I'm stuck and I need a little bit of help please

[Nobody Special's wife]

She sits there by the cliff watching the sea. Waiting for her man to set her free from her pain. She has all the needs and wants and yet she has to wait for her man. For his ship to come in to port.


The Painter watches this angel by the cliffs and paints her every expression her longs her wants her needs. He feels him self-get hard. And masturbates his needing flesh. Because he wants this angel like No other woman he has had before.


She gets up its going to be dark she say" to her self.
As she starts to walk home she sees a man painting.

She walks up to him...Hello she says". Painter says" Hello my name is Chase. May I ask who you are?" She says" Hello my name is Lisa. What are you painting?


Oh! Chase says". Well as he try's to hide his hard on. I'm painting you! I say you by the cliffs and I just couldn't help my self.

Lisa looks at him and smiles that is all right I don't mind would you like to have some coffee with me?

Chase No I'm sorry I have to get going. . But I will meet you here tomorrow is that all right.

Lisa smiles and says that would be just fine. I will see you tomorrow..

OK this is my story and I'm just stuck!!!

Help me tell something to help me get to the middle this is my first story

THE WIFE

 

[Ray Dario]

NSWife, I posted a reply to this in the story feedback area so I won't repeat my comments here. I am only posting this in case you only intended to start this thread here and might miss my reply over there.

Good luck!

Ray