BMF's Urban Hang Suite

[DarkSidEclipse]

Thank you glad you enjoyed it

 

[Sensualdreamer]

For 29 winters I have watched this tree
Wishing that it was a part of me
Every year its leaves fall like children dying
And it shrivels like a Mother crying
Year after year it faces this pain
And awakes only to do it once again
Where does it always find this strength
Why does it always suffer to this length
Is it in this constant cycle of suffering
That it draws strength to face anything
For many more winters I will watch this tree
Always hoping it is inside of me

WoW...so much description and I could just sense the leaves as the float softly to the ground...good work my friend

 

[Sensualdreamer]

This was a poem I had written after the suicide of a guy I knew back in 1995...

Life was a game,
He either won or lost
Who would have dreamed
He would have to pay the cost?

His life was changing
His soul was filled with doubt
So he desperately started searching
Trying to find a way out.

He never understood or knew
people cared so much
Nor did he know how many lives
his death would touch.

So he pulled the trigger
Oh so quick to die
Now I stand by his casket
never ceasing to cry

Close by the side of the grave
in grief I kneel
The silence, shock and pain
so unbelievably real.

In silence I grieve
as he's laid to rest
Sensing the emptiness of life
as the tears splash on my chest.

 

[Jinxi Minxi]

This was a poem I had written after the suicide of a guy I knew back in 1995...

Life was a game,
He either won or lost
Who would have dreamed
He would have to pay the cost?

His life was changing
His soul was filled with doubt
So he desperately started searching
Trying to find a way out.

He never understood or knew
people cared so much
Nor did he know how many lives
his death would touch.

So he pulled the trigger
Oh so quick to die
Now I stand by his casket
never ceasing to cry

Close by the side of the grave
in grief I kneel
The silence, shock and pain
so unbelievably real.

In silence I grieve
as he's laid to rest
Sensing the emptiness of life
as the tears splash on my chest.

Beautifully written Sensualdreamer, I can feel the sadness of knowing someone had to resort to something like that in the end. I had a friend who had commited suicide and I didn't know it until a year later when his FB wall was filled with messages and I was like whoa...no one told me.

I wish I could get my creative/poetic side of me back...it has been a while.

 

[Jinxi Minxi]

Good afternoon BMF...hope you had a great night. Have a wonderful Sunday!

 

[BlackManFux]

For 29 winters I have watched this tree
Wishing that it was a part of me
Every year its leaves fall like children dying
And it shrivels like a Mother crying
Year after year it faces this pain
And awakes only to do it once again
Where does it always find this strength
Why does it always suffer to this length
Is it in this constant cycle of suffering
That it draws strength to face anything
For many more winters I will watch this tree
Always hoping it is inside of me

This is excellent. I want to be able to write this descriptively. Thanks for the contribution, and you're welcome here anytime!

 

[BlackManFux]

This was a poem I had written after the suicide of a guy I knew back in 1995...

Life was a game,
He either won or lost
Who would have dreamed
He would have to pay the cost?

His life was changing
His soul was filled with doubt
So he desperately started searching
Trying to find a way out.

He never understood or knew
people cared so much
Nor did he know how many lives
his death would touch.

So he pulled the trigger
Oh so quick to die
Now I stand by his casket
never ceasing to cry

Close by the side of the grave
in grief I kneel
The silence, shock and pain
so unbelievably real.

In silence I grieve
as he's laid to rest
Sensing the emptiness of life
as the tears splash on my chest.

SD, I can't even relate to how that must have felt, but this poem almost puts me inside your heart. I feel the heaviness. You're quite good. Thank you for posting here.

 

[BlackManFux]

Good afternoon BMF...hope you had a great night. Have a wonderful Sunday!

BB, good morning. You'll get the creative side back. Just sit stick long enough to give it a try. And you have a great one, sexy.

 

[blade_rocknut]

BB, good morning. You'll get the creative side back. Just sit stick long enough to give it a try. And you have a great one, sexy.

I hope BB's creative side is on the rear......so she can continue to show THAT to us!

Good morning BMF; all..... *nods to the clean-up crew*

Hope I didn't do anything I'll regret last night!

I caught up this morning, great writings, very descriptive, free flowing words here. I'm enamored.

 

[Jinxi Minxi]

BB, good morning. You'll get the creative side back. Just sit stick long enough to give it a try. And you have a great one, sexy.

Ok, I'm gonna sit with a stick and hope inspiration comes back to me.

 

[Jinxi Minxi]

I hope BB's creative side is on the rear......so she can continue to show THAT to us!

Good morning BMF; all..... *nods to the clean-up crew*

Hope I didn't do anything I'll regret last night!

I caught up this morning, great writings, very descriptive, free flowing words here. I'm enamored.

I my butt and I cannot lie!

You were lapdancing on me blade...good moves I say!

 

[blade_rocknut]

I my butt and I cannot lie!

You were lapdancing on me blade...good moves I say!

Gracias, babe.....I know I nodded off between posts last nite- I really hope I didn't accidentally post something lascivious to some dude in the person above you thread!

 

[Jinxi Minxi]

Gracias, babe.....I know I nodded off between posts last nite- I really hope I didn't accidentally post something lascivious to some dude in the person above you thread!

oOo really? I missed it. But I'm sure the dude would have been flattered, if not, then not to worry!

I thought I did pretty well with drinking the shots off your garter without using me hands!? Don't you agree?

 

[blade_rocknut]

oOo really? I missed it. But I'm sure the dude would have been flattered, if not, then not to worry!

I thought I did pretty well with drinking the shots off your garter without using me hands!? Don't you agree?

NOOOOOOOOOOO! You CHEATED! :caning:

 

[Jinxi Minxi]

NOOOOOOOOOOO! You CHEATED! :caning:

But the rules was NO HANDS!! Hehe!

(Spank that ass good or you're fired! )

 

[blade_rocknut]

But the rules was NO HANDS!! Hehe!

(Spank that ass good or you're fired! )

I know this.....and you grabbed a straw......

At any rate, the server got more trashed than the patrons did!

 

[BlackManFux]

I know this.....and you grabbed a straw......

At any rate, the server got more trashed than the patrons did!

Smh. Blade, that's coming out of your check! BB, you get to see my office next time. Just wear that little outfit right there!

 

[BlackManFux]

Ok, I'm gonna sit with a stick and hope inspiration comes back to me.

Yeah, you do that....or you could come to the states for private lessons.

 

[blade_rocknut]

Smh. Blade, that's coming out of your check! BB, you get to see my office next time. Just wear that little outfit right there!

Pssshh.....WHAT check!

Besides, I'd pay to serve the fine ladies in here! Well, figuratively, anyway....

 

[BlackManFux]

Sup poets, writers, thinkers, peeps? Happy afternoon!

 

[RocknRolla86]

Check the mic....1, 2

Ladies & Gentleman give it up for BMF - the lyrical thriller, beat killer

 

[BlackManFux]

Besos, Por Favor?

I'd like to issue you a small invitation.
A meeting of the lips,
Just wanna see how you are tasting.
Feasting on your sexy
Cause you're sizzling like bacon.
And after watching you this long
I don't mind waiting,
Cause you flavor is just so intoxicating.
I'm proposing just a kiss
One kiss to be exact
Cause I'm convinced with one kiss
You'll be one to come back.
Not being braggadocious
But my lips are soft an tender
Return your doubts to sender
And come here so I can show ya
Just how much I'm into ya.
Would you just walk away if our lips met?
Me thinks tasting your sweetness
Would just rock my world.
Wrapping my arms around you
Holding you, breathing deeply
Pinching myself
Because I'm seeing fulfillment of a fantasy.
You're really kind of dreamy
And I think one kiss
Would send the inhibitions running amiss.

Might you? Maybe baby
You say that you're my lady
And the way I'm feeling now
I'm thinking driving is an option.
Such tension in my innards
Wanting to touch you tenderly
And while you don't do cuddling
Maybe just a kiss from me
Would change your mind.
Perhaps in time, you'll crave my lips like a drug
A repeat offender
Needing me like a hug.
The nice guy becoming
The guy you're dreaming of.
Moving past computer like into
Computer love.
But yet, I digress.
Let me reign it back in
You know just how I feel
And that I'd cater to your whims.
I'd really like to cater to your wants too
Be the one that you call boo,
When you want someone to lavish hearts to.

Im suggesting a meeting of the lips.
Beyond my lavish quips
And behind my lines
I'm really saying
That I wanna kiss your mind.
Can you find time
For a tender peck or two?
Let me know cause
I wanna be kissing on you.

 

[Jinxi Minxi]

Smh. Blade, that's coming out of your check! BB, you get to see my office next time. Just wear that little outfit right there!

*looks down* what outfit? I'm wearing my b-day suit!

Yeah, you do that....or you could come to the states for private lessons.

Private lessons in how to make sushi? Sure, I'm down for that!

 

[Jinxi Minxi]

I'd like to issue you a small invitation.
A meeting of the lips,
Just wanna see how you are tasting.
Feasting on your sexy
Cause you're sizzling like bacon.
And after watching you this long
I don't mind waiting,
Cause you flavor is just so intoxicating.
I'm proposing just a kiss
One kiss to be exact
Cause I'm convinced with one kiss
You'll be one to come back.
Not being braggadocious
But my lips are soft an tender
Return your doubts to sender
And come here so I can show ya
Just how much I'm into ya.
Would you just walk away if our lips met?
Me thinks tasting your sweetness
Would just rock my world.
Wrapping my arms around you
Holding you, breathing deeply
Pinching myself
Because I'm seeing fulfillment of a fantasy.
You're really kind of dreamy
And I think one kiss
Would send the inhibitions running amiss.

Might you? Maybe baby
You say that you're my lady
And the way I'm feeling now
I'm thinking driving is an option.
Such tension in my innards
Wanting to touch you tenderly
And while you don't do cuddling
Maybe just a kiss from me
Would change your mind.
Perhaps in time, you'll crave my lips like a drug
A repeat offender
Needing me like a hug.
The nice guy becoming
The guy you're dreaming of.
Moving past computer like into
Computer love.
But yet, I digress.
Let me reign it back in
You know just how I feel
And that I'd cater to your whims.
I'd really like to cater to your wants too
Be the one that you call boo,
When you want someone to lavish hearts to.

Im suggesting a meeting of the lips.
Beyond my lavish quips
And behind my lines
I'm really saying
That I wanna kiss your mind.
Can you find time
For a tender peck or two?
Let me know cause
I wanna be kissing on you.

Is it pressumptious of me to think that might be dedicated to moi? LOL! Lovely and beautiful....me likey!

 

[BlackManFux]

Is it pressumptious of me to think that might be dedicated to moi? LOL! Lovely and beautiful....me likey!

I have nothing against presumptions, BB!