Haiku ~ You Coo

[Rambling Rose]

You missed some good shit
Don't be such a lazy fuck
Go back to page one

 

[claude_moveml]

there is no narrative thrust
to this thread i think
just haiku

 

[Rambling Rose]

Speaking of thrusting
You seem to have missed the gist
Try reading again

 

[claude_moveml]

by narrative thrust
i meant cunning plots, intrigue
perhaps i was wrong

 

[Rambling Rose]

It's all back and forth
Conversations in haiku
Did you not follow?

 

[claude_moveml]

yes conversations
but far too little action
(i want explosions)

 

[claude_moveml]

Kaboom! Ratatat!
James Bond hit by hot metal,
but bullet proof vest.

 

[Rambling Rose]

You have the wrong thread
Perhaps something by REDWAVE?
I wish I could help

 

[claude_moveml]

I do not like that
comparison to REDWAVE.
Back to conversing.

 

[SilvaTungDevil]

You missed some good shit
Don't be such a lazy fuck
Go back to page one

I was excited
had to post right that minute
have read them all now

 

[claude_moveml]

I can be amused
by perverting poetic forms
to unpoetic ends.

Whether others are
should be my concern also.
Inconsiderate.

 

[Rambling Rose]

A pm for you
Is on it's way very soon
I have missed you too

 

[claude_moveml]

Back in a minute,
time for a cigarette break.
Smoke breaks computers.

 

[BigDawg69]

Bodacious Bump
More haiku for a Thursday
The day is crispy

 

[perks]

My feet are so cold
but in a week and a half
I won't really care.

 

[BigDawg69]

You wear socks to bed?
My feet stretch so far away
My blood is cold there

 

[sunstruck]

The Haikus are back!
I am very excited
I'd almost forgot

 

[Olivianna]

I tried limericks -
I'm finding they suck big ass.
Haiku is for me.

 

[sunstruck]

So glad this was bumped
I'm in the mood for Haiku
Hope Rose gets back soon

 

[Saint Peter]

Splayed leather britches.
Smothered deer hoof sweats, itches.
Ahhhhhhh, talcom powder.




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Know the Toe

 

[Olivianna]

I need it badly -
Rhythmic, pounding syllables -
Haiku (uh huh) yeah...

 

[RawHumor]

I need it badly -
Rhythmic, pounding syllables -
Haiku (uh huh) yeah...

I know you want me
You excitable sexpot
Now get on your knees

 

[JazzManJim]

Sparrow on the wing
I fly toward the haiku thread
Feathers aflitter.

 

[Olivianna]

Clean your own damn floors!
I'm busy stringing up words -
No time for you, ok?

 

[RawHumor]

Clean your own damn floors!
I'm busy stringing up words -
No time for you, ok?

I'm sorry, you lose
Your last sentence does have one
Extra syllable