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[HotCosmo]

Hello people. I'm HotCosmo and this is my first time using a forum.

I'm writing a new par for my story The Circle of Druids and having problems with a sentence that I'm unable to complete.

"When I had his ass in front of me I couldn't help but slap it. His ass was firm but elastic like_____."​

I usually do a lot of research because I'm not a native speaker of English but in this case, I'm not finding anything useful on the internet.

I appreciate any comment or idea to complete the sentence or even another way to rewrite it. I add the complete fragment in case it helps:

He found the situation amusing, wearing a smirk that I wasn't going to let him hold onto for much longer.
I kissed him, dominating his mount and barely letting him breathe. When I let him free his lips he had to take a deep breath. His cheeks were red and his eyes said passion.
"Let's go to my room, I wanna hear you moan." He didn't respond, only nodded, and headed to my room.
When I had his ass in front of me I couldn't help but slap it. His ass was firm but elastic like__________.​

 

[AlinaX]

... a pair of volleyball balls.

 

[AlinaX]

His ass was firm but elastic like... like... I don't know, but I wanted to kneel down behind him and sink my teeth into that ripe, gorgeous flesh.

 

[aToyEnjoyer]

Firm but elastic kinda reminds me of silicone or a sex toy.

... silicone.

... a silicone toy.

... a silicone doll.

... a sex doll.

 

[AlinaX]

... like a government minister's sense of morality.

 

[SyleusSnow]

Elastic might not be quite the right word. It comes across as a little humorous. I'd go with "yielding", "pliant", or even "soft".

I don't think you even need a similie in this case. Try "his ass was firm, but soft and yielding to the touch"

 

[StillStunned]

"soft but firm, like velvet over a pair of coconuts"
"firm but elastic, like a rubber band ball"
"firm but elastic, like my own"
"firm but elastic, like my mother's"
"firm but elastic, like a sow's"

Sorry if none of these are helpful.

 

[AG31]

... a pair of volleyball balls.

No, no!!!
I haven't got a better one, but this isn't it!!!

 

[AG31]

Hello people. I'm HotCosmo and this is my first time using a forum.

Great question. Welcome to the forum side. If you get confused our frustrated, check out Hints for Navigating Forums.

 

[Cagivagurl]

Hello people. I'm HotCosmo and this is my first time using a forum.

I'm writing a new par for my story The Circle of Druids and having problems with a sentence that I'm unable to complete.

"When I had his ass in front of me I couldn't help but slap it. His ass was firm but elastic like_____."​

I usually do a lot of research because I'm not a native speaker of English but in this case, I'm not finding anything useful on the internet.

I appreciate any comment or idea to complete the sentence or even another way to rewrite it. I add the complete fragment in case it helps:

He found the situation amusing, wearing a smirk that I wasn't going to let him hold onto for much longer.
I kissed him, dominating his mount and barely letting him breathe. When I let him free his lips he had to take a deep breath. His cheeks were red and his eyes said passion.
"Let's go to my room, I wanna hear you moan." He didn't respond, only nodded, and headed to my room.
When I had his ass in front of me I couldn't help but slap it. His ass was firm but elastic like__________.​

I couldn't help but slap it. His ass was firm but elastic like_____."

"I couldn't resist the desire to reach out and slap his hot arse. It felt firm, taut. Like latex stretched out over sinuous muscle. So powerful, so shapely, so perfect..

Cagivagurl

 

[HotCosmo]

... like a government minister's sense of morality.

If my character had any interest in politics, I would use it without a doubt

 

[Britva415]

“ … like a dodgeball. One of those bouncy rubber ones.”

 

[TheArsonist]

like an uncomfortable leather couch