Erotic Coupling of Mind Control

[taytay4eva]

I've written a story where the god of Hubris meddles with the inhibitions of mortals to teach a girl a lesson, but while the god DOES meddle with their minds, he DOESN'T do anything to get them to have sex with each other. They do that on their own, without his influence, after he's done his thing.

Would the story be "Erotic Coupling" because they have sex without being induced into it, or "Mind Control" because the actions that lead them to a mental place that says "yes I'd like to bone this person" are basically driven by divine mind control?

 

[taytay4eva]

Shoot. That should say "or", not "of"

 

[Britva415]

If the mind control itself is not erotic or a direct part of the erotic activity happening, then I wouldn't put it in the Mind Control category.

 

[taytay4eva]

If the mind control itself is not erotic or a direct part of the erotic activity happening, then I wouldn't put it in the Mind Control category.

Yeah, that was my instinct as well. The Mind Control isn't the erotic part, and they aren't "induced" into sex, so it feels like mind control is a tag I should add to the story, but not the section it belongs in.

 

[UsuallyPresent]

Given a god is mucking about in it, Fantasy/SciFi might also be a fit, but Erotic Couplings should also work, especially if the divine stuff is more early stage-setting than the focus of the tale.

 

[shewantsmore]

I've written a story where the god of Hubris meddles with the inhibitions of mortals to teach a girl a lesson, but while the god DOES meddle with their minds, he DOESN'T do anything to get them to have sex with each other. They do that on their own, without his influence, after he's done his thing.

Would the story be "Erotic Coupling" because they have sex without being induced into it, or "Mind Control" because the actions that lead them to a mental place that says "yes I'd like to bone this person" are basically driven by divine mind control?

I love any mind control stories, i would read it

 

[taytay4eva]

Given a god is mucking about in it, Fantasy/SciFi might also be a fit, but Erotic Couplings should also work, especially if the divine stuff is more early stage-setting than the focus of the tale.

A god is the narrator, but not the focus of the story

 

[taytay4eva]

I love any mind control stories, i would read it

The story is live now if you want to check it out!

 

[shewantsmore]

The story is live now if you want to check it out!

I will check it out,thank you

 

[taytay4eva]

Let me know what you think!