Halloween Support Thread

[Honey123]

Ok...so, WTF? My story is being bombed every day!


ElizabethT...feel better, babe!!

 

[Selena_Kitt]

Hey....

I think the stories are currently in reverse winning order, if I'm not mistaken... I just noticed because as we all know Abyss is out in the stratosphere somewhere and is listed last... and started looking up the list backwards (been trying to read all the ones I've missed and my highlighted thing doesn't work!)... and realized... wow, these are all high scorers... (and don't be mad at me for posting it, I know the order will be changed again, and troll votes will likely be swept if they follow... but I apologize in advance if they do! just wanted to make the observation... )

 

[rgraham666]

Don't worry about it Selena. Lit will remove troll votes before announcing the winner.

I'm more pleased with the feedback than anything. Heard from a lot of people I've never heard from before, whose opinions I respect.

 

[Honey123]

RG...that's an awesome score babe ~Good luck!!

Mine went from 4.80 down to a 4.70 in 2 days....

I didn't think mine was going anyway in the winnings or even mentionables, but, why do people do that?

 

[English Lady]

Rumply _ i do hope we get to mutually 69 soon

ELizt -get well soon sweetheart, heal well

 

[Boxlicker101]

so um sunday morning i broke my leg in two places and i have been in the hospital since then so i am typing one handedbecause of how i am sittin


UMMMMMM

OOOOOOOUUUUUUUUCCCCCCCHHHHHHHH

swearsssssss really loud

I'm sorry to read that, Lizzie. Does the hospital provide you with lizards?

 

[Aliyahlovinsex]

Ali, this is strictly IMH) and "for what it's worth" stuff. If I'm going to lay something negative on a writer's story, I do it by PM or e-mail. Some people don't deal well with public criticism and sometimes it can lead to a others piling on.

True, PM prolly would have been better. I was kinda mad after reading the story which is why I chose to do it publicly.

Here's another question for you guys. Do you think people ever make up fake names and leave themselves public comments and votes? lol cuz on this one story I was reading, which was interesting, but full of punctuation mistakes and what not, and a reader left a PC saying how great it was, and what a perfect use of the English language

Anyhow, just wanted to say I think I've read everyone here's(so far) Halloween Story and they are all very good


P.S. That wasn't brown nosing either lol it was the honest truth.

 

[Honey123]

True, PM prolly would have been better. I was kinda mad after reading the story which is why I chose to do it publicly.

Here's another question for you guys. Do you think people ever make up fake names and leave themselves public comments and votes? lol cuz on this one story I was reading, which was interesting, but full of punctuation mistakes and what not, and a reader left a PC saying how great it was, and what a perfect use of the English language

Anyhow, just wanted to say I think I've read everyone here's(so far) Halloween Story and they are all very good


P.S. That wasn't brown nosing either lol it was the honest truth.

Perhaps that PC was being sarcastic?

 

[Aliyahlovinsex]

Perhaps that PC was being sarcastic?

lol Maybe, but when it's followed by the words...a fan forever, I dunno, lol you tell me.

 

[Honey123]

lol Maybe, but when it's followed by the words...a fan forever, I dunno, lol you tell me.

lol...was it the top PC? IF so, then I would say yes, it was the person posting his/her own PC...

 

[Black Tulip]

True, PM prolly would have been better. I was kinda mad after reading the story which is why I chose to do it publicly.

Here's another question for you guys. Do you think people ever make up fake names and leave themselves public comments and votes? lol cuz on this one story I was reading, which was interesting, but full of punctuation mistakes and what not, and a reader left a PC saying how great it was, and what a perfect use of the English language

Anyhow, just wanted to say I think I've read everyone here's(so far) Halloween Story and they are all very good


P.S. That wasn't brown nosing either lol it was the honest truth.

Well .... there is this one story with over 100 comments ...

Bunny, bunny, ball, ball...

http://www.addis-welt.de/smilie/smilie/magie/1348.gif

 

[Aliyahlovinsex]

Well .... there is this one story with over 100 comments ...

Bunny, bunny, ball, ball...

http://www.addis-welt.de/smilie/smilie/magie/1348.gif

musta been a good story

I was thinking of something cool to say in Dutch, but I just realized I've totally forgotten everything I ever learned

 

[Honey123]

Well .... there is this one story with over 100 comments ...

Bunny, bunny, ball, ball...

http://www.addis-welt.de/smilie/smilie/magie/1348.gif

Don't know what story you mean...let me know.

Anyway, BT...I am sorry I never got to yours...I just did RVC'd...It was great!

 

[Honey123]

musta been a good story

I was thinking of something cool to say in Dutch, but I just realized I've totally forgotten everything I ever learned

Just read yours...RVC'd....good job!!

 

[Extreme Bohunk]

Well .... there is this one story with over 100 comments ...

Bunny, bunny, ball, ball...

http://www.addis-welt.de/smilie/smilie/magie/1348.gif

heh heh heh

 

[Rumple Foreskin]

Hey....

I think the stories are currently in reverse winning order, if I'm not mistaken... I just noticed because as we all know Abyss is out in the stratosphere somewhere and is listed last... and started looking up the list backwards (been trying to read all the ones I've missed and my highlighted thing doesn't work!)... and realized... wow, these are all high scorers... (and don't be mad at me for posting it, I know the order will be changed again, and troll votes will likely be swept if they follow... but I apologize in advance if they do! just wanted to make the observation... )

You could be right Selena. However, I promise you Penelope Street doesn't have the "worst" story in the contest. Simply put, Penny's one the the best writers at Lit. Her story was, however, just posted. Odds are, it's still short on votes and views. Sight unseen, I recommend reading her entry.

Rumple Foreskin

 

[CrimsonMaiden]

I still have to read some. I've gotten way behind. If I've missed yours, don't despair. I will get to it.

Ouch Elizabeth. Hope you feel better soon and heal quickly.

 

[Penelope Street]

...
However, I promise you Penelope Street doesn't have the "worst" story in the contest.
...

ty

 

[ewopper]

A Strange Event [Halloween Poetic short story]

It was a cool October night
as I walked under a moon so bright
the stars literally bathed the sky
in neon beauty to my eye

which was welcome, as the lonely back road I walked
listening to the crickets as they talked
about some great event in cricket land
mystifying the mind of this humble man

the moon was so bright I could even see
my twilight shadow following me
it was eerie, yet held a macarbe delight
as I walked along on that starry night

coming upon an an area with trees on each side
the road was dark and not very wide
as I entered the shadowland made by trees
I felt the stirrings of a chilling breeze

accompanied by laughter of the feminine kind
haunting yet bubbly , wreaking havoc with my mind
I then felt a warm body press close up to me
as I wondered at the strange insanity

"love me," I heard someone whisper to me
yet no physical presence was I able to see
I could feel the fabric of some sheer nightgown
brush up against me and wrap around

my legs assisted by the evening breeze
giving me a chilling sense of unease
"love me," I heard the voice say once more
this time much more sultry than before

I felt hot yet icy lips kiss mine
as shivers of delight danced up and down my spine
I felt an invisible tongue penetrate my lips
as invisible hands firmly grabbed my hips

and I felt someone grinding up against me
in an effort of pure sexuality
despite my confusion, I became quite erect
from this happenstance that I did not expect

I felt hot hands stroking my member
like igniting fiery feelings from a dying ember
"it's so hard " I heard I heard the voice say excitedly
" Ican't wait to feel it inside of me

I felt the unseen fingers my trousers unzip
freeing my meat, proceeding to play with it
though I couldn't see the wraith seducing me
I could sense her next move instinctively

I felt hot lips engulf my rigid cock
causing my body to reel and rock
from the invisible lips giving me such pleasure
sucking me to heights, words or thoughts could not measure

I felt myself getting ready to shoot my wad
from this out of the world blow job
into an invisible mouth I began to spurt
as the unseen one sucked so hard it began to hurt

I tried with all my strength to push her away
but she sucked even harder in her tormenting foreplay
with a last ditch effort I pulled away from the thing
that was causing me such bittersweet suffering

"I'm sorry," the voice said, "but I lost control"
Don't go, I want to feel you inside my hot hole
I couldn't believe what was happening to me
I was involved in what was an impossibility

to be having sex with the dead was insanity
yet I found myself caught up in the vanity
of wanting to fuck this unseen thing
curious as to the feelings it would bring...

to be continued... only if there's enough interest in wanting to see the conclusion

 

[Rumple Foreskin]

ty

Just "telling it like it is" Penny.

Rumple Foreskin

 

[Selena_Kitt]

You could be right Selena. However, I promise you Penelope Street doesn't have the "worst" story in the contest. Simply put, Penny's one the the best writers at Lit. Her story was, however, just posted. Odds are, it's still short on votes and views. Sight unseen, I recommend reading her entry.

Oh I have no doubt that the "best" or "worst" won't necessarily reflect votes cast and received at all... just making the observation that they seemed to be in some sort of order... the way I've been going through them, trying to mark the ones I've read and haven't (still haven't figured out that whole "highlighted" thing and how to turn it on/off, it just refreshes itself willy nilly at its own whim! Personally, I think it's possessed...) I've noticed sometimes they're in alphabetical order by name, or by author... today seemed random, and then I realized...

but thanks for pointing out Penelope's story, it's one I haven't read yet (and since it's just been posted, that's why!)

 

[Aliyahlovinsex]

Just read yours...RVC'd....good job!!

Thanks Honey That was very sweet of you. And Black Tulip too

 

[Penelope Street]

... thanks for pointing out Penelope's story, it's one I haven't read yet (and since it's just been posted, that's why!)

Hi Selena,

I sure wouldn't want you, or anyone else, to feel obliged to read my story. First, it's long and has some unsavory aspects. Second, I've not had time to read anyone else's save the one I edited, so I'd be quite the hypocrite to show up now and ask others to read mine.

Take Care,
Penny

eta: I love your clever excerpt. Great idea.

 

[TheEarl]

I finished one! I have never, ever, ever finished a contest story for Lit before today. Had an idea a weejk agao and submitted it just this moment. Be gentle when it comes out.

The Earl

 

[rgraham666]

I finished one! I have never, ever, ever finished a contest story for Lit before today. Had an idea a weejk agao and submitted it just this moment. Be gentle when it comes out.

The Earl

Way to go, Earl!