BDSM Writing Challenge

[MissTaken]

Again, based on an idea in another thread, let's have some word fun!

I am not terribly good at coming up with ideas for writing challenges, so feel free to pm me with ideas or post them here.

I am borrowing this from the poetry forum.


Exercise 1:

Poetic imagery 101
Describe the scene; invite the reader in and try to create a mood. Do not give a narration.


The Scene:

A spanking being delivered or received

Rules:

For poems:

One Stanza
No more than 25 words

For Prose:

One paragraph
No more than 100 words

Taboo Words:

Slap
Sting
Ass
Red
Pink
Spank
Wet
Cum
Hand

Give it a try!

 

[Hecate]

I'll bite ...

Prose 25:
Exposed globes are draped over my lap. Breath is held in anticipation before a gasp betrays the first reaction of flesh to leather - delightful!

25 words are quite a limit for a rambler like me - how about we raise the amount of words for prose attempts to 100? Should make for cute little stories...



Prose 100:
The belt rests in my lap - shortly it will be making the acquaintance of quivering buttocks, clenching in anticipation of it's first lick. I beckon you and obediently, though trembling, you bend over my knees. Pale immaculate cheeks like a painter's empty canvas displayed before me now, to be signed in my very personal style. A precise swift motion of my wrist and you gasp, while my leather paintbrush marks my territory. Another one - two - three - then a soothing cool palm rubs away the immediate pain, turning it into a warm glowing promise of pleasure to come.


... but as it was an idea transfered from poetry, maybe that is more what we are after?


Poetry:
Clenched cheeks on my lap - anticipation
Held breath, then a whimper - concentration
Leather on skin - domination
Warm wave of pleasure - relaxation


edited to add the 100 words prose version, though in retrospect wondering if "using" a belt wasn't a too easy way out to avoid "hand"

 

[MissTaken]

Thank you , Hecate.
Great ideas.


I editted the first post accordingly.

 

[Hecate]

*lol* Ohhhhh MissT - now I have to adjust my humble attempt as well *winks* ... fun idea though ! Haven't been creatively writing for too long!

 

[WriterDom]

The burn lingers
on magenta cheeks
a fiery reminder
of the mating
of motion and resistance

moans of pleasure
severe serenity revisited
she smiles

 

[Merelan]

Not as easy as you think! but I was inspired....

Poem 25 words

Arms raised high,
her will holding her here.
Eternity passes,
first strike sharp,
reaching her core.
Repeated,
till her will is humbled.
She is loved.


Prose 100 words

Stretched over the table she awaits her fate. Legs trembling, breath shallow, tears in her eyes. The butterflies in her stomach circle and gyrate as they flutter. Her nudeness spread for all to see. Muscles clench, sweat slips down her sides, tickling. Circling and touching her is the Mistress, sadness filling her eyes as she surveys her toy, her disobediant little whore child. Her love, her heart. She has again been found wanting. Flirting, laughing, and all with another. This will not be pleasure, for either. The pain will be Mistress' as well as this toy. But it must be.

 

[WriterDom]

She trembled from the erotic mixture of a tempered fear of the unknown, and an excitement too great to put into words. Her drenched thongs betrayed her modesty, and offered no protection to her upturned buttocks, ripe with her naughty desires. His fingers read her bottom as if it was braille. Studying each cheek, setting it to memory before he began. The blows came, at first like a drizzle, then hard as a summer storm. There was no struggle. Just a surrender to the power. And soft moans muffled by the tear stained pillow. Her pussy throbbed with each heartbeat.

edited to remove ass...

 

[MissTaken]

Lying across His knees
Feeling His shaft pressed
Against her

Hand caresses
Searing flesh

A teardrop

Surrendering
To Him
His will, His pleasure
Is hers

(I am not a poet! This was terribly difficult to portray all of what I would want to portray in a spanking session. Hmm but it was fun!)

 

[Hecate]

MEEEEEEP !

Hand caresses
Searing flesh

Thumbs up for the good work everyone!

Alas - we had one "hand" in there, a taboo word, so I unfortunately must take one point off!

Just pulling your leg MissT as that was the hardest one for me to NOT use *lol* glad someone else seemingly had a problem with it ! (and after all, that'll teach you to pick easier avoidable taboo words next time )

 

[MissTaken]

Re: MEEEEEEP !

Thumbs up for the good work everyone!

Alas - we had one "hand" in there, a taboo word, so I unfortunately must take one point off!

Just pulling your leg MissT as that was the hardest one for me to NOT use *lol* glad someone else seemingly had a problem with it ! (and after all, that'll teach you to pick easier avoidable taboo words next time )

Buzzzzzzzzz

I lose!

Edited version: (I think I like it better!)


Lying across His knees
Feeling His shaft pressed
Against her

Fingers scrape
Searing flesh

A teardrop

Surrendering
To Him
His will, His pleasure
Is hers

 

[zipman]

The air,
heavy and tense,
filled with fear,
until the swoosh,
of whistling agony
explodes on her flesh,
in agonizing ecstasy.

"Thank you Master!"

 

[bunny bondage]

grr... working something out

 

[bunny bondage]

bah, i had a neat little poem all worked out so the words made a bunny and it's not letting me post it here because.....well....because it's just mean! and it was very cute!

 

[SexyGiggles]

Not much of a poet....

Anticipation
Desire
Discipline
Domination

Wanting
Waiting
Hoping
Submitting

Fingers scratching
Palms sweating
Bodies screaming
Faces smiling

Kissing
Holding
Hugging
Loving

Itching
Twitching
Switching
His turn

 

[MoonduskSub]

Crimson rains and a thunder rolls,
Cacophony, yet soft sounds in listening ears.
An enigma,
a darkness invites.
A spell, a maze
luring,
Embracing peace.
~~Written by Moondusksub~~

Eye's intent on the goddess as she lays upon a feild of silk. Tingles of fingertips trailing on feilds of soft snow. Shivers of ice running along her slender trail of skin. Down, down, further down, like a fire burning upon icy flesh before the roaring pleasure. Her gasp is heard against the still air. Pleading cries, calling to the Night. Again the resounding noise until she is fallen and then embraced. The goddess now one with thee Night.

 

[James G 5]

Uh huh (I needed an excuse to write more LOL)

Ripe cherry blossoms
Bloom before My eyes and touch
Flesh shows your desire

(what can I say, Haiku's always great for a quickie)

You, beside me, scent of your hair enticing, longing in your eyes swaying my judgement. Giving in, pulling you to me, rustle of silk as your robe slides open and you fall across my lap. Whirring fans the only sound for a moment, our breath stilled in mutual anticipation. The silken surssurates as I reveal your pale skin, hungry for my mark. A moment of anticipation and then the strike, resounding of flesh on flesh. Again and again the sound, suffusing our minds with passion as the blood does your skin. Too soon it ends but desire's rise has just begun.

(I went 1 word over, sue me )

Again, based on an idea in another thread, let's have some word fun!
I am not terribly good at coming up with ideas for writing challenges, so feel free to pm me with ideas or post them here.
I am borrowing this from the poetry forum.
Exercise 1:
Poetic imagery 101
Describe the scene; invite the reader in and try to create a mood. Do not give a narration.
The Scene:
A spanking being delivered or received
Rules:
For poems:
One Stanza
No more than 25 words
For Prose:
One paragraph
No more than 100 words
Taboo Words:
Slap, Sting, Ass, Red, Pink, Spank, Wet, Cum, Hand
Give it a try!

 

[MissTaken]

Great stuff!

I hope more people will "play" with us.

Feel free to start your own writing challenge in the thread. I would recommend not to offer too many challenges at once, but space them out.

Have fun

 

[MasterKensbeany]

I'll give it a shot

a moment sought
and found
what devilry this
what devious alchemy
or pretty magic
turns Master's lash
and slave's flesh
to molten flame


beany

 

[MissTaken]

Scene: Binding of hands.

Rules: 25 words for poetry
100 words for prose
How the hands are bound are up to the writer.

Taboo words:

Rope
Cuffs
Scarf
Tie
Knot
Tight
Loose
Hand
Wrist
Arm

Have fun!

 

[MoonduskSub]

A tangled web,
Escape impossible,
I lay,
Whimpering.
Squirming within binding fibers,
Desires meet in heated passion.
Acceptance alas!
I surrender.

I felt the fiber over my skin. Crawling like woven silk to drive me insane. Then a tug, a pull, and I am helpless beneath your artwork as you caress my mind with soft whispers,
"Squirm if you must, though you are mine for the taking." Eyes looking into your which reflect the creaping fear, and then...darkness as I am locked into stronger bindings. Whithering I move beneath your touch...teasing my flesh with your fingers...I serve you a bound, helpless, woman, accepting and enjoying your sweet desires.

All writings created by Moondusksub

 

[Merelan]

Fingers entwined in silken webs.
Hidden by my cloak.
Others pass us laughing,
and know nothing of my need.
Or this hidden secret we share.



For the prose I took the same "plot" and carried it out further. I need a cold shower now.


Beneath my cloak my fingers entwine. Bound not only by the scarlet threads she has wound there, but by her command. Strangers pass, laughing, and do not know the deep craving in my soul, or the secret we share. Her fingers twitch, and a tingle starts. The low hum unheard through my woolen layers, but felt to my core. Faint and trembling I plead with my eyes, but she stands firm. Fingers clench in their cage as time seems to stand still, at her whim. Cumming silently as they flow by us, unknowing, only half living. Never knowing this freedom.

 

[Merelan]

I didn't mean to scare anyone off!

 

[Zaudika]

Re: I'll bite ...

Poetry:
Clenched cheeks on my lap - anticipation
Held breath, then a whimper - concentration
Leather on skin - domination
Warm wave of pleasure - relaxation

I've really enjoyed a lot of the writing on this thread, but this short little poem really caught my eye. Wonderful.

 

[Hecate]

Prose:
Firmly I pull your slender limbs behind your back, movement no longer an option, not to defend, not to protect. You are mine now to do with as I will! The loop tightens as you wiggle your fingers to keep a minimum of slack – to no avail. “Struggle all you want my pet” I whisper, my breath a caress on your heated skin. But then surrender is in the air and the musky scent betrays your compliance to the fetters and ties. Another twist, another turn and you are BOUND


Geee MissT, that is a tought one! I shall see if I can come up with anything poetic ... eventually.

And thanks Zaudika, it is nice to know my words touched someone else.

 

[Merelan]

You know damn well Lady they touched metoo, and many others.

Gasping and struggling for breath.

You are the Mistress of words indeed.