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jomar

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It's been far too long
Since bad haikus lent Lit mirth
she, this is for you!​

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Haiku season!

driving to Long Beach
my mind began counting as
syllables arrived.
 
Haiku's not my thing
I've never gotten it right
so I'll stick to songs.
 
Bear wants Charlotte food
franchise in your locale too
Hooters has hot...wings​
 
I am not sure
I am doing this properly
But I'll try.
 
The black hole of time
Relishes the haiku form
While watching us fall

****

Help! I can't get up
There's a haiku on my head
Clinging like Trump's hair

****

If I had money
I'd build a castle of sand
Out on my own beach
 
Ass thread gone away
Clothing back on for most girls
Men cry pitifully
 
good for a first try
but three lines - five, seven, five
try it again, Tom

Yes, I think I understand
the composition of this poetry form and
will strive to do better
 
Her First Haiku

"One two three," she counted, then
tried another line.
Syllables, cooperate!
 
Five syllables here,
On this line we have seven.
Count to five again.

:D
 
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