BDSM Writing Challenge

ORGASM CONTROL - a Dom's perspective

My slave kneels by the bed her skirt fanned over her back, panties around her knees on the floor. Her alabaster ass cheeks bisected by a thin red line, the mark of the cane applied not once, not twice - but six times with a precision I pride myself on. Each stroke has landed with millimetre perfection upon the site of the previous blow.

I probe between her thighs with the rod, she groans when her nether lips are parted. “Please master!”

“Not yet you must learn self discipline.” That is why I had to punish her, she came without my permission and now I intend to make her wait longer before I give my consent to her orgasm – that is assuming that I decide to.

I examine the rod - it is dry, thus far she has obeyed my injunction to hold back. I wonder if she will be so successful when I proceed to the next stage of her torment.

She shudders when I coat her labia with KY. I can do most anything to her and she endures without complaint, but cold always draws a protest. I put some lubricant on my hand.

I shape my fingers into an arrowhead and fold my thumb across the palm. Kneeling behind her I open the love curtains, her vagina is expectantly wide; feeling merciful I ignore the beads of moisture that trickle slowly from the oval tunnel. Whispering to her, “Wait for me to say yes.”

My fingers slide in with ease up to the knuckle where finger and hand join, now there is a resistance. As I push through the Ring-of-Fire, I sense rather than feel a gyration of her hips. My free hand snakes around her I establish a firm grip by cupping her Mons Veneris, “Not yet.”

“Master it is so difficult …”

“If it was not it would not be a task.” As I spoke the pelvic girdle parted admitting my hand.

“Damned if I will!” She drummed the mattress with her clenched fists.

Never before had I gone in so far without her going into paroxysms of wet ecstasy. She could not hold out for much longer now was the moment to release her. “Cum for me now!”

Before I finished speaking her pelvis was oscillating and my digits drowning in the released super-heated deluge.

Who are those idiots who deny female ejaculation?

I kope this little effort entertained you all,
jon :devil: :devil: :devil:
 
New Topic

Long Distance
Missing your Dom/me or sub.
Missing Dominance or submission.
Or, the feelings that go with long distance D/s, in a positive light.

30 words for poetry

125 for prose
 
MissTaken said:
The Scene:

A spanking being delivered or received


A burst of power
On soft supple flesh
Radiating warmth lingers
Then fades away
Replaced by one after the other
Leaving a heated glow
 
Re: New Topic

MissTaken said:
Long Distance

My needs for Her
Leaves an ache inside
Fueling my desires
To be near
Thoughts rage daily
Till comes that time
I find myself kneeling
In utter peace
 
Re: New Topic!

MissTaken said:
The Scene: Giving or recieving a direction

Kneeling, waiting, anticipating,
The moment Her thoughts become reality,
The slight movement of her hand,
Sending me to my feet,
Eager to do Her bidding.
 
MissTaken said:
Scene: Binding of hands.

Nylon, silk,
The objects of my inprisonment.
Welling up inside,
The need to surrender,
My will is Your's.
 
Kneeling for another purpose I sit up, my ass resting on my heels, and I can’t help but think of you. I close my eyes and imagine that I can hear your voice, feel your energy, your love. I remember your firm voice, the punishments that I so deserved and also the gentle touches and soft words when we were lying so close. So much fills my mind, so many memories; it’s a brief moment that brings a small tear to my eye. I miss you, and though it’s difficult sometimes, I remember that soon isn’t that far away.
 
Well, let's do breasts!

Write for me about breasts. Your av is the impetus, Zaudika!

Tell me about a scene that involves breast play.
The scene must include some form of kink or BDSM as opposed to 25 words of suckling and nibbling ;)

Taboo words

Breasts
nipples
sucking, suckling or any derivation thereof
nibbling
erect
firm
tits
boobs
Clip
nipple
Pin/clothespin
mouth
lips
hand

Have fun!

:)
 
Re: Well, let's do breasts!

MissTaken said:
Write for me about breasts. Your av is the impetus, Zaudika!

Tell me about a scene that involves breast play.
The scene must include some form of kink or BDSM as opposed to 25 words of suckling and nibbling ;)

Taboo words

Breasts
nipples
sucking, suckling or any derivation thereof
nibbling
erect
firm
tits
boobs
Clip
nipple
Pin/clothespin
mouth
lips
hand

Have fun!

:)

I will await the results on pins and needles.
 
Re: Well, let's do breasts!

MissTaken said:
Write for me about breasts. Your av is the impetus, Zaudika!

Tell me about a scene that involves breast play.
The scene must include some form of kink or BDSM as opposed to 25 words of suckling and nibbling ;)

Taboo words

Breasts
nipples
sucking, suckling or any derivation thereof
nibbling
erect
firm
tits
boobs
Clip
nipple
Pin/clothespin
mouth
lips
hand

Have fun!

:)

for the challenge of it...

rings of black and blue surrounding each orb
impressions of Your grasping possession
swollen buds pinched, bitten, tugged and pulled
until the caress of Your breath is a torture
 
Re: Re: Well, let's do breasts!

lark sparrow said:
for the challenge of it...

rings of black and blue surrounding each orb
impressions of Your grasping possession
swollen buds pinched, bitten, tugged and pulled
until the caress of Your breath is a torture

That is lovely ls.
 
Perfectly round bosoms, bound by rope and weights
Teased by the coldness of ice and the hotness of breath
Awaiting the pleasure of Your desire.
 
Re: Re: Re: Well, let's do breasts!

Ebonyfire said:
That is lovely ls.

Thank you, Eb. :)



(I do enjoy a challenge, and when cut off at the pass finding an alternative route can be inspiring ;) )
 
I am tempted by your firm twin globes, that rise from your prone body like a pair of Alpine peaks the summit of each tipped with a ripe rosy fruit.

Gently I roll the Luscious berries between my thumb and forefinger. Gently at first, then as I feel them hardening in arousal I twiddle them watching the flashes of pain on your face. Then I see your abdominal muscles tense and ripple and know that once again your body has transformed the purity of pain into unadulterated pleasure.

I circle the Twin Peaks (sorry could not resist the pun) with cord laid in a figure of eight, insert a peg into each loop and begin to tighten these two improvised Spanish Windlasses, the string cutting into the flesh.

When I release the tension you bear my mark a crimson circlet contrasting with the alabaster of your fair skin.

jon:devil: :devil: :devil:
 
jon.hayworth said:
your body has transformed the purity of pain into unadulterated pleasure.

I love this part of the line... the wording is perfect.



Thank you MissT .. :D Glad I could be of an influence. lol.. going to have to think about this one a bit though.
 
Clamps encircling, the pain is exquisite. Cold fire mixed with both pleasure and torment. A flick of your tongue makes me jump. The touch of your teeth makes me whimper in pain, but arch with desire. My breaths come faster. Yours is a gentle whisper of air, cooling the moisture you’ve left behind.
Encircling the chain with your fingers, you give a gentle pull. A harsher pinch, that brings only more pleasure. So close, causing me to squirm underneath you as you pull more, watching me. Cries of passion fill the air, and my body shudders, released.
 
New Topic!

The morning after:

Poetry:

25 words or less.

or

Haiku! (Thought we could take a stab at haiku.)

Prose:
100 words or less.

Taboo words:

last
sensation
night
feeling
need
No body parts are two be used in their typical form: no arm, leg, breast, pussy, nothing like that.
bruise
ache
remember
You

Have fun!
 
MissTaken this was not an easy one, and maybe my thoughts do not really fit but here goes

THE MORNING AFTER

A thin shaft of sunlight spears across the room, I hear my SO moving around. As always I am in awe of her ability to be so bright and breezy after what her body has endured.
She is a morning person who bathes in the dawn light; I am a child of the dark whose deity is personified by neon, tungsten or halogen.
Bleary eyed I climb from bed, stubbing my toe on an abandoned vibrator, tripping over a length of rope. Hearing my movements she brings me a mug of coffee and a cigarette – now I awaken.

jon:devil: :devil: :devil:
 
Inflicted affection
I accepted.
Some make love,
We made hate
But didn't mean it.
The welts fade
memory waits
for the next.

Sorry, I'm not much of a poet, and I just can't do haiku.
 
I wanted to try this before but was never brave enough. Today I decided to take a chance. Here's what I came up with...

Calm greets my new eyes
The eve past raged as winter
Now Spring, I'm reborn
 
jon.hayworth said:
MissTaken this was not an easy one, and maybe my thoughts do not really fit but here goes

jon:devil: :devil: :devil:

It is no fun if it is too easy!

Nicely done, jon! :)


Psiber?
I really like the first line, "Inflicted affection."
I dont' know what makes a poet, but the few words you used certainly drew me in.

:)

Red?
No way am I trying haiku with you here!
Very well done....

:rose:
 
'preesh.

I'm glad you liked it, just something I hammered out. The reason I don't concider myself much of a poet is I don't really get much of it. Some strikes me as beautifull, while others just fail to strike me at all. As with most media, it's generally neither rare, nor well done.
 
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