chain for survivor contest

[brightlyiburn]

I think it would be better to wait until the second round. Until we complete one round, we won't be entirely sure if we really want to keep this chain going. I think we should see how it goes the first time before adding more people in.

 

[Goldeniangel]

Also I was thinking, for those who are doing survivor and all others interested. How about we keep this chain going longer than 2 rounds. For each survivor category you need at least 10 entries or a max of 10 entries (?), we could use Whispers as most of that 10 if not all?
Who whould be up for more?

I'm totally up for more and i think it's awesome if we can work Lindiana in =) i can probably even think up one or two more characters for new stories, or i could write a continuation for my two character's stories... either way, although actually, now that i think about it i could do both. ithink my characters could use a continuation, otherwise their stories are gonna end up being kinda cliff-hangers.

*HUGS*

 

[drksideofthemoon]

Where's the Story?

What is the name of the story, and where do I find it? I'd really like to read it. I kind of poked, and peeked around, but couldn't find it.

drksideofthemoon

~Another saturday, another date.
She would be ready but she’s always make them wait.
In the hallway, in anticipation,
He didn’t know the night would end up in frustration.
He’d end up blowing all his wages for the week
All for a cuddle and a peck on the cheek.

-Come Dancing-R. Davies

 

[MissLusty]

What is the name of the story, and where do I find it? I'd really like to read it. I kind of poked, and peeked around, but couldn't find it.

The first part of Whispers In The Dark is being posted very soon (Literotica has some waiting lines though when you submit) so it will probably be a couple/few days before it shows up.

I will post news of it here as soon as it's available to the public.

Lindana, I think that maybe it would be best if you join in the second round, that way you have an idea of what the story is all about and the tone of it.

 

[MissLusty]

Actually lindana I just realised that you need to be on the schedule (that literotica requires) and since it's already been submitted, that's a problem.

However I will be starting another chain story. Your more than welcome to join in with that one.



Why have quote's stopped being bold or in that funny little depressed box thing, is it just me?

 

[brightlyiburn]

Actually lindana I just realised that you need to be on the schedule (that literotica requires) and since it's already been submitted, that's a problem.

I'm sure if you submit a new schedule to Laurel for the second round of chapters, it won't be a problem. The list of Chain Stories in the Survivor forum certainly makes it sound as though people can join up later on in the chain.

 

[MissLusty]

I am a very happy lady today.

Why? Because Whispers is finally up and running. Let me know your opinions on it.

This is so much fun.

 

[drksideofthemoon]

More! More!

I read the first chapter, it's great. I can't wait to read the next installment.

drksideofthemoon

-Meanie pulled the dildo from his ear, "No, I said I wanted oral sex, not aural sex."
from "Tonya Teaser-International Woman of Mystery" coming soon...(I hope)

 

[MissLusty]

I read the first chapter, it's great. I can't wait to read the next installment.
QUOTE]

Thanks for the feedback, the second part of Anna's story should be ready in 4 weeks.

 

[Goldeniangel]

Now do I have to wait eight days before I can post the next entry or is that just the time limit for it???

*HUGS*

 

[brightlyiburn]

Hmm.
Please don't take this the wrong way, MissLusty, but I see a potential problem here.
You left your story on a cliffhanger. Do you plan on having her pick up the story again at the next meeting or is your next chapter going to pick up exactly where it left off?
While each of us are working with individual characters, this is still a chain story. Meaning it should follow a line of continuity. If you plan on picking up right where you left off, then the rest of us can't really proceed to further meetings. Well, technically we could but someone trying to follow the whole chain might end up rather confused when they get to your chapter and it goes back to the first meeting.
Er, do you see what I'm saying? Or am I just making no sense?

 

[LuciousBi-Writes4U]

Hmm.
Please don't take this the wrong way, MissLusty, but I see a potential problem here.
You left your story on a cliffhanger. Do you plan on having her pick up the story again at the next meeting or is your next chapter going to pick up exactly where it left off?
While each of us are working with individual characters, this is still a chain story. Meaning it should follow a line of continuity. If you plan on picking up right where you left off, then the rest of us can't really proceed to further meetings. Well, technically we could but someone trying to follow the whole chain might end up rather confused when they get to your chapter and it goes back to the first meeting.
Er, do you see what I'm saying? Or am I just making no sense?

Hello everyone......... sorry I haven't been on here in a few days.... just got my first 4 children's stories out to the publishers yesterday and the day before..... so it's out there.... now I can sit back and watch the rejection letter fly into my mailbox! LOL ..........did you know it takes the average writer 4 years to break into print from the time that they decide that is what they're gonna do and really make it their whole focus! Jeez..... I am in for a long ride both on the kiddie side and the adult side of this fence i think!!

anyway.....
I agree with the quote above.... I thought we were all gonna tell at least one characters story all the way through and that would make our chapter..... ie... I was gonna tell my girls story this time all the way through....... then tell the guys story on the next round..........
I think we may need to have you finish up and submit again before any of the rest of us do???
lets take a vote.... looks like 2 out of 4 agree on that ... let me know what you think.....

 

[MissLusty]

Now do I have to wait eight days before I can post the next entry or is that just the time limit for it???

*HUGS*

You don't have to wait the full 8 days, just post it when it's ready.

As for the other issue, I don't see a problem, I mentioned at the very beginning of the chapter that Anna's story will be in two parts and that they won't get the second part until the next round. I also mention that it finishes in a cliff hanger.

I think that as long as people read the Author's note that I placed at the beginning there shouldn't be too much confusion.

We'll see how it goes, anyway.

 

[Goldeniangel]

Don't worry about it anyway, i've got a good way to segue-way into Kara without it seeming like Anna wont be coming up again =)

*HUGS*

 

[Goldeniangel]

2nd chapter has been submitted and i sent it on to Luscious... did anyone else wnat me to send it to them on a private message or did you guys want to wait until it came out?
*hugs*

 

[brightlyiburn]

I suppose I should think about getting started, hmm? Well, I've got my idea all set, at least. It was inspired by my birthday present.

 

[MissLusty]

Well, I've got my idea all set, at least. It was inspired by my birthday present.

It was your birthday?!

When?? You should have told us. *scolds lightly*

Happy Birthday, I hope it was memorable. It must of been if your birthday present is inspiring an piece of erotic fiction.

May I ask what it is you've been inspired by?

 

[MissLusty]

2nd chapter has been submitted and i sent it on to Luscious... did anyone else wnat me to send it to them on a private message or did you guys want to wait until it came out?
*hugs*

That was really quick Golden, now you've made me feel really, really bad about my tardiness with chapter 1 (ducks head in shame).
If the pace is going to continue like this I better get moving on the second part of Anna's story.

I'll read chapter 2 when it gets put on literotica, would you be able to either PM me or place a notice on this thread when it's up and running?

By the way I am completely in love with my character Anna, she's someone I wouldn't usually write, my character's are either very glamorous or sophisticated but I'm loving this gothic chic. There's so many layers to her in my mind.
I'm even thinking of using her as a main character for when I write a novel or at least a longer piece of fiction.
She's come out of thin air and know I can't get enough of her.
Strange.

 

[Goldeniangel]

HAPPY BIRTHDAY!


and i'll absolutely post a notice or pm you =) i just write fast is all, i've had the story churning in my head for over a week now, so i knew exactly what i wanted out of it, plus i type 75wpm, dont feel bad at all. lol.
*HUGS*

 

[LuciousBi-Writes4U]

HAPPY BIRTHDAY!


and i'll absolutely post a notice or pm you =) i just write fast is all, i've had the story churning in my head for over a week now, so i knew exactly what i wanted out of it, plus i type 75wpm, dont feel bad at all. lol.
*HUGS*

Jeez 75 words per minute!
must be nice.... miss watch her fingers here! LOL

kisses everyone!

 

[LuciousBi-Writes4U]

That was really quick Golden, now you've made me feel really, really bad about my tardiness with chapter 1 (ducks head in shame).
If the pace is going to continue like this I better get moving on the second part of Anna's story.

I'll read chapter 2 when it gets put on literotica, would you be able to either PM me or place a notice on this thread when it's up and running?

By the way I am completely in love with my character Anna, she's someone I wouldn't usually write, my character's are either very glamorous or sophisticated but I'm loving this gothic chic. There's so many layers to her in my mind.
I'm even thinking of using her as a main character for when I write a novel or at least a longer piece of fiction.
She's come out of thin air and know I can't get enough of her.
Strange.

That is how it works for me too girl.... a good character is never made up.... they just start to exist somehow, somewhere, to breathe a life all their own~ and i find that to be true with both my Erotica and my Kiddie Lit!!! LOL

 

[LuciousBi-Writes4U]

I suppose I should think about getting started, hmm? Well, I've got my idea all set, at least. It was inspired by my birthday present.

HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!

 

[Goldeniangel]

ok, i'm offiically in love with the dancing bananas...

lol.. yeah keyboarding class in high school actually did me some good, can you believe it?! craziness.

i love it when characters take on their own lives... it's part of why i have Allison in a novella now... i just couldn't let her go =P she's like a happy little friend almost. =D

Kara... kara is just a lot like me. lol.
*HUGS*

 

[MissLusty]

I'm alright with typing I can do over 40 words per minute, my problem is that I am overly critical of what I write.

I seem to sensor myself as the ideas come from my mind. I think to myself....that's crap, or you should change that.
By the time I've written something its been such hard work that a lot of the fun has been taken out.

I started the first chapter of Whispers in a complete blast of inspiration and it was great and even though I was still inspired when I went back to finish it, everything I wrote just didn't seem right.

Once I was trying to start a novel I had planned to write. I wrote at least 7 different introductionary paragraphs, I didn't love any of them and since I was so unimpressed with them and I couldn't think of other ways to write the beginning it got put on the shelf. I'd like to go back to it one day, many years from now. When the memory of that awful time has been erased from my mind. (It was really frustrating, as it was something I really wanted to write).

And I'm blabbering on...

 

[Goldeniangel]

the Second Chapter to Whispers in the Dark is up, here's the link!:

http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=187746