a genealogy search for their family as they both knew they were adopted, and discovers they were, actually brother and sister! Further more, they already had a child.....
 
1965looker said:
How about a brother/sister who were separated from mother's custody at their birth, and adopted by different families. The siblings never knew they had a brother/sister. Years later, the two met in college and dated, fell in love, have sex as college students do, and married after graduating. One of them begins a genealogy search for their family as they both knew they were adopted, and discovers they were, actually brother and sister! Further more, they already had a child.....
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Interesting way to do the "separated family" tale. :) I have some ideas on the back burner about "separated biological" families...
 
Sex, Sex, Sex

If you boil it all down, it's fucking. A dick in an ass, a pussy, a mouth, whatever. So it needs to be interesting, otherwise it's just sex.

I have asked myself, how do I write something that's not a repeat of what I've written before?

The answer I found was/is to develop an interesting storyline. In other words a plot not based on sex. Develop the characters, make them interesting, and then place them into different situations and imagine how they'd react. I'm a detail person. AKA if a woman is in a possibly uncomfortable position she's sore afterwards. It's minor but helps complete the picture the words are creating.

I seem to be having success with the RIPPLES ON A POND series. Good feedback and votes, and I'm now writing Ch. 06 (04 and 05 seem stuck in the approval process).

Give the readers a reason to WANT to read more. Keep them on edge, waiting for the next chapter. There are times when I'm writing and I think "this is the same as ---- story. So I use different situations to make it unique.

That's just my thoughts. Thanks for the thread.
 
not twisted* but incestuous: check out my latest story...

let me have Ideas for a third part , or has this one run its course?



*welllll....not a twisted plot, but still a product of my twisted mind.
 
sirhugs said:
*welllll....not a twisted plot, but still a product of my twisted mind.
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And that's a good thing! :D I still need to read your part two, hon, but I have no time off until Thursday. And then I have to have wisdom teeth pulled. :(
 
Shendude said:
Actually, it takes several generations of continual inbreeding amongst first blood before incest starts being harmful biologically.

Anyways, I've thought of a couple of incest scenarios, but none of them occurs in the modern day:

-As you may or may not know, Ancient Rome allowed for a suprising amount of social mobility for freed slaves. It is also a well known fact that freed slaves make the harshest masters. So, we have a freed slave who's managed to achieve great wealth and comparitive status. He acquires a highly attractive slave-girl for the obvious use, and after using her for such, too his shock, discovers that they share a highly distinctive birthmark. In short, they're related. Further investigation reveals that she is in fact, his daughter (he'd obviously be a fairly mature fellow, it taking quite a bit of time to climb up the social ladder, and the girl would be rather young, only 18).

-The society of Ancient Sparta was built on the backs of their Helot slaves. Almost every aspect of Spartan society was designed to ensure the Helots were kept down. Obviously, sex between Spartans and Helots were NOT well thought of, but of course they happened. So, what happens is this: a Spartan woman has an affair with a Helot, and bears his child. The kid kinda looks like her and is born in a time when he could be passed off as belonging to her husband. If the truth was revealed, she and her lover would be executed, and quite possibly the kid too. At the very least he'd become a Helot himself. Flash forward a few years. The deception's been working pretty well, not even the kid knowing his true parentage. The kid's in his late teens, and like most boys that age participates in the Krypteia (a Spartan ritual in which young men covertly terrorize the Helots, particularly those who stand out in some way). In the intervening years, his biological father has sired a Helot daughter, one of spectacular beauty. Obviously, this can't go unpunished, and so the kid and his comrades gang-rape and then mutilate the girl.

-In one of those countries (perhaps Eygpt?) were incestual politcal marriages are fairly normal, power is seized by a new clan. By tradition, in order to strengthen the bloodline (and hold the throne), the new king must take a wife from among his first blood as his queen. This naturally causes some trouble for the new monarch, as in his previous relatively lowly status such a thing was abominate.

-In a Chaldean city-state, a coup occurs, the King murdered. Of his two children, one, a daughter, is safely a member of the priesthood. The other goes into exile in the court of another king. Years pass, and the former exile manages to retake the city. Meanwhile, his sister has risen to the role of high priestess. Unfortunately, one of the duties of the high priestess is to publically couple with the king at harvest time, and vice versa.


What do you think? Good? Too elaborate? Stupid?
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Those ideas are all so incredibly hot and brilliant and I think I just came in my pants. I am now in love with you.

Admittedly, I'm a fickle whore and liable to transfer that love to the next person with a hot idea, but hey...I go for intensity rather than duration.
 
MzDeviancy said:
Those ideas are all so incredibly hot and brilliant and I think I just came in my pants. I am now in love with you.

Admittedly, I'm a fickle whore and liable to transfer that love to the next person with a hot idea, but hey...I go for intensity rather than duration.
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Hmmm....so we might each have our turn? That could be interesting.. A little strange for a guy like me, since I am not exactly a sub, to be the object of an apparent Domme's crush....but I will mindlessly pace on that bridge when I get there. ;) :devil:
 
Hallowed Eve said:
And that's a good thing! :D I still need to read your part two, hon, but I have no time off until Thursday. And then I have to have wisdom teeth pulled. :(
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sadistic dentist stories to come?
 
SEVERUSMAX said:
Hmmm....so we might each have our turn? That could be interesting.. A little strange for a guy like me, since I am not exactly a sub, to be the object of an apparent Domme's crush....but I will mindlessly pace on that bridge when I get there. ;) :devil:
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Apparent Domme? How do you figure?
 
Hallowed Eve said:
rofl Maybe. We'll see how I feel after Thursday! :rolleyes:
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maybe , to keep with the thread theme, Daddy hasta hold daughter's hand during the procedure, the laughing gas, loosens her inhibitions....
 
sirhugs said:
maybe , to keep with the thread theme, Daddy hasta hold daughter's hand during the procedure, the laughing gas, loosens her inhibitions....
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Nice way to tie incest back into it. ;)
 
Hallowed Eve said:
lol Cute. :)
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Thanks. Plus, she called herself a "professional bitch" and starts her username with Mz. Gives a little suggestion of her inclination. :D ;)
 
SEVERUSMAX said:
Maybe so. Could be useful to one, just as "subdar" would be useful to a Master like me. :D
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Y'know, that MIGHT be the beginning of an SF story...
 
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