Damaged People

[elrodhubbard1]

In saying that, I missed this.

O.M.F.G.
Did You write this gem, elrod?

I suppose you're going to call me racist now?

 

[elrodhubbard1]

agreed

Some criticism is really funny. I read it and wonder where the troll learned to read and write - if anywhere at all.

Right on Boxlicker. I'm still waiting for an anonymous troll to say something interesting. They also seem to believe we care if they read our stuff. If you don't like a story, be grown up and move on to the next one. They like to tell us they won't read us again. Why? Don't talk about it. Just do it. So moronic.

 

[RobDownSouth]

The comments were the best part of the stories. It's not supposed to be that way.



The classic thread of this genre: http://forum.literotica.com/showthread.php?t=167568

The thread starter was the immortal ScottX, who got more notoriety here for being a terrible fiction writer and an even worse liar than all but a few of the competent Lit authors have received. There's probably a message in there somewhere.

ScottX was the stuff of legend. The guy had a Master's in Literature, for God's sake.

Sadly, little Scotty eventually morphed into D8rape.

 

[Conager]

My original assessment stands, you’re damaged. Furthermore, you and your stories are crap.

https://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=5219008&page=submissions

So, elrobhubbard1 is RDS?

 

[RobDownSouth]

So, elrobhubbard1 is RDS?

Rent free, folks.

 

[dolf]

I'm going to assume that the lack of response means I was bang on the money.

 

[Rightguide]

I'm going to assume that the lack of response means I was bang on the money.

Banging on the money could make passing it a sticky situation.

 

[suurfer]

My original assessment stands, you’re damaged. Furthermore, you and your stories are crap.

https://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=5219008&page=submissions
"That should have been me!" I thought. "Why couldn't she be single for once? Why did she always have to be in a relationship? I wasn't!
Doesn't she know we fought those people in the Vietnam War!"

Picturing her in bed with that gook made me disgusted and angry.

Was it too late to prevent my beloved Olivia from getting defiled before I could do it? I had to try. My pursuit of her was now more urgent than ever. Time was of the essence.

All I had to do was figure out how to take her from that Vietnamese, needle-dicked pre-med asshole.

I suppose you're going to call me racist now?

Nah, just saying that you're not as good a poet as CF:

Fucked by Trump
byCarnal_Flower©
https://www.literotica.com/p/fucked-by-trump

"Imagine him heaving on top of you. Slipping and sliding, his long silky hair getting all sweaty and sticking in orange goo, the gelatinous mass smelling like bellybutton lint.

Thats why Melania's face is a frozen block of cement.

First he has to find his dick in all the layers of flab. Takes him a long time to get going, mostly by standing there looking at Melania while thinking of Ivanka."

 

[seeshelly]

Damaged people

The world of mankind is composed of damaged people. Does anyone know anyone who is not damaged? I realize that some are more damaged than others but this is a hard world and we all take some hits.

 

[Rightguide]

Nah, just saying that you're not as good a poet as CF:

Fucked by Trump
byCarnal_Flower©
https://www.literotica.com/p/fucked-by-trump

"Imagine him heaving on top of you. Slipping and sliding, his long silky hair getting all sweaty and sticking in orange goo, the gelatinous mass smelling like bellybutton lint.

Thats why Melania's face is a frozen block of cement.

First he has to find his dick in all the layers of flab. Takes him a long time to get going, mostly by standing there looking at Melania while thinking of Ivanka."

CF probably get's off to road kill.

 

[suurfer]

CF probably get's off to road kill.

Between elrod's needle-dick and gook and CF's "flabby can't find his dick", I don't k ow which one is more hilarious.

Some true art over there.

 

[suurfer]

CF probably get's off to road kill.

I only had a look through CF's page out of curiosity about her ethnicity, given her comments in the Rob - BotBoy thread. I typically avoid looking through the stories of those with whom I talk on the GB.

The story section of Lit. is a mix.

I came across quite a few extremely talented writers who touched an emotional cord or else captivated my interest++,
and my inner question was: Why are they posting for free? Much less talented people made money on Amazon.

And others who -imo- were as deep as a puddle, and whose only talent was graphic smut.

 

[Debbie]

I thought the op was asking a question but it seems to me that he does not really want to hear other peoples opinions on this matter.

elrodhubbard1, if you re read some of what has been posted here there are quite a few posts that are not trying to say anonymous trolling is ok but that there are reasons why you can comment anonymously.




Some of us oldies remember when anon could post here on the forums.

That was a bit of an eye opener.

 

[RejectReality]

https://literotica.com/my/#/user/options

You can't disable them on individual stories, but you can disable them universally.

Follow that link, scroll down, tick the box to shut off anonymous comments, and save changes. None of your stories will receive any anonymous public comments from that point forward. The option won't even appear to people who aren't logged in.

You can't turn off anonymous posting. You can turn off comments. Problem not solved.

 

[suurfer]

Between elrod's needle-dick and gook and CF's "flabby can't find his dick", I don't k ow which one is more hilarious.

Some true art over there.

Fucked by Trump.
https://www.literotica.com/p/fucked-by-trump


I didn't look through CF's other writings , but judging by her scores she seems to be a pretty good writer.

However -leaving my initial amusement aside, and as much as I dislike Trump-
I was bewildered that Admin. let her publish such a bizarre piece of crap.

Although it's a tad in line with their GB politics: anything on the Left goes.

 

[Saint Peter]

story #1: 8 comments, 4 anonymous, 4 by name.

1 anonymous did not read it all, despite it being less than a page. the other 3 left negatives. all four named comments less than flattering. Only your own comment was positive, telling them to "keep reading".

My comment: It was barely a chapter of a story, basically telling me that you married Mary Sue from university and want her to have sex with someone else at the same time she pleasures you. OK.

Story #2: 8 Comments, 6 Anonymous, 2 by name.

None of the comments were positive, essentially they told you to stop and rethink the story line.

My comment: They are correct, at this point you have two chapters which do not equate a single chapter of a real story. You still are describing Mary Sue, but toss in a bunch of dates to either make her seem unobtainable or to make her worldly - your prose makes the choice irrelevant. The story is not entertaining me at this point and I would not continue reading were chapter 3 to be submitted.

Your writing is not that bad (not great either), but your story is that bad. It does not matter if comments are anonymous or by name, you should listen to them. It has nothing to do with the quality of authorship of the commentator, it has to do with the quality of your story, and I just spent 8 minutes more than they were worth in doing this review.

Tough crowd in here tonight!

 

[Saint Peter]

posting of screen stretching images is against site guidelines.

Tough crowd in here tonight!

 

[Debbie]

It's the gb. We are a rough, tough crowd full of damaged people.

Weirdos too.

Abandon Hope All Ye Who Enter Here.

Beware we are all stuf gnikcun.

A strange place like the upside down. Just not right.

 

[girlsmiley]

Right on Boxlicker. I'm still waiting for an anonymous troll to say something interesting. They also seem to believe we care if they read our stuff. If you don't like a story, be grown up and move on to the next one. They like to tell us they won't read us again. Why? Don't talk about it. Just do it. So moronic.

Have you thought about taking your own advice?

Also, someone posted an excerpt from one of your stories in this thread. Did it ever occur to you that your stories are so bad they piss people off? Hence the comments? Or is that what you're going for? Can't write for shit so just thrown in a bit of racism for attention? Start a thread for a bit more?

 

[girlsmiley]

Motherfuckers trying to out attention me.

 

[RobDownSouth]

It's the gb. We are a rough, tough crowd full of damaged people.

Weirdos too.

Abandon Hope All Ye Who Enter Here.

Beware we are all stuf gnikcun.

A strange place like the upside down. Just not right.

https://i.imgur.com/8Ey3Dud.jpg

 

[RocketLauncher]

K, this is hilarious. Our resident Scientologist has just brought a whirlwind of negative comments and 1 votes to his stories.

Dear Elrodhubbard,
It's probly not a good idea to insult potential readers with the same username that you published said story under. If you want to sling mud try using an alt. Oh, and if you want sympathy take it to the AH. Those pretentious fucks will have quite a bit to say on the subject I'm sure.

 

[Aglaopheme]

oooooh thassa big-time yikes.

https://media1.giphy.com/media/3FBwwRCNTSa52/giphy.gif

I mean, creating a character in a story who's racist or bigoted or sexist is nothing new, but to do it terribly AND from a first-person POV? That's just passive-aggressively venting some personal shit.

Good ol' amateur erotica. One of the best beards for getting out xenophobic sociopathy under the umbrella of "fantasy."

It’s a running theme throughout both chapters. Yeah I read both of them.

Racist incel fiction is sexy?

Ha! They seem to think so.

 

[Aglaopheme]

I suppose you're going to call me racist now?

They may not, but I will. Yes, you’re a racist.

 

[dolf]

K, this is hilarious. Our resident Scientologist has just brought a whirlwind of negative comments and 1 votes to his stories.

I must be slacking on my petty meanness, because doing that didn't even cross my mind.