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[softpuss67]

I'll never forget the first pussy I ever got. My mom. The first time she put me inside her, I'll never forget. I'll never forget how so wet she was, how hot her pussy felt wrapped around my swollen throbbing dick. I've never been with another woman since that got that wet. That night I was
jacking my dick when she came in my room. The moonlight coming through my window showed her naked body approach my bedside. Her small tits, her small waist, her bushy pussy. I was kinda stunned her coming in my room, so quickly, with my hard dick pointing straight up, I didn't move.
"Mama-"
"Shhhhhh, it's okay, be still"

She lifted her left leg over me positioning her bush above my hard dick grabbing hold of it...
"Mama-"
"SHHHHH"
...guiding my penis inside her pussy.
I was shocked, disgusted, horny, hot, shaking with nervousness and anticipation all at once.
Her mouth opened, deep gasp of breath, her eyes closed as she took all of me into her.
I began cumming immediately. This was better than any drug or high I had ever experienced. I could not stop my urge to ejaculate.
"I'm sorry mama, I came."
"It's okay, its okay, thats normal".
"But you're still hard"
She continued moving up, down, grinding her hips.
"Oh yes, you are still so hard baby"
She leaned forward, her breathing deep and heavy, exhaling her hot breath on my face.
"Oh yes, oh yes...put your hands on my ass baby"
I gripped my mom's ass, and spread her ass cheeks. I watched her move her body on me. Her eyes closed.
"Oh yes, oh-oh yes...thats it baby"
Her breath strong with lust, hot, and her breathing louder. I loved the feel of her pussy, the feel of her ass in my hands.
"Oh yes, baby, I'm getting close, ohh, you are so hard baby"
I feel a new swell building in my nuts. A new load.
My mom leaned more forward, her eyes still closed, her mouth open right above my face. She began thrusting her hips, exhaling deep hot breaths as she orgasmed. When she finished...
"Oh baby, oh baby, thank you, I needed that so much. You were amazing"
"I didn't do anything mama"
"Oh yes, oh yes you did, you gave me a nice hard cock."
"Can I cum again mama?"
"You sure can baby"
She laid her head beside mine, moving her hips, her pussy back and forth. I gripped her ass hard feeling my swell.
"You like my ass don't you baby?"
I mumbled yes as I release another load of sperm inside her.

 

[joy_of_cooking]

Yes, absolutely.

I'll never forget the first pussy I ever got. My mom.

Within two sentences I know what this story will be about. Yay for truth in advertising.
Also, you picked one of the most popular subjects on the site, I/T.

"Mama-"

I/T isn't my thing but I hear they really like it when people address each other by their relationships. It emphasizes the taboo or something.

bushy pussy

There's a commenter around here we call "anonybush" who does these anonymous rants about how mother should clearly have pubic hair. You'll make anonybush happy!

So that was the good. Here's where you can improve.

"It's okay, its okay, thats normal".
"But you're still hard"

Usual convention is that adjacent quotations are different speakers. Also, its vs it's.

That night I was
jacking my dick when she came in my room. The moonlight coming through my window showed her naked body approach my bedside.

What are the motivations here? This mother randomly walked into her son's bedroom naked one night? I/T people really like to agonize over how forbidden their thing is.

 

[Jonolvera776]

I'll never forget the first pussy I ever got. My mom. The first time she put me inside her, I'll never forget. I'll never forget how so wet she was, how hot her pussy felt wrapped around my swollen throbbing dick. I've never been with another woman since that got that wet. That night I was
jacking my dick when she came in my room. The moonlight coming through my window showed her naked body approach my bedside. Her small tits, her small waist, her bushy pussy. I was kinda stunned her coming in my room, so quickly, with my hard dick pointing straight up, I didn't move.
"Mama-"
"Shhhhhh, it's okay, be still"

She lifted her left leg over me positioning her bush above my hard dick grabbing hold of it...
"Mama-"
"SHHHHH"
...guiding my penis inside her pussy.
I was shocked, disgusted, horny, hot, shaking with nervousness and anticipation all at once.
Her mouth opened, deep gasp of breath, her eyes closed as she took all of me into her.
I began cumming immediately. This was better than any drug or high I had ever experienced. I could not stop my urge to ejaculate.
"I'm sorry mama, I came."
"It's okay, its okay, thats normal".
"But you're still hard"
She continued moving up, down, grinding her hips.
"Oh yes, you are still so hard baby"
She leaned forward, her breathing deep and heavy, exhaling her hot breath on my face.
"Oh yes, oh yes...put your hands on my ass baby"
I gripped my mom's ass, and spread her ass cheeks. I watched her move her body on me. Her eyes closed.
"Oh yes, oh-oh yes...thats it baby"
Her breath strong with lust, hot, and her breathing louder. I loved the feel of her pussy, the feel of her ass in my hands.
"Oh yes, baby, I'm getting close, ohh, you are so hard baby"
I feel a new swell building in my nuts. A new load.
My mom leaned more forward, her eyes still closed, her mouth open right above my face. She began thrusting her hips, exhaling deep hot breaths as she orgasmed. When she finished...
"Oh baby, oh baby, thank you, I needed that so much. You were amazing"
"I didn't do anything mama"
"Oh yes, oh yes you did, you gave me a nice hard cock."
"Can I cum again mama?"
"You sure can baby"
She laid her head beside mine, moving her hips, her pussy back and forth. I gripped her ass hard feeling my swell.
"You like my ass don't you baby?"
I mumbled yes as I release another load of sperm inside her.

It's good.