Did I catch someone?

[ABSTRUSE]

Re: Re: for Carrie, champagne1982

Be careful of hypocrisy, you may end up lifting your leg against your own tire.

That would be fabulous on a T-shirt!!

 

[champagne1982]

Re: Re: Re: for Carrie, champagne1982

That would be fabulous on a T-shirt!!

If I have tshirts made, I'll be sure to order some plus sizes in order to fit all of our inflated egos! Nothin' worse than a too small tee over a beer-gutted artiste's belly button stud.

 

[cloudy]

Might want to have it on there twice. Ya know, to emphasize our redundancy and all.



You said what I wanted to say, only much nicer. I would've turned into the tough bitch Lou says I am.

the Cloud Warrior

 

[ABSTRUSE]

Re: Re: Re: Re: for Carrie, champagne1982

If I have tshirts made, I'll be sure to order some plus sizes in order to fit all of our inflated egos! Nothin' worse than a too small tee over a beer-gutted artiste's belly button stud.

Touche' my friend!

 

[sarahhh]

Re: Re: for Carrie, champagne1982

Wolf -

Hmmm. You do love to hear the sound of your own words, don't you?

I think you made many valid points (over and over and over and over . . .)

Anyway, thank you for adding your thoughts, opinions and growling ranting to this oh-so-disturbing thread.

I don't think this discussion is about several writers boasting of their greatness, however. I believe it is really about a few writers blaming everyone else on Lit for their low scores.

And there hasn't really been much of a discussion, because some of the posters here have resorted to name-calling and idiocy instead of continuing with a rational argument.

(In fact, after my initial post, I had to create a new thread about something positive - something palate cleansing!)

Oh, you're proud of that thread "Cleanse my palate! Please" over on the Author Hangout forum are you? As well you should be. Talk about putting the mark of the beast on your forehead.

(Exactly, Wolfie, exactly. I won't quote you again for the sake of disk space. I'm holding you to the sloppy Wolf licks. Bad time of month, though. But at least you can pen a poem about it, 'eh? You get it. "They" don't.)

 

[cloudy]

Re: Re: Re: for Carrie, champagne1982

.... You get it. "They" don't.)

Dropped the snert theory, hon?

 

[ABSTRUSE]

Re: Re: Re: Re: for Carrie, champagne1982

Dropped the snert theory, hon?

don't forget about the fluff also!!!!!!!

 

[Guest]

Re: Re: Re: for Carrie, champagne1982

. . . Talk about putting the mark of the beast on your forehead.

Well jeepers. That sure hurt.

 

[XXplorher]

maybe if i post one extra word added to each reply, the idiocy of this waste will illustrate what a monumental futility this is.

Hey – there’s tits on every page. Things could be worse.


I just learned that good things can happen if you follow Deborah around. I doubt she'll make that a common practice. What with the extra mouth taking away all her youth and all...

 

[SavgeWolf]

alas....

.....I blare to whatever gods above
Tis' it true, we received a gift of thought
only to forego it's use?
How, I bellow, could such misdeed happen!
Only human...doth replied Nietsche
of sin...cried Luther
T'was not their own err...curse the devil
one sane voice...a candle in depths of night
But...I screamed...tis' not their art, truth...beauty?
do they contradict themselves? Very well then, they contradict
themselves...ominous Whitman rejoined
What does not kill them...strengthens them....cried Camus
resting upon a boulder, like Rodins sculpted "in thought"
deep in contemplation...what did they miss?
tis not ours, to wonder why...shouted Anonymous...
tis only ours, to do or die....
surrendering, I rose...stupidity a possession I ill afford
wondering down the inclined banks, my path flowing since a beginning of time
truth lie only in nature
doth be nature...my only worthy friend.

Peace to you all,
SavgeWolf

 

[champagne1982]

Re: alas....

[...]stupidity a possession I ill afford
[...]Peace to you all,
SavgeWolf

Nice admission. I'd have preferred an apology though.

 

[cloudy]

Re: Re: alas....

Nice admission. I'd have preferred an apology though.

it was a purty pome, tho.

 

[SavgeWolf]

sweet Carrie...

darling Carrie,
alas...you still stand clueless
tis not "stupidity" I claim to own
(yet it might be for believing I could teach truth)
the stupidity of which I write...
lies within you.
keep sending your quips...with in the saftey of clicks
display more...of your "oh so deep understanding."
apology? forgiveness? these things I give only to deserving
you, little girl, still need some aging
before truth, beauty, reality may reach you.

To you above all, Carrie
I wish peace of soul and gaining of wisdom
Forever yours, watching what you say and do,
a wolf stands, at the edge of forest
a meal he see's, but the object is barely worth his effort.
SavgeWolf

 

[cloudy]

Re: sweet Carrie...

darling Carrie,
alas...you still stand clueless
tis not "stupidity" I claim to own
(yet it might be for believing I could teach truth)
the stupidity of which I write...
lies within you.
keep sending your quips...with in the saftey of clicks
display more...of your "oh so deep understanding."
apology? forgiveness? these things I give only to deserving
you, little girl, still need some aging
before truth, beauty, reality may reach you.

To you above all, Carrie
I wish peace of soul and gaining of wisdom
Forever yours, watching what you say and do,
a wolf stands, at the edge of forest
a meal he see's, but the object is barely worth his effort.
SavgeWolf

Oh, now that was downright ugly!

Please don't tempt the Cloud Warrior - wolves scare me not!

 

[SavgeWolf]

Clouds are fleeting....

blotting out a bright vibrant Sun,
seconds of time....
shapes and sizes...of all forms
float within them...
minds eye picks them out
but...to other horizons they float
in little time
Fighting Clouds?
what is this you speak?
fighting clouds to me is like shadow dancing
wishing to be a warrior? why fight clouds or shadows
they can do you no harm...
a warrior fights for beliefs, holding their ground
a warrior comes in all forms, such as the clouds.
Ugly? words? you dare to describe words...as human forms?
Ugly? what is it then? if not but opinion...described by another
I ask you....what is it? All is a matter of eye....
may we give words the trait of feeling belonging only to humans?
Save your threats...for someone heeding....
save your breath...for it only blows out a candle....
a wolf, dear lass, laughs at death,
tis' nothing else left to hold him back.

Stay cool Cloud,
less the northern winds scatter you
SavgeWolf

 

[cloudy]

Re: Clouds are fleeting....

blotting out a bright vibrant Sun,
seconds of time....
shapes and sizes...of all forms
float within them...
minds eye picks them out
but...to other horizons they float
in little time
Fighting Clouds?
what is this you speak?
fighting clouds to me is like shadow dancing
wishing to be a warrior? why fight clouds or shadows
they can do you no harm...
a warrior fights for beliefs, holding their ground
a warrior comes in all forms, such as the clouds.
Ugly? words? you dare to describe words...as human forms?
Ugly? what is it then? if not but opinion...described by another
I ask you....what is it? All is a matter of eye....
may we give words the trait of feeling belonging only to humans?
Save your threats...for someone heeding....
save your breath...for it only blows out a candle....
a wolf, dear lass, laughs at death,
tis' nothing else left to hold him back.

Stay cool Cloud,
less the northern winds scatter you
SavgeWolf

Shadow dancing? I like that.

I come from a fine tradition of warriors, sugar.

And I'm always cool.

 

[ABSTRUSE]

Re: Re: Clouds are fleeting....

Shadow dancing? I like that.

I come from a fine tradition of warriors, sugar.

And I'm always cool.

I rather liked your poem Cloudy, but I can't help but think there is something familiar about the wolf, he writes as a sage, perhaps one who studied the eastern religions and philosophies.
Very in tune with nature and the calming of the soul.
Someone who has somewhat found inner peace yet, cannot deal with outside turmoil.
The wolf errantly speaks of cliques, yet rises to the defense of his own tribe. Curiously interesting.

 

[Deborah]

Hey – there’s tits on every page. Things could be worse.


I just learned that good things can happen if you follow Deborah around. I doubt she'll make that a common practice. What with the extra mouth taking away all her youth and all...

XXplorher, are you stalking me again? Stick to Dixie. You can make his panties wet but not mine (well, I do have the antidote, he doesn't).

Hey XX, I'm working on a "Psycho Profile" pertaining to a certain nut case around these here parts. I'm sure you remember how good I am at cracking nuts (you). And perhaps you could convince the phoney fluffers here on this thread that your cum is a gift to women. Maybe then they'll use their mouths for something besides yellow-yowl-yapping. Talk about scrambled eggs.

***

Hey ho to SavgeWolf. You are welcome at "Deb's Ranch" any time, dude. LOL! Oh yeah, she told me. We've been bonding.

 

[mismused]

delete

 

[SavgeWolf]

Tho' I've never known you....

....misused
I'd like to take a moment
speaking just to you....
Don't give up! I swear on my breath!
what you see is all too human
they live and breath
rhyming all the while
with good and bad
passion to be expressed
remember Ms Used...
if there's a god and devil
if there's night and day
within us all lie opposites as well....
your intentions...no doubt were good...
although new to this thread, I understand...
darkness cannot live without light
as light cannot live without darkness
read misused....the writings of time....
all the passion came from struggles between the two
the words. countless have been written
intelligence, stupidity....just two sides of a coin
beauty, despicable....just another coin....
what you started is thriving in glory....
a balance between them shall meet....
your a writer...this I know...
you abhor what turned base from intentions of grace
I ask, beg you....give it some time...
nothing matures....before time is right...
we are writers, one and all...our only wish
to build that which not falls...
though the ground may rumble beneath the structure..
time will prove if it's sound...
give...it...time.

Savgewolf

 

[Lauren Hynde]

Second...now that I've defined what LE is, basically, "Who are the writers at Literotica?" We are "hacks." We are "amateurs." We write because we love to. We give our stuff to LE. I'd be willing to stick my dick on a chopping block in a bet that there ain't more then a few actual professional writers at LE. Professionals write to pay the bills, using their talent. A hack writes because he/she loves to and does it as a hobby on spare time. Do you get the difference? To give you one last example, a prostitute fucks for money, to buy her crack (her own bills). She doesn't give her pussy, or other merchandise, away for free when she's in need of the cash to buy something. If she screws after she's earned her money it's because she's off duty and wants to for the pleasure or pastime. Is that plain enough???

SW-

Squeezing that mammoth of a post, what exactly do we get?

1. Everyone here writes for pleasure
2. Nobody likes a critic, because in the end, we're all hacks.
   [/list=1]
   
   That's about it, isn't it? If there's more, let me know.
   
   I have one question for you. How does your wife Doe react when, after you two have sex, you say, "Honey, that was fun, but don't let it get to your head, because if you were really any good, you'd be out there on the streets and I'd be paying you."
   
   Just because you do something for fun, it doesn't mean you must hack it off. It doesn't mean you can't push yourself to be the best you can be. Doing a job well done - that is where the pleasure comes from. Not from payment, and not from hacking it. You'd be surprised at how many professional writers submit their stories here.
   
   As for YDD, to you and mismused and everyone else here, I just find it interesting that MET's apology to him, posted in the Poetry forum (almost slipping to the second page, by now) and left untouched by all in your little clique, has never been mentioned in this thread.
   
   * * *
   
   Off-topic, now, a word of advice for future reference. When you ask for help editing a story and someone offers to help, when you accept that help and send that person the story and let that person start working on it, it isn't the greatest idea ever to post another request for an editor in the same thread, the following day. Some people really don't appreciate when you fuck with their time. Common decency - one of the things you could have learnt in high-school.
   
   * * *
   
   PS: Sarah, that better be a mean royal blue fire-breathing dragon. No cuddly-cute baby-blue sissy dragon.
   PPS: Lusitania.

 

[SavgeWolf]

Dear Lauren...baring the 7 day curse....

Oh Lauren....
You strive to bring the canine out in me....but I'll strive to be civil...so a little hormoned mind like yours can follow...
first babe....don't ever use the name of my wife "Doe" in a sentence again...you ain't woman enough to utter a goddesses name...do it and I swear I'll find you.
Second...you must have missed the paragraph where I asked "how did you all get such big fricken heads...."...just like life you only see what you want to...
third...you got my story...and "NEVER" replied....Laurahhh....got it, and now I have the editing to finish.
Honey....bleed into your rag...but don't open your mouth to shout pure stupidity...every woman carries the curse your enduring...the heavy bleeding last just days honey...don't you know your own pussy by now?
Savgewolf...
I didn't get the savage on my name for nothing darling
Sincerely, hoping the bleeding soon stops
SavgeWolf

 

[cloudy]

Re: Dear Lauren...baring the 7 day curse....

Oh Lauren....
You strive to bring the canine out in me....but I'll strive to be civil...so a little hormoned mind like yours can follow...
first babe....don't ever use the name of my wife "Doe" in a sentence again...you ain't woman enough to utter a goddesses name...do it and I swear I'll find you.
Second...you must have missed the paragraph where I asked "how did you all get such big fricken heads...."...just like life you only see what you want to...
third...you got my story...and "NEVER" replied....Laurahhh....got it, and now I have the editing to finish.
Honey....bleed into your rag...but don't open your mouth to shout pure stupidity...every woman carries the curse your enduring...the heavy bleeding last just days honey...don't you know your own pussy by now?
Savgewolf...
I didn't get the savage on my name for nothing darling
Sincerely, hoping the bleeding soon stops
SavgeWolf

Tsk, tsk. Your idiocy is showing, sugar.

What the hell are you and your friends on?

 

[Lauren Hynde]

I rest my case.

There's nothing new under the sun. The greatest banner under which all those desperate to justify their own mediocrity seek refuge.

My post was about you and your words. If you don't like the way they sounded, that's really tough for you. I have nothing but respect for your wife or anyone else in her position. She has to be a saint.

 

[SavgeWolf]

aww....cloud?

I take it your one of her clen! Just when I thought you held some class....Lick her clean honey....blood is protein...can't be bad for your health. Keep out of it...if she wants to fight, she can do it like a man...with no help...back off cloud and all the rest of Laurens puppets...this is her and me...I'll deal with you later after your queen falls.
Savgewolf