BMF's Urban Hang Suite

[Pervy_Sage]

Just popping my pretty little head in the door to say...... Mmmmmmmmmmm............ It's nice to see ya here again, Pervy...... Kisses.....

Thanks, El. Maybe i will actually write something one day too.

 

[Corbal]

Killed him and burned the body.

That was left wide open for an awful response. I shall rise above my brethren.

 

[NeonSubtlety]

Salud, bmf: Get to writing again. That way, I'll feel guilty enough to join. One of my friends even bought me a portfolio to shame me into getting at it again. Fingers crossed.

 

[Corbal]

Salud, bmf: Get to writing again. That way, I'll feel guilty enough to join. One of my friends even bought me a portfolio to shame me into getting at it again. Fingers crossed.

I offer to break your fingers if you shall suckith with a pen.

 

[Pervy_Sage]

That was left wide open for an awful response. I shall rise above my brethren.

You? Rising above rather than sinking to your knees? Kudos!

 

[Pervy_Sage]

Salud, bmf: Get to writing again. That way, I'll feel guilty enough to join. One of my friends even bought me a portfolio to shame me into getting at it again. Fingers crossed.

Dude, I hope too. We shall see. My inspiration and creativity have been lacking horribly

 

[Ellafun]

Dear God...there are two of my favorite people in one place. There is a Santa Claus!

 

[Pervy_Sage]

Dear God...there are two of my favorite people in one place. There is a Santa Claus!

NS and Corbs? Wow...I see how it is.

 

[Corbal]

You? Rising above rather than sinking to your knees? Kudos!

I cannot get on my knees. Ruptured ACL. I'm hurt you'd be so harsh.

Dear God...there are two of my favorite people in one place. There is a Santa Claus!

I assume you're speaking of the black and neon fellows. Haha.

 

[NeonSubtlety]

I wonder what you'd be like if noncombative. I used to love fruit stripes gum. So don't be afraid to change those stripes, (animated zebra reference that I couldn't come up with after thinking about it way too long).

 

[Corbal]

I wonder what you'd be like if noncombative. I used to love fruit stripes gum. So don't be afraid to change those stripes, (animated zebra reference that I couldn't come up with after thinking about it way too long).

I'd be dead. Come to my funeral.


And don't forget the gum. I <3 that stuff.

 

[Pervy_Sage]

I'd be dead. Come to my funeral.


And don't forget the gum. I <3 that stuff.

Yeah, you'd die. Instantly. Turn to dust. Blow away.

 

[Corbal]

Yeah, you'd die. Instantly. Turn to dust. Blow away.

You'd miss me. Speak truths.

Want to read a small piece of something I'm writing for a Sci if fic?

 

[NeonSubtlety]

http://4.bp.blogspot.com/-ayp3vNPauUw/TryDcVuS5iI/AAAAAAAAALE/JExdregporQ/s1600/fruit-stripe-gum-5-fruit.jpg

not a bad way to go out.

I always chewed too many flavors at once.

 

[Corbal]

http://4.bp.blogspot.com/-ayp3vNPauUw/TryDcVuS5iI/AAAAAAAAALE/JExdregporQ/s1600/fruit-stripe-gum-5-fruit.jpg

not a bad way to go out.

I always chewed too many flavors at once.

Two of my most fav things. Soccer and tattoos. Gum after my heart.

 

[NeonSubtlety]

Gum just doesn't get me.

 

[Pervy_Sage]

You'd miss me. Speak truths.

Want to read a small piece of something I'm writing for a Sci if fic?

Of course.

 

[Corbal]

Mmmmkay. Preface a bit; my female is a human and my male is a vampire. This piece is told from his POV. They've never had sexual relations but have been somewhat forced into the current situation.

Before she could open her mouth and reject I was behind her, spinning her lean frame until she was facing me. “Shhhhhh…” I hushed her, ghosting a fingertip over her plump pink lips, pushing my glare into her own magical gaze.

Her body was tense, the muscles along her spine flexed against my grip as I pulled her closer, wedging myself between her long, muscular thighs and perching her leather clad ass on the top of my desk. “Relax” I whispered to her as I ghosted soft breaths over her lean neck.

Everyone watched, anger and jealousy cut sharply into the small room around us. I would give them a show worthy of desire and insatiable lust.

My lips caressed the flesh of her neck, lingering painfully over her sweet spot, awaiting her gasp of desperation before sinking my fangs deep into her jugular. Rubbing small circles with my thumbs across her spine, she arched into me, spreading her immaculate thighs... she was submitting; hesitantly, but submitting.

Patience with Her was everything.

I licked her warm pink skin, blowing soft air across her flesh and felt a rush of goosebumps spread across her spine, flourishing peaks of small bumps over her shoulders and neck. She pulled in for air, straining for control and I struck precisely, pulling at her wound until crimson wet spilled into my mouth, rushing down my throat, creating the phenomenal magic within me.

Her blood was torturous, haunting me with each delicate pull, pushing me to take more; taunting me with a sweet metallic melody. My hands forced her body closer to mine, meshing our bodies so close, I did not know where she ended and I began. Her soft moans of pleasure echoed in the hollows of my mind and I sank deeper, almost furiously into her neck, searching the pits of my being to find the strength to stop feeding.

Deep growls furrowed in my chest, my body rigid from my feed; a perfect contrast to her soft, curvaceous form. I growled lustfully, her blood was exceptional and it took every ounce of my being to keep from draining her dry. Pulling away from her neck, I relished in the anomaly before me and took in her perfect beauty.

There she lay, labored breaths heaving her breasts forward in service to me. Her body submissive, her hands palm up, open to me, opposite of her heavily hooded eyes. Her body was flush, warm and ready to take me in any way I was willing to give it.

 

[Pervy_Sage]

Mmmmkay. Preface a bit; my female is a human and my male is a vampire. This piece is told from his POV. They've never had sexual relations but have been somewhat forced into the current situation.

Before she could open her mouth and reject I was behind her, spinning her lean frame until she was facing me. “Shhhhhh…” I hushed her, ghosting a fingertip over her plump pink lips, pushing my glare into her own magical gaze.

Her body was tense, the muscles along her spine flexed against my grip as I pulled her closer, wedging myself between her long, muscular thighs and perching her leather clad ass on the top of my desk. “Relax” I whispered to her as I ghosted soft breaths over her lean neck.

Everyone watched, anger and jealousy cut sharply into the small room around us. I would give them a show worthy of desire and insatiable lust.

My lips caressed the flesh of her neck, lingering painfully over her sweet spot, awaiting her gasp of desperation before sinking my fangs deep into her jugular. Rubbing small circles with my thumbs across her spine, she arched into me, spreading her immaculate thighs... she was submitting; hesitantly, but submitting.

Patience with Her was everything.

I licked her warm pink skin, blowing soft air across her flesh and felt a rush of goosebumps spread across her spine, flourishing peaks of small bumps over her shoulders and neck. She pulled in for air, straining for control and I struck precisely, pulling at her wound until crimson wet spilled into my mouth, rushing down my throat, creating the phenomenal magic within me.

Her blood was torturous, haunting me with each delicate pull, pushing me to take more; taunting me with a sweet metallic melody. My hands forced her body closer to mine, meshing our bodies so close, I did not know where she ended and I began. Her soft moans of pleasure echoed in the hollows of my mind and I sank deeper, almost furiously into her neck, searching the pits of my being to find the strength to stop feeding.

Deep growls furrowed in my chest, my body rigid from my feed; a perfect contrast to her soft, curvaceous form. I growled lustfully, her blood was exceptional and it took every ounce of my being to keep from draining her dry. Pulling away from her neck, I relished in the anomaly before me and took in her perfect beauty.

There she lay, labored breaths heaving her breasts forward in service to me. Her body submissive, her hands palm up, open to me, opposite of her heavily hooded eyes. Her body was flush, warm and ready to take me in any way I was willing to give it.

First off, uber descriptive. Secondly, the imagery was good..not overbearing, but as realistic as any vampire fiction could be. You created an instance and were faithful to it. Good work.

 

[NeonSubtlety]

i'm just stoked to see new writing in this thread

 

[Corbal]

First off, uber descriptive. Secondly, the imagery was good..not overbearing, but as realistic as any vampire fiction could be. You created an instance and were faithful to it. Good work.

You know how I roll. Imagery. It's the right brain at work. Mwah!

 

[Corbal]

i'm just stoked to see new writing in this thread

What? No critique?

 

[Pervy_Sage]

You know how I roll. Imagery. It's the right brain at work. Mwah!

Technically, I don't know how you roll, but I DO know how you write.

 

[Corbal]

Technically, I don't know how you roll, but I DO know how you write.

Like a genius? Lol.

 

[Pervy_Sage]

Like a genius? Lol.

Say whaaaaaaaaaaaaa?