Artistic??

Again, I just need to.


Tears fall in silent tracks
Trailing their way down
Tears I shed for one unloved
Tears shared by many

A tiny spark of life burning
Was quenched by uncaring
An inconvenience to their life
That tiny miracle became

Not for all comes that right
To bear the joy of life
So many want and cannot have
While others toss away

My soul cries out in horror
'God, how can this be?
Why would you give this chance
To them and not to another?'

Yet I know that even here
God must have a plan
But why must the innocent
Always be the one to pay?

Not for me to question
Not for me to judge
For me there is but grieving
For the fear and pain suffered

God take this soul to heaven
And give it angel wings
For it live a life full
In the short time you did give

Let it know what it did not here
The love and joy untold
Let it be at peace there
And never again know fear.
 
kikmosa...your writing is impressive lady, have you ever done or considered song writing...?

Nice job to the other contributors as well (DOS, BD & Others)
 
Gunner Dailey said:
kikmosa...your writing is impressive lady, have you ever done or considered song writing...?

Nice job to the other contributors as well (DOS, BD & Others)

Not really. I've always been told my writings were stupid and a waste of time so I've never shown many of them. I just feel the need to do it sometimes. It's truely surprized me that the people here seem to like them. I didn't expect that. I really don't know if I can write songs. Never tried. It's easiest for me to write when I have a pic to look at. Then the words just flow.
 
SecretScribe said:
You have a gift Kiki ... you really do.


I agree completely. I am a musician and do alot of song writing myself, and she has a talent with words.
 
Gunner Dailey said:
I agree completely. I am a musician and do alot of song writing myself, and she has a talent with words.

*deep blush*
 
Silently staring
the golden glow that rushes from her eyes seducing my soul
burning valleys and peaks of blush pink
call me
demand me

I watch
tactile tremors running through my mind
as her hand moves
scaling a peak, stroke,
push the quivering hard summit
hypnotic trance of sensuality engulfing my being
fingertip
circling, sliding, descending to the valley of undying pleasure

The scent of her sex surrounds me
fills and devours in an instant

extended digit dipping
a see saw of sense revealed
I watch
I stumble
to my knees
reaching, caressing the hand that glides
head falling
to kiss,
lick the erotic elixir
wrapping lips, making love to the taste
and sink
into my lovers golden glow
 
Good Morning Everyone. Happy Holloween.



Ghouls and goblins
Gather in the shadows
Ghosts flit by
Wailing loudly

Demons stalk
In pursuit
Of lovely maids
And dancers

Eyes glow
With gleeming light
From high and low
And everywhere

Shreeks sound
Throughout the night
As frightened souls
Cry out

I hear them coming
Ever closer
Breathless I wait
Til at last they're here

Bravely I throw open
The door to face
The gathered force
AS they shreek out

Trick or Treat



Have a fun one, everyone.
 
~ Beyond Time ~

Your voice haunts my dreams
And calls me to your soul.
Each word captivates me
Evoking memories of long ago.
My mind drifts to another time,
Where I must have known you.
Your touch sparks a memory
Of love and passion like never before.
Something about you beckons me
And won't allow me to leave.
You have captured my heart
And my body yearns for you.
You consume my thoughts
And hold them gently in your hands.
You weave your magic spell
And pull me closer in to you.
I am beyond resisting you now.
You have touched my soul
And lifted me above the clouds,
A connection that goes beyond time
And joins us for eternity.
 
DreamOfSun said:
~ Beyond Time ~

Your voice haunts my dreams
And calls me to your soul.
Each word captivates me
Evoking memories of long ago.
My mind drifts to another time,
Where I must have known you.
Your touch sparks a memory
Of love and passion like never before.
Something about you beckons me
And won't allow me to leave.
You have captured my heart
And my body yearns for you.
You consume my thoughts
And hold them gently in your hands.
You weave your magic spell
And pull me closer in to you.
I am beyond resisting you now.
You have touched my soul
And lifted me above the clouds,
A connection that goes beyond time
And joins us for eternity.


WOW....... that's beautiful......
 
DreamOfSun said:
Thank you, Kiki :eek:

That is an especially cherished comment coming from you! :heart:

It's not special, just what I feel. You show such feeling in your writing.
 
Kiki... I finally read back to your poems of the child (it took a while for me to gather the courage to do this!). You are amazing... it is simply all I can say, as I can't think of words to describe the feeling that your words evoke.

(((hugs)))
 
DreamOfSun said:
Kiki... I finally read back to your poems of the child (it took a while for me to gather the courage to do this!). You are amazing... it is simply all I can say, as I can't think of words to describe the feeling that your words evoke.

(((hugs)))

I'm still having trouble dealing with it. I'll probaly have to write a few more before I finish dealing with it. Sorry they're so sad.
 
kikmosa said:
I'm still having trouble dealing with it. I'll probaly have to write a few more before I finish dealing with it. Sorry they're so sad.

It is a horribly sad thing to happen... your words are beautiful and such a loving tribute. Thank you for sharing them.
 
Here I go again.....


A choice made
Perhaps in fear
A dark secret
Haunting the mind

Fear ripping a mind apart
Regrets tearing a soul
Weeping for a loss
That can not be undone

Are these what is
Or are there no feelings
Is there regret
Or simply relief

Never to know
What spured
The choice
Fear or uncaring

And never to know
What could have been
If the choice
Had been another

But no going back
Can there be
For eturnaty
Will it stand

Until one day
It must be faced
When another
Makes a choice

Forgive or comdemn
 
My wife told me about this thread and although I don't work with words like the rest of you( I couldn't compare my writing with yours), she thought I should post a few pictures of my stuff. It's wood instead of words.
 
poundemin said:
My wife told me about this thread and although I don't work with words like the rest of you( I couldn't compare my writing with yours), she thought I should post a few pictures of my stuff. It's wood instead of words.

This thread isn't just for words. Marilyth started it to give people a place to show their talents no matter what they are. Your wood work is very good. I've alway want to do that. Even made a few things but they were awful. The only thing I'm any good at is words and not very good there but I enjoy it so that's what I do.
Others do photography, painting, poems and a lot of other stuff.
Anything you want to share is fine though. and you have a real talent with wood. Welcome and thanks for sharing with us. :)
 
kikmosa said:
This thread isn't just for words. Marilyth started it to give people a place to show their talents no matter what they are. Your wood work is very good. I've alway want to do that. Even made a few things but they were awful. The only thing I'm any good at is words and not very good there but I enjoy it so that's what I do.
Others do photography, painting, poems and a lot of other stuff.
Anything you want to share is fine though. and you have a real talent with wood. Welcome and thanks for sharing with us. :)


I thank you for the kind words. I will post more when I find more pictures. I wish this thread would take off a more. There are a lot of talented people on Lit and I think they should post here.
 
poundemin said:
My wife told me about this thread and although I don't work with words like the rest of you( I couldn't compare my writing with yours), she thought I should post a few pictures of my stuff. It's wood instead of words.

We really don't try to compare our writings to each others. That's not what this is for. We each just post what we feel is right. I for one, would love to read your writings.
 
I haven't written for a long time. Most of it was morbid(I was heavy into Poe for a while). I seem to be able to express myself better with wood than words. If your really interested in reading bad poetry or short stories, then I'll try to find some of them, but they are REALLY bad.
 
poundemin said:
I haven't written for a long time. Most of it was morbid(I was heavy into Poe for a while). I seem to be able to express myself better with wood than words. If your really interested in reading bad poetry or short stories, then I'll try to find some of them, but they are REALLY bad.

Sometimes we have to write things that are morbid or sad to deal with things going on. I have a thread called The Glass Cage. Most of what's there is very bad. But in writing it and posting it, I managed to deal with the way I was feeling. It also gives me a way to go back and look at how much things have changed for me. I would still love to read your writings because they are windows to seeing you.
 
kikmosa said:
Sometimes we have to write things that are morbid or sad to deal with things going on. I have a thread called The Glass Cage. Most of what's there is very bad. But in writing it and posting it, I managed to deal with the way I was feeling. It also gives me a way to go back and look at how much things have changed for me. I would still love to read your writings because they are windows to seeing you.


Ok, I just want you to realize that you really asked for it. As soon as I find them, I'll let you read them. But they ARE really awful. Thanks for asking though.
 
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