Long time reader, new to writing. Could use a little help?

[billrokra]

Thanks Cagivagurl, I hear ya and appreciate your thoughts. As a noob it is so helpful to hear everyone's advice and thoughts. I agree, it would be a messy soup of a story if I try to please everyone. I will write what I like and hope others will as well. I am already enjoying my story just writing what I have.

Mimi

Writing for yourself is always the best policy. Best of luck with your story - it sounds great already.